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NancyJoJinny · 03-25-2001, 08:48 PM

I need help with the title here so if you have any ideas...

(In a dark abandoned apartment building in downtown SF)

M:We shoulde called for backup.

J:Hey! Its not my fault my batterie is dead, and wheres yours mag? Huh?

M:Oh alright were even, now shut up he'll hear you!

Jinny didnt say anything for about 5 minutes, but she was on a sugar high from 5 doughnuts and she couldnt keep quite.

J:Magda?

M:yeah?

J:I dont know i just had to break the silence.

The 2 neared a small apartment door.

M:think hes in there?

J:Yeah. she said as she tryed to open the locked door.

M

amn. Are we gonna leave now i dont think hes here and its 4 am. im exausted.

J:Whats more important your beauty sleep or catching this guy before he starts another bar fight.

M:Hell be in the bar tommorow get him then.

J:Ill be in the bar tommorow i aint takin no chances. Are you that irresponsible.

Magda hadnt slept in 2 days and was kinda out of it and irratable.

M:Im being irrisponsible! What about you?

J: And what is that supposed to mean?

Magda said nothing but mumbled slut under her breath.

J:Thank you magda, i needed that right now! What the hell is wrong with you anyway!

M: I havent slept in days and i would rather go home than catch this guy but ill saty cause its my job.

Jinny didnt answer, but backed up and kicked the door in.

M:I wish you didnt know how to do that.

J:Would you shut up and do your job! Im sorry but your gettin on my nerves.

M:Jin you knew i wasnt gonna leave. I was just sayin'... c'mon

They walked into the pitch black room.

J:You hear that?

M:Hear wha- Seh was cut of by a silent sneeze. Was that you Jinny?

J:No.

The door closed behind them. Jinny ran up to it and tried to pull it open, she could barely see her way around.

J:Noo! Ugh, were trapped.

At that moment a lantern flashed on but they were in the room all alone. There was one door on the left wall. Jinny walked catiosly towards it.

M:Jinny get your gun.

She didnt answer but whipped the door opened. A man about 7 feet tall stood infront of her, he pulled her into the closet and slammed the door. There was alot of movement from inside the closet.

M:Oh my god! Jinny!. She ran over and tried to opne the door but it wouldnt budge. She backed away beginning to cry Dont you hurt her! If you do ill... At that moment the door flew open and the man fell out next to magda. Jinny stood pressed up against the closet wall.

M:He dead?

J:No, get his walet. SHe stepped out of the closet and read his drivers license. Sean Goldberg. They both walked closer to the light to read the rest.

Niether of them were faceing the man, he opened his eyes and looked at the 2 short women with his wallet. Jinny pulled out 3 100 dollar bills and went to put them in her pocket.

M:Jinny!

J:Collecting evedence

M:Put it back.

Jinny made a face like a little kid and put it back. The Man grabbed magda spun her aroung and punched her. Magda fell to the groung.

J: hey! Her and the man both pulled thier guns at the same time

Man

ont even think about it! ill shot back i will!!!

J:Put down the gun. This isnt gonna solve anything

Man:O yeah? He pulled the trigger and the bullet missed her.

The next thing jinny knew bulltes were flying everywhere, with the final shot from jinnys gun she hit the man in th shoulder. He ran from the room. Magda rolled over.

M:All that for nothing, we didnt get him, but hell hafta go to a hospital so we can track him down.

J: Hes not the only one, she said breathing heavily, she put her hand on her stomack and fell on magda.

M:Jinny! Jinny! Can you hear me?.

J:Hos-pi pital, n-now

M:We dont have a phone, Jinny started to close her eyes.

M:No no no! c'mon jin you gotta stay up c'mon honey, thats it, jinny was now barely concions,

J:Mag, it hurts, she said crying.

M:Iknow Iknow, we gotta get you out of here.

Jinny tryed to stand but scraned at the pain.

J: Oh god, i really need a doctor.

She was now leaning heavily on magda. They were on the second floor, magda wasnt sure if jinny would make it to the payphone outside. On the way out jinny started to fall 3 times but magda caught her, when they got to the payphone jinny slid to the ground. They were both covered on blood.

J:I lost a-aalot of blood, im really dizzy, jinny said as she became unconcios.

When magda was done explaining what had happened to the 911 operator. she sat next to jinny, she grabbed one of jinnys blood covered hands.

M:Jinny please dont die, pllease, your my best friend dont go. Ugh im gonna kill the bastard that did this to you!

the ambulance pulled up and hooked jinny up to the heart monitor, she had a very weak pulse.

M:Can i ride in the ambulace? she begged

Dr1:Im sorry family members only. he said as he closed the door it was 5 now, Kate would be awake.

M:Captain?

K:Yeah? Somethins wrong, what is it?!?

M:Jinnys been shot, i need a ride

K:What uh yeah, a ride where are you!

M:The corner of, she looked at the street sighns. Sprinfield AVe. and pensylvania street.

K:ill be right there oh god i hope shes ok.

M

h me too

g2g bye. more later

BlairW_1 · 03-25-2001, 09:15 PM

Oh my goodness, I need more! This is soooooo good! I hope Jinny's gonna be okay!

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"Keep the courts hott, and your summers cool!" Katie Honea

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LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-25-2001, 09:26 PM

oooooooo i hope shes alright!!! great so far please continue!

lil_Miss_actress · 03-25-2001, 10:05 PM

This is great! Mooooooorrrrrreeeee!

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So things change your born, you move on, you die-thats life!- Jo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Jinny: And little red blew the big bad wolf's big hairy butt to smitheriens!
Magna: Thanks alot Jinny..
Jinny:And they all lived happliy ever after..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ C.D: Why don't you let me talk to her? Jinny: What's that about!? C.D: Jinny, She just needs a little coddling right now.. (leaves) Jinny: I can "Coddle"
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"Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 03-25-2001, 10:30 PM

OMG!!!! This is soooooo good!! Please continue soon! i am dying to know the rest!!!! It is awesome, great job!!!

Polniaczek-Bonner · 03-25-2001, 10:36 PM

This is awsome! write more soon!

NancyJoJinny · 03-26-2001, 08:29 AM

I cant post that much because of school btu anyway...

(hospital waiting room)

Magda and Kate come in. Magda is crying and kate is trying to comfort her. Angelat and CD are already there.

A:Magda? Oh i came as soon as i heard, what happened?

M:Well we found the guy starting the bar fights and he shot jinny and jinny shot him.

CD:Is he, ehhh, dead?

M:No hit his shoulder, jinny got shot in the stomach.

Magda started crying some more.

M:Oh she cant die, i dont want her to die mad at me, i was being a real jerk, now i feel really bad.

K:It cant be that bad what did you say.

M:Well all in all, i called her an irresponsible slut.

A:Ouch.

Magda started to cry.

CD:Good job ange! she feels real good now.

A:Sorry, magd im sure shel be just fine.

A very short doctor comes in.

Dr:Extead.

A,K,M,&CD:Yes?

Dr:Ok well he hit her stomach and shes in surgery right now and theres no telling how long or if she will make id.

K:what? whatdo you mean, not make it?

Dr:I mean she lost alot of blood, and theres alot of scarred heart tissue, well call you if anything happenes. Ok.

CD:Yeah whatever.

(10:30 AM)

Everyone was asleep but magda, cd drifted in to find angela practically lyng on top of her.

CD:Get off me!

A:Huh wha- oh its you...shut up.

Cd:sighs, Magda any news.

M:Uh uh.

A: youknow somebodys gonna have to call her family.

CD:Yeah alright ill do it.

Dr:Extead. oh yeah thats you. She looked up and a tear formed bt she held it back.

A,CD,K,M:Yes?

g2g i will post more later though. what do you think.

BlairW_1 · 03-26-2001, 01:48 PM

OMG, that is sooooooo cool! g2g, bell rang!:P Ditto 4 Kenzie!

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"God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference."
"Keep the courts hott, and your summers cool!" Katie Honea

.:*Danielle*:.
Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!
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or
BlairWarner33@yahoo.com
or
BlairWarner@gurlmail.com

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 03-26-2001, 02:53 PM

OMG!!! Please continue! This is the best one i have ever heard! Please go on!!!I love it!!

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-26-2001, 03:44 PM

great so far!

NancyJoJinny · 03-26-2001, 04:31 PM

Heres more, i cant post much...time limit... gag

M:Wait somethins wrong i know it is.

Dr:There were a few complications with the surgery.

A:Anddd....

Dr:The chances of her survivng at this point is 10%.

K:Coma?

Dr. No but she could slip under and if she does theres not much chance, if at all she will come out of it this year.

M:Oh god, i think im gonna throw up.

Dr:Here sit down...

M:No i dont want to sit down, you dont know how it fells, patients have died on you, but my friend is dying, you think you fell bad how do you think i feel!?!?

Dr:Look big mouth, 2 of my best friends died last week! Theres nothing else i can do to help your friend and i dont have to take any crap from you!

M:Im sorry, i didnt know.

Dr:Yeah thanks, i feel alot better now.

The doctor left the room.

M:Great im making everyone feel awful.

K: Come on lets go to the cafeteria im starving.

M:Im not hungry.

A:Come on we need the company.

M:Ok.

(cafteria)

The 4 of them were sitting at a table near the window. Nobody said anything, there wasnt really anything to say.

Dr:Well this may come as a shock to you, it did for me, but your friend woke up.

M:Really?

Dr:yeah this is wierd, this is like new england journal of medicine material.

M:Which room.

Dr: ehh wha- oh yeah 214, one at a time please.

A.Mag you go first.

M:Ok

(room 214.)

Magda walked in jinny had a bunch of tubes hooked up to her, she could barely atand to see ehr like this.

J:Hi. She said in a weak voice.

M:How ya doin.

J:Great cant you tell.

M

rry.

J:Thats ok.

M:No not that i mean well for, ehh calling you a slut.

J:Oh drop it everyody calls me that! did i say that?

M:Yup.

J:am i on pain medication.

M:Yup.

J:That would explain it.

M: everybody else wants to se you now so see you in a few..

J:5 days and im outta here.

M:Ok 5 days, well actually ill be back tommorow, but, bye jin.

J:see ya!

g2g now

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 03-26-2001, 06:29 PM

Oh my goodness you have to write more!!! I love this story!! It just keeps getting better and better!!!! Write more tonite please!!!!

Wild Child · 03-26-2001, 06:49 PM

ditto!

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

NancyJoJinny · 03-26-2001, 08:00 PM

Heres more

(hospital room 3pm)

Jinnys asleep, nothing else really to do. Teddy came in, he tryed to be quit but hit his knee on the little nightstand.

T:Ouch.

J:Shut u- on its you, hi hunny.

T:Sorry bout that, he came over and kissed her.

J:Thats ok, what time is it?

T:3 maybe.

J:Hmmm... I never sleep at three, then again there is nothing to do here, at all.

T:yes i know.

J:Magda said she was comin bye today.

T:Good, how are you?

J:Well today i get outaa here! Thank you!!!!

T:Good, why dont you just leave now.

Jinny stared at him and raised one eyebrow.

J:Wow i am stupid aint i.

T:You got any clothes here?

J:Over there, could oyu grab them for me.

He got her the bag amd handed it to her.

J:Now get out so i can change.

T:Maybe i wont hve to leave.

J;Oh i think you do... She got up and shoved him towards the door.

T: you know i love a woman thats forcefull.

J:OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

T:I rest my cast.

Teddy left the room and waited outside.

M:Hey theodore.

T:Call me teddy

M:Mmmhmmm

T:Jinny can leave today and shes very exited.

M:Well she wont be happy when she finds out we never caught the guy.

T:that could be a problem..

Jinny burst through the door in song.

J:Im leavin imleavin!

M:Jinny?

Jinny kept on singin.

M:Jinny we never cught the guy.

J:im leavin im leavin im....stayin im stayin.

She backed up a little bit.

M:Itl be fine.

J:Hehe, real great.

M:Hey come on jinny remember your outta here free!

J:Oh yeah, Im leavin im leavin.

M:Jinny shut up befor they throw you in the psychiatric ward.

J:Im leaving!, sorry juts needed to finish.

T:right jinny..lets go. So why dont i show you my tattoo later.

J: Ehhh hehe, maybe not.

They went up to the front desk.

J:I gotts sighn out or somethin?

Dr:Yeah right here. He haneded her a form and she filled it out, thank you now there are a few guidlines you have too follow for the next two weeks.

J:What?

Dr:No strenuouse activities, no spicy foods for 2 weeks.

J: Oh is that all...

Dr:And no alcoholic beverages.

J:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Noo murder!

M:Jinny? calm down.

Jinny pouted like a little kid,

J:Ok. But when i die at my desk my will will have nothing to do with you.

T:It aint that bad.

Jinny shot a look at him.

T:nevermind...

M:Come on lets leave.

Too be contiinued...

In my next installment...can the girls stand jinny going thrugh withdrawl. Or wil they takt the easy way out and jump off the roof

NancyMcKeonFan8976 · 03-26-2001, 08:18 PM

You are killing us!!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!! Loving it!!!

03-26-2001, 04:31 PM	#11
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Heres more, i cant post much...time limit... gag M:Wait somethins wrong i know it is. Dr:There were a few complications with the surgery. A:Anddd.... Dr:The chances of her survivng at this point is 10%. K:Coma? Dr. No but she could slip under and if she does theres not much chance, if at all she will come out of it this year. M:Oh god, i think im gonna throw up. Dr:Here sit down... M:No i dont want to sit down, you dont know how it fells, patients have died on you, but my friend is dying, you think you fell bad how do you think i feel!?!? Dr:Look big mouth, 2 of my best friends died last week! Theres nothing else i can do to help your friend and i dont have to take any crap from you! M:Im sorry, i didnt know. Dr:Yeah thanks, i feel alot better now. The doctor left the room. M:Great im making everyone feel awful. K: Come on lets go to the cafeteria im starving. M:Im not hungry. A:Come on we need the company. M:Ok. (cafteria) The 4 of them were sitting at a table near the window. Nobody said anything, there wasnt really anything to say. Dr:Well this may come as a shock to you, it did for me, but your friend woke up. M:Really? Dr:yeah this is wierd, this is like new england journal of medicine material. M:Which room. Dr: ehh wha- oh yeah 214, one at a time please. A.Mag you go first. M:Ok (room 214.) Magda walked in jinny had a bunch of tubes hooked up to her, she could barely atand to see ehr like this. J:Hi. She said in a weak voice. M:How ya doin. J:Great cant you tell. Mrry. J:Thats ok. M:No not that i mean well for, ehh calling you a slut. J:Oh drop it everyody calls me that! did i say that? M:Yup. J:am i on pain medication. M:Yup. J:That would explain it. M: everybody else wants to se you now so see you in a few.. J:5 days and im outta here. M:Ok 5 days, well actually ill be back tommorow, but, bye jin. J:see ya! g2g now

03-25-2001, 08:48 PM	#1
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	(Jinny get your gun)fan fiction. I need help with the title here so if you have any ideas... (In a dark abandoned apartment building in downtown SF) M:We shoulde called for backup. J:Hey! Its not my fault my batterie is dead, and wheres yours mag? Huh? M:Oh alright were even, now shut up he'll hear you! Jinny didnt say anything for about 5 minutes, but she was on a sugar high from 5 doughnuts and she couldnt keep quite. J:Magda? M:yeah? J:I dont know i just had to break the silence. The 2 neared a small apartment door. M:think hes in there? J:Yeah. she said as she tryed to open the locked door. M amn. Are we gonna leave now i dont think hes here and its 4 am. im exausted. J:Whats more important your beauty sleep or catching this guy before he starts another bar fight. M:Hell be in the bar tommorow get him then. J:Ill be in the bar tommorow i aint takin no chances. Are you that irresponsible. Magda hadnt slept in 2 days and was kinda out of it and irratable. M:Im being irrisponsible! What about you? J: And what is that supposed to mean? Magda said nothing but mumbled slut under her breath. J:Thank you magda, i needed that right now! What the hell is wrong with you anyway! M: I havent slept in days and i would rather go home than catch this guy but ill saty cause its my job. Jinny didnt answer, but backed up and kicked the door in. M:I wish you didnt know how to do that. J:Would you shut up and do your job! Im sorry but your gettin on my nerves. M:Jin you knew i wasnt gonna leave. I was just sayin'... c'mon They walked into the pitch black room. J:You hear that? M:Hear wha- Seh was cut of by a silent sneeze. Was that you Jinny? J:No. The door closed behind them. Jinny ran up to it and tried to pull it open, she could barely see her way around. J:Noo! Ugh, were trapped. At that moment a lantern flashed on but they were in the room all alone. There was one door on the left wall. Jinny walked catiosly towards it. M:Jinny get your gun. She didnt answer but whipped the door opened. A man about 7 feet tall stood infront of her, he pulled her into the closet and slammed the door. There was alot of movement from inside the closet. M:Oh my god! Jinny!. She ran over and tried to opne the door but it wouldnt budge. She backed away beginning to cry Dont you hurt her! If you do ill... At that moment the door flew open and the man fell out next to magda. Jinny stood pressed up against the closet wall. M:He dead? J:No, get his walet. SHe stepped out of the closet and read his drivers license. Sean Goldberg. They both walked closer to the light to read the rest. Niether of them were faceing the man, he opened his eyes and looked at the 2 short women with his wallet. Jinny pulled out 3 100 dollar bills and went to put them in her pocket. M:Jinny! J:Collecting evedence M:Put it back. Jinny made a face like a little kid and put it back. The Man grabbed magda spun her aroung and punched her. Magda fell to the groung. J: hey! Her and the man both pulled thier guns at the same time Man ont even think about it! ill shot back i will!!! J:Put down the gun. This isnt gonna solve anything Man:O yeah? He pulled the trigger and the bullet missed her. The next thing jinny knew bulltes were flying everywhere, with the final shot from jinnys gun she hit the man in th shoulder. He ran from the room. Magda rolled over. M:All that for nothing, we didnt get him, but hell hafta go to a hospital so we can track him down. J: Hes not the only one, she said breathing heavily, she put her hand on her stomack and fell on magda. M:Jinny! Jinny! Can you hear me?. J:Hos-pi pital, n-now M:We dont have a phone, Jinny started to close her eyes. M:No no no! c'mon jin you gotta stay up c'mon honey, thats it, jinny was now barely concions, J:Mag, it hurts, she said crying. M:Iknow Iknow, we gotta get you out of here. Jinny tryed to stand but scraned at the pain. J: Oh god, i really need a doctor. She was now leaning heavily on magda. They were on the second floor, magda wasnt sure if jinny would make it to the payphone outside. On the way out jinny started to fall 3 times but magda caught her, when they got to the payphone jinny slid to the ground. They were both covered on blood. J:I lost a-aalot of blood, im really dizzy, jinny said as she became unconcios. When magda was done explaining what had happened to the 911 operator. she sat next to jinny, she grabbed one of jinnys blood covered hands. M:Jinny please dont die, pllease, your my best friend dont go. Ugh im gonna kill the bastard that did this to you! the ambulance pulled up and hooked jinny up to the heart monitor, she had a very weak pulse. M:Can i ride in the ambulace? she begged Dr1:Im sorry family members only. he said as he closed the door it was 5 now, Kate would be awake. M:Captain? K:Yeah? Somethins wrong, what is it?!? M:Jinnys been shot, i need a ride K:What uh yeah, a ride where are you! M:The corner of, she looked at the street sighns. Sprinfield AVe. and pensylvania street. K:ill be right there oh god i hope shes ok. M h me too g2g bye. more later

03-25-2001, 09:15 PM	#2
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	Oh my goodness, I need more! This is soooooo good! I hope Jinny's gonna be okay! ------------------ "God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference." "Keep the courts hott, and your summers cool!" Katie Honea .:Danielle:. Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz! Basketbaiichick@aol.com or BlairWarner33@yahoo.com or BlairWarner@gurlmail.com

03-25-2001, 09:26 PM	#3
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	oooooooo i hope shes alright!!! great so far please continue!

03-25-2001, 10:05 PM	#4
lil_Miss_actress Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Feb 01, 2001 Location: Boyton Beach FL usa Posts: 72	This is great! Mooooooorrrrrreeeee! ------------------ So things change your born, you move on, you die-thats life!- Jo ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Jinny: And little red blew the big bad wolf's big hairy butt to smitheriens! Magna: Thanks alot Jinny.. Jinny:And they all lived happliy ever after.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ C.D: Why don't you let me talk to her? Jinny: What's that about!? C.D: Jinny, She just needs a little coddling right now.. (leaves) Jinny: I can "Coddle" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead

03-25-2001, 10:30 PM	#5
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	OMG!!!! This is soooooo good!! Please continue soon! i am dying to know the rest!!!! It is awesome, great job!!!

03-25-2001, 10:36 PM	#6
Polniaczek-Bonner Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 07, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 265	This is awsome! write more soon!

03-26-2001, 08:29 AM	#7
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	I cant post that much because of school btu anyway... (hospital waiting room) Magda and Kate come in. Magda is crying and kate is trying to comfort her. Angelat and CD are already there. A:Magda? Oh i came as soon as i heard, what happened? M:Well we found the guy starting the bar fights and he shot jinny and jinny shot him. CD:Is he, ehhh, dead? M:No hit his shoulder, jinny got shot in the stomach. Magda started crying some more. M:Oh she cant die, i dont want her to die mad at me, i was being a real jerk, now i feel really bad. K:It cant be that bad what did you say. M:Well all in all, i called her an irresponsible slut. A:Ouch. Magda started to cry. CD:Good job ange! she feels real good now. A:Sorry, magd im sure shel be just fine. A very short doctor comes in. Dr:Extead. A,K,M,&CD:Yes? Dr:Ok well he hit her stomach and shes in surgery right now and theres no telling how long or if she will make id. K:what? whatdo you mean, not make it? Dr:I mean she lost alot of blood, and theres alot of scarred heart tissue, well call you if anything happenes. Ok. CD:Yeah whatever. (10:30 AM) Everyone was asleep but magda, cd drifted in to find angela practically lyng on top of her. CD:Get off me! A:Huh wha- oh its you...shut up. Cd:sighs, Magda any news. M:Uh uh. A: youknow somebodys gonna have to call her family. CD:Yeah alright ill do it. Dr:Extead. oh yeah thats you. She looked up and a tear formed bt she held it back. A,CD,K,M:Yes? g2g i will post more later though. what do you think.

03-26-2001, 01:48 PM	#8
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	OMG, that is sooooooo cool! g2g, bell rang!:P Ditto 4 Kenzie! ------------------ "God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference." "Keep the courts hott, and your summers cool!" Katie Honea .:Danielle:. Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz! Basketbaiichick@aol.com or BlairWarner33@yahoo.com or BlairWarner@gurlmail.com

03-26-2001, 02:53 PM	#9
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	OMG!!! Please continue! This is the best one i have ever heard! Please go on!!!I love it!!

03-26-2001, 03:44 PM	#10
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	great so far!

03-26-2001, 06:29 PM	#12
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	Oh my goodness you have to write more!!! I love this story!! It just keeps getting better and better!!!! Write more tonite please!!!!

03-26-2001, 06:49 PM	#13
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	ditto! ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!

03-26-2001, 08:00 PM	#14
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Heres more (hospital room 3pm) Jinnys asleep, nothing else really to do. Teddy came in, he tryed to be quit but hit his knee on the little nightstand. T:Ouch. J:Shut u- on its you, hi hunny. T:Sorry bout that, he came over and kissed her. J:Thats ok, what time is it? T:3 maybe. J:Hmmm... I never sleep at three, then again there is nothing to do here, at all. T:yes i know. J:Magda said she was comin bye today. T:Good, how are you? J:Well today i get outaa here! Thank you!!!! T:Good, why dont you just leave now. Jinny stared at him and raised one eyebrow. J:Wow i am stupid aint i. T:You got any clothes here? J:Over there, could oyu grab them for me. He got her the bag amd handed it to her. J:Now get out so i can change. T:Maybe i wont hve to leave. J;Oh i think you do... She got up and shoved him towards the door. T: you know i love a woman thats forcefull. J:OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T:I rest my cast. Teddy left the room and waited outside. M:Hey theodore. T:Call me teddy M:Mmmhmmm T:Jinny can leave today and shes very exited. M:Well she wont be happy when she finds out we never caught the guy. T:that could be a problem.. Jinny burst through the door in song. J:Im leavin imleavin! M:Jinny? Jinny kept on singin. M:Jinny we never cught the guy. J:im leavin im leavin im....stayin im stayin. She backed up a little bit. M:Itl be fine. J:Hehe, real great. M:Hey come on jinny remember your outta here free! J:Oh yeah, Im leavin im leavin. M:Jinny shut up befor they throw you in the psychiatric ward. J:Im leaving!, sorry juts needed to finish. T:right jinny..lets go. So why dont i show you my tattoo later. J: Ehhh hehe, maybe not. They went up to the front desk. J:I gotts sighn out or somethin? Dr:Yeah right here. He haneded her a form and she filled it out, thank you now there are a few guidlines you have too follow for the next two weeks. J:What? Dr:No strenuouse activities, no spicy foods for 2 weeks. J: Oh is that all... Dr:And no alcoholic beverages. J:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Noo murder! M:Jinny? calm down. Jinny pouted like a little kid, J:Ok. But when i die at my desk my will will have nothing to do with you. T:It aint that bad. Jinny shot a look at him. T:nevermind... M:Come on lets leave. Too be contiinued... In my next installment...can the girls stand jinny going thrugh withdrawl. Or wil they takt the easy way out and jump off the roof

03-26-2001, 08:18 PM	#15
NancyMcKeonFan8976 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 22, 2001 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 887	You are killing us!!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!! Loving it!!!