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FOLrocks1 · 04-19-2001, 05:38 PM

BY ME AND MIMI
season 7

---Over Our Heads---

Jo (putting items on a shelf): Finally its payday. I've been really anxious to get my check. I'm going to put it in the bank right away!

Tootie: I know. I'm broke.

Blair: Speak for your selves. (giggles)

Jo: You'd better watch it or I'll shove your pay check down your throat!

Blair: (Opens her mouth) Try it, Jo.

Jo walks up to Blair. Natalie jumps in.

Nat: Cool it. It's payday, a wonderful day. Can't you just be nice for a while?

Mrs. G: (comes in with their paychecks) Ok here they are. I finally got 'em. Now her you go. Blair, (hands it to her) Jo, Natalie, Tootie, and where's Andy and George? (looks around)

Jo: I don't know- its not like them to miss this moment. Did they say they had to go somewhere?

Tootie: They went to a hardware store to get something for this counter. (shakes it) It's all wobblie

Jo: Do we have to wait until they get back or can I go to the bank now- I really don't want it to close or something.

Mrs. G: You can use my car.
Tootie: Can we come? I need to get some money!

Jo: Sure Tootie. Anyone else coming?

Blair: me and Nat 'll go!

Jo: But Blair why would you need to put money in the bank- you've got it coming out of your ears!

Blair: I like to save it. Do you have a problem with that?

Tootie: Since when do you save you money?

Blair: I spend the money that I get from my dad, 10,000 a month. I save the money that I get in the shop.

Jo: Well is everyone ready?

Blair; Sure. Let's go!

Mrs. G: Bye girls.

They leave.

At the bank...

Nat (whispering): Hey guys, see that guy in the brown trench coat and sun glasses?

Blair: So?

Nat: Do you think he's up to something? He looks weird and has his hand inside his coat.

Tootie: Nat, you are always so suspicious.
Nat: But look at the way he only moves like every few seconds and he only takes a few steps at a time.

Jo: That's because we're all waiting in line! Just calm down- its not like every bank is held up.

Blair: Yes. Don't worry about it. nothing is going to happen.

Nat: If you guys are sure. I still think he looks a little suspicious.

Blair: Well just stop worrying. We're next.

The customer in front of the girls leaves. The man with the brown trench coat jumps out of line and shouts:

Man: Alright everyone freeze! One move and I shoot. Alright right now everyone slowly get on the ground face down and put your hands over your heads!

Blair: Oh My God!!!

Jo: (whispers) Shut up! Do what he says.

They get down on the ground. The Man goes up to the counter.

Man: (to the accountant) Push that panic button and I pull the trigger. Now go over to the safe and take out the bills. Come on move it people I don't have all day!

Nat: (whispering) I knew this would happen. I knew it- but nooo he doesn't look suspicious. Every bank doesn't get robbed!

Accountant: (goes over to the safe) Ok. (fills up the bags)
while she is doing this, Blair crawls over to the panic button. She does this without the man seeing. While she is going to hit the button, the man sees her.

Man: What the hell are you doing?

Blair quickly hits the button. The man pulls the gun out of his pocket he pulls the trigger. We hear a loud BOOM! The Bullet just misses the girls.

Man: I THOUGHT we could have done this without any funny stuff. Hurry up with the money. If the cops come before I'm outta here things are going to get worse!

The Bank teller loads up the money.

Blair crawls over to the rest of the girls. The girls comfort her. We here the police. Tootie sits up.

Tootie: The Police are here. Why don’t you give up

Man: I'm not letting any one out of here and I’m not giving up. Now lay back down! Tootie lays back down.
We hear the voice of an officer:

Officer: We have this bank surrounded. Please come out with you
Hands up

Man: Actually get back up- your coming with me! (grabs Tootie and starts walking toward the door) (Shouts out the door) I've got a girl- anything happens she's a gonner!.

Officer: Now calm down. What do you want? We can get it as long as no one gets hurt. Is there anyone hurt in there right now? They need to be let out.
Man: No, no one is hurt....YET! But any funny stuff happens and someone just might. So this is what your going to do. You've got half an hour to get me a car full of gas. I'm going to walk out of this bank with the money and calmly leave. But I'm warning you- if you don't get me what I ask for (grabs Blair and makes her stand up) she won't be very happy!

Officer: Okay, look. We can get you your car.

Man: No but you get that stuff in 30 mins. And I am NOT going to go to jail!!!!

Officer: Okay. Now nobody gets hurt. Rember that!

The man starts pacing back and forth in the bank.
Jo (whispers): Every time he walks to the window he looks out it. I probably could jump at him and get that gun away.

Tootie: Are you crazy? He's dangerous!!

Jo: But look at our situation- he's got the money- he's got us at gunpoint. He'll get away!!! Do you want him on the streets?

Blair: Better in the streets than in the same room.

Jo: I don't know- it looks easy to do. Well I refuse to sit here and do nothing. Come up with a better solution and I'll do that. Otherwise I'm going with my plan

Tootie: Like I said before; somebody must have slam dunked your brain!

Mustang Mimi 04: Mustang Mimi 04:The man keeps walking back and forth.

Jo: Sir, I notice you keep pacing back and forth.

Man: What's it to you?

Jo: Nothing except for your shoe is untied- and I wouldn't want you to trip or something.

Blair; Jo what are you doing?

Jo: Well we don't want him to fall down- (whispers) who knows what could happen if he falls and that gun goes off!

The man bends down to tie his shoe. Jo leaps at him knocking him over. The man gets up and they start struggling around. Jo grabs the hand with the gun and tries to get it away from him. The fight around and Jo punches him in the stomach. They struggle some more and we hear a loud BOOM! THE GUN GOES OFF. Jo and the man both fall down and neither move.

FOLrocks1 · 04-19-2001, 05:43 PM

This is to be continued

FOLrocks1 · 04-19-2001, 05:48 PM

when the man is talking to the police about the car the man says no but in 30 minutes that should be yes not no so sorry

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Jo: Here's to all who wish me well, all the rest can go to...Jersey.

Mrs. G: Jo, only twice in my life have i spoke in an arbitrary manner, once when my ex-husband morgaged our home to pay the bookee, and now, GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE, OR I'LL BEAT YOU WITH MY FRYING PAN.

Check out all my fan fictions: It's A Warner Thing, A New Face In Peekskill, Back In Town
and Those Dreadful Double Dates.
*Jacob*

Ewan's My Man · 09-30-2001, 12:14 PM

Ok....like r u going to finish this it is so good.

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~Lauren~

04-19-2001, 05:38 PM	#1
FOLrocks1 My favorite ladies! Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Mar 09, 2001 Location: Ohio Posts: 4,103	Great, thrilling ff (no title yet) Please RESPOND BY ME AND MIMI season 7 ---Over Our Heads--- Jo (putting items on a shelf): Finally its payday. I've been really anxious to get my check. I'm going to put it in the bank right away! Tootie: I know. I'm broke. Blair: Speak for your selves. (giggles) Jo: You'd better watch it or I'll shove your pay check down your throat! Blair: (Opens her mouth) Try it, Jo. Jo walks up to Blair. Natalie jumps in. Nat: Cool it. It's payday, a wonderful day. Can't you just be nice for a while? Mrs. G: (comes in with their paychecks) Ok here they are. I finally got 'em. Now her you go. Blair, (hands it to her) Jo, Natalie, Tootie, and where's Andy and George? (looks around) Jo: I don't know- its not like them to miss this moment. Did they say they had to go somewhere? Tootie: They went to a hardware store to get something for this counter. (shakes it) It's all wobblie Jo: Do we have to wait until they get back or can I go to the bank now- I really don't want it to close or something. Mrs. G: You can use my car. Tootie: Can we come? I need to get some money! Jo: Sure Tootie. Anyone else coming? Blair: me and Nat 'll go! Jo: But Blair why would you need to put money in the bank- you've got it coming out of your ears! Blair: I like to save it. Do you have a problem with that? Tootie: Since when do you save you money? Blair: I spend the money that I get from my dad, 10,000 a month. I save the money that I get in the shop. Jo: Well is everyone ready? Blair; Sure. Let's go! Mrs. G: Bye girls. They leave. At the bank... Nat (whispering): Hey guys, see that guy in the brown trench coat and sun glasses? Blair: So? Nat: Do you think he's up to something? He looks weird and has his hand inside his coat. Tootie: Nat, you are always so suspicious. Nat: But look at the way he only moves like every few seconds and he only takes a few steps at a time. Jo: That's because we're all waiting in line! Just calm down- its not like every bank is held up. Blair: Yes. Don't worry about it. nothing is going to happen. Nat: If you guys are sure. I still think he looks a little suspicious. Blair: Well just stop worrying. We're next. The customer in front of the girls leaves. The man with the brown trench coat jumps out of line and shouts: Man: Alright everyone freeze! One move and I shoot. Alright right now everyone slowly get on the ground face down and put your hands over your heads! Blair: Oh My God!!! Jo: (whispers) Shut up! Do what he says. They get down on the ground. The Man goes up to the counter. Man: (to the accountant) Push that panic button and I pull the trigger. Now go over to the safe and take out the bills. Come on move it people I don't have all day! Nat: (whispering) I knew this would happen. I knew it- but nooo he doesn't look suspicious. Every bank doesn't get robbed! Accountant: (goes over to the safe) Ok. (fills up the bags) while she is doing this, Blair crawls over to the panic button. She does this without the man seeing. While she is going to hit the button, the man sees her. Man: What the hell are you doing? Blair quickly hits the button. The man pulls the gun out of his pocket he pulls the trigger. We hear a loud BOOM! The Bullet just misses the girls. Man: I THOUGHT we could have done this without any funny stuff. Hurry up with the money. If the cops come before I'm outta here things are going to get worse! The Bank teller loads up the money. Blair crawls over to the rest of the girls. The girls comfort her. We here the police. Tootie sits up. Tootie: The Police are here. Why don’t you give up Man: I'm not letting any one out of here and I’m not giving up. Now lay back down! Tootie lays back down. We hear the voice of an officer: Officer: We have this bank surrounded. Please come out with you Hands up Man: Actually get back up- your coming with me! (grabs Tootie and starts walking toward the door) (Shouts out the door) I've got a girl- anything happens she's a gonner!. Officer: Now calm down. What do you want? We can get it as long as no one gets hurt. Is there anyone hurt in there right now? They need to be let out. Man: No, no one is hurt....YET! But any funny stuff happens and someone just might. So this is what your going to do. You've got half an hour to get me a car full of gas. I'm going to walk out of this bank with the money and calmly leave. But I'm warning you- if you don't get me what I ask for (grabs Blair and makes her stand up) she won't be very happy! Officer: Okay, look. We can get you your car. Man: No but you get that stuff in 30 mins. And I am NOT going to go to jail!!!! Officer: Okay. Now nobody gets hurt. Rember that! The man starts pacing back and forth in the bank. Jo (whispers): Every time he walks to the window he looks out it. I probably could jump at him and get that gun away. Tootie: Are you crazy? He's dangerous!! Jo: But look at our situation- he's got the money- he's got us at gunpoint. He'll get away!!! Do you want him on the streets? Blair: Better in the streets than in the same room. Jo: I don't know- it looks easy to do. Well I refuse to sit here and do nothing. Come up with a better solution and I'll do that. Otherwise I'm going with my plan Tootie: Like I said before; somebody must have slam dunked your brain! Mustang Mimi 04: Mustang Mimi 04:The man keeps walking back and forth. Jo: Sir, I notice you keep pacing back and forth. Man: What's it to you? Jo: Nothing except for your shoe is untied- and I wouldn't want you to trip or something. Blair; Jo what are you doing? Jo: Well we don't want him to fall down- (whispers) who knows what could happen if he falls and that gun goes off! The man bends down to tie his shoe. Jo leaps at him knocking him over. The man gets up and they start struggling around. Jo grabs the hand with the gun and tries to get it away from him. The fight around and Jo punches him in the stomach. They struggle some more and we hear a loud BOOM! THE GUN GOES OFF. Jo and the man both fall down and neither move.

04-19-2001, 05:43 PM	#2
FOLrocks1 My favorite ladies! Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Mar 09, 2001 Location: Ohio Posts: 4,103	This is to be continued

04-19-2001, 05:48 PM	#3
FOLrocks1 My favorite ladies! Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Mar 09, 2001 Location: Ohio Posts: 4,103	when the man is talking to the police about the car the man says no but in 30 minutes that should be yes not no so sorry ------------------ Jo: Here's to all who wish me well, all the rest can go to...Jersey. Mrs. G: Jo, only twice in my life have i spoke in an arbitrary manner, once when my ex-husband morgaged our home to pay the bookee, and now, GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE, OR I'LL BEAT YOU WITH MY FRYING PAN. Check out all my fan fictions: It's A Warner Thing, A New Face In Peekskill, Back In Town and Those Dreadful Double Dates. Jacob

09-30-2001, 12:14 PM	#4
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	Ok....like r u going to finish this it is so good. ------------------ ~Lauren~