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JoPol_wannabe · 10-17-2001, 12:30 PM

Ok This is pretty Cheesy or at least I think it is. So bear with me I haven't written that many fanfics I'm not even sure if I like the Title but I'll let you be the judge of that. Ok here goes nothin

It was a bright and sunny morning Natalie just woke up with a smile on her face, she was ready to face the day. Just last night George Burnett asked Her to marry him and she accepted. Of course Nat couldn't keep this to herself she had to tell someone but who
Nat: I'll call my mother
So she called her mom and told her the news
Mrs. Green: That's wonderful Natalie I'm so happy for you I just wish your father could be here to walk you down the isle
Nat: So do I mom
Mrs. Green: Well I’ve got to go, give George my love
Nat: Will do
After Nat hung up the phone she thought about George and the first time he kissed her, Blair, Jo, Tootie, Andy, George and her went out to the movies and they saw Nightmare on Elm Street and Natalie kept on grabbing Georges arm because the movie scared her so much but at the end of the movie as George was calming her down he kissed her then a week later George went on the Road with Cinnamon but it wasn't till 2 months ago that she stumbled into George. Jut then Claire (One of the girls that lived with her in the apartment in SoHo) called
Claire: Hey Nat how was your date last night
Nat: You were right he was going to ask me to marry him
Claire: Well when I guy goes out with you for that long and says I've got something very important to ask you of course it's going to be about marriage. So did you take my advise
Nat: Yep it worked like a charm
Just then George walked in
Nat: I've got to go Mr. Handsome just walked in
Claire: Well you to have fun and don't do anything I wouldn't do
Nat: HA HA bye
Claire: Bye
George: How is my bride to be
Nat: Great (kisses him) I love you George
George: I love you to sweetie, Hey lets go out and celebrate
Nat: Again ok let me get my coat
Just then the phone rings
George: Nat let the answering machine get it
Nat: But it could be something important, Hello this is Natalie
Person on Phone: Natalie, this is Mrs. Gains
Nat: Mrs. Gains I don't know any Mrs. Gains oh Mrs. Garrett how are you.
George: Is that Mrs. G
Nat: Yes now SHH
Mrs. G: I'm fine it's about Tootie or should I say Dorothy
Nat: What about Dorothy is she ok
Mrs. G: Well she went into labor last night when she came to visit me and she had some problems during the pregnancy the baby is ok but Dorothy lost allot of blood and there doing surgery on her right now
Nat: Not my little Tootie, thanks allot Mrs. G we'll be on our way
Mrs. G: Ok, We'll?
Just then Nat hung up
George: What's going on sweetie
Nat: Tootie I mean Dorothy went into labor last night while visiting Mrs. G and she lost allot of blood during this so they’re operating on her so we have to go to Peekskill
George: Right I'll get the car
Nat: George
George: Yes
Nat: Promise me you won't tell them about us I want to
George: Ok honey (he kisses Nat)
Mrs. G: Mrs. Ramsey I finally got a hold of Natalie she is on her way
Mrs. Ramsey: Thank you Edna
Mrs. G: Hey it's no problem
Mrs. G goes and sits with the girls
Blair: Why hasn’t the doctor come out yet?
Jo: Blair this is very serious it's going to take a while
Blair: Ya but it's been 5 hours now
Mrs. G: Blair don't worry Tootie will be ok she's a fighter, I hope (says under her breath)
Just then Jeff comes in holding his daughter
Jeff: So has the doctor come out yet
Blair: Not yet
Jeff: Oh God please let her be alright I can't live my life without my Tootie Pie, and I can't raise my daughter alone. (Starts to cry) Mrs. G, Jo & Blair huge Jeff Just then Natalie & George come in
Nat; Oh Jeff how is our little Tootie
Jeff: Still the same haven't heard a thing
Mrs. G: George what are you doing here
George: Well...
Nat pulls him aside
Nat: Remember what I said
George: Oh ya sorry
Blair: Nat is that a ring
Nat: Ya
Blair: Oh
Nat: Blair not now
The Doctor come out
Doctor: Dorothy Ramsey
Everyone; Here
Startles the Doctor
Jeff: How is she doc
Doctor: Well She's ok but she is going to need allot of rest but you can go see her know
Jeff: Thank you Lord (he goes in)
Tootie: Jeff is that you (she says in a weak voice)
Jeff: Hey sunshine you look better
Tootie: and who is this
Jeff: Our daughter Tisha, say hi mommy, hi mommy
Tootie: She is beautiful
They kiss
Just then Mrs. G & the Girls come in
Tootie: Hey guys what are you doing here
Nat: You have to ask us that, you could of died of course we'd be here
Tootie: That's the same old Nat
Nat hugs Tootie
Nat: I'm so glad your ok
Mrs. G Blair & Jo huge Tootie
Blair: I can't believe we almost lost our little Tootie
Jo: Well I know you'd be ok who else is going to broadcast the news
Tootie: Ha Ha very funny
Mrs. G: Well we better let her sleep
Nat: Just a minute I want to talk to Dorothy for a minute
Mrs. G: Ok
Everyone leaves
Tootie: So how are you Nat
Nat: Good that's what I want to talk to you about, well just 2 months ago I stumbled into George
Tootie: You did
Nat: Ya he came with me today, we've been going out for the past 2 months
Tootie: That's great Nat
Nat: And the best part is just the other night he asked me to marry him and I accepted
Tootie: That's wonderful Natalie
Nat: So I'm very glad your ok because I didn't want to pick another Maid of Honor
Tootie: Maid of Honor you want me to be your Maid of Honor
Nat: Well of course your my best friend and you claimed it years ago
Tootie: Oh ya I did, didn't I
Out in the waiting room
Blair: So George what's up with you and Natalie
George: Nothing
Jo: Ya right you don't just show up out of the blue like that with Nat now come on talk
George: Ok Ok Nat and I have been seeing each other
Mrs. G: That Great
George: and Just the other night I asked her to marry me and she accepted
Tootie & Nat hear a noise coming form the waiting room
Natalie opens the door to find the girls running to huge her
Blair: I know there was more to the ring story
Nat: GEORGE you told them!
George: Sorry honey they cornered me
Nat: hits him then kisses him
Everyone: OWE
Nat: Shut up
Mrs. G: Congratulations Nat
Nat: Thanks everybody
Blair: So where are you taking her on your honeymoon
Jo: Blair they haven't even set a date yet
Blair: I know that
the girls huge
The End

P.S. Tell me what ya think.
Sorry about the Title I just saw it and it should be Tregedy in Paradise

[This message has been edited by JoPol_wannabe (edited 10-17-2001).]

Ryanmo97 · 10-17-2001, 02:39 PM

Not bad.

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MrsGarrettRocksMySocks · 10-17-2001, 10:15 PM

Very good!Very short, but VERY VERY good!

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10-17-2001, 12:30 PM	#1
JoPol_wannabe Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jan 11, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 3,036	Tragedies in Paradise Ok This is pretty Cheesy or at least I think it is. So bear with me I haven't written that many fanfics I'm not even sure if I like the Title but I'll let you be the judge of that. Ok here goes nothin It was a bright and sunny morning Natalie just woke up with a smile on her face, she was ready to face the day. Just last night George Burnett asked Her to marry him and she accepted. Of course Nat couldn't keep this to herself she had to tell someone but who Nat: I'll call my mother So she called her mom and told her the news Mrs. Green: That's wonderful Natalie I'm so happy for you I just wish your father could be here to walk you down the isle Nat: So do I mom Mrs. Green: Well I’ve got to go, give George my love Nat: Will do After Nat hung up the phone she thought about George and the first time he kissed her, Blair, Jo, Tootie, Andy, George and her went out to the movies and they saw Nightmare on Elm Street and Natalie kept on grabbing Georges arm because the movie scared her so much but at the end of the movie as George was calming her down he kissed her then a week later George went on the Road with Cinnamon but it wasn't till 2 months ago that she stumbled into George. Jut then Claire (One of the girls that lived with her in the apartment in SoHo) called Claire: Hey Nat how was your date last night Nat: You were right he was going to ask me to marry him Claire: Well when I guy goes out with you for that long and says I've got something very important to ask you of course it's going to be about marriage. So did you take my advise Nat: Yep it worked like a charm Just then George walked in Nat: I've got to go Mr. Handsome just walked in Claire: Well you to have fun and don't do anything I wouldn't do Nat: HA HA bye Claire: Bye George: How is my bride to be Nat: Great (kisses him) I love you George George: I love you to sweetie, Hey lets go out and celebrate Nat: Again ok let me get my coat Just then the phone rings George: Nat let the answering machine get it Nat: But it could be something important, Hello this is Natalie Person on Phone: Natalie, this is Mrs. Gains Nat: Mrs. Gains I don't know any Mrs. Gains oh Mrs. Garrett how are you. George: Is that Mrs. G Nat: Yes now SHH Mrs. G: I'm fine it's about Tootie or should I say Dorothy Nat: What about Dorothy is she ok Mrs. G: Well she went into labor last night when she came to visit me and she had some problems during the pregnancy the baby is ok but Dorothy lost allot of blood and there doing surgery on her right now Nat: Not my little Tootie, thanks allot Mrs. G we'll be on our way Mrs. G: Ok, We'll? Just then Nat hung up George: What's going on sweetie Nat: Tootie I mean Dorothy went into labor last night while visiting Mrs. G and she lost allot of blood during this so they’re operating on her so we have to go to Peekskill George: Right I'll get the car Nat: George George: Yes Nat: Promise me you won't tell them about us I want to George: Ok honey (he kisses Nat) Mrs. G: Mrs. Ramsey I finally got a hold of Natalie she is on her way Mrs. Ramsey: Thank you Edna Mrs. G: Hey it's no problem Mrs. G goes and sits with the girls Blair: Why hasn’t the doctor come out yet? Jo: Blair this is very serious it's going to take a while Blair: Ya but it's been 5 hours now Mrs. G: Blair don't worry Tootie will be ok she's a fighter, I hope (says under her breath) Just then Jeff comes in holding his daughter Jeff: So has the doctor come out yet Blair: Not yet Jeff: Oh God please let her be alright I can't live my life without my Tootie Pie, and I can't raise my daughter alone. (Starts to cry) Mrs. G, Jo & Blair huge Jeff Just then Natalie & George come in Nat; Oh Jeff how is our little Tootie Jeff: Still the same haven't heard a thing Mrs. G: George what are you doing here George: Well... Nat pulls him aside Nat: Remember what I said George: Oh ya sorry Blair: Nat is that a ring Nat: Ya Blair: Oh Nat: Blair not now The Doctor come out Doctor: Dorothy Ramsey Everyone; Here Startles the Doctor Jeff: How is she doc Doctor: Well She's ok but she is going to need allot of rest but you can go see her know Jeff: Thank you Lord (he goes in) Tootie: Jeff is that you (she says in a weak voice) Jeff: Hey sunshine you look better Tootie: and who is this Jeff: Our daughter Tisha, say hi mommy, hi mommy Tootie: She is beautiful They kiss Just then Mrs. G & the Girls come in Tootie: Hey guys what are you doing here Nat: You have to ask us that, you could of died of course we'd be here Tootie: That's the same old Nat Nat hugs Tootie Nat: I'm so glad your ok Mrs. G Blair & Jo huge Tootie Blair: I can't believe we almost lost our little Tootie Jo: Well I know you'd be ok who else is going to broadcast the news Tootie: Ha Ha very funny Mrs. G: Well we better let her sleep Nat: Just a minute I want to talk to Dorothy for a minute Mrs. G: Ok Everyone leaves Tootie: So how are you Nat Nat: Good that's what I want to talk to you about, well just 2 months ago I stumbled into George Tootie: You did Nat: Ya he came with me today, we've been going out for the past 2 months Tootie: That's great Nat Nat: And the best part is just the other night he asked me to marry him and I accepted Tootie: That's wonderful Natalie Nat: So I'm very glad your ok because I didn't want to pick another Maid of Honor Tootie: Maid of Honor you want me to be your Maid of Honor Nat: Well of course your my best friend and you claimed it years ago Tootie: Oh ya I did, didn't I Out in the waiting room Blair: So George what's up with you and Natalie George: Nothing Jo: Ya right you don't just show up out of the blue like that with Nat now come on talk George: Ok Ok Nat and I have been seeing each other Mrs. G: That Great George: and Just the other night I asked her to marry me and she accepted Tootie & Nat hear a noise coming form the waiting room Natalie opens the door to find the girls running to huge her Blair: I know there was more to the ring story Nat: GEORGE you told them! George: Sorry honey they cornered me Nat: hits him then kisses him Everyone: OWE Nat: Shut up Mrs. G: Congratulations Nat Nat: Thanks everybody Blair: So where are you taking her on your honeymoon Jo: Blair they haven't even set a date yet Blair: I know that the girls huge The End P.S. Tell me what ya think. Sorry about the Title I just saw it and it should be Tregedy in Paradise [This message has been edited by JoPol_wannabe (edited 10-17-2001).]

10-17-2001, 02:39 PM	#2
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10-17-2001, 10:15 PM	#3
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks Actors over 60 Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Jul 20, 2001 Location: The cookie jar--Any "Anyone Can Whistle" fans out there? Posts: 4,077	Very good!Very short, but VERY VERY good! ------------------ Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas! ********************** my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!! *********************** I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I WILL meet HER!! *********************** Estelle:You're lucky I'm a lady, or I'd knock your teeth out! ********************* IM me using piggy2111 or The GGirls R Koo ********************* Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!! ********************* Estelle:There's more to life than football, Jimmy! Jimmy: Yea, but there's nothing more important! ********************************** you have to admit, you CAN'T ARGUE WITH MRS.GARRETT!!