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BlairW_1 · 02-06-2001, 07:23 PM

One Life to Live is partially based on "The Last Day of the Rest of Your Life," the Touched By an Angel ep. Nancy was on. I would tell you more, but it would reveal the suprise, so here's a sample from the beginning...

(Jinny is very drunk at a bar, and Magda is sitting beside her, sipping a Coke.)
J: (Slurringly.) Come on, one more won't hurt me!
M: Jinny, you probably don't need another. That's enough for tonight.
J: One more, pleeeeease?
M: Jinny, you... Okay.
Bt: Coming right up! Same as usual?
J: I want the strongest stuff you got. (He pours her a glass and hands it to her.) I had a tough day today, fellas, and I want to be oblivious to everything! (She holds her glass up to Magda, sloshing a little out the side.) To you. (Drinks the glass in one gulp.) See? I'm just fine! (Stands up and falls over Magda.) Hey, watch where yer goin'!
M: (Holds money out to bartender and grabs Jinny's shoulders to steady her.) We'll be going home now. Jinny, can you drive? That's a rhetorical question, no, you cannot drive!
J: Really, I'm just a li'l drunk, Angela!
M: (Sighs.) I'm not Angela, I'm Magda.
J: Silly, you don't even know your own name!
M: Look, I'm going to drive you home.
J: I'm sorry, I don't date other women.
M: Theodore!
T: (Walks over.) What? Oh, hi, Jinny.
J: Teddy, babe, ya doin' anything tonight? I'm free, and so is my bed! (Mutters under breath.) Not for long, anyways.
T: Jinny, are you okay?
M: Theodore, can you help me take her home? I can't handle her all by myself.
T: Okay. I'll tell you one thing, she's going to have an awful hangover in the morning!
J: No, I won't! I'll feel... (Starts looking a little sick.) perfectly fine.
(Magda starts to help her up, but Jinny pushes away and falls down.)
M: Jinny, are you all right?
J: (Giggles.) Oops?
M: (Looks at Theodore.) Hello? A little help?
T: Right. (He puts his hands under her arms and helps her up. She leans very heavily on him.) You okay?
J: Yeah, I'm perfectly fine! (Pause.) Is it hot in here to you?
T: Yes, it's hot, and... that's why were leaving! I bet your room is nice and cool right now.
J: Let's go.
(They walk out the door, with Jinny only stumbling a few times.)

Well, that's chapter 1! When I get the whole thing written, I'll post the rest.
BTW, I know I got the name from that soap, but who cares?

~*Danielle*~

AlexzBonner · 02-06-2001, 07:45 PM

BRAVO! Even though I read it, like, 6 million times in English. I didn't want to write my spelling words.
~`~ Kenzie The SPOILED BRAT

~`~

DivisionFan_Jinny · 02-06-2001, 09:16 PM

this is really good so far.

btw, do you know when that ep. of touched by an angel is coming on? i never saw it and one of my goals is to see everything nancy was ever in. (pathetic, huh?)

if you do, please post.

the fanfic is really good though.

Lil_miss_goodwrench_518 · 02-07-2001, 04:23 PM

this is wicked good so far i cant wait to read the next part!

Love The Facts Of Life · 02-07-2001, 04:27 PM

Cool keep the good work

BlairW_1 · 02-07-2001, 05:59 PM

Thanks for the good reviews! I don't know when that ep. will be on, because the only reason I saw it is cuz Kenzie taped it for me. I was at a ballgame that night.
~*Danielle*~

AlexzBonner · 02-07-2001, 11:15 PM

It was on Nov. 3 on Pax the night we lost to our arch rival Roland by 3 points! It was sooooooo sad! (Not the game the episode!) I started to cry when she... My grandma said, "Guess who's on Touched By An Angel?"
I said, "Lisa Whelchel? Megan Follows?" Then it showed her and I started jumping up and down. I screamed. "It's Nancy McKeon!" Then I ran outside and screamed "Nancy's on TBAA!" Then I ran in my room and taped it! (embarressed look.) Even BlairW_1 didn't know I did that!

DivisionFan_Jinny · 02-08-2001, 08:14 PM

Rick:Now tell me, what time is it?
Me(Sam):Time to put Kenzie in a home.

Heeeheeeheee. Just a bit of FOL humor (from the ep. where Jo gets married)

omg! i have to see that ep. of tbaa!

BlairW_1 · 02-08-2001, 11:43 PM

To embarrass her even more (which I love doing!), did you know she lives right beside the football field? And it's within hearing distance of people from both the teams!

~*Danielle*~

AlexzBonner · 02-09-2001, 07:04 PM

Yes... BUT I have that SS thing. She was a peasant and I was a VASSAL! I LOVE doing that to her. BTW, cool it, Farrah. I'm not actually THAT nuts! I was just REALLY excited cuz there are 4 people in you grade who like FOL. SO, we call BlairW_1 Blair they call me Jo. Our 2 best friends, (Jenn and Heather), haven't seen but about 2 eps. each. Nevertheless, We call Jenn Nat and Heather Tootie. We have a blast!

80skid · 02-09-2001, 09:38 PM

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase keep it up!!! It's great so far!!

NancyJoJinny · 03-17-2001, 11:43 PM

OK so this is a bit late but please finish it!

Wild Child · 03-17-2001, 11:58 PM

Yeah! It's really good so far and I hate when stories don't get finished...so please post some more.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Me,Myself and I · 03-18-2001, 08:12 AM

You cant do this to me puhleeeeeeze post the rest real soon.

Love The Facts Of Life · 03-18-2001, 05:22 PM

This is really good soon I hope you'll finish it soon

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*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points.
Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law

Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out.
Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

02-06-2001, 07:23 PM	#1
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	Preveiw for: One Life to Live One Life to Live is partially based on "The Last Day of the Rest of Your Life," the Touched By an Angel ep. Nancy was on. I would tell you more, but it would reveal the suprise, so here's a sample from the beginning... (Jinny is very drunk at a bar, and Magda is sitting beside her, sipping a Coke.) J: (Slurringly.) Come on, one more won't hurt me! M: Jinny, you probably don't need another. That's enough for tonight. J: One more, pleeeeease? M: Jinny, you... Okay. Bt: Coming right up! Same as usual? J: I want the strongest stuff you got. (He pours her a glass and hands it to her.) I had a tough day today, fellas, and I want to be oblivious to everything! (She holds her glass up to Magda, sloshing a little out the side.) To you. (Drinks the glass in one gulp.) See? I'm just fine! (Stands up and falls over Magda.) Hey, watch where yer goin'! M: (Holds money out to bartender and grabs Jinny's shoulders to steady her.) We'll be going home now. Jinny, can you drive? That's a rhetorical question, no, you cannot drive! J: Really, I'm just a li'l drunk, Angela! M: (Sighs.) I'm not Angela, I'm Magda. J: Silly, you don't even know your own name! M: Look, I'm going to drive you home. J: I'm sorry, I don't date other women. M: Theodore! T: (Walks over.) What? Oh, hi, Jinny. J: Teddy, babe, ya doin' anything tonight? I'm free, and so is my bed! (Mutters under breath.) Not for long, anyways. T: Jinny, are you okay? M: Theodore, can you help me take her home? I can't handle her all by myself. T: Okay. I'll tell you one thing, she's going to have an awful hangover in the morning! J: No, I won't! I'll feel... (Starts looking a little sick.) perfectly fine. (Magda starts to help her up, but Jinny pushes away and falls down.) M: Jinny, are you all right? J: (Giggles.) Oops? M: (Looks at Theodore.) Hello? A little help? T: Right. (He puts his hands under her arms and helps her up. She leans very heavily on him.) You okay? J: Yeah, I'm perfectly fine! (Pause.) Is it hot in here to you? T: Yes, it's hot, and... that's why were leaving! I bet your room is nice and cool right now. J: Let's go. (They walk out the door, with Jinny only stumbling a few times.) Well, that's chapter 1! When I get the whole thing written, I'll post the rest. BTW, I know I got the name from that soap, but who cares? ~Danielle~

02-06-2001, 07:45 PM	#2
AlexzBonner Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 11, 2001 Location: Muldrow, OK (Miss America '96's home town!) Posts: 284	BRAVO! Even though I read it, like, 6 million times in English. I didn't want to write my spelling words. ~`~ Kenzie The SPOILED BRAT ~`~

02-06-2001, 09:16 PM	#3
DivisionFan_Jinny Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jan 20, 2001 Location: Bristol, CT (Home of the ESPN headquarters!) Posts: 69	this is really good so far. btw, do you know when that ep. of touched by an angel is coming on? i never saw it and one of my goals is to see everything nancy was ever in. (pathetic, huh?) if you do, please post. the fanfic is really good though.

02-07-2001, 04:23 PM	#4
Lil_miss_goodwrench_518 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 02, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 174	this is wicked good so far i cant wait to read the next part!

02-07-2001, 04:27 PM	#5
Love The Facts Of Life FlUtTeRfLy Senior Member Join Date: Jan 18, 2001 Location: Tennessee Posts: 1,515	Cool keep the good work

02-07-2001, 05:59 PM	#6
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	Thanks for the good reviews! I don't know when that ep. will be on, because the only reason I saw it is cuz Kenzie taped it for me. I was at a ballgame that night. ~Danielle~

02-07-2001, 11:15 PM	#7
AlexzBonner Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 11, 2001 Location: Muldrow, OK (Miss America '96's home town!) Posts: 284	It was on Nov. 3 on Pax the night we lost to our arch rival Roland by 3 points! It was sooooooo sad! (Not the game the episode!) I started to cry when she... My grandma said, "Guess who's on Touched By An Angel?" I said, "Lisa Whelchel? Megan Follows?" Then it showed her and I started jumping up and down. I screamed. "It's Nancy McKeon!" Then I ran outside and screamed "Nancy's on TBAA!" Then I ran in my room and taped it! (embarressed look.) Even BlairW_1 didn't know I did that!

02-08-2001, 08:14 PM	#8
DivisionFan_Jinny Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jan 20, 2001 Location: Bristol, CT (Home of the ESPN headquarters!) Posts: 69	Rick:Now tell me, what time is it? Me(Sam):Time to put Kenzie in a home. Heeeheeeheee. Just a bit of FOL humor (from the ep. where Jo gets married) omg! i have to see that ep. of tbaa!

02-08-2001, 11:43 PM	#9
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	To embarrass her even more (which I love doing!), did you know she lives right beside the football field? And it's within hearing distance of people from both the teams! ~Danielle~

02-09-2001, 07:04 PM	#10
AlexzBonner Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 11, 2001 Location: Muldrow, OK (Miss America '96's home town!) Posts: 284	Yes... BUT I have that SS thing. She was a peasant and I was a VASSAL! I LOVE doing that to her. BTW, cool it, Farrah. I'm not actually THAT nuts! I was just REALLY excited cuz there are 4 people in you grade who like FOL. SO, we call BlairW_1 Blair they call me Jo. Our 2 best friends, (Jenn and Heather), haven't seen but about 2 eps. each. Nevertheless, We call Jenn Nat and Heather Tootie. We have a blast!

02-09-2001, 09:38 PM	#11
80skid smile :) Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 18, 2000 Posts: 971	Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase keep it up!!! It's great so far!!

03-17-2001, 11:43 PM	#12
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	OK so this is a bit late but please finish it!

03-17-2001, 11:58 PM	#13
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	Yeah! It's really good so far and I hate when stories don't get finished...so please post some more. ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!

03-18-2001, 08:12 AM	#14
Me,Myself and I Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 26, 2001 Location: Worc, MA US Posts: 270	You cant do this to me puhleeeeeeze post the rest real soon.

03-18-2001, 05:22 PM	#15
Love The Facts Of Life FlUtTeRfLy Senior Member Join Date: Jan 18, 2001 Location: Tennessee Posts: 1,515	This is really good soon I hope you'll finish it soon ------------------ ~~~~~~~~* Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points. Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out. Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are. ~~~~~~~~*