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I'll Cover You
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Ok...this is my first fic.
It was a Wednesday morning in The Bronx as Rose Polniaczek fixed her coffee while trying to get ready for work. R: Jo get up! I m not gonna come to anymore parent, principal, teacher conferences discussing your tardiness, and cutting classes, and truincy. She goes back to fixing her coffee and begins to read the paper. She puts it down when she notices that it is time for her to leave for work. As she grabs her coat and heads for the door, she gives one final holler for her daughter to wake up, then walks out the door. While walking the 1/4 mile to the nearest bus stop she takes a look at her surroundings wishing that she could have brought her daughter up in a better area. Jo was fine until her father was arrested. Sometimes Rose thought that her husband who was never home had more influence on their daughter then she did. She finally got to the bus stop to go to a day of hard work and to get a little more money in her pocket. Jo Polniaczek didn't wake up till noon due to the fact that she was out till 4 in the morning with the Young Diablos. She got up and found something to eat, got dressed, and was about to sit down in front of the tv till her friend Jessie started knocking at the apartment door. Je:I knew you were gonna ditch today. J:Well I didn't get in till 4 o' clock. Of all days for them to trim the trees it was yesterday. It took me an hour to get up the tree. Je:Why didn't you just sneak in the front door? J:Ya think I didn't try that? It was locked, and I wasn't gonna knock. Anyways why did u come over? Je:O Eddie was looking for u. J:Really? Je:Uh huh, he told me to tell u to meet him at the diner. J:Ya think he couldn't come here for himself? Je:I was coming over here anyway, so he asked me to ask u. J:Ok, well, tell him I will be over there in a sec. Je:Ay, I ain't no delivery girl. Just go over there. Jessie left and Jo walked around the apartment turning off the coffee pot and her mother's iron. She then grabbed her motorcycle helmet and keys, and headed out the door. When she finally reached the diner she saw Eddie waiting outside. She parked her bike then walked to the front. J:Hi Eddie E:Hey Jo They share a short kiss and then walk inside the diner. Person:How many? E:2 Person:Shouldn't u be in school. J:It's a holiday, now just give us our seats, or else.(she holds up her fist) Person:Fine Fine, right this way. They walk to their table and get two very crummy menus. J:Everything looks so good I can't decide what to get(sarcasticly) E laughs)Uh Jo-W:I'm Kirk, your waiter, whadya want to get I don't got all day. He took their orders and menus and left again. E:Uh Jo J:Yeah E:I have something I need to tell u J:Spill E:Well I am, um, joining the, um, Navy. J:Uh huh(realizes what he just said)You're what? E:Listen Jo- J:No, u said u were joining the navy, there is nothing more to say. She starts to stand up and Eddie tries to stop her but she pushes his hand off her and storms out of the diner. She gets on her bike and rushes out of the parking lot back to her apartment not looking behind her. Ok that is all I have for now. How is it? ------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com [This message has been edited by #1JoFan (edited 10-14-2001).] |
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This is great! Write more soon.
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I'll Cover You
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Ok...I will write more Saturday morning. I don't kno where some of u people live but I live in Maryland and it is 2:20 am. I m going to bed. I promise that I will finish it though. I will not abandon it.
------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com |
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Me & Lisa Whelchel!
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It's great! Keep going!
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I'll Cover You
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I m having a brain freeze at the moment and I have kno idea what to write. I m gonna think about it and hopefully I will have it up tonight(at the latest). If u have any ideas on where the story should go from here e-mail me at:
Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com ------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com |
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I'll Cover You
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Ok here is a little more. Thx for all the replies.
As Jo walked into the apartment she slammed the door behind her and threw her keys on a chair. She sat down on the couch about ready to cry. J:Why is he joining the Navy? Just then the phone rang. She walked over and picked it up. J:What? E:Jo I- Jo hung up the phone and sat down on the couch. She was sitting for 2 sec. before the phone rang again. J:Look I hung up on u 5 seconds ago. Don't u get the picture I don't want to talk. R:Excuse me J:Mom, hey. R:Why aren't u in school. J:Uh, well ya see, um- R:Jo this has to stop. I can't have u continually skip school. J:Uh huh R:Were u even listening to me? J:Huh? O yeah, ya said stuff bout skippin school. R:Right, well, we'll talk when I get home. I should be home around 8:30-9. J:Right ma. R:BTW...who did u just hang up on 5 seconds ago. J:O nobody. R:Um hmm. I'll see u when I get home. Bye honey. J:Bye ma. She hung up the phone. She decided she was going to ride her bike to Jessie's. She could talk to her about how Eddie is such a jerk. Just as she was walking out the door the phone rung again. J:sighs She walks over and picks up the phone. J:What do u want? E:Jo please, just let me talk to u. J:Why should I? E:Please Jo just hear me out. J:Fine...ya wanna come over here? E:Ok, I'll be there in 15 min. J:Fine, bye She hangs up the phone even before he has the chance to say bye. It was the longest 15 min. of her life. She paced back and forth. She kept on picking up her keys deciding to leave or not, then puts them back down. She was even tempted to climb out her window but she stayed. Just as she was about ready to walk out the door, her doorbell rang. It took her a minute to decide whether or not to even let him in. In the end she decided that she would let him in because maybe what he had to say would make her feel better. Maybe. How is it? I will post more later! ------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com [This message has been edited by #1JoFan (edited 10-13-2001).] |
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I'll Cover You
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I will post more later tonight.
------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com |
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I'll Cover You
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Here is some more:
She walked over and opened the door. J:Hi Eddie:Hi Jo. Look I really need to explain all this to you. J:That is why I told ya to come over here. E:Can I come in J:Yea whateva. She moves aside and lets him in. J:Sit down. E:Ok He sits down on the couch and Jo sits next to him. J:Talk E:Ok, well school hasn't always been my thing so I have been thinking about dropping out forever. I have also wanted to join the Navy. So I figured I could kill two birds with one stone. Join the Navy, drop out of school. You don't even need a high school diploma to join. Afterward I will go into computers. J:But why? I mean I thought u loved me. Now u r leaving me to join the Navy. E:Jo there were tons of reasons for me to leave...but only one for me to stay. J:W-What was that reason? E:You. J:Really? E:Yea Jo...I really care about you. J:I care about you too. I'm sorry about leaving you at the diner. E:It's ok. (kisses her) J:kisses back Thet lay there on the couch together. Talking; when he was leaving, would he keep in touch, stuff like that. It is now 8:30 and Jo is so caught up in her conversation that she doesn't notice the time. J:I love u Eddie. E:I love you 2. The start kissing again...really passionately(sp) they don't notce that Mrs. Polniaczek walked through the door. R:Jo!!! J:Ma! Um hi! R:We have a lot to talk about I can see. Who is this? J:O this is Eddie. Eddie, Ma...Ma, Eddie. E:Hi Mrs. Polniaczek. R:Eddie, I think you need to leave. E:Well...ok. I'll see you tommorow Jo. Eddie walks out the door. R:Jo, I can't believe u. Skipping school to be with Eddie...and then have me come home to this; you two making out on my sofa?!?! J:We weren't making out...we were just kissing...a lot. R:Um hmm. Jo I don't kno what I'm gonna do with u. J:Let's just forgive and forget?! R:Nope...I told you last time you got in trouble...last week...that that was your last chance. J:Come on ma. R:No...I don't kno what my solution will be yet...but I will kno in the morning. You might want to be going to bed now. You r going to school in the morning. J:Fine! She leaves and walks into her room. She got in her bed, set her alarm for midnight, then went to bed. More later!!! How is it??? If you think it is horrible...I don't blame you. I will post more later. ------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! |
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NMK fan forever
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one word: SWEET!!!!!!!
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I'll Cover You
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Thx for all the replies. I will post more the second I think of what I should say!
If u have any ideas e-mail me! All my e-mail addresses are in my signature. ------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! |
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I want Serenity back
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Perfect so far. But don't get a big head!
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*funger agger* LOL
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OOOOOOOOOOO, gotta find out what she's gonna do at midnight! POST MORE NOW!!!!
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I'll Cover You
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I will post more later. It might not be till tomorrow morning. I was on vacation last week and my teachers gave me tons of HW...I didn't do any till 2day so I have to finish it! Thx 4 the replies!
------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! |
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I'll Cover You
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HI guys...I got i troublllllllllllllllleeeee so I won't be on the internet the next few days. The only reason that I am on now is because I had to look at something for a project. I just didn't want u to think I abandoned ya!
------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! |
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