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Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 04-16-2001, 04:45 PM

Jinny's Room (Originally 'Messy Room' by Shel Silverstein) Adapted by Kenzie Rogers

Whoever this room is should be ashamed!
Her underware is hanging on the door
His raincoat is there in the stuffed chair
And the chair is becoming quite mucky and damp
His lawbook is wedged in the window
Her sweater's been thrown on the floor
His scarf and one ski
Are beneath the TV
Her bra has been carelessly hung on the door
Her books are all jammed in the closet
His vest has been left in the hall
A guy named Ted is asleep in her bd
And a sock has been stuck to the wall

Well, what do you think?

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God bless you one and all.
~~~<@ Kenzie @>~~~

"Greater love hath no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friend."
§ John 15:13 KJV §

Love The Facts Of Life · 04-16-2001, 07:20 PM

This is really cute

Good Job

Jo_Polniaczek · 04-16-2001, 08:55 PM

Great Job! Cute!

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04-16-2001, 04:45 PM	#1
Teddys_Angel_Jinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 421	A Poem I Adapted to fit Jinny... Jinny's Room (Originally 'Messy Room' by Shel Silverstein) Adapted by Kenzie Rogers Whoever this room is should be ashamed! Her underware is hanging on the door His raincoat is there in the stuffed chair And the chair is becoming quite mucky and damp His lawbook is wedged in the window Her sweater's been thrown on the floor His scarf and one ski Are beneath the TV Her bra has been carelessly hung on the door Her books are all jammed in the closet His vest has been left in the hall A guy named Ted is asleep in her bd And a sock has been stuck to the wall Well, what do you think? ------------------ God bless you one and all. ~~~<@ Kenzie @>~~~ "Greater love hath no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friend." § John 15:13 KJV §

04-16-2001, 07:20 PM	#2
Love The Facts Of Life FlUtTeRfLy Senior Member Join Date: Jan 18, 2001 Location: Tennessee Posts: 1,515	This is really cute Good Job

04-16-2001, 08:55 PM	#3
Jo_Polniaczek Professional Lurker Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 07, 2000 Location: The middle of Nowhere Posts: 783	Great Job! Cute! ------------------ ~Jo AIM-JoandNatRule ICQ-38668978 Message me any time! You know I won't be a kid forever but the thought doesn't fill me with dread. When I leave the land of 'Never Never' I'll have so much living I had. You know I won't be a kid forever and sometimes that causes me sorrow, but my future is closer than ever and it's gonna be a bright tommorrow.~Nat