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03-25-2001, 12:14 AM
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Continue: "The Accident that was planned"
okay, i have decided to continue, becasue you guys like it. And yes, NancyJoJinny i am from Jerz! What part you from? Here i go:
(Still in Mr. Exsteads House) Jinny: John, what are you doing? John: What i would have done if you hadn't shown up the night he...the night he... Jinny: That is not important! What is important is that Casey is happy. He is alive and healthy... John: He is not healthy! A healthy person in there right mind doesn't love the opposite sex. Casey: Please John... John: Shut-up Casey! I'll do it! I really will! Jinny: John... (John pulls back to triger as he wips a drip of sweat off his brow) Jinny: Do you really want to lose your job, friends, life...for ...this? John: Shut-up Jinny! Just stay out of this!!! Jinny: No, you are doing the wrong thing and are going to regret this for as long as you live. He is your little Brother! John: Jinny, shut-up...i have enough bullets in here for you also. Jinny: Oh, John, yeah, shot us both! Why don't you shot Dad while your at it!( Jinny screams) John: SHUT-UP! (John swivered the gun around and shot at Jinny) Casey: NO!!! John you, basterd! (Casey runs over to Jinny who lies lifeless on the carpet) Mr.Exstead: I'm going to call the police! John: (nervously says) No...stay where you are! No one move! Casey: (laying on Jinny crying) Please John, she is going to die if we don't get her to a doctor! John: But...then i will get caught. Casey: You deserve it (Casey screams) (Just then Jinnys cell phone rings. Casey takes it out of Jinnys pocket.) John: Let me have it! (Casey hands it over to John and John picks it up) John: Hello? Magda: Hey Jin? John: No, she is...in the bathroom right now...can i take a message? Magda: Well...i will wait for her to come out. John: She doesn't want to talk to you so..bye. (John hangs up the phone) (At the Bar) Magda: Thanx for meeting me here guys. Angela: No problem! C.D: Whats up? Magda: I think Jinny's in trouble! Kate: What kind of trouble? (Magda explains the story of what John did to Casey when he told him he was gay and how John answered the cell phone and said Jinny couldn't talk) Kate: Well..should we go check the place out? C.D: I think we should just go to make sure! Angela: Yeah, let's go! (Back in the Exsteads House) (John pasing, Casey crying over Jinny) Casey: I won't tell anyone you shot her, but please just let me take her to a doctor. It isn't even that bad...if we wait long it can be. John: I know you'll tell them! Casey: Dad, you gonna say anything? Mr. Exstead: Well, i am not tired, but i don't want to get shot so i'll keep my trap shut. Casey: Dad, she is your daughter...your only daughter. John: To bad she turned out to be a slut. (Casey stands up) Casey: Shut up John!!! You have no right... Jonh: She is not a slut...i am sorry...she is the slut of all sluts. (Casey runs at John in anger and John isn't perpared. They fly through the back window.) Kate: Freeze! John: When did you get here? C.D: Just in time i guess! John: Magda you son of a... Magda: Don't metion it! (Angela calls from inside the house) Angela: You guys call an ambulance!! Jinny has been shot! Kate: Oh, god Casey: (Crying again) (C.D. handcuffs John) C.D: You better hope she lives real bad! (At the hospital) (Magda crying while Angela is trying to comfort her) Kate: Here comes the Doctor! Doctor: Are you immediate family? Casey: I am and i allow them to hear with me! Doctor: Okay, well...Jinny will be fine. She had a... (Doctor is interupted by a nurses call from Jinny's room) Nurse: She is dropping, Doctor Norton! Come Quick! Shall i continue? Please let me know! Because if you hate it then i won't finish it! But if you like it i would love to finish it! |
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03-25-2001, 12:52 AM
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Please continue.
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03-25-2001, 03:18 AM
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YES!! YES!! YES!! YES!! YES!!!!!!!!!
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03-25-2001, 10:26 AM
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continue this is awesome so far!!!!!
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03-25-2001, 11:39 AM
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I have but one word:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHH and im from central jesey, , which is a lot because were so small, but which part are you from. [This message has been edited by NancyJoJinny (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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03-25-2001, 03:34 PM
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Keep going!!!!
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03-25-2001, 06:02 PM
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Please continue!! This is great!
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