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100%Cutie · 10-28-2001, 01:17 PM

Hey, this is me 1st story ever so it might SUCK. So could everyone tell me what they think...good or bad....the HONEST truth...it would be great thanks!

Ok so here's whats goin on...
Jo and Blair were in a huge fight (big suprise) about who was better at anything. Blair says,"Ya know what, I've always wanted to say this..." and here goes the story.

Jo:What blondie
(Blair stares at her with squinted eyes)
B:...you...Your the WORST motorcycle driver I have EVER seen!!
(Jo took Blair to the mall earlier -believe it or not- on her bike since the car was in the repair shop)
J: (laughs)
B:what's so funny?!?!?!?
J: (laughing gradually stops) "Your the worst driver i ever saw" HA!! That's the best you could think of?!?! C'mon Tootie or Nat could of done better than that! No offense you two.
T&N: (evesdroping in the other room)
T:That's ok!
N:None taken!
J:Anyways, I would like to see you try to drive a bike like mine!!
B:Fine I will!
J:Yea, right. If you even tried to touch my bike...
B:What, you'd punch my face in to look like a smashed pumpkin or somethin?
J:No,it already looks like that...I would just...
B:what?
J

k how 'bout you shut your trap. The point is I'M a better biker than you (she's thinking at the same time...DUH!!!) and you couln't even comtrol a motorcycle if you tried, much less get near mine.
Blair was extremely insulted by this even though she knew it was true. So she stormed up to her bedroom without another word to say. When Blair got to her room she immediatly went to her alarm and set it for midnight, then went to bed. When it was midnight Blair got out of bed, got dressed, and snuck downstairs. She grabbed Jo's helmet and keys to her bike then said, "I'll show her who can and can't comtrol a stupid motorcycle." She quietly went outside, but before completely closing the door thouught, "Should I actually do this. I've never thought of it before. But then again, who is she to say that I, Blair Warner can't do something. Anyway, how much harder could it be than driving a car. Right?

Well there it is the 1st part. How is it? Should I keep going?

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~~~Erin~~~
Me e-mail adress r
~Llpuk991@aol.com~
or
~PenquinOnIce17@aol.com~
"Would if I could but I can't so I won't"

[This message has been edited by 100%Cutie (edited 10-28-2001).]

Ryanmo97 · 10-28-2001, 01:33 PM

Yes. Keep going.

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sue z q · 10-28-2001, 02:05 PM

Good start! Keep going!

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Ewan's My Man · 10-28-2001, 02:58 PM

Great...keep going!

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~Lauren~
Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo
Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me
Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com
or
musicdiva467@hotmail.com
or
chicago6789@hotmail.com
or
irishhottie77@hotmail.com
as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE!

Krisalicious · 10-28-2001, 03:10 PM

I love it! That's really good...keep going!

KerriBerri687 · 10-28-2001, 05:24 PM

im likin' this so far! keep goin!

MrsGarrettRocksMySocks · 10-28-2001, 06:19 PM

I of course love it! I told you that I loved your idea! Anyway, um........I like ones with Mrs.Garrett so PLEASE put lots of Mrs.Garrett in it!

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*Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas!
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my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!!
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I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I *WILL* meet HER!!
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I finally got it all together, but I forgot where I put it!
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IM me using piggy2111
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Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!!
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I'm a sports pro------crastinator.-Cathy
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Dorothy: Get back here you WITHERED OLD SICILLAIN MONKEY!
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The greatest come backs of all time I get from Blair Warner, turn blue! In your Ear! and It all sounds so wholesome, I could barf!
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-Lizzie Marie~!

Acting Girl 19 · 10-28-2001, 07:24 PM

It's good

Ags2000 · 10-31-2001, 05:11 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Charlotte Rae Fan:
I of course love it! I told you that I loved your idea! Anyway, um........I like ones with Mrs.Garrett so PLEASE put lots of Mrs.Garrett in it!

LOL

LOL

Sounds good so far.

D

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Nat: What are bananas doing on a Palm Tree?
Blair: The bird needed something to sit on. Besides, I wanted a splash of color.
Jo: You want color? Shoot the bird!

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100%Cutie · 11-02-2001, 01:01 AM

hey.....im in sort of a block and cant really think of what to write. BUT....i have had some help from charolette rae fan and there is more of a story comin along...so im not desserting every1...just thinking of ideas. WEll that all 4 now! bye

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~~~Erin~~~
Me e-mail adress r
~Lilpuk991@aol.com~
or
~PenquinOnIce17@aol.com~
"Would if I could but I can't so I won't"

MrsGarrettRocksMySocks · 11-03-2001, 05:57 PM

*wiping tear from eye* OH! I feel so special!Just next time spell Charlotte C-H-A-R-L-O-T-T-E!!(One of my pet peeves is when people spell Char's name wrong!)no offense!YOu're not the only one who does it!

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*Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas!
*************************
my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!!
*************************
I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I *WILL* meet HER!!
*************************
I finally got it all together, but I forgot where I put it!
*************************
IM me using piggy2111
*************************
Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!!
*************************
I'm a sports pro------crastinator.-Cathy
*************************
Dorothy: Get back here you WITHERED OLD SICILLAIN MONKEY!
*************************
The greatest come backs of all time I get from Blair Warner, turn blue! In your Ear! and It all sounds so wholesome, I could barf!
*************************
-Lizzie Marie~!

Ewan's My Man · 11-04-2001, 01:28 AM

Erin I can't believe you spelled Charlotte wrong...it is the easiest name in the world to spell. Lizzie...I will slap her for u!

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~Lauren~
Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo
Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me
Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com
or
musicdiva467@hotmail.com
or
chicago6789@hotmail.com
or
irishhottie77@hotmail.com
as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE!

100%Cutie · 11-04-2001, 05:04 PM

ok LAUREN Im sry i spelled it wrong (sry to Lizzie not lauren..j/k)...but u slap me i slap u...and BTW the next part of the story is close to being done i think. Bye 4 now!

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~~~Erin~~~
Me e-mail adress r
~Lilpuk991@aol.com~
or
~PenquinOnIce17@aol.com~
"Would if I could but I can't so I won't"

10-28-2001, 01:17 PM	#1
100%Cutie Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Oct 24, 2001 Location: Maryland, United States Posts: 11	My 1st One... Hey, this is me 1st story ever so it might SUCK. So could everyone tell me what they think...good or bad....the HONEST truth...it would be great thanks! Ok so here's whats goin on... Jo and Blair were in a huge fight (big suprise) about who was better at anything. Blair says,"Ya know what, I've always wanted to say this..." and here goes the story. Jo:What blondie (Blair stares at her with squinted eyes) B:...you...Your the WORST motorcycle driver I have EVER seen!! (Jo took Blair to the mall earlier -believe it or not- on her bike since the car was in the repair shop) J: (laughs) B:what's so funny?!?!?!? J: (laughing gradually stops) "Your the worst driver i ever saw" HA!! That's the best you could think of?!?! C'mon Tootie or Nat could of done better than that! No offense you two. T&N: (evesdroping in the other room) T:That's ok! N:None taken! J:Anyways, I would like to see you try to drive a bike like mine!! B:Fine I will! J:Yea, right. If you even tried to touch my bike... B:What, you'd punch my face in to look like a smashed pumpkin or somethin? J:No,it already looks like that...I would just... B:what? J k how 'bout you shut your trap. The point is I'M a better biker than you (she's thinking at the same time...DUH!!!) and you couln't even comtrol a motorcycle if you tried, much less get near mine. Blair was extremely insulted by this even though she knew it was true. So she stormed up to her bedroom without another word to say. When Blair got to her room she immediatly went to her alarm and set it for midnight, then went to bed. When it was midnight Blair got out of bed, got dressed, and snuck downstairs. She grabbed Jo's helmet and keys to her bike then said, "I'll show her who can and can't comtrol a stupid motorcycle." She quietly went outside, but before completely closing the door thouught, "Should I actually do this. I've never thought of it before. But then again, who is she to say that I, Blair Warner can't do something. Anyway, how much harder could it be than driving a car. Right? Well there it is the 1st part. How is it? Should I keep going? ------------------ ~~~Erin~~~ Me e-mail adress r ~Llpuk991@aol.com~ or ~PenquinOnIce17@aol.com~ "Would if I could but I can't so I won't" [This message has been edited by 100%Cutie (edited 10-28-2001).]

10-28-2001, 01:33 PM	#2
Ryanmo97 Me & Lisa Whelchel! Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 15, 2001 Location: Maple City, MI Posts: 295	Yes. Keep going. ------------------ Check out the Internet's Number 1 Web Site dedicated to Fan Fiction for the TV Series "The Facts of Life"@ http://www.geocities.com/ryanmo97/FOLFF/FOLFF.html Now with over 100 stories.

10-28-2001, 02:05 PM	#3
sue z q funger agger LOL Senior Member Join Date: Jun 27, 2001 Location: CA Posts: 1,687	Good start! Keep going! ------------------ Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most. Check out my Nancy McKeon Links site! http://www.geocities.com/nancymckeonlinkssite Or my Site for Christian Teens! http://www.geocities.com/christianteenssite And from your resident off-topic queens and royalty: ^^~~~God Bless~~~^^

10-28-2001, 02:58 PM	#4
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	Great...keep going! ------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE!

10-28-2001, 03:10 PM	#5
Krisalicious Archie FTW! Forum Veteran Join Date: Jun 27, 2001 Location: NJ Posts: 5,775	I love it! That's really good...keep going!

10-28-2001, 05:24 PM	#6
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	im likin' this so far! keep goin!

10-28-2001, 06:19 PM	#7
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks Actors over 60 Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Jul 20, 2001 Location: The cookie jar--Any "Anyone Can Whistle" fans out there? Posts: 4,077	I of course love it! I told you that I loved your idea! Anyway, um........I like ones with Mrs.Garrett so PLEASE put lots of Mrs.Garrett in it! ------------------ Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas! ********************** my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!! *********************** I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I WILL meet HER!! *********************** I finally got it all together, but I forgot where I put it! ********************* IM me using piggy2111 ********************* Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!! ********************* I'm a sports pro------crastinator.-Cathy ********************* Dorothy: Get back here you WITHERED OLD SICILLAIN MONKEY! ********************* The greatest come backs of all time I get from Blair Warner, turn blue! In your Ear! and It all sounds so wholesome, I could barf! *********************** -Lizzie Marie~!

10-28-2001, 07:24 PM	#8
Acting Girl 19 Angel...but DEVILISH Forum Regular Join Date: Aug 26, 2001 Location: Tennessee, USA Posts: 576	It's good

11-02-2001, 01:01 AM	#10
100%Cutie Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Oct 24, 2001 Location: Maryland, United States Posts: 11	hey.....im in sort of a block and cant really think of what to write. BUT....i have had some help from charolette rae fan and there is more of a story comin along...so im not desserting every1...just thinking of ideas. WEll that all 4 now! bye ------------------ ~~~Erin~~~ Me e-mail adress r ~Lilpuk991@aol.com~ or ~PenquinOnIce17@aol.com~ "Would if I could but I can't so I won't"

11-03-2001, 05:57 PM	#11
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks Actors over 60 Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Jul 20, 2001 Location: The cookie jar--Any "Anyone Can Whistle" fans out there? Posts: 4,077	wiping tear from eye OH! I feel so special!Just next time spell Charlotte C-H-A-R-L-O-T-T-E!!(One of my pet peeves is when people spell Char's name wrong!)no offense!YOu're not the only one who does it! ------------------ Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas! ********************** my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!! *********************** I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I WILL meet HER!! *********************** I finally got it all together, but I forgot where I put it! ********************* IM me using piggy2111 ********************* Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!! ********************* I'm a sports pro------crastinator.-Cathy ********************* Dorothy: Get back here you WITHERED OLD SICILLAIN MONKEY! ********************* The greatest come backs of all time I get from Blair Warner, turn blue! In your Ear! and It all sounds so wholesome, I could barf! *********************** -Lizzie Marie~!

11-04-2001, 01:28 AM	#12
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	Erin I can't believe you spelled Charlotte wrong...it is the easiest name in the world to spell. Lizzie...I will slap her for u! ------------------ ~Lauren~ Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com or musicdiva467@hotmail.com or chicago6789@hotmail.com or irishhottie77@hotmail.com as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE!

11-04-2001, 05:04 PM	#13
100%Cutie Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Oct 24, 2001 Location: Maryland, United States Posts: 11	ok LAUREN Im sry i spelled it wrong (sry to Lizzie not lauren..j/k)...but u slap me i slap u...and BTW the next part of the story is close to being done i think. Bye 4 now! ------------------ ~~~Erin~~~ Me e-mail adress r ~Lilpuk991@aol.com~ or ~PenquinOnIce17@aol.com~ "Would if I could but I can't so I won't"