Broken Ground

[DramaQueenTootie]

Hey everybody! ok this is like my second fan fic. I hope you all like it!!!!!! Please read and tell me your thoughts about it so I can add more! thank you! enjoy!
~*Alicia*~
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(camera shows Mrs. G shuffling through papers near her phone)

MG: Oh no! I can't belive i lost the paper with the girls gate #
and time that they are coming in!
::Bruce is sitting on the couch::
Br: Come on Edna you know that you put the paper in the car
MG: Why didn't you tell me that thrity minutes ago when I asked for it?
Br: I was watching a game, I wasn't paying attention to you babbling
MG: Bruce! ohrrrrrrr come on! were gonna be late on picking them up
and I haven't seen them since Tootie's Wedding! I'll be in the car, you
grab the camera and hurry on out here!
Br: ok ok I'm coming

(camera focuses in side plane, jo and Blair sitting together and Nat and
Tootie sitting together.)

B: It is going to be great seeing Mrs. G and Bruce again!
T: yeah I can't wait!
N: She does know that you and cliff are engaged rigt Blair?
B: not exactly, just that we are very close personalities
J: More like completly and totally in sepreable
B: Not true Jo, he isn't here is he?
J: ummm blair the security guards practically had to pry
him away from the door to the plane
B: well he just loves me, that's all
::stewardess gets on speeker::
S: Hello ladies and gentlemen the pilot has turned on the fasten seat belt sign
indicating that there may be some turbulance ahead in our path to the east
coast of Africa. Please fasten your seal belts and talk in a low manner.
B: No way Jo!, Rick is not even close to being as sensable as Cliff, for
example check out my engagement ring
J: wow Blair! how did he get reall orange carrots in that tiny piece of glass?
B: talking about Ricks ring for you again I should have know it's ok dear
I'm here for you, I won't gloat about my $25,000 ring from Paris don't worry
J: Oh blow it out your glass eye Blair!
S: um the pilot has requested low mannered talking which indicates your
talking to .... loud.
T: I think you should listen to her Jo
J: Thanks Tootie!, ::raising a fist:: blair can learn to kep her mouth shut until
the rest of the flight
::Stewardess walks to pilots area then races back into first class::
::all of a sudden the plane rushes into a free fall, then up again the down and up!"
B: What the heck is going on?!
S: attention people are planes left engin was just struck but lighting from the
storm we have encountered, stay calm, yeah right, stay calm and the piilot
will attempt to make and emergency landing on the Islands near Port Sudan.
There will be a slight, um sure why not, slight collison with the fast
approaching ground.
:: the plane goes back into free fall::
S: please! once landed un fasten your seat belts and get out of the plane in
an ORDERLY fashion through the exits located at the un damages end of
the plane, then run as far way from the vehical as possible thank you and
.....good luck to all
J: just our luck thank you blair this was your idea! so it's your fault we are
going to die
T: um Jo do you think you could be just a bit more positve...thanks
B: Jo dont' be mad please
J: sorry but I am always mad at you for something.....imean hey im jo
B: I love you guys
J: yeah love you all too
T: ahhh me too
N:me too! now lets live through this crap and go see Mrs. G!
:: drunk guy behind them::
D: I love you too!yippie!
:: the plane skirts towards the earth...5.......4......3........2...........1!!! the plane smashes into tree after tree leaving itself a twisted piece of metal and fire and...trees.::

hey you guys how is it so far? cya

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Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
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Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
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Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
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"The Drama Princess"
Troupe 5...7...0...9
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AIM at gliterpupp

[This message has been edited by DramaQueenTootie (edited 02-03-2001).]

[BlairW_4]

AWESOME

[BlairW_4]

i really love it

[Lil_miss_goodwrench_518]

great...great leave us in suspense till the next time u post it!! ahhhhhh

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n: girls girls girls what do people usually fight over? the little things, ignor the little things and lifes a breeze..for instence if i got irritated over all the little things that tootie did we would have split up a long time ago
T: right
N: who cares if she always leaves her books on my bed
T: yea u see its like when...i always leave my books on your bed?
N: yea, you walk in and instead of dropping them on your bed you drop them on my bed
T: i dont do that
N: you do, but dont worry, your a kid you dont know any better
T: uhuh well if irritated you so much then why didnt you say anything?
N: it doesnt irritate me much
T: well is there anything else I do that doesnt irritate you MUCH?
B: my my my trouble in paridise?
T: you butt out of this blair
J: you tell her tootie
T: the same goes for you too Mr. Goodwrench

[DramaQueenTootie]

::the girls are tangled up in the twisted metal::
(Jo is concious but has a severe cut bleeding on her torn forehead)
(blair seems to be concious and not seriously hurt)
(Nat is unconcious covered in gray mud)
(Tootie is no where to be found)
:: a large metel piece crashes between the rows striking Nat on the elbow::
J: blair are you.....
B:Jo your ok i was afriad to ask. oh no Nat's unconcious. Oh my god
where is Tootie!?
J: Blair we need to get us and Nat out of here immediately!
B: Right hey is anyone eles concious?
J: (looks back for the first time) um blair there isn't anyone eles
(the whole coach part of the plaane wasn't but 200 yards away from
them, a ball of fire, no people anywhere)
B: (looks back) Oh my god Jo were the only survivors,
Jo: blair check nat for a pulse!
B: um ok, can you move that sheet of metel
J: (manuveres her ay towards the metel and gives it a push) hey blaire
it won't budge, climb across the stewardess and help me push!
B a surprised look on her face reluctantly climbs over the plane seat and
across the unconcious stewardesses lap) ok Jo now what?
J: on the count of three...push.......1.......2.......3!
(they push the sheet of bent keel metel and chucked it out the gaping
back end of the plane.
B: ok (she moves to nat and checks for a pulse) She has a pulse!!!!!
J: great un fasten her seat belt and high tail it outta here, if we get separated
flail around the neon scarf your whereing and il find you! ok?
B: ok ,here the belts undone take her to the right and out I'll be there asap!
J: Blair! this things gonna blow! forget about your make up bag!
(jo crouches to free her and nat of the twisted mess)
(blair grabs her carry on bag)
(jo gets away from the plane as fast as she can with Nat hanging to her shoulder
still unconcious. She looks back to see Blair escape from the plane just seconds
from the mass explosion!)

(Camera focases on Mrs. G and bruce waiting at a gate in the Sudan international airport)
MG: where are they? what could have happend? They were supposed to be
here over an hour ago!
Br: i'm sure their plane is fine probably just a delay because of the storm.
Mg: yeah your probably right, (she sits in a chair facing a TV with a news
channel on it)nothing has happunnnnd!!!!!!!Oh my god!!!!!!Bruce!! the TV.... look!
TV: flight 286 from JIA on route to Sudan international has dissapeared from
radar 5 times in the past hour before dissapearing completely only 30 minutes
flight time away from their desination. No word on where the plane has landed
yet. Tv News will bring you up to the minute news on this flight as soon as word
is in back to you jim.
MG: oh my gosh! the girls were on that flight! wher could they be?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?
(Mrs G starts sobbing and looks out the window at the pouring rain representing her tears)

Ok I gtg give my dog a bath so I'll write more later cya!

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Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
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Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
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Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
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"The Drama Princess"
Troupe 5...7...0...9
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AIM at gliterpupp

[DramaQueenTootie]

Ok I don't want to go through all the work of typeing the rest of the story if no body is going to comment on it. And hey constructive critisim is good! ONce i hear what you think I will add more ASAP!!!! thanks cya

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Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
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Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
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Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
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"The Drama Princess"
Troupe 5...7...0...9
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AIM at gliterpupp

[BlairW_4]

ADD MORE NOW PLEASE lol..i mean asap

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"I have another one of my brilliant ideas!" -Blair
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"The worst thing about falling asleep at the wheel is you didn't get to see your life flash before your eyes." -Blair
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"Turn Blue!!" -Blair
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[Lil_miss_goodwrench_518]

its great!!!!!!!!! keep posting it!

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n: girls girls girls what do people usually fight over? the little things, ignor the little things and lifes a breeze..for instence if i got irritated over all the little things that tootie did we would have split up a long time ago
T: right
N: who cares if she always leaves her books on my bed
T: yea u see its like when...i always leave my books on your bed?
N: yea, you walk in and instead of dropping them on your bed you drop them on my bed
T: i dont do that
N: you do, but dont worry, your a kid you dont know any better
T: uhuh well if irritated you so much then why didnt you say anything?
N: it doesnt irritate me much
T: well is there anything else I do that doesnt irritate you MUCH?
B: my my my trouble in paridise?
T: you butt out of this blair
J: you tell her tootie
T: the same goes for you too Mr. Goodwrench

[Jo_Po]

Keep posting it! You are off to a great start!

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Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "I hate it when you do that!"
Blair: "What?"
Jo: "Sigh!"
Blair: "I don't sigh!"
Jo: "Well if it isn't a sigh you've got a slow leak!"
Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "You did it again!"
Blair: "That's called breathing."
Jo: "You do it just to annoy me!"
Blair: "No,I do it to keep from dieing."
Jo: "Now there's an idea!!"
~Steph

[factsfanatic]

I think it is great too. Please post more.

[BlairW_1]

Ditto!

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T: Oh no! She's right! Sweet little me IS a mass murderer! But I don't remember any of it. Multiple personalities! That's gotta be it! Six faces of me! Each face responsible for a different death! Andy, George, Natalie, Blair, Beverly Ann, Jo.
B: And then there was Tootie!
T: AAAAHHHHH! Blair! But... I thought you were...
B: Dippity-dooed? That's what I wanted everyone to think! That made it easier to get rid of the rest of you!
T: You? You're the murderer? Blair, that's so inconsiderate!
B: Don't you see? That's part of my plan to eliminate everyone who falls under the fifty percent tax bracket!
T: But we were your friends!
B: My friends don't wear polyester! They don't drive motorcycles or ramblers! They don't buy their shoes from the supermarket!
T: I get mine from Paris, honest!
B: Face it, Tootie! You're hopelessly middle-class!
T: Blair! Blair! Please, wait! Please! Blair! Oh no! AAHH!
BA: No, please, please! No! Don't kill Tootie! No!
N: Beverly Ann, wake up!
BA: Don't drink the cocoa!
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~Danielle~

[DramaQueenTootie]

You want it you got it.....but don't let this part like make you turn away cuz it's a really dull part of the story until they look for tootie...but i can't tell you it yet hehe! later enjoy! ~*Alicia*~

::It's morning, the rain from the previous night has put out the fires from
the plane which is separated into to pieces::
(Jo Blair and Nat are sleeping huddled under a group of trees far from the
plane near a beach)
(Blair wakes up)
B: Oh my gosh, it wasn't a dream....we crashed...Jo..and mee got Nat out...
..and Tootie.................Oh my gosh where's Tootie? Jo? Jo wake up!
J: (wakes up from her sleep) What is it Blair? oh no the nightmare was real
...were stuck on an Island with a plane and the other people in the plane.....
didn't survive. oh no..Hey is Nat ok?
B: um......let me check...(she reaches over to Nat and checks for a pulse.)
yeah she's ok, see if you can wake her up.
J: Nat, hey Nat, you ok in there, wake up Nat, Natalie.......
(Nat slowly but surely opens her eyes seeing for the first time what has happend)
N: hey you guys are you ok....OW my elbow!
J: ewww looks like we need to get you to a hospital
B: and what about you Jo?
J: huh?
B: here look..(takes a mirror out of her bag)
(Jo takes the mirror)
J: oh it's just a scratch i'll be fine
B: if you say so, be careful not to get those thing infected yu know all those
icky bacteria things can cause all those evil illnesses and then your head
and elbows will get green and puffy bubbly and
J: (cuts in) Your face is fixen to be puffy not to mention the colors of the
rainbow! We do not need your sofisticated lectures right now Blair!
B k fine just trying to help the situation
N: (gets up looks around at the enviorment and trying to see Tootie)
umm you guys where's Tootie?
J: um nat we never.....
B: ahhhhhhaha Natalie natalie...Tootie who?
N: You know what Tootie Blair! Where is she?!
B: Well
Jo: we didn't find her
N: (frantically) did you look?
J: we we kinda more into getting us outta the plane before it exploded!
N: yeah and i'm greatful but where is my best friend??????
B: I just got one of my brilliant ideas!
N: Not now blair!
B: I meant that we should go and look for her! The island is pretty small
lets go find her
J: ok we have to look. we better check around the plane pieces first then
look through the trees but no matter what we have to stick together!
Nat and Blair together: Right!

Ok guys sory but that's all I had time for i'll add more ASAP tell me what
what you think in the mean time!

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Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
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Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
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Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
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"The Drama Princess"
Troupe 5...7...0...9
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AIM at gliterpupp

[DivisionFan_Jinny]

this is good so far!

Alicia, you HAVE to write more soon!

[iluvfacts14]

THIS IS GREAT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

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Mrs. G.: ...the whole subject of retardation was strictly off-limits..

Natalie: ....so was sex, religion, and politics, what was left?

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Natalie: I'm not jealous.....I'm wounded.

[DramaQueenTootie]

Hey people how are you i am adding to this now i guess hehe. hope you like it!
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::Camera focuses on Mrs G. pacing back and forth at the airport, bruce
is at a lounge getting some donuts and coffee.::
MG: where are they!? they were so close and now no one knows if
they are even alive! oh no! they must be! but where?????
Br: (comes over and gives her her donut and cup of coffee) hey how are you doin?
MG: Bruce why did i make them come visit why?
Br: you didn't MAKE them come they wanted the reunion just as much
as you, besides it was Blairs idea wasn't it?
MG: I think so, but still I could have gone there and none of this would
have happend
Br: what happend?
MG: that's exactly the point! i have no idea what happend and niether does anyone eles!
Br: why don't we head home annd watch the news, getting upset here
won't help, you need to be home right now.
MG: i guess home sounds good, maybe one of the girls called! what are
you waiting for let go c'mon hurry!
:: they head home as fast as they can to "no new messages"::

(camera switches over to focus on Bliar Nat and Jo walking toward
the charred back end of the plane)
Jo: Blair if you don't want to come this close you don't have to
B: I know but I donit want to be by myself out here!
N: (looks at a rather large orange beetle and jumps back a bit) heck i don't blame you!
J: Hey nat when we get outta here you'll have a novel to write won't
you
N: I don't want to think about that right now, i just want to find tootie and then plann our escape from this mess.
B: hey look !
J: what?
B: there's a Blooming Dales catalog!
N: Blair!!!!!!!!
B: oh right, Tooie are you in there?(calling to the plane)
J: no answer guys, lets go around to the other side
(they walk around and spy a bag on the ground)
N: hey that's Tootie's!
B: That mean theres hope c'mon we gotta find her!
J maybe she's over towards the other half of the plane you guys!
hurry up!(they run over to the plane but slow as they near it
B: wow.......it's been engulfed by fire
J: yeah I'm so glad we got outta that
N: (sadly) me too(starts wandering off)
J: what are we going to do
B: Oh no what if we find Tootie but she's
J: don't say it Blair.......don't
B: your right lets keep looking
J: we can leave nat to herself for a little while.
B: yeah
:: they walk around the plane pieces searching for Tootie::
(nat sits leaning against a huge tree, far from the others)
N: what if we don't find her, what am I going to do? I miss her soo much!
(she starts to weep, a tear rolls down her face)
:: then nat hears a grumbled moan from the tree::
N: (thinking to herself) oh my god either I'm going crazy or that
tree is talking to me
::she gets up slowly then quietly looking at the tree tip toes
around it's hull to the back)
N: OH MY GOSH TOOTIE!!!!!!!!!!
T: (queitly) Nat is that you?
N: yes it's me Tootie are you ok?!?!?!?!
T: I don't know, where are the others?
N: stay there and don't move a muscle I'll be right back
T: and she says don't move
(camera focuses on Jo and blair)
N: you guys you guys!!!!!!!Jo!!!! blair!!!!!! I found her!!!!!!!!!!

to be continued ASAP.....how is it so far?

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Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
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Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
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Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
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"The Drama Princess"
Troupe 5...7...0...9
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AIM at gliterpupp