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LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-25-2001, 07:01 PM

ok heres the beginning of it i have to go think of something intrsting to happen but if you have any ideas email me please!!!(dont worry i'll give you credit for it too..)phatkatg03@hotmail.com, ok well here we go...

((the captin is yelling at jinny for something))
K: Jinny do you really think that given the circumstances that you made the wise decsison?
J: Captin if you let me explain...
((flower guy comes in with two seperate dozen roses))
FG: i have a delivary for a Captin Kate McCaffery...
K: thats me, thanks ((smells them and sighs and forgets about wht she was saying to jinny and leaves and goes in her office))
((Magda comes over to Jinny))
M: what was that all about?
J i dont know but maybe someone should give her flowers more often...and you wouldnt think that captin is someone who gets around much...would ya?
M: uhuh
FG: i have another delivary for a Jinny Exstead...
J: yep right here...
M: talk about getting around...
J: right now i have one guy and one guy only
M: whatever you say jin
((Angela and CD come in have a small argument))
A: i just think that
CD: it dosent matter we are still together..
J: so how are blair and jo doing?
A: I dont get it...
M: you remember jo and blair from facts of life...ok nevermind dont mind her she just got more flowers from teddy...
A: getting preety serious huh?
CD: anyways on to more important issues then jinnys love life, whats up for tonight its our night off..
A: how bout a movie?
M: or bowling...
J: cruisin
M: huh?
J: lets go cruisin!!
CD: i havent gone for a while, but sounds like fun count me in
A: cruisin the streets of San Fran.?
CD: come on it will be fun..
A: ok count me in
M: im in...
J: wooohoo lets go cruisin!!
ALL: right jinny(give her a weird look)

ok i know not that intresting so far but if u have any ideas email~ and dont worry more later

80skid · 03-25-2001, 07:26 PM

Cute... loved the FOL reference...

Oh, btw, here's an idea: adding onto a FOL reference, have 'em sing what the girls sang in Crusin'!

All in all, veeeeery cute! cant wait to see the rest!

NancyJoJinny · 03-25-2001, 07:36 PM

Oh this is cool, im like acting out jinnys part in my room, ehhh nevermind.

AlexzBonner · 03-25-2001, 07:59 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by NancyJoJinny:
Oh this is cool, im like acting out jinnys part in my room, ehhh nevermind.

(From Growing Pains.)

Ohhhhhh! So am I!!!!!!

You do that too huh? LOL on the FOL referece! Very good! BTW, they sang You've Lost That Lovin' Feelin' by THe Rightous Brothers I've got the entire song on a CD (no pun intended!) if you want the lyrics!

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B: God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.
J: Where'd you hear that?
B: It's on the plaque over there.
~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~
J: Tell Mrs. G we're out of mouthwash!
B: Well, if it isn't the kissing valedictorian.
J: Blair I have a sense of humor just like everybody else, but there are certain things in life we do not laugh at.
The Yankees and what Roy did to me. Never, are you ever to mention that!
T: He really planted one on you, didn't he?
N: Your face turned purple!
T: No oxygen!

God bless your every footstep,
~_~ Kenzie ~_~
E-Mail-- LoveNancyMcKeon@webtv.net
or
teddysangeljinny@yahoo.com
or
toocuteforyou67890@yahoo.com

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 03-25-2001, 10:39 PM

I love it! Nice with the FOL comparson. i love it!!! Keep going it is awesome!!!

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-26-2001, 04:28 PM

ok heres a little more but not to much cuz i have start my hw, but thanks for the idea 80skid(i will get to it later if not in this post) and AlexzBonnor thanks for the name of it~

((after work jinny kinda just walks in magdas house with out even knocking and open the refrigerator))
J: hey Magda dont you have any good energy drinks?
M: (sarcasticly) o hey jinny glad to see you knocked and when i go to the store want me to pick red bull or jolt?((magda son enters i think his name is ben but i am not sure)
B: hey jinny do you want to tell me a story?
M: no
J: sure come on...
M: ((sorta shouts after them but the dont listen)) remember what happened last time!!
J: ok this is the story of Cinderalla...
B: o i hate this one
J: you havent heard my verison then have you? ok well anyways there is this female inspector for the city of lets say San Fran. and her name is Cinderalla and she has this old evil boss who gets her the worst cases and all this boring paper work and is always bugging her until one day this cindralla
find out that her prince charmings boss the d.a. is her boyfriend who much younger then her~ and from then one the evil captin is nice to cinderalla because she knows that cinderalla knows about the secret...and everyone lived happily ever after good night
((Magda who was standing at the door)
M: you were talking about the capatin and you werent you?
J: o i dont know, come on i told cd and angela that i wouldnt pick them up a minute late!
(on the way to get cd and angela in the car)
M: i dont get you and the captin its like she hates you and is always out to get you
J: o its just our personal history and when i was a teen...
M: when you were a teen what happened and what personal history?
(jinny pulls over to get cd and angela)
CD+Angela: hi guys
J: hi
M: hi, but guys shush jinny was about to tell me why the captin always is on her case and why she hates her so much!
CD: well sorry tootie! and if its any constaltion i know why
(jinny gives her a look thats like if you tell her i will nevr speak to you again)
J: never mind this lets turn on the radio and get wild!!(you've lost that loving feeling comes on) now heres good music,
ALL: (singing)"you lost that loving feeling, whoo thta loving feeling, you've that loving feeling and now its gone gone gone wooowoo"
(after the song ends jinny pulls into a parking lot to a drug store and they all get out and go in the store)
J: (she takes like 5 candy bars and a red bull) now thats wht i am talking about...and i need some chips now
(a suspious guy comes in takes jinny and sticks a gun to her head)
Guy: ok this is a stick up give me all your money or she gets it....

ok well gotta go but i will maybe if i get a chance add more tonight

NancyJoJinny · 03-26-2001, 04:35 PM

Oh you gotta finsh this

AlexzBonner · 03-26-2001, 05:47 PM

Lovin' it! And you're welcome 4 the name!

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Rachel: Like that key chain said, boys are like parking spaces, all the good ones are taken.
Alexz: Yeah... too bad they don't come in silver mercedes benz!
~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~
Rachel: Have I ever been wrong?
Alexz: Don't get me started! Don't EVEN get me started!
~_~ Kenzie ~_~
E-Mail-- teddysangeljinny@yahoo.com

Wild Child · 03-26-2001, 06:08 PM

This is really good...please post more soon!

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 03-26-2001, 06:14 PM

OHHHHH, youhave to go on tonite!!!! It is great and just getting juicy!!!! Please go on!!!!!! AWESOME!!!

Exstead · 03-26-2001, 07:22 PM

Keep going!!!!!

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-26-2001, 09:42 PM

thanks for the comments! here is a little more but i do not know how much more i will be able to post in this post cause i dont know my time limit(hope that makes a little sense)

((everyone is in the store that is being held up except for CD, who sees what going on and run to the car and gets her gun, i dunno why she would have her gun and badge and calls for back up but a good cop is always prepared, so i hope thats not to far fetched)

((cd runs into the store))
CD: FREEZE inspecter from the SFPD put your hands up and release the hostage!
(the guy slowly starts to release jinny but just enough so she can do some karate move and get free and trip the guy so that he falls, he kicks her just barely but not very hard and as he fall Angela grabs his gun~by this time the police that CD called for back up comes and arrest the man)
(after CD waits for Jinny as they walk out the door of the store)
J: hey CD i owe you again
CD: dont mention it jinny, just doing my job
J: its more then that though ever since I have joined the SFPD you looked out for me a couple times and saved my a$$ a few times from the captian
CD: hey dont mention it like i said before i was just doing my job, now lets get back to cruisin!
(Jinny and CD get in the car)
A: would guys hurry up I want to expirence the thirll of CRUISIN!!!!
M: dont you think we have had enough thrills for one night?
A: no!
CD: angela have you been drinking Jinnys red bull?
A: no why do you ask?
(Jinny pulls over to a liquior store)
M: hey jin why are we stopping here?
J: cuz you know the Cindy Loper'S words "girls just wanna have fun"
M: i thought she was talking about other stuff and guys...(all confused)
J: we can get some of those too...!!!
(all look at her confused but dont stop her when she goes into the liquior store, she comes out with a 6 pack and trades spots with Angela who is know the driver)
J: any body want one?
ALL: not right now jinny
J: hi yea cd r sure you dont want one(jinny is starting to spaz cuz of the red bull)
M: jinny are you really sure you should be having that right now??

ok well i know nothing much interesting happened right then but it was leading up to something else and my older bro has to use to the computer so i will add more tomorrow or possibly tonight but proabley tomorrow!

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 03-26-2001, 09:54 PM

Ohhh...get off the computer brother!!! LOL!!! I love it! i feel like it is leading some where! I hope you come on tonite!!!

NancyJoJinny · 03-26-2001, 10:55 PM

Lovin it!

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-27-2001, 10:22 PM

heres a little more but i dont know how much i will be able to add becaus ei amvery spaztic right now....haha so just hang in there with me!

CD: jinny dont u think that 3 beers is enough?
J: no way... i am just getting this party started!
M: hey jin can have 3 beers?
A: magda do you know what you are doing?
J: sure thing, see magda knows how to party!!!!!!
(madga takes the beers and throws them out the window)
J: hey magda what did u do that for!?!
M: because you dont need it...
CD: hey angela do you mind pulling over I am craving a big mac and super size coke...
A: yep sure thing (she pulls over) come on every body out we are getting food!!
M: CD might want to help jinny there
J: I can handle my self...
(they walk in the store and get there food and everything situated, and thensome guys walk in the McDonalds and start a fight with someone and then said if the cashire did not hand over the money that he would shot randomly...the guy points his gun and at Magda and then jinny realized what was going on and just as the man pulled the triger and jinny dove right in front of the bullet)
J: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
m+cd+a- JINNY!!!!!!!!

sorry more tomorrow!

03-25-2001, 07:01 PM	#1
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	Cruisin- fan fic ok heres the beginning of it i have to go think of something intrsting to happen but if you have any ideas email me please!!!(dont worry i'll give you credit for it too..)phatkatg03@hotmail.com, ok well here we go... ((the captin is yelling at jinny for something)) K: Jinny do you really think that given the circumstances that you made the wise decsison? J: Captin if you let me explain... ((flower guy comes in with two seperate dozen roses)) FG: i have a delivary for a Captin Kate McCaffery... K: thats me, thanks ((smells them and sighs and forgets about wht she was saying to jinny and leaves and goes in her office)) ((Magda comes over to Jinny)) M: what was that all about? J i dont know but maybe someone should give her flowers more often...and you wouldnt think that captin is someone who gets around much...would ya? M: uhuh FG: i have another delivary for a Jinny Exstead... J: yep right here... M: talk about getting around... J: right now i have one guy and one guy only M: whatever you say jin ((Angela and CD come in have a small argument)) A: i just think that CD: it dosent matter we are still together.. J: so how are blair and jo doing? A: I dont get it... M: you remember jo and blair from facts of life...ok nevermind dont mind her she just got more flowers from teddy... A: getting preety serious huh? CD: anyways on to more important issues then jinnys love life, whats up for tonight its our night off.. A: how bout a movie? M: or bowling... J: cruisin M: huh? J: lets go cruisin!! CD: i havent gone for a while, but sounds like fun count me in A: cruisin the streets of San Fran.? CD: come on it will be fun.. A: ok count me in M: im in... J: wooohoo lets go cruisin!! ALL: right jinny(give her a weird look) ok i know not that intresting so far but if u have any ideas email~ and dont worry more later

03-25-2001, 07:26 PM	#2
80skid smile :) Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 18, 2000 Posts: 971	Cute... loved the FOL reference... Oh, btw, here's an idea: adding onto a FOL reference, have 'em sing what the girls sang in Crusin'! All in all, veeeeery cute! cant wait to see the rest!

03-25-2001, 07:36 PM	#3
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Oh this is cool, im like acting out jinnys part in my room, ehhh nevermind.

03-25-2001, 10:39 PM	#5
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	I love it! Nice with the FOL comparson. i love it!!! Keep going it is awesome!!!

03-26-2001, 04:28 PM	#6
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	ok heres a little more but not to much cuz i have start my hw, but thanks for the idea 80skid(i will get to it later if not in this post) and AlexzBonnor thanks for the name of it~ ((after work jinny kinda just walks in magdas house with out even knocking and open the refrigerator)) J: hey Magda dont you have any good energy drinks? M: (sarcasticly) o hey jinny glad to see you knocked and when i go to the store want me to pick red bull or jolt?((magda son enters i think his name is ben but i am not sure) B: hey jinny do you want to tell me a story? M: no J: sure come on... M: ((sorta shouts after them but the dont listen)) remember what happened last time!! J: ok this is the story of Cinderalla... B: o i hate this one J: you havent heard my verison then have you? ok well anyways there is this female inspector for the city of lets say San Fran. and her name is Cinderalla and she has this old evil boss who gets her the worst cases and all this boring paper work and is always bugging her until one day this cindralla find out that her prince charmings boss the d.a. is her boyfriend who much younger then her~ and from then one the evil captin is nice to cinderalla because she knows that cinderalla knows about the secret...and everyone lived happily ever after good night ((Magda who was standing at the door) M: you were talking about the capatin and you werent you? J: o i dont know, come on i told cd and angela that i wouldnt pick them up a minute late! (on the way to get cd and angela in the car) M: i dont get you and the captin its like she hates you and is always out to get you J: o its just our personal history and when i was a teen... M: when you were a teen what happened and what personal history? (jinny pulls over to get cd and angela) CD+Angela: hi guys J: hi M: hi, but guys shush jinny was about to tell me why the captin always is on her case and why she hates her so much! CD: well sorry tootie! and if its any constaltion i know why (jinny gives her a look thats like if you tell her i will nevr speak to you again) J: never mind this lets turn on the radio and get wild!!(you've lost that loving feeling comes on) now heres good music, ALL: (singing)"you lost that loving feeling, whoo thta loving feeling, you've that loving feeling and now its gone gone gone wooowoo" (after the song ends jinny pulls into a parking lot to a drug store and they all get out and go in the store) J: (she takes like 5 candy bars and a red bull) now thats wht i am talking about...and i need some chips now (a suspious guy comes in takes jinny and sticks a gun to her head) Guy: ok this is a stick up give me all your money or she gets it.... ok well gotta go but i will maybe if i get a chance add more tonight

03-26-2001, 04:35 PM	#7
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Oh you gotta finsh this

03-26-2001, 05:47 PM	#8
AlexzBonner Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 11, 2001 Location: Muldrow, OK (Miss America '96's home town!) Posts: 284	Lovin' it! And you're welcome 4 the name! ------------------ Rachel: Like that key chain said, boys are like parking spaces, all the good ones are taken. Alexz: Yeah... too bad they don't come in silver mercedes benz! ~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~ Rachel: Have I ever been wrong? Alexz: Don't get me started! Don't EVEN get me started! ~_~ Kenzie ~_~ E-Mail-- teddysangeljinny@yahoo.com

03-26-2001, 06:08 PM	#9
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	This is really good...please post more soon! ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!

03-26-2001, 06:14 PM	#10
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	OHHHHH, youhave to go on tonite!!!! It is great and just getting juicy!!!! Please go on!!!!!! AWESOME!!!

03-26-2001, 07:22 PM	#11
Exstead Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 25, 2001 Location: Lincoln,Nebraska,USA Posts: 84	Keep going!!!!!

03-26-2001, 09:42 PM	#12
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	thanks for the comments! here is a little more but i do not know how much more i will be able to post in this post cause i dont know my time limit(hope that makes a little sense) ((everyone is in the store that is being held up except for CD, who sees what going on and run to the car and gets her gun, i dunno why she would have her gun and badge and calls for back up but a good cop is always prepared, so i hope thats not to far fetched) ((cd runs into the store)) CD: FREEZE inspecter from the SFPD put your hands up and release the hostage! (the guy slowly starts to release jinny but just enough so she can do some karate move and get free and trip the guy so that he falls, he kicks her just barely but not very hard and as he fall Angela grabs his gun~by this time the police that CD called for back up comes and arrest the man) (after CD waits for Jinny as they walk out the door of the store) J: hey CD i owe you again CD: dont mention it jinny, just doing my job J: its more then that though ever since I have joined the SFPD you looked out for me a couple times and saved my a$$ a few times from the captian CD: hey dont mention it like i said before i was just doing my job, now lets get back to cruisin! (Jinny and CD get in the car) A: would guys hurry up I want to expirence the thirll of CRUISIN!!!! M: dont you think we have had enough thrills for one night? A: no! CD: angela have you been drinking Jinnys red bull? A: no why do you ask? (Jinny pulls over to a liquior store) M: hey jin why are we stopping here? J: cuz you know the Cindy Loper'S words "girls just wanna have fun" M: i thought she was talking about other stuff and guys...(all confused) J: we can get some of those too...!!! (all look at her confused but dont stop her when she goes into the liquior store, she comes out with a 6 pack and trades spots with Angela who is know the driver) J: any body want one? ALL: not right now jinny J: hi yea cd r sure you dont want one(jinny is starting to spaz cuz of the red bull) M: jinny are you really sure you should be having that right now?? ok well i know nothing much interesting happened right then but it was leading up to something else and my older bro has to use to the computer so i will add more tomorrow or possibly tonight but proabley tomorrow!

03-26-2001, 09:54 PM	#13
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	Ohhh...get off the computer brother!!! LOL!!! I love it! i feel like it is leading some where! I hope you come on tonite!!!

03-26-2001, 10:55 PM	#14
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Lovin it!

03-27-2001, 10:22 PM	#15
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	heres a little more but i dont know how much i will be able to add becaus ei amvery spaztic right now....haha so just hang in there with me! CD: jinny dont u think that 3 beers is enough? J: no way... i am just getting this party started! M: hey jin can have 3 beers? A: magda do you know what you are doing? J: sure thing, see magda knows how to party!!!!!! (madga takes the beers and throws them out the window) J: hey magda what did u do that for!?! M: because you dont need it... CD: hey angela do you mind pulling over I am craving a big mac and super size coke... A: yep sure thing (she pulls over) come on every body out we are getting food!! M: CD might want to help jinny there J: I can handle my self... (they walk in the store and get there food and everything situated, and thensome guys walk in the McDonalds and start a fight with someone and then said if the cashire did not hand over the money that he would shot randomly...the guy points his gun and at Magda and then jinny realized what was going on and just as the man pulled the triger and jinny dove right in front of the bullet) J: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO m+cd+a- JINNY!!!!!!!! sorry more tomorrow!