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hey, I have a new fan fic! My mom says she thinks it sounds like an ep that she's already seen, I don't believe her.So, tell me what you think!
-Lounge- Girls doing homework)Mrs.G walks in) Hey, girls!Whatcha doing?Girls:homework! Mrs.G h!Well, are you doing anything later?Blair:I...Have a date!(tosses her hair!) Jo:I'm gonna work on my bike! Nat:I'm going to a movie. Tootie:I'm going with Nat. so, it looks like you'll have the place all to yourself Mrs.Garrett! Mrs.g:Yeah, I guess so.(Looks dissapointed) (leaves lounge) Nat:So, what movie are we gonna see? Tootie:Natalie! Nat:That's a movie? Tootie:No, I mean, couldn't you tell Mrs.Garrett was dissapointed? Nat:no, I didn't notice anything. Tootie:Oh, it must just be me then, but I can't help but think something's wrong!(looks worried) Nat:Tootie, if something was wrong, she'd tell us! Jo:Yeah, Mrs.G wouldn't hide stuff from us!(starts to doubt what she said)Would she? Blair:Well, ya know, her life is none of our business. Nat:None of our business? Since when? Blair:Since always, quit being so nosy!She's probably just having a bad day! TootieLMaybe, but I think we should all stay home with Mrs.Garrett! Blair:Forget it!i have a date with the hottest guy at Bates! Nat:Tootie! We've been waiting a long time to go to a movie!If we don't go tonight, We'll have to wait another month! Jo:My bike NEEDS work!Besides, Mrs.G. is fine!!Just go to your movie! Tootie:Fine!! -----Lounge later----- Mrs.g walks in)Girls? where... oh they must've left already!Well, I guess I'll just read a book.(picks up book, reads a few sentences, puts book down) It's too quiet.there's something missing..Something nagging.....Mrs.Parker walks in)Hello, Mrs.Garrett!Mrs.g:Oh, Hi, Mr.Parker!!I was just thinking about you! Mr. Parker:Mrs.Garrett, I need you to cook for a party I'm having in two days. Mrs.G stands up)TWO DAYS!!!WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO COME UP WITH IN TWO DAYS?!(for those of you who aren't so bright, no offense to anyone,when I use caps that means someone's yelling!!)Mr.Parker:I don't know what!That's why I came to you!(hands her a piece of paper) Here are the details, have the food there by 6:00! Bye! Mrs.G: BUT I...I can't do this by myself in two days!(looks sad and worried and leaves lounge) ------------later in girls' room------------- Tootie:So, how was everybody's night? Jo:Tootie, shut up and turn out the light! Blair:my thoughts exactly! Tootie:That good huh? Well, my night was.. Nat:Tootie, you better do what theysay.They're agreeing and that doesn't happen very often!! Tootie:FINE!!(turns light out) I have to go but I'll finish later!what do ya think so far? |
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ok the smilies aren't supposed to be in there!!
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This is great! I can't wait for more..I am gonna start a fan fiction page on my webpage..would I be able to put this on it when its finished?
------------------ Love Always and Forever, .Cassie. * * * * * * * * ..Always Believe in Yourself.. * * * * * * * * * <3 I Love NSYNC <3 * * * * * * * * * Lisa Whelchel, if you are reading this, I just want you to know that you are my role model and I really wanna meet you one day!! * * * * * * * * * * My Webpage *Come Visit it!*: http://www.cassies-webpage.cityslide.com |
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-------------kitchen-------------------------
Mrs.G looking through cookbooks)I have a day and a half to make and deliever food for 200 people!(looks worried and continues looking through cookbooks)------------------next morning--------------- Mrs.g Still in kitchen looking through cookbooks)Girls in kitchen making breakfast)Tootie:Mrs.G, why are you looking through all those cookbooks?(points to cookbooks) Mrs.G:Oh, Tootie, I don't have time to explain, but what are you girls doing tonight? Blair:Studying for finals! Jo:Me too! Nat:Me three! Tootie:I've studied, but I'm busy with other stuff. Mrs.g says to self)No help.I'll have to really get busy!Blair:What was that Mrs.Garrett? Mrs.G:Nothing Blair.(woried)Well, Girls, you better get going. Tootie k, bye Mrs.g! Dont' work too hard!(leaves)Nat:Bye Mrs.g!(leaves) Blair:see ya later Mrs.Garrett! Jo:bye Mrs.g!(blair and Jo leave) Mrs.g.I haven't eaten since before dinner!I'm so hungry....but there's no time for that now.I have to get cracking! ----------------later in kitchen------------- Mrs.G.(has a bunch of bowls out and stirs aas many as she can as fast as she can!and she's trying to add stuff!) I haven't eaten for almost 20 hours! Girls! Where are you when I need your help!?(looks worried but keeps working.) -----------------cafeteria------------------- Mr.Parker Walks in very angry)Mrs.Garrett??? Mrs.Garrett??(waits a while and then leave) Girls walk in)Hi,Mr.Parker!Mr.Parker:Have you seen Mrs.Garrett? blair:No, not since lunch. Jo:Whay are you looking for Mrs.G? Mr.Parker:Well, she was supposed to cook and drop off food at the auditorium at 6:00, it's 9:00 where is she? Tootie:See, I told you something was wrong!!Its' not like Mrs.G. to not show up!Let's look for her! Nat:right, Blair, Jo, you look upstairs, We'll look downstairs! Blair:right, come on Jo! Jo:Ok let's go! Mr.Parker:Good luck, girls!(leaves) Jo and blair go upstairs)Nat and tootie go into the kitchen)Mrs.G is lying on the stairs cause she fainted)Tootie:Natalie, go call 9-1-1! Nat:why? Tootie:Because Mrs.Garrett is lying on the stairs not moving, I think that's called an EMERGENCY!!(smacks nat) Nat:Ok,Ok, wait! our Mrs.Garrett? Oh my gosh!!Mrs.Garrett might have a concusion!She could be seriously hurt....(keeps rambling on and on) Tootie:NATALIE!!go call 9-1-1! Nat:what's the number?? Tootie:9-1-1!! Natalie:9-1-1!9-1-1!(leaves) Tootie goes toward Mrs.Garrett)Jo, blair!We found her!Get down her quick!(panicking)Jo:we're coming, we're coming!why are you so upset?(gets to the bottom of the stairs where Mrs.g. is)Tootie! What happened? Tootie:How am I supposed to know? Nat and I found her like this!Natalie went to call 9-1-1! Blair:So what do we do know? Jo:We wait until the ambulance gets here! Blair:right,I knew that!! ok I gotta go again, I'll try to finish later tonite!I know this is totally out of character for Mrs.G. but i had to shake things up a little bit!! |
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yes Cassie, you can put it on your website, as long as you credit it to my stage name, Lizzie Marie~!: )
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----------------Hospital room--------------------
Mrs.G: (lying on bed with IV's and stuff) Girls: (standing around Mrs.g.) Mrs.G: (wakes up)Where in the World? Girls! What are you doing?Get me outta here! I have to make it to Mr.Parker's party in the auditorium. Nat: Mrs. g, I hate to tell you this but you missed it already, it's 11:30! Mrs.G: Oh my gosh what happened? Jo: The doctor said nothing serious, just too much stress and too little food. He said there were practically no nutrients left in your body! How long has it been since you've eaten?! Mrs.G: Was that retorical? Jo: NO! Mrs. G: ok! uh…..last night before dinner I had a snack that was the last time I ate. Tootie: Why, Mrs.Garrett? Mrs.G: you try cooking for two hundred people in two days and see if you have time to eat!I was sooooooo busy! Nat: MRS.GARRETT THAT'S NO EXCUSE!! Mrs. G: NATALIE Don't yell at me!! Nat: Sorry, Mrs.G. It's just that you could've hurt yourself a lot worse than you did! Blair: Yeah! And we want you around a long, long time! Tootie: Yeah! Blair: Why didn't you ask us for help? Mrs. G: You were all so busy! Jo: We woulda helped ya out Mrs. G! Mrs. G: But you girls need to study! Tootie: But we would've helped you out a little! We had enough time! Mrs. G: I just didn't want to interrupt! Nat: Mrs.G, we can always find time to help you. You just have to ask. Tootie: Yeah, we can't help if you don't ask for it! Blair: We're always willing to help! Jo: Yeah, just like you're there for us, we're there for you! Mrs. G: Girls! I can't just ask you to drop everything and help me! You have other responsiblilities! Nat: Yes, you can ask us for help, whenever you need it! We might not be able to help but we'll find someone who can! Tootie: We Love you, Mrs. Garrett! Mrs. G: I love you too girls! Girls: (hug Mrs.G.) --------------------------the end-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- what do you think? I decided I'd finish now since there wasn't much left!sorry to keep you waitin'!I hope you liked it! |
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There was an eposiode in the first season about the dangers of dieting that had Sueann faiting because she hadn't been eating. Your story was no carbon copy of that story. Your story was creative and exiting. My favorite part of your story was the heart warming coversation at the end with Mrs. Garret and the girls in hospital room.
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that was good
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Thanks! you wouldn't just say that would you?
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I really do think it is a good story.
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DUDE! It's been forever since someone replied!Thanks, and do you think I should write another? what era?
------------------ *Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas! ************************* my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!! ************************* I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I *WILL* meet HER!! ************************* Estelle:You're lucky I'm a lady, or I'd knock your teeth out! ************************* IM me using piggy2111 or The GGirls R Koo ************************* Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!! ************************* Estelle:There's more to life than football, Jimmy! Jimmy: Yea, but there's nothing more important! ************************************ you have to admit, you CAN'T ARGUE WITH MRS.GARRETT!! |
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That was Gr8!!!!!I read the first part back in July and I never read the rest.I loved it!
!!!!;O) ------------------ Visit my FOL website click above^ Last updated:September 15th Edna's Edibles:I changed the name from Receipies to Edibles and I added tons of receipies. Upcomming Events:I added 3 new Read,Write and send me Fol Fan Fiction:I added 1 new. Awards:I added 1 new ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~kEwL~sayings Lord keep your arm around my shoulder,And Your hand over my mouth. Its Fall and I cant get up! You can agree with me or you can be WRONG! I didn't ask to be a Princess but if the TIRA fits..... (I love that one) ~~~~~~~~~ God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference. -Blair |
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Thanks, so, do you think that I should write another, if so, what era and stuff?
------------------ *Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas! ************************* my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!! ************************* I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I *WILL* meet HER!! ************************* Estelle:You're lucky I'm a lady, or I'd knock your teeth out! ************************* IM me using piggy2111 or The GGirls R Koo ************************* Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!! ************************* Estelle:There's more to life than football, Jimmy! Jimmy: Yea, but there's nothing more important! ************************************ you have to admit, you CAN'T ARGUE WITH MRS.GARRETT!! |
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I love Drama stuff. ~~ Or whatever you want to write. |
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GREAT!! I'll do some research about those seasons tonight and then decide if I want to do a reunion or an episode from those seasons, and voila, I'll start working on it like tonight or tomorrow!I'll start posting soon!!!THANKS A LOT!!
------------------ *Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas! ************************* my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!! ************************* I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I *WILL* meet HER!! ************************* Estelle:You're lucky I'm a lady, or I'd knock your teeth out! ************************* IM me using piggy2111 or The GGirls R Koo ************************* Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!! ************************* Estelle:There's more to life than football, Jimmy! Jimmy: Yea, but there's nothing more important! ************************************ you have to admit, you CAN'T ARGUE WITH MRS.GARRETT!! |
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