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11-17-2001, 01:56 PM
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Packages, Packages(a fan fic centered around....you'll have to look and find out!)
This is called "Packages, Packages" and it centers around Mrs.Garrett.This is supposed to be in the Over Our Heads era....here goes nothin!
Mrs.g (walking into the shop): Hey, girls, are any of you expecting a package?(there is a package lying outside the door) Tootie: (from the living room) No! Blair: (from living room) me niether! Jo: (from living room) I wasn't expecting anything.Nat's gone and I dont' think she has anything coming in the mail.f MRs.G: OK!Thanks girls! (Goes ove to the package and picks it up.She starts to open it and suddenly the camera is again on "the girls" in the living room and there hear an explosion.) Blair:What was that? Jo: I don't know, but I think we better go find out! Tootie: (as they're running into the shop) Mrs.Garrett what.....(there is a HUGE fire in the shop and no sign of Mrs.Garrett)(Tootie turns to Jo and Blair) Where is she? Jo: I dont' know! BLair: WE gotta get out of here before they can't find us either! Tootie: But Mrs.Garrett!! Jo: Tootie, go with Blair, I'll look for MRs.G. Tootie: BUT......................... Jo:JUST GOOOO! Tootie: FINE!! BLair: Good luck, Jo!You gotta find her! Jo: thanks, Blair, I hope I do! (Blair and Tootie leave) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Come on Jo" Jo said to herself as she was dodging some flames looking for Mrs.Garrett."You gotta find her." Jo was trying as hard as she could to find Mrs.Garrett, but with the fire gettting worse, she could only go so far into the shop.She heard Blair and Tootie yell "MRS.GARRETT!!"She immeadiately whispered a prayer of thanks.By now, she was coughing and knew she had to get out, so she turned and RAN! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ To Jo, because she couldn't SEE Mrs.Garrett, Blair and Tootie's cry of "Mrs.Garrett!"was a relief, but to Blair and Tootie, it was a cry of horror.There had been an explosion from the package that had blown Mrs.Garrett across the street.Blair and Tootie were horrified, and crying by the time Jo arrived. They were frantically screaming for someone to call an ambulance, because she was also badly burnt. They were still crying hysterically when the ambulance arrived. So, Jo suggested they go home and wait for Natalie and Jo would go with Mrs.Garrett. They very reluctantly agreed. Well, I dont' have anymore written, but before I put all of myself into it...do you want more? or shoudl I forget it?BTW Jo will have a BIG part...if that makes a difference. ------------------ *Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas! ************************* my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!! ************************* I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I *WILL* meet HER!! ************************* I finally got it all together, but I forgot where I put it! ************************* IM me using piggy2111 ************************* Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!! ************************* I'm a sports pro------crastinator.-Cathy ************************* Dorothy: Get back here you WITHERED OLD SICILLAIN MONKEY! ************************* The greatest come backs of all time I get from Blair Warner, turn blue! In your Ear! and It all sounds so wholesome, I could barf! ************************* -Lizzie Marie~! 
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11-17-2001, 05:38 PM
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Me & Lisa Whelchel!
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11-17-2001, 07:36 PM
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okay, so it's not the best start ever..I needed a crisis......there are never any problems liek this with Mrs.G.....those crisis moments are the ones that really bring out "the moments" like the mushy moments.Oh yea.....It wasn't intened to blow up Mrs.Garrett, but you'll find out about that later(if people want me to continue)!Anyone else got any gripes or compliments?
------------------ *Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas! ************************* my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!! ************************* I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I *WILL* meet HER!! ************************* I finally got it all together, but I forgot where I put it! ************************* IM me using piggy2111 ************************* Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!! ************************* I'm a sports pro------crastinator.-Cathy ************************* Dorothy: Get back here you WITHERED OLD SICILLAIN MONKEY! ************************* The greatest come backs of all time I get from Blair Warner, turn blue! In your Ear! and It all sounds so wholesome, I could barf! ************************* -Lizzie Marie~!
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11-17-2001, 09:57 PM
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I like it alot! You need to post more.
------------------ ~$^*Amber*^$~ Jo: Whats wrong Mrs. G? Nat: Yea, Did tiny bubbles rub you the wrong way? see y'all! |
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11-18-2001, 12:17 AM
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More!!!
------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com or nancy_jo_rox4466@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! |
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11-18-2001, 12:47 AM
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------------------ *Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas! ************************* my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!! ************************* I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I *WILL* meet HER!! ************************* I finally got it all together, but I forgot where I put it! ************************* IM me using piggy2111 ************************* Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!! ************************* I'm a sports pro------crastinator.-Cathy ************************* Dorothy: Get back here you WITHERED OLD SICILLAIN MONKEY! ************************* The greatest come backs of all time I get from Blair Warner, turn blue! In your Ear! and It all sounds so wholesome, I could barf! ************************* -Lizzie Marie~!
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11-18-2001, 02:10 AM
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------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com or nancy_jo_rox4466@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! |
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11-18-2001, 04:15 AM
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 this is like the first fan fiction I've ever really read.
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11-18-2001, 04:05 PM
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------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com or nancy_jo_rox4466@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! [This message has been edited by #1JoFan (edited 11-18-2001).] |
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11-18-2001, 05:13 PM
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Thanks for the replies!BTW, "tootieismyfav" dont' judge the rest of the fan fics on the board by this one cuase I'm a really bad writer....ESPECIALLY compared to Panda Bear and ummm ohh what's her name!(LOL!) Anyway...there are a bunch more better writers so dont' judge the whole board by this one!
Jo jumped into the ambulance and it took off, leaving blair and Tootie as well as many bystanders in the street.Blair and Tootie embraced with tears streaming dow their faces. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Meanwhile, Jo is in the ambulance with Mrs.Garrett and the paramedics. Jo is trying her best to hold back tears. Paramedic#1: (to Jo)You okay? Jo: Yea what's it to ya? Paramedic#1:Well, seeing as how those other girls and you looked like pretty good friends, and they were devastated, I thought maybe you were even more frightened that you couldn't cry. Jo:It won't help to cry. Paramedic#1: I tmight. How is she related to you? Jo: She's not... Paramedic#1: she's not? I figured she was your mother or something! Jo:Well, it's a long story, but she practically raise me. Paramedic#2:She looks pretty bad JO: How bad? Paramedic#2: she might not make it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ At that, Jo completely lost it and started crying.Not just a little, she was hysterical.They took Mrs.Garrett in as fast as they could with Jo following close behind.As they waited for a doctor, Jo regained her composer and talked to Mrs.Garrett.As she prayed for a miracle. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jo: Mrs.Garrett, you probably can't hear me, but I had to say, thanks.You've been there for me when no one else was.You didn't know me, and you stood up for me by letting me live over the kitchen with Blair, Natalie, and Tootie.You helped me so much...(starts crying again)You gotta make it Mrs.G!You can't leave us! Mrs.Garrett: (very softly) Jo.................................it............was.............my....pleasure.......watching................you..grow up.................what happened? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jo's heart skipped a beat when she heard Mrs.garrett's voice.Jo knew she would make it.She always was strong, and she always survived EVERYTHING.Still, if she ever found out who did this to her "mother" they were going to pay. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jo: Mrs.G!I'd hug you but it would probably do more harm than good! I'm so happy you're alive!You're okay!There was a package at the door and you opened it and the next thing we knew, you were across the street. Mrs.G:Ohh...........my.............I.........feel pain.. JO: I dont' doubt it.......they said you were pretty bad offwhen I rode over in the ambulance with you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I have a little more written but only one scene and I want to put tat whole scene together.Hope you like it so far! ------------------ *Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas! ************************* my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!! ************************* I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I *WILL* meet HER!! ************************* I finally got it all together, but I forgot where I put it! ************************* IM me using piggy2111 ************************* Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!! ************************* I'm a sports pro------crastinator.-Cathy ************************* Dorothy: Get back here you WITHERED OLD SICILLAIN MONKEY! ************************* The greatest come backs of all time I get from Blair Warner, turn blue! In your Ear! and It all sounds so wholesome, I could barf! ************************* -Lizzie Marie~!
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11-18-2001, 06:06 PM
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im likin this...write more soon
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11-18-2001, 07:30 PM
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11-19-2001, 04:43 PM
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Post more...this is awesome!!!
------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com or nancy_jo_rox4466@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! |
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