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11-24-2001, 06:55 PM
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"Dangerous Suspicions"..a 4-Part Fan Fiction (Please Read and Respond!)
Hey, here is Part 1 of "Dangerous Suspicions"..I hope you like it!!
 DANGEROUS SUSPICIONS.. PART ONE ((Eastland School for Girls)) (The girl's bedroom) B: Oh my gosh!! N: What is it, Blair?! B: My nail! It..it..it chipped! N: ::Rolls eyes:: T: What else is new? B: Now I'm gonna need to go get it re-done! N: Why do you even NEED nails, Blair? T: Yeah..they're all gonna chip off sooner or later. B: ::Chuckles:: Natalie..Natalie, Natalie, Natalie, Natalie, Natalie. N: I hate when you do that. B: AND Tootie..Tootie, Tootie, Tootie, Tootie, Tootie. B: You girls just never will understand. Beautiful nails show how you are a beautiful person. And when you have no nails, it..well, I don't know what that means but I'm SURE it is not good. N & T: ::Roll Eyes:: J: ::Storms in:: Dammit! B: ::Jumps:: Oh, what a nice way to greet people. "Dammit". J: Shut up. I'm not having a very good day. N: ::Walks towards her:: What's wrong, Jo? J: What's wrong?! I'll tell you what's wrong. First, my bike busted. B: Oh! What a tragedy! T: Uhh Blair, wasn't it a tragedy to you when your nail chipped? B: Ugh.. J: Well anyways, besides my bike being busted, my mom left my dad. Again. Just when they get back together! T: Oh..I'm sorry. You have alot of problems. N: Tootie! J: Gee, thanks. B: Well I'm going to Tiffany's. Chow! ::Leaves:: J: Yeah..like she gives a damn about my problems. T: Jo I know your upset but you don't have to use such..harsh language. J: Tootie, if your parents split up and your favorite thing in the world won't work I am sure you would be the same way. T: ::Thinks:: That might be true. J: ::Rolls eyes:: ((Tiffany's)) B: ::Looking around:: Hm..these prices are so low!! ::Smiles:: Only $50.00 for this velvet scarf! ::A worker comes up to her:: WRK: May I help you? B: Oh, no thank you. WRK: Okay. ::Walks away:: B: ::Buys 6 articles of clothing and pays for it, and walks out of the store:: ::She sees a group of teenagers in the back of an alley, with wripped clothing:: B: Wow..they sure are low class. ::Walks away:: ((Eastland)) B: Yeah, and on my way back I saw these freaks in the back of an alley. They were SO low classed! Wripped up, old clothing and all. J: Blair shut up. All you do is judge people. B: Gosh..what is wrong with you? MG: Yeah Jo..what IS wrong? J: Nothing is friggen wrong! ::Everyone stares:: J: And Blair that group of "freaks that were low class" in the back of the alley were probably a gang. B: I see... J: When you live in the Bronx for half your life you know that stuff. B: Well sorry but I didn't ever live in that junkyard! J: That's it. I want you to take that back now. B: Make me! T: There is gonna be troubleee... MG: Now, girls, ::stands between them:: Jo, calm down. Blair, apologize. B: Well it's true! J: Ya know what Blair, your full of crap. ::Walks out of the room:: ::Everyone, once again, stares at Blair:: B: Stop looking at me! ::Later that night, about 10:00 PM:: ::Blair, Tootie, Natalie, and Jo are in bed when all of the sudden Blair wakes up, seeing Jo leave the room:: B: Jo? J: ::Pauses:: B: ::Gets up:: Where are you going? J: Downstairs. B: For what? J: You think I need to tell you? Just get your beauty sleep. ::Leaves:: B: ::Stares:: J: ::Slowly tip toes down the stairs and quietly opens the door, slipping out..:: ((About 5 hours later)) J: ::Walks back in the house and into the bedroom:: B: ::Still up:: Jo! Where have you been?! I went downstairs and you werent there..it's 5 in the morning! J: Blair shutup. I..had to go out. B: Your lucky I didn't go to Mrs. Garett or Mr. Parker on you! J: Blair just can it okay?! I had to go somewhere and do something. B: What?! Tell me or I'm gonna report you. J: Tell you?! Over my dead body. T: ::Wakes up with a yawn:: What's going on? B & J: ::Stare at each other:: ((The next day)) B: ::Reading a magazine:: J: ::Comes into the bedroom and gets her coat:: B: Where are you going NOW, Jo? J: ::Ignores her and leaves room:: B: ::Follows her:: J: ::About to leave:: B: Mrs. Garett!!! Jo's going somewhere! ::Yells:: MG: ::Runs in:: Jo! Where are you going? J ::Glares at Blair:: Uh..just the hardware store. B: Yeah and I bet that's where you were going last... MG: Last what? B: Uh..week. Yeah, last week. MG: Go Jo. Just be back soon. Okay? J: Yeah. ::Leaves:: B: ::Sighs:: I have to find out where she's going. THE END OF PART ONE Well..how do you like it? Part 2 will be up asap! ------------------ Blair Warner Warner: I think someone famous once said..tho shall not STEAL? Dorothy Ramsey: ..I have panic attacks.. Blair Warner Warner: I see you, you little rascal! I'm gonna get you! I....GOTCHA! Blair Warner: Turn Blue! Blair Warner: I just had another one of my BRILLIANT ideas! *Love, Cassie* |
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11-24-2001, 07:11 PM
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Bonnie Hunt
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thats goood so far i like it
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11-24-2001, 07:15 PM
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This is realy really good.I hope you can post more soon!
------------------ "You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!! ~*~Megan~*~ Wild807(IM me anytime!!) |
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11-24-2001, 07:46 PM
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This fan fic is soooooooooo good...you have to post more ASAP!!!
------------------ ~Lauren/Laudie~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com or nancy_jo_rox4466@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! Visit my Nancy McKeon page that is nowhere near done! www.angelfire.com/tv2/nancy_jo |
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11-24-2001, 09:54 PM
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i like it. it is very good. keep up the good work.
 ------------------ Jo: You're so old, that the date on your milk carton would read B.C.! Blair: Turn blue! Blair: Oh my gosh! There's a hair in my menu! Jo  Blows it) There it's gone! Now order.Blair: I can't order the picture of the hamburger is green! |
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11-24-2001, 10:24 PM
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This is exelent you are a great writer!!! please post more soon!!!!!!
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11-24-2001, 11:21 PM
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this is really good! i hope u add more asap so i can find out where jo will go and not lose sleep over thinking about it...lol
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11-25-2001, 01:10 AM
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great! can't wait for more@!
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11-25-2001, 06:06 PM
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Hey..thanks for all the nice compliments!
Here is part 2..DANGEROUS SUSPICIONS.. PART TWO (The Next Day) ((Eastland's Cafeteria)) B: ::Sitting at table with Natalie and Tootie:: I have to find out where Jo has been going. T: Blair, no offense..really, but I don't think its any of your buisness. B: Oh, Tootie, your one to talk. N: She's right though. You shouldn't get into her life and what she does in it. B: Yeah well I have a feeling she hasn't been going to the hardware store when she said she was. T: So you think she lied to us? To Mrs. Garett?! B: Tootie Jo is great at lieing. N: All I'm gonna say is that you shouldn't jump to conclusions. Maybe she isn't lieing! B: Yeah well where could she possibly go at 11:00 PM and stay there until 5:00 AM?! All stores are closed! And I'm not jumping to conclusions. I'm going to find out WHERE she goes after all..by following her. T & N: ::Stare at each other:: (Later that night) (About 11:00 PM) ((The girl's bedroom)) J: ::Puts on coat:: B: ::Watches:: T & N: ::Also watching:: J ::Looks at them:: What are you staring at? T: Oh..nothing. J: Whatever. ::Leaves:: B: ::Gets up and puts her coat on:: Don't tell anyone about this. ::Leaves:: T: There is gonna be.. N: ::Cuts her off:: Don't say it. (Jo walks downtown, Blair quietly following behind her. She walks past a few stores and stops on a corner. She goes down it and it appears to be an alley.) B: Oh my gosh..this is the same alley I saw at Bloomingdales! ::Says to herself:: B: ::Walks closer and peaks down the alley, seeing the gang. And Jo with them. Some of them are taking drugs.:: Jo!! ::Yells:: (All the gang members stare) GM1: Who the h*ll is that? J: Blair what are you doin here?! GM2: ::Walks up to Blair:: Well, well, well. Your pretty..good looking. B: Uh..thank you. GM2: How ‘bout you join our gang? Like Jo did? B: ::Stares at Jo:: Jo…you joined this gang? J: Yeah…yeah, I did. B: You could be expelled from Eastland for this! GM1: Well nobody will TELL anyone at Eastland ‘bout this little incident, will they? B: Jo I don’t believe you. And I would never ever join this low class group of scumbags! GM1: What did you say? GM2: Scum bags, huh? J: Guys..just drop it. She didn’t mean it. GM3: No, we ain’t gonna drop it. GM4: Do you see this? ::Pulls out a razor:: We all have one. GM4: And we ain’t afraid to use ‘em. J: Will you all just lay off? ::All the gang members look at Jo:: GM1: Well, sticking up for a friend, eh? It ain’t gonna work. GM2: We’ll make you a deal, blondie. You join our gang, or we hurt you. B: I’m really sorry but I said it once and I will say it again…I will never join your gang. GM2: Is that so? ::One of the gang members grabbed Blair, and the other struck her with the razor in the arm:: GM2: That’s for not joining! J: Dammit! ::Jo tackled the gang member with the razor as Blair fell to the ground in pain. Another one of the members kicked Blair in the stomach and punched her:: GM4: ::Pulls out razor and slashes Jo on the leg:: B: ::Weakly gets up but is slashed, once again on the face – the cheek. Another one of the gang members pick up Blair and see she is bleeding:: GM4: Take this ::Punches her in the eye and pushes her down:: B: ::Is unconscious:: J: ::Gets up, and runs to the nearest pay  :::All the gang members chase her leaving Blair alone, half dead:: ::Luckily, the phone is in a booth. Jo locks the booth, thankful there was a lock:: ::The members try breaking the booth’s glass but can’t:: ::Jo dials 911 and requests an ambulance immediately.:: THE END OF PART TWO Part 3 will be posted soon! What do you think of the story? ------------------ Blair Warner Warner: I think someone famous once said..tho shall not STEAL? Dorothy Ramsey: ..I have panic attacks.. Blair Warner Warner: I see you, you little rascal! I'm gonna get you! I....GOTCHA! Blair Warner: Turn Blue! Blair Warner: I just had another one of my BRILLIANT ideas! *Love, Cassie* |
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11-25-2001, 06:10 PM
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man getting goooooddd cant wait to read moore
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11-25-2001, 06:21 PM
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More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
------------------ ~Lauren/Laudie~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com or nancy_jo_rox4466@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE! Visit my Nancy McKeon page that is nowhere near done! www.angelfire.com/tv2/nancy_jo |
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11-25-2001, 08:28 PM
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Not Bad.
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11-26-2001, 09:27 PM
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Hi everyone, this is a notice for all people who want me to write more on this fan fiction:
I probably won't be able to write more until Friday, Saturday, or Sunday. I have alot of school work and of course that comes first. I promise all of part 3 will be up either Fri, Sat, or Sun. Thanks! Byebye!   ------------------ Blair Warner Warner: I think someone famous once said..tho shall not STEAL? Dorothy Ramsey: ..I have panic attacks.. Blair Warner Warner: I see you, you little rascal! I'm gonna get you! I....GOTCHA! Blair Warner: Turn Blue! Blair Warner: I just had another one of my BRILLIANT ideas! *Love, Cassie* |
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12-01-2001, 08:27 PM
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WOOHOO! Praise for "Dangerous Suspicions":
"A great piece of work leaving you with a lot of excitment and dramatic part-enders. It is written in such a way, I feel like I am watching it on TV" ---DSFOL |
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12-20-2001, 07:53 PM
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This a very good story post some more as soon as you can ok.
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