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NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 03-28-2001, 01:55 PM

(Magda's house)
Magda: Thanx for watching Ben. i really appriciate it!
Jinny: I'm only doing it cause i get to live in your house for a week.
Ben: HEY!
Jinny: (Rolling her eyes) And i get to stay with BEN!
Magda: Bye guys...i have to go catch my flight. Ben be good! Bye Jin
(Magda leaves)
(Jinny and Ben are staring at eachother)
Jinny: So....(mumbles) you pee in ur pants you die!
Ben: Oh, i am a big boy..don't worry!

(That night at 2:09 am)
Ben: Jinny...
Jinny: (sleeply) Ben...what do you want?
Ben: I had a accident!
Jinny: I am so hoping that you're not talking about what i think you're talking about.
Ben: If you mean my bed... yeah.
Jinny:BEN!!!!!!!we'll take care of it in the morning (chasing him out)

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 03-28-2001, 03:03 PM

Do you guys like it so far? i will put more action in...only if you like it! if you don't i'll try a new idea!!

lil_Miss_actress · 03-28-2001, 03:54 PM

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
Can you tell I like it??
~ Jessica

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So things change your born, you move on, you die-thats life!- Jo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Jinny: And little red blew the big bad wolf's big hairy butt to smitheriens!
Magna: Thanks alot Jinny..
Jinny:And they all lived happliy ever after..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ C.D: Why don't you let me talk to her? Jinny: What's that about!? C.D: Jinny, She just needs a little coddling right now.. (leaves) Jinny: I can "Coddle"
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"Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead

Exstead · 03-28-2001, 07:23 PM

Yes post more!!!!

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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.

~Exstead~

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 03-28-2001, 10:09 PM

(Morning at 10:23 a.m. Jinny wakes up to the smell of smoke)
Jinny: What the...(she sees the clock). omg i forgot to set the alarm! i am late for work, ben is late for school...and what is that smell?
(All the sudden the fire alarms go off)
Jinny: Shot! (Jinny flys out of bed and runs into the smoky kitchen) BEN?
Ben

coughing)...Jinny...help!
(Jinny sees that the oven had caught fire to the newspaper! She grabbed the fire estingister off the wall near by "magda was always prepared" and put out the fire)
Jinny: (Coughing) Ben?
Ben: (Ben runs up to Jinny and gives her a hug) I'm sorry! i felt bad about peeing in my bed last night so i tried to make you breakfast and...
Jinny: Yeah...you tried!
(Ben looks down in dissapointment) Do you still want the eggs?
Jinny: (Makes a nasty face) Sure,i would love the eggs...but i am alergic! i am sorry! How bout i make us some pancakes and you go to school a lil late?
Ben: YEAH!!!! i will go get dressed while you make them. Then you have to do my hair like mommy always does for me!
Jinny: Hair? What? fine!!

(After pancakes)
Ben: Thanx Jinny! They were great!
Jinny: Yeah, frozen ones taste the same don't themy(she chuckled).
Ben: Okay...now you have to do my hair! You have to slik it back with this gel!
Jionny: Can't you do it?
Ben: No...i don't know how! (he handed Jinny the hair gel)
Jinny: Ok...(she took a glop of gel and stuck it in his hair. took his hair and stuck it up like a spiked hair doo) Yeah, that is cool! Your done!
Ben: Wow, now i am cool. Thanx Jinny!
Jinny sure. Now lets get you to school! (jinny runs intoi her room. throws some clothes on and runs out the door!)

(After dropping off Ben. Jinny rides to work)
Kate: Jinny?
Jinny: Yes?
Kate: Where were you?
Jinny: In the rest room! sorry...you know it was personal.
Kate: You were in the bathroom for 4 hours.
Jinny: I ran to the drug store for some meds to help and came back and tried them...it finally worked! Sorry! i feel better now!
Kate: Exstead, i know youre taking care of ben so i will let you slid today..but tomorrow you better be on time! (kate slams her door)
Angela: Jinny's in troublllle.
Jinny: Shut-up Tootie!
Kate

pops head out the door) And if you are late tomorrw you will have desk duty.
Angela: Did i lie?
Jinny: (glares)

(At home after Ben's school and Jinnys work)
Ben: (comes out of his room and walks into Jinnys room) Hey Jinny!
Jinny

drinking) Oh...ben, hi!
Ben: Waht you drinking?
Jinny: Um....aple juice!
Ben: I am thirsty, can i have a sip!
Jinny: No, i am sick and you could get sick from me!!!
Ben: Okay, feel better!

(20 min. later phone rings)
Jinny: Hello?
Magda: Hey Jinny!
Jinny: Magd, how are you?
Magda: Good, and you? i heard you were sick?
Jinny: What?
Magda: Ben told me...he called!
(Jinny was speechless)

Should she lie r not? and can jinny handle another night with ben sleeping in her bed with her becasue he pees in his bed again?

Find out...should i write more or drop it?

03-28-2001, 10:27 PM

write more!! this is good

TKD_Princess · 03-29-2001, 07:44 AM

Very cool! More More! LOL!

Exstead · 03-29-2001, 03:59 PM

Please write more!!!!

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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.

~Exstead~

NancyJoJinny · 03-29-2001, 08:59 PM

Have her tell the truth, i want to know what magda would say hehe

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 03-29-2001, 10:57 PM

(Onthe phone with Magda)
Jinny: Oh...he did! (laughing halfheartedly)You see it was all a misunderstanding...i was dirnking(flat out)
Mgada: What?
J: He came in and asked if he could have a slip! I told him it was apple juice...and then i said i was sick so he wouldn't take a sip! (pressing her lips together in assame)
M: Jin...oh, look even your name is a drink!
J: Now...woo woo woo
M: Never mind..i have told you before...no drinking when Ben is in your care! I thought i could trust you and leave him with you! Come on Jin..uh..Jinny..ur name reminds me of Drinking! Bring him over to Captians now!
J: No, way! Thats torture!
M: Well, it will be better then with you!
J: Think about it...
M: Your right...but you have one more chance and then Captian gets him for torture!
J: Okay, i promise!
Magda: Bye.
Jinny: Bye mom!

(Jinny runs into Bens room)
Ben: Hi Jinny, how r u feeling?
Jinny: So, much better! Thanx! But, it is 8:30 and a school night and i have to work tomorrow and you have school!
Ben: WEll, you never changes my bed! I keep having accidens because i forget to go to the bathroom before bed! Sorry!
Jinny: We'll take care of your bed in the morning!
Ben: But Jin, it is gross!
Jinny: Well...i'm not touching your pee!
Ben: Can i sleep with you tonite?
Jinny: Uhhh...fine! But, if you pee on me...i will blow your hair butt to smilerines...like the big bad wolf in "Little Red Riding Hood".
Ben: Okay! Good night! (Ben ran out)

(4:51 a.m Jinny rolls over and feels somethign warm and wet on her teigh)
Jinny: Ben?
(silence)
Jinny: BEN?
(she opens her eyes to see Ben in the corner of the room hiding)
Jinny: OMG!!! You didn't!
Ben: (cring) i did!
Jinny: Ewww...(she sat up and turned the light on to see the big yellow stain on the bed. Ben cried harder) It's okay! No big deal!
Ben: I thought you were going to blow my butt to smitherens?
Jinny: No way...not to you!

(At the staition)
Captian: Jinny, your on time!
Jinny: Yes...but tired...long night!
Angela: What happened?
Jinny: Ben peed on me!
C.D: (cracks up) Did you shot him?
Jinny: No, i was calm about it!
Captian: Yeah, well i remember your Dad telling me about the time you were little and you...
Jinny: NOOOO! Don't tell them. Please!
Anglea: Tell us!
C.D: YEs, inlighen us!
Captian: Well...

g2g, more if you'd like!

Me,Myself and I · 03-30-2001, 07:57 AM

more PLEASEEEEEE

80skid · 03-30-2001, 08:13 AM

I love it... Keep it up!!!

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"Strawberry shortcake banana split, we make your team look like shift to left, shift to right... stand up sit down fight fight fight!"- Badminton A rocks!

Jo: How about you park it on Blair's face?
Natalie: She's a breath of fresh air, isn't she?

Jo: When my dad doesn't like people, Blair, he doesn't show it. Look how he treated you!

*~*~*~**~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-30-2001, 03:28 PM

ooo this is getting good!! OMG you should have the captain tell the story to embarss jinny..heehe

Exstead · 03-30-2001, 06:38 PM

GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOOOOOOOOOORRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pwease!!

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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.

~Exstead~

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-30-2001, 07:20 PM

ggggggggggggrrrrrrrrRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR IVE BEEN WAITING ALL DAY PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON..THIS IS AWESOME!

03-28-2001, 01:55 PM	#1
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	A Week in Hell (Fan Fic) (Magda's house) Magda: Thanx for watching Ben. i really appriciate it! Jinny: I'm only doing it cause i get to live in your house for a week. Ben: HEY! Jinny: (Rolling her eyes) And i get to stay with BEN! Magda: Bye guys...i have to go catch my flight. Ben be good! Bye Jin (Magda leaves) (Jinny and Ben are staring at eachother) Jinny: So....(mumbles) you pee in ur pants you die! Ben: Oh, i am a big boy..don't worry! (That night at 2:09 am) Ben: Jinny... Jinny: (sleeply) Ben...what do you want? Ben: I had a accident! Jinny: I am so hoping that you're not talking about what i think you're talking about. Ben: If you mean my bed... yeah. Jinny:BEN!!!!!!!we'll take care of it in the morning (chasing him out)

03-28-2001, 10:27 PM	#6
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03-28-2001, 03:03 PM	#2
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	Do you guys like it so far? i will put more action in...only if you like it! if you don't i'll try a new idea!!

03-28-2001, 03:54 PM	#3
lil_Miss_actress Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Feb 01, 2001 Location: Boyton Beach FL usa Posts: 72	MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! Can you tell I like it?? ~ Jessica ------------------ So things change your born, you move on, you die-thats life!- Jo ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Jinny: And little red blew the big bad wolf's big hairy butt to smitheriens! Magna: Thanks alot Jinny.. Jinny:And they all lived happliy ever after.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ C.D: Why don't you let me talk to her? Jinny: What's that about!? C.D: Jinny, She just needs a little coddling right now.. (leaves) Jinny: I can "Coddle" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead

03-28-2001, 07:23 PM	#4
Exstead Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 25, 2001 Location: Lincoln,Nebraska,USA Posts: 84	Yes post more!!!! ------------------ Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me. CD: Why? Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like. ~Exstead~

03-28-2001, 10:09 PM	#5
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	(Morning at 10:23 a.m. Jinny wakes up to the smell of smoke) Jinny: What the...(she sees the clock). omg i forgot to set the alarm! i am late for work, ben is late for school...and what is that smell? (All the sudden the fire alarms go off) Jinny: Shot! (Jinny flys out of bed and runs into the smoky kitchen) BEN? Ben coughing)...Jinny...help! (Jinny sees that the oven had caught fire to the newspaper! She grabbed the fire estingister off the wall near by "magda was always prepared" and put out the fire) Jinny: (Coughing) Ben? Ben: (Ben runs up to Jinny and gives her a hug) I'm sorry! i felt bad about peeing in my bed last night so i tried to make you breakfast and... Jinny: Yeah...you tried! (Ben looks down in dissapointment) Do you still want the eggs? Jinny: (Makes a nasty face) Sure,i would love the eggs...but i am alergic! i am sorry! How bout i make us some pancakes and you go to school a lil late? Ben: YEAH!!!! i will go get dressed while you make them. Then you have to do my hair like mommy always does for me! Jinny: Hair? What? fine!! (After pancakes) Ben: Thanx Jinny! They were great! Jinny: Yeah, frozen ones taste the same don't themy(she chuckled). Ben: Okay...now you have to do my hair! You have to slik it back with this gel! Jionny: Can't you do it? Ben: No...i don't know how! (he handed Jinny the hair gel) Jinny: Ok...(she took a glop of gel and stuck it in his hair. took his hair and stuck it up like a spiked hair doo) Yeah, that is cool! Your done! Ben: Wow, now i am cool. Thanx Jinny! Jinny sure. Now lets get you to school! (jinny runs intoi her room. throws some clothes on and runs out the door!) (After dropping off Ben. Jinny rides to work) Kate: Jinny? Jinny: Yes? Kate: Where were you? Jinny: In the rest room! sorry...you know it was personal. Kate: You were in the bathroom for 4 hours. Jinny: I ran to the drug store for some meds to help and came back and tried them...it finally worked! Sorry! i feel better now! Kate: Exstead, i know youre taking care of ben so i will let you slid today..but tomorrow you better be on time! (kate slams her door) Angela: Jinny's in troublllle. Jinny: Shut-up Tootie! Kate pops head out the door) And if you are late tomorrw you will have desk duty. Angela: Did i lie? Jinny: (glares) (At home after Ben's school and Jinnys work) Ben: (comes out of his room and walks into Jinnys room) Hey Jinny! Jinny drinking) Oh...ben, hi! Ben: Waht you drinking? Jinny: Um....aple juice! Ben: I am thirsty, can i have a sip! Jinny: No, i am sick and you could get sick from me!!! Ben: Okay, feel better! (20 min. later phone rings) Jinny: Hello? Magda: Hey Jinny! Jinny: Magd, how are you? Magda: Good, and you? i heard you were sick? Jinny: What? Magda: Ben told me...he called! (Jinny was speechless) Should she lie r not? and can jinny handle another night with ben sleeping in her bed with her becasue he pees in his bed again? Find out...should i write more or drop it?

03-29-2001, 07:44 AM	#7
TKD_Princess Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 29, 2001 Location: NO wheres ville Posts: 35	Very cool! More More! LOL!

03-29-2001, 03:59 PM	#8
Exstead Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 25, 2001 Location: Lincoln,Nebraska,USA Posts: 84	Please write more!!!! ------------------ Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me. CD: Why? Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like. ~Exstead~

03-29-2001, 08:59 PM	#9
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Have her tell the truth, i want to know what magda would say hehe

03-29-2001, 10:57 PM	#10
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	(Onthe phone with Magda) Jinny: Oh...he did! (laughing halfheartedly)You see it was all a misunderstanding...i was dirnking(flat out) Mgada: What? J: He came in and asked if he could have a slip! I told him it was apple juice...and then i said i was sick so he wouldn't take a sip! (pressing her lips together in assame) M: Jin...oh, look even your name is a drink! J: Now...woo woo woo M: Never mind..i have told you before...no drinking when Ben is in your care! I thought i could trust you and leave him with you! Come on Jin..uh..Jinny..ur name reminds me of Drinking! Bring him over to Captians now! J: No, way! Thats torture! M: Well, it will be better then with you! J: Think about it... M: Your right...but you have one more chance and then Captian gets him for torture! J: Okay, i promise! Magda: Bye. Jinny: Bye mom! (Jinny runs into Bens room) Ben: Hi Jinny, how r u feeling? Jinny: So, much better! Thanx! But, it is 8:30 and a school night and i have to work tomorrow and you have school! Ben: WEll, you never changes my bed! I keep having accidens because i forget to go to the bathroom before bed! Sorry! Jinny: We'll take care of your bed in the morning! Ben: But Jin, it is gross! Jinny: Well...i'm not touching your pee! Ben: Can i sleep with you tonite? Jinny: Uhhh...fine! But, if you pee on me...i will blow your hair butt to smilerines...like the big bad wolf in "Little Red Riding Hood". Ben: Okay! Good night! (Ben ran out) (4:51 a.m Jinny rolls over and feels somethign warm and wet on her teigh) Jinny: Ben? (silence) Jinny: BEN? (she opens her eyes to see Ben in the corner of the room hiding) Jinny: OMG!!! You didn't! Ben: (cring) i did! Jinny: Ewww...(she sat up and turned the light on to see the big yellow stain on the bed. Ben cried harder) It's okay! No big deal! Ben: I thought you were going to blow my butt to smitherens? Jinny: No way...not to you! (At the staition) Captian: Jinny, your on time! Jinny: Yes...but tired...long night! Angela: What happened? Jinny: Ben peed on me! C.D: (cracks up) Did you shot him? Jinny: No, i was calm about it! Captian: Yeah, well i remember your Dad telling me about the time you were little and you... Jinny: NOOOO! Don't tell them. Please! Anglea: Tell us! C.D: YEs, inlighen us! Captian: Well... g2g, more if you'd like!

03-30-2001, 07:57 AM	#11
Me,Myself and I Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 26, 2001 Location: Worc, MA US Posts: 270	more PLEASEEEEEE

03-30-2001, 08:13 AM	#12
80skid smile :) Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 18, 2000 Posts: 971	I love it... Keep it up!!! ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~ "Strawberry shortcake banana split, we make your team look like shift to left, shift to right... stand up sit down fight fight fight!"- Badminton A rocks! Jo: How about you park it on Blair's face? Natalie: She's a breath of fresh air, isn't she? Jo: When my dad doesn't like people, Blair, he doesn't show it. Look how he treated you! ~~~~~~~~~~~*

03-30-2001, 03:28 PM	#13
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	ooo this is getting good!! OMG you should have the captain tell the story to embarss jinny..heehe

03-30-2001, 06:38 PM	#14
Exstead Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 25, 2001 Location: Lincoln,Nebraska,USA Posts: 84	GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOOORRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pwease!! ------------------ Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me. CD: Why? Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like. ~Exstead~

03-30-2001, 07:20 PM	#15
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	ggggggggggggrrrrrrrrRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR IVE BEEN WAITING ALL DAY PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON..THIS IS AWESOME!