Yet another fan fic reunion-please reply

[Swimfan85]

ok i havent really writen a real fol fan fic for a while but ive had a reunion idea in my head for a while and i wanna try it, i would really apperciate if people would comment on it, thank you~

background info:

Jo lives in the Bronx with her 15 year old daughter name Kacey and barely gets by each month. Rick isnt much of a father seeing how 5 years ago he walked out on Jo and Kacey. Jo hardly keeps in touch with the 4 musketeers anymore...Blair is rich single mother to Joanna Marie who is also 15. Tootie hasnt made it big yet but she does do plays and is up for consideration for a broadway production. She and Jeff have a daughter whos 12. Nat and Snake live together in Soho and she writes novels and they have a 16 year old son names Micheal.


Kacey Polniaczek rushed home with school bag and hockey bag to tell her mother the good news. Today Kacey was choosen as the starting left wing for the high school team, which was nearly impossible, espically for a freshman. She even got a B- on her english mid-term, she would have gotten an A but she failed to turn in homework assignments.

She rushed inside her apartment to find not a trace of her mother, not even a note. Kacey pondered to her self for a moment, thats funny i swear she didnt say she was working late at work..o well and she thought nothing of it and turned on the tv. The news was on and the reporter said, "just this in, there has been a serious accident along route 2 involving a motorcyclest and a large truck, the lady on the motor cycle has been identified of Joanne Polniaczek and has been listed at St. Johns hospital in critical condition and doctors say there is little hope she will survive.

Kacey had so many thoughts running through her head as she dashed out her door and onto her motorcyle. She didnt care she wasnt going the speed limit, her mom needed her and she needed her mom.

Once at the hospital she rushed inside to the front desk. The repsionsit looked up at her and calmly said,"How may I help you?"

Kacey was out of breath but managed to say,"my mother, Joanne Polniaczek, how is she?"

The lady at the front desk looked up and said,"I'll let a doctor know you are here and if they have any news I will give you an up-date"

It had been a couple hours and still no word. Kacey was trembling and her body was in a cold sweat. There were so many questions running through her mind. Finally a doctor came out and said, "Polniaczek.."

Kacey looked up with fear in her eyes and said, "Yes, thats me doctor"

The doctor gave her a hurt look in his eye and Kacey knew at that point the news wasnt something she would jump for joy over. The doctor raised his head slowly and said, "I am sorry but she has passed away"

Kacey just sat there with a blank expression on her face, what had gone wrong, surely it wasnt Jo's fault, she was the best rider around and whatever she did on the bike wasnt an accident.

A few hours later Kacey arrived home yet this time all happiness that she ever had was gone and her body with filled with hate and sorrow.

i know its not much but its a start, so can someone please respond and tell me wht they think! thanks

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
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"I'm jaded and judgemental. I can't imagine why."
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Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

[MrsGarrettRocksMySocks]

Sounds good!!( I think most people will be disappointed about Jo being dead, but I say, whatever is the easiest for you to write about!)ROCK ON!!

[sambino5]

This is very good please post more as soon as you can.

[Swimfan85]

ok, thanks 2 replys is enough for me to keep going...

Kacey didnt know how to handle this, she was only 15, she didnt know how to plan a funeral, she didnt even wanna face it or deal with it. She told the doctors to contact her mothers best friend, Blair Warner, about the funeral and such. Kacey figured she would make an apperence at the funeral service, maybe at the wake but then she would sell some of her mothers posessions and drop out of school and get a job if she wanted to support her self.

She was as stubborn as her mother and thought she knew just about everything and never faced a problem, always trying to get away from them. She could sell the apartment and hide at one of her friends house.

She decided to give the landlord her notice and move out, it wasnt really like she had much of an option though. She would hide at her friends apartment, there was no way she was gonna be up for adoption.

A few days later she recieved a notice in the mail that the funeral was Sat. at a church in Peekskill and and a reception at Blair Warners house.

It was early Saturday morning and she figured she would leave now for Peekskill. She did know exactly where she was going but she had a map and a vauge scence of the area. It was nearly 11 and she was making good timing, she was almost there and the services began at noon.

The funeral service brought back so many memories and she was about to burst out in tears, but she knew she had to be strong for her mother this one time. She brought an old photo of Jo's good friends to make sure she knew they were there and exactly who they were. Evening though they were Jo's cloest friends growing up, things change and people change and Kacey never got a chance really to meet any of them recently. When Blair was speaking memories ran through Kaceys head, like a film with out sound, so many good times, and bad times, yet they always seemed to get by. Then Kacey thought of her father who proabley didnt even know about Jo. O well he didnt need to know he walked out on them years ago...

After the funeral service had ended Kacey was the first one to leave and passing through the town she found a bar. She had her fake Id on her and she always passed for older, why she this time be any different she thought. She went and ordered a drink no problem

**Back at Blairs**

Blair has gone through the house numerous times hoping to have find Jo's daughter, Kacey. Yet she had no luck. She saw her at the funeral but no she was no where to be found. Blair thought to her self, maybe tootie and nat know where she is.

Blair found Nat and asked, "Hey Nat, you havent happened to see Jo's daughter Kacey have you?

Nat shook her head and said, "I thought i saw her at the funeral though."

Thanks nat, blair thought, o well when this is over she contact Kacey.

**At the bar**

Kacey has had quite a few drinks and is fairly drunk when a police officer comes in and notices that she is an underage drinker*dont ask how* and takes her down to the station.

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~
"I'm jaded and judgemental. I can't imagine why."
**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

[JT]

I don't want to be rude but what year does this take place in?If it is this year it is impossible.I mean 15 years old would have her being born in 1986.And we all know there was no Rick in 1986.Sorry to burst your bubble.....

[MrsGarrettRocksMySocks]

I think it's good anyways, I never think about the year, just keep going, it's really good.

[Swimfan85]

Originally posted by JT:
I don't want to be rude but what year does this take place in?If it is this year it is impossible.I mean 15 years old would have her being born in 1986.And we all know there was no Rick in 1986.Sorry to burst your bubble.....

ya i know its a fan fic...and FIC means ficton and that doesnt mean it has to be real and as a die hard fan i didnt have memory loss from the heat but i felt like having them a certain age so ya i know its not really realistic

[FolFanatic151]

Good job! Keep going. And don't worry about the age and year. I'm going to retreat to the only air conditioned room in my house now...

[MrsGarrettRocksMySocks]

like I said earlier keep going it's REALLY GOOD!!(As soon as MRs.G. says something I'll say it's even better, jk jk jk)

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[Divisionbabe05]

AWESOME.....keep goin. Yea its a fic...who cares how old her daughter is and when she was born! Its great!

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[Swimfan85]

k, so i havent add more for a while but the soxs are winning and while i have the chance i will add more

Down at the Police station while Kacey was recovering and becoming more sober she was identified as Kacey Polniaczek and connetacted the only person who was aviable at the moment..

Blair was rushinng around the house franticly looking for Kacey, she jumped when she heard her cell ring but answered it hoping it was in any way connected to Kacey and her whereabouts

"Yes, hello this is Blair Warner, she is what happened? is she alright, yes officer I will be right down"

Natalie and Tootie who were standing near blair looked up and asked who that was and what happened?

Blair looked back and said,"It was Officer Exstead of the Peekskill police, Kacey was found at a bar and drinking and she is down at the station now, and I have to get her"

Between the Natalie and Tootie they exchanged o wow look, where does this seem familiar..

**At the Station**

Blair goes over to the desk and has a conversation with the police officer about what is going to happen to Kacey

"Officer this is her first offense and with everything going on she is not thinking clearly, say we make a deal she has a shortened time on probation and she goes through consuling to ease her pain"

sry gotta go but ill add more soon


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Comeback-
Man: "If I could see you naked, I'd die happy:
Woman: "Yeah, but if I saw you naked, I'd probably die laughing".
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Sarcastic Remark-
Ohhh, let me turn on the part of my brain that gives a damn.
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A thing that Pisses me Off-
When people ask "Can I BORROW a piece of paper?" Sure, but please don't return the favor! It's on g-d damn piece of paper!
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

[FOL_lover]

post more soon!!!

[sue z q]

Just started reading this, and I have two words:

PPPPOOOOSSSSTTTT MMMMMOOOOORRRRREEEE!!!!!!!!

[KerriBerri687]

this is gr8!!!!! post more soon!

[FolFanatic151]

Hooray! You posted more! Keep going. It's really good. (And the Sox won!)