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Join Date: Mar 23, 2001
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this is my first story that i have written by my self so please tell me what you think of it.
(Two days before Christmas Eve) (Blair stood by the bathroom door with a very annoyed look on her face. She couldn’t believe that Jo had been in the bathroom for over an hour and Blair was really getting mad. She had a date tonight and had to be ready soon. About 5 minutes later Jo walked out with her hair all over the place and covered in water. Her face was all pale and her eyes were bloodshot. Blair: Jo what’s wrong? Jo: I just don’t feel good. (Jo starts to walk away). Blair didn’t believe that Jo just didn’t feel good because this was the 3rd day in a row that Jo had felt “sick” in the morning and then by evening time she was fine. She knew something was very wrong with her and Blair just hoped it wasn’t what she thought was wrong with her. Blair was so worried that she forgot about getting ready for the moment and went into their room where Jo was. Blair: Okay Jo I know that something is really wrong. I won’t let you leave this room until you tell me what is up. (Blair locks the door and then she sits down next to Jo on her been. Jo: Fine but if I tell you, you have to promise not to tell anyone else. Not Mrs. Garret, Tootie or Natalie. Blair: Okay I promise I won’t. Jo: Alright I really don’t know how to say this but, Blair I’m…Pregnant. Blair at there for a minute, shocked. Blair: What?!? How could you?!? How did this happen?!? Does Eddie know? Are you going to tell him if he doesn’t know? Have you told your mother? You’re only 16, can this happen to me? Are you going to die from this?!? Are you…oh my goodness I am even afraid to say this but are you..are you going to get gray hair?????!!!! You Poor thing! Oh yea do I get to be the perfect Aunt Blair? Jo: Whoa Blair calm down okay. Okay first off the kid isn’t Eddies. ------------------ N:My boyfriends back B:Oo I love that song (singing)my boyfriends back your gonna be in trouble, hala hala, my boyfriends back. J: Blair if you love that song so much why are you doing THAT to it. B:What? J: singing it like julie andrews. N:ya gotta put a little street into it. B:street? N:a nice clean street. B:my my boy. my boyfriend(sings really deeply) |
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Join Date: Mar 06, 2001
Location: boring c'burg Virginia
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ok post more soon cuz i know where you live (kinda)and I have an evil cat who i can smite thee (meaning you) with. And we're not allowed anymore caffine.
***Cammie Lynn*** ------------------ IcePrincessBlair@aol.com TURN BLUE!!!!!!!!! [This message has been edited by IcePrincessBlair (edited 07-17-2001).] |
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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Join Date: Feb 14, 2001
Location: TX *I love this state*
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Come on post more this is gr8;o)
------------------ Its my life!This is who I am!And you tell me it does'nt matter! -Jinny ~~~~~~~ If you want something bad enough you go after it no matter what the outcome may be -My Quote ~~~~~~ "Love beliver So take the love He's giving to you A love receiver Cause everything He's Promised is true Love beliver Listen to the song that I sing You are the child of the King" -Love Beliver. ~~~~~~~ "Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl (why be a good girl?)she is a see-saw seeing if it matters she is a game of Chutes and Laders. be a good girl (why be a good girl?) she needs the one who wrote the definition of a love without condition be a good girl." -Good Girl. |
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*funger agger* LOL
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Finally! We're getting some fanfics going here again! This is good, post more!
------------------ Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50? Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books! Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most. And from your two resident off-topic queens, Danielle and I, who are still looking for that 12 step program by the way: *^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^* |
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A and J
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Join Date: May 31, 2001
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Oh keep it goin! this is good!
------------------ Wanna buy/trade eps. of FOL then visit my site @ http://www.expage.com/foltapetrader and give me a e-mail!! *~*~*~*~*~*~* Teddy Is Hott!! --pretty plain and simple. I cannot tell a lie--Teddy is ALL mine!! Blair: Hold it, you ruined my watch. Jo: No I didn't, it's a stop watch...it stopped Blair: Jo, you've got some power, but you're not wearing it right. You don't want to throw it onlike a motorcycle jacket, you want to slip it on, like a negligee. Jo: I'm not doin' anything weird!!! Natalie: She's always saying what a great kid you are. Andy: Kid? Natalie: Guy. Did i say kid? Why would i say kid? Man. She said man! |
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hey now what's w/ the hold-up c'mon story time!!!! heeheehee i like it.
------------------ -colleen- ************** jinny: who in the hell are you? *************** JO rocks!!!!!!!! *************** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! *************** AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo |
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Join Date: Jul 04, 2001
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awesome!! add more soon
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Join Date: Mar 06, 2001
Location: boring c'burg Virginia
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As it turns out icepricnessjo's internet server is down so she can't post until it is back up. We don't know when that is but it could be tomorrow (but i think me and her are going away for the day tomorrow we're not sure). She will post more as soon as she can b/c i WILL make her. I'll tell her that you like it though.
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Join Date: Mar 23, 2001
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okay my dad is trying to get our computer working. i am using iceprincessblair's comptuer right now. i do have more to post and i should have more posted my saturday cause even if my computer is working i will us iceprincessblair's computer to add.
**Ammie Sue** |
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Join Date: Mar 23, 2001
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sorry it took me so long to post more. tell me what you think.
Blair: Then whose kid is it? Jo: I don’t know, I think it’s some guy that I met in a club I got into with a fake ID and then had too many drinks and I forget the rest. 2nd of yes I told my mother. She freaked out but she said that she would help me out. Third off I don’t think this is going to happen to you anytime soon unless you let it. I shouldn't die from it but there is a chance I could. Oh yeah I may get some gray hair when I get older but not right now. Yes you can be Aunt Blair, but not the Perfect Aunt Blair. Blair: Whatever. Jo: So can I leave now? Blair: I guess. Jo gets up and walks downstairs to see Tootie and Nat at a tale looking over a paper. Jo: What are you two doing? Tootie: Natalie and I are going to help my mother with a lawsuit. Jo: Alright Natalie: Are you okay Jo? You don’t look so good. Jo: I’m fine. Natalie: Okay. Blair walks down the stairs and gives Jo a look. Blair: Jo can I talk to you? Jo gives Blair a look back and follows her out of the room. Jo: Okay Blair, what did you need to talk about? Blair: I forgot to ask you what day in September are you due? Jo: I’m due on August 4th. Blair: August? How? Jo: I have been pregnant for a month now. Blair: A MONTH???????? You have been keeping this a secret for a month!! I could KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jo: Sorry but I didn’t think I could tell you. Blair: Are you sure that you couldn’t tell me or that you couldn’t trust me? Jo: I don’t know I guess both. Blair: Fine whatever. Jo: I’m sorry but I didn’t know if I could tell you. I didn’t even tell my mother until about two days ago. Blair: Sorry, I’ll stop being so annoying. i should have more soon ****Ammie Sue**** ------------------ N:My boyfriends back B:Oo I love that song (singing)my boyfriends back your gonna be in trouble, hala hala, my boyfriends back. J: Blair if you love that song so much why are you doing THAT to it. B:What? J: singing it like julie andrews. N:ya gotta put a little street into it. B:street? N:a nice clean street. B:my my boy. my boyfriend(sings really deeply) www.cammie-ammiefanfics.cityslide.com [This message has been edited by iceprincessjo (edited 07-20-2001).] |
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Join Date: Mar 06, 2001
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that was really good, and now you HAVE to post more soon b/c I that's all of the story i read and now i wanna know what happens. So post more.
------------------ IcePrincessBlair@aol.com www.cammie-ammiefanfics.cityslide.com |
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Join Date: Jul 04, 2001
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awesome post more soon~
![]() ------------------ Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~~**~~**~~**~~ "I'm jaded and judgemental. I can't imagine why." **~~**~~** Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it? Max: The Bangles broke up. Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point. Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more. ***~~!!kATie!!~~*** |
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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Join Date: Feb 14, 2001
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Why'd Ya stop this is gr8!!!!!!!!;o)
------------------ Its my life!This is who I am!And you tell me it does'nt matter! -Jinny ~~~~~~~ If you want something bad enough you go after it no matter what the outcome may be -My Quote ~~~~~~ "Love beliver So take the love He's giving to you A love receiver Cause everything He's Promised is true Love beliver Listen to the song that I sing You are the child of the King" -Love Beliver. ~~~~~~~ "Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl (why be a good girl?)she is a see-saw seeing if it matters she is a game of Chutes and Laders. be a good girl (why be a good girl?) she needs the one who wrote the definition of a love without condition be a good girl." -Good Girl. |
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yeah keep writing!!!!
![]() ------------------ -colleen- ************** jinny: who in the hell are you? *************** JO rocks!!!!!!!! *************** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! *************** AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo |
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Member
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Join Date: Mar 06, 2001
Location: boring c'burg Virginia
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Ok Ammie Sue you ARE going to post more on this story. Since we do have every class together I WILL make you write more. This is really good and u need to post more. There I said what I felt so there...
****Cammie Lynn**** ------------------ SweetChildJinny@aol.com IcePrincessBlair@aol.com SweetBlairnJinny@hotmail.com msn instant messanger: SweetBlairnJinny |
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