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Here's my first fanfic. It takes place in Season 3 before the episode Sweet Sorrow. Eddie and Jo's parents make a small appearance. Anyways, hope you like!
Grease is the Word CAFETERIA-AFTERNOON Mrs. Garrett is cleaning up some of the tables as Jo, Natalie and Tootie walk in talking. TOOTIE: Jo, you have to try out! It will be so much fun. Jo: I don't think so Tootie. NAT: Oh, C'mon Jo. The Summer Nights are calling! MRS.G: What's the problem girls? JO: There is no problem. TOOTIE: No problem?! Mrs. Garrett, they are holding auditions tomorrow for Eastland and Bates performance of 'Grease' and Jo refuses to try out. JO: I never refused. MRS.G: Oh? JO: Tootie and Nat just think I should try out for... (sort of disgusted) Sandy. MRS.G: Oh Jo, you would be wonderful! JO: Well of course I would! It's just I don't want to be a lovesick Austrailian blonde. NAT: Sandy doesn't have to be blonde. All you need to do is make your accent stiff until it sounds semi-proper. JO: Proper? Blair walks in joyfully. BLAIR: Hello all! MRS.G: Hi. Blair embraces Mrs. Garrett. BLAIR: Isn't it a glorious day? JO: (looks at Blair questioningly) Who slapped you upside the head today? Blair glares at Jo but then looks back at Mrs. Garrett. BLAIR: I cannot wait until the auditions tomorrow! I am gonna blow them away! NAT: Blow who where? BLAIR: Natalie, Natalie, Natalie. Do you know who'll be auditioning for the role of Sandy tomorrow? TOOTIE: Sure we do. Jo. Blair's smile suddenly turns confused. BLAIR: WHAT?! JO: Tootie, I didn't say I'd - BLAIR: Jo can't try out for Sandy, she, she... NAT: She can sing? TOOTIE: She's got great stage presence? NAT: She can act? TOOTIE: She's talented? Blair is speechless. NAT: Take your pick Blair, we've got all day. JO: Guys, stop it. BLAIR: Jo isn't, well she's not... JO: Blair just forget it. Since it will satisfy you so, (glares at Nat and Tootie) I'll try out. But I am not gonna guarrrente a thing. TOOTIE: That is all we were asking. Nat and Tootie exit into the kitchen. MRS.G: You'll do great! I know it. Jo and Mrs. Garrett smile at each other and head to the kitchen leaving Blair alone and with a confused look on her face. BLAIR: What about me? Blair follows them into the kitchen. That's all for now. It's almost midnight and I need to get up at 4:30 tomorrow. I'll write more tomorrow, I hopw you like this one though. Toodles. |
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smile :)
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Cute! Add more!
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FUNNY!!! I love it.
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Great, I LOVE it! I love the way Blair says, "What about me?" I can just see her doing that!
------------------ From Lisa Whelchel's book, "Creative Corrections" "The eyes of the Lord are everywhere, keeping watch on the wicked and the good." Proverbs 15:3 "Give thanks in all circumstances, for this is God's will for you in Jesus Christ." 1 Thessalonians 5:18 "A gossip betrays a confidence; so avoid a man who talks too much." Proverbs 20:19 ~*^Danielle^*~ LYLAS/LYLAB! E-mail me at Basketbaiichick@aol.com, BlairWarner33@yahoo.com, BlairWarner@gurlmail.com, MagdaRamirez1@AIM, or Magda_Ramirez_033@hotmail.com |
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GREAT!!! Post more soon
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This is great so far.I hope you can add more soon!
![]() ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!! |
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Thanks for the great reviews so far. Here's a little more.
CAFETERIA-NEXT DAY Mrs. Garrett is at a table working on some bills as Tootie, Nat, and Jo walk in smiling. TOOTIE: Mrs. Garrett, Mrs. Garrett! You won't believe what happened at the auditions! MRS.G: Jo, you got the part of Sandy. JO smiles) Close.MRS.G: Blair got the part. The girls look at each other and them burst into laughter. MRS.G: What's so funny? NAT: Mrs. Garrett you should have seen Blair's audition! TOOTIE: She was so funny! MRS.G: What happened? JO: Well you see she was singing 'Hopelessly Devoted to You' and she was doing really well. MRS.G: How is that funny? NAT: You know Blair, she had custom made props with her. TOOTIE: Including a wading pool with water in it. MRS.G: What happened? JO: Well as she was gettin to the first refrain she totally cracked. By the second verse she sounded terrible. MRS.G: Poor thing. JO: That's not the funny part. See, she was walking around the stage struggling to keep up with the music and she kind of tripped. NAT: And fell face first into the pool! MRS.G: Poor Blair! What part did she get? TOOTIE: No part. She said she wanted Sandy or no part at all but she messed up her only shot. MRS.G: Who did get the part of Sandy? JO: Sue Ann Weaver. She was pretty good actually. NAT: But not as good as Jo! JO: Nat, I am the only one that can gloat about myself.....but you're right. MRS.G: What part did you get? JO: We're all Pink Ladies. I'm Rizzo, Tootie's Frenchie, and Nat's Jan. MRS.G: That's wonderful! JO: Not for Blair. I felt so bad for her. I tried to help her ofstage but she just yelled at me so I backed off. MRS.G: She was probably devestated. TOOTIE: Devestated? She was downright ugly! That's all for now. I'll try to post more tonight. Buh Bie for now! 8) |
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------------------ What would make you shut-up in your sleep. -Blair *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* How do you say you'er going to be sweeping up your teeth in french? -Jo <><><><><><><><><><><><> Jinny:Are there any cops or Jinny haters here! [This message has been edited by BlairandJo (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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Fantastic - I can picture every word each character says! :-)
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Wonderful! Keep up the good work!
------------------ "I've just come to tell you how FABULOUS I am..." -Janet Weiss-Majors (Shock Treatment) |
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Keep going. I can actually visualize this in my mind as an episode.
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Thanks again for the reviews! Here's more. It is right after I left off when Tootie says Blair was downright ugly.
Blair comes walking into the cafeteria, hair soaking wet and glaring at Jo. NAT: Speaking of which Tootie and I have some homework to do upstairs. TOOTIE: No we don't, it's Friday. NAT: (pulling Tootie's arm) Yes, we do! TOOTIE: (catching on) Oh yeah. That homework. Nat and Tootie exit through the kitchen leaving Jo and Mrs. Garrett with an angry Blair. MRS.G: (uncomfortably) Hi, Blair. How was your audition? Blair doesn't answer. She's glaring at Jo how's stareing back uncomfortably. MRS.G: I see. Well, I, ummmm, I got to go and, uhhh, start dinner. Bye. Mrs. Garrett walks quickly to the kitchen. JO: Blair, look, I'm sorry you didn't get the part. But I'm sure if Sue Ann can't be Sandy you're the understudy. BLAIR: (angrily) Wrong? JO: What? BLAIR: I asked the director and do you know who she told me was the understudy? JO: (backing away uncomfortably) Who? BLAIR: You. JO: (still backing away) Oh. Oh, I uhh, I have too...(looks into Blair's angry face) Hell! I just gotta go! Jo runs out of the cafeteria leaving Blair to stare angrily after her. Ok. My sis has to work on a report so I'll most more ASAP! |
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Oh this is getting good. I luv it!!!! Post more soon!!!!
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This is really cute! The thought of Jo playing good-goody Sandy makes me LOL! Keep up the good work.
PS---Jo and Tootie dress exactly as Rizzo and Frenchie in the flashback sequence of '62-Pick-up. I think Jo was called Frizzo in that episode. I forget what Tootie was called though. It might have been Frenchie, but I'm not sure. ------------------ Natalie: A flashback within a flashback..I'm so brillant it scares me |
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