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BlairW_4 · 01-31-2001, 09:56 PM

Hey everyone! Here is my new fan fiction. It is called "Tragedys in Peekskill". It is sort of like a Facts of Life Thriller..I hope you like it!

TRAGEDYS IN PEEKSKILLL

(The camera focuses on a small brick house. Then the camera zooms into the house. It is Mrs. Garett's house. The camera shows Blair admiring herself in the mirror.)
B: Blair..Blair, Blair, Blair..I still don't understand why you are so gorgeous! (Sighs passionatly and fluffs her hair)
J: (Comes down the stairs) Blair, you better make sure that mirror don't crack!
B: (Turns around) Well that won't happen if you just keep away from it!
J: (Rolls her eyes and yells) Mrs. G, I am going out for a while on my bike!
MG: (Yells back from upstairs) Ok, be careful!
J: (Replys in a yell) I will! (Leaves)
B: (To herself) Finally..she's gone..peace at last!
MG: (Comes downstairs) Blair could you do me a favor?
B: Yeah, sure what is it??
MG: Well I need to run a quick errand so could you possibly dust the shelves in the kitchen? I did all the other things.
B: Sure Mrs. Garrett. I will get to work right now.
MG: Thank you Blair! I will be back in about 15 minutes.
B: Alright Mrs. Garett, bye!
(Mrs. Garett leaves)
B: (Goes in the other room to dust)
(The camera focuses on Blair dusting in the kitchen)
T: (Walks in) Hey Blair what are you doing?
B: Oh..just dusting for Mrs. Garett. She needed me to because she had to run to the store for a second.
T: Oh..well when your done do you wanna play cards? Natalie thinks the games boring.
B: Tootie..it sorta is boring when you think of it.
T: Aww man! I thought I had a defendant!! (Leaves)
B: (Laughs)
(The camera focuses on Jo riding down the street on her bike)
(All of the sudden a truck in another lane slides into Jo's land and slams into the side of her bike. The bike tumbles down a hill into the woods and slams against a tree causing the bike to catch fire. The bike is totally wrecked. There are peices everywhere, but there is no sign of Jo anywhere)

I gotta go and do my homework..I still didn't do it..lol! How do you like it so far?

JoBlairLuva · 01-31-2001, 10:44 PM

Ooo!!! it sounds good. not 2 rush u or nothin' but when r u goung 2 finish it. i can't wait 2 read the rest.

Ian · 02-01-2001, 02:10 AM

Looks great!!

But why dont you finish "Cheater in Disguise" first.

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loooking goood!!!

80skid · 02-01-2001, 08:12 AM

Can't wait to hear the rest!

Fol_divison_rox_505 · 02-01-2001, 03:57 PM

cant wait to read the next part of it!!!!

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Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too!

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap?
Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances
Jinny: umm.. probley not
Captin: thats what I thought

BlairW_4 · 02-01-2001, 06:11 PM

Hey..just to let you know that I AM finishing "The Cheater in Disguise". I am just writing this as a second one. Thanks for all the compliments! More is coming soon!

BlairW_4 · 02-01-2001, 08:55 PM

Here is a little more..

(The camera focuses on the house. It zooms inside to the girl's room to find Natalie studying)
B: (Walks in) Nat have you seen Jo?
N: No. I thought she went for a ride on her bike?
B: Yeah, she did. I am beginning to get worried.
N: Blair?!?! Worried about Jo?!?!?!?!?
B: Natalie she has been gone for 2 hours!
N: Maybe she ran out of gas or something..that could always happen.
B: Well I sure hope your right. (Sighs)
(The camera focuses on Mrs. Garett who is driving home from the store. All of the sudden she notices a bunch of police cars and firetrucks on the side of the road)
MG: Oh my!!! (Keeps looking at the site not knowing what is coming right for her) I wonder who was in that..oh my gosh!!! That's Jo's bike!!!
(Mrs. Garett was so concentrated on what was going on with Jo's crash that she didn't know a pick up truck was coming right for her....)
(CRASH!!!!!!!!!)

That is all I cam write for now! How do you like it?

BlairW_4 · 02-01-2001, 09:41 PM

Here is some more for you guys...

(The car spins and flips over a road seperator until it finally smashes into a telephone pole causing it to fall onto the street and sparks fly everywhere.)
(People start sreaming and gasping at the site of Mrs. Garett's accident as one woman calls 9-1-1.)
(The camera focuses on Blair sitting on the couch in the living room beginning to get scared. All of the sudden the phone rings.)
B: (Answers it) Hello??
(There is a police man on the other line)
P: Hello. Is this the residence of Edna Garett??
B: Yes, she lives here. Why?
P: We were informed that she was in a tretorous automobile accident. We are taking her to the local hospital right now. We need someone to come to the hospital to claim her.
B: Uh..ok I will be right there.
(Hangs up)
B: (Runs upstairs) Tootie! Natalie!
T and N: What???
B: I gotta run to the hospital Mrs. Garett was in a car accident. I will be back later. (Leaves)
T: (Gasps)
N: What?!?! (Looks at Tootie)
(They both run downstairs)
T: Wait! We gonna go too!
B: You can't..you guys stay here ok? (Leaves the house)
T: (Turns to Natalie) I sure hope she is okay!
N: Me too, Tootie.
(The camera focuses on Blair waiting in the waiting room in the hospital for the docters to tell her how Mrs. Garett is.)
(A docter comes out)
DR: Garett??
B: Right here! (Runs to him) What's the news???
DR: Well the accident was extremely bad. There is extreme trauma to her head and she has a broken rib and thigh. We will inform you with more news when we recieve it.
B: Ok...(Eyes tear up)
(About two miles away)
(The camera focuses on Jo. She is laying with a cut leg in the woods alone. She is deep in the woods very far away.)
J: Where the heck am I suppose to go.....
(Hears someone in the bushes)
J: (Gets up limping) Whose there??
(Someone is walking in the bushes)
J: (Checks the bushes) Whoever it is better

I gotta go do my report..I still didn't! Lol! Well what do you think of it??

lesliem14 · 02-01-2001, 10:10 PM

Finish your report and write some more!! This is good.

BlairW_4 · 02-01-2001, 10:36 PM

Here is some more...

J: Whoever it is you better come out...
(She hears a voice and suddenly a man comes out)
MAN: You think your tough??
J: Yeah I think I'm tough. And I don't need to think it. I am.
MAN: Listen kid, you don't wanna mess with me.
J: And why not??
MAN: (Pulls out a gun) See for yourself.
(The camera focuses on Blair sleeping in the waiting room. Suddenly a docter comes out)
DR: Ms??
B: (Wakes up) Huh? Oh! Sorry..how is she??
DR: (Sits down) Well its a long story. We had her in consiousness but she slipped out of it a number of times until she fell into a deep acoma.
B: (Stares) And..
DR: The odds of her making it are 30 within 100.
B: (Gets teary eyed again) Why????
DR: We don't know why. She just isn't handing in there.
B: (Gets up and yells) WELL TRY HARDER!!!!!!
DR: (Stands) Miss we are doing the best we can!
B: WELL DO BETTER!!!
DR: We will try. (Leaves)
B: (Sits down and starts sobbing)
(The camera focuses on Natalie and Tootie on the couch)
N: Do you think Mrs. G will be alright??
T: I sure hope so!! (Smells something) Nat what's that smell???
N: What smell???
T: I smell fire..(Walks into the kitchen and screens) Ah!!!
N: (Runs) What is it? OH MY GOSH!!! (The kitchen is on fire) Tootie leave the house I will call 9-1-1!!!
T: (Leaves)
(The kitchen is on fire)

I really gotta go! How is it???

05-11-2001, 09:19 PM

Could anything else bad happen? Its real good though keep writing, dont leave us hanging!!

NancyJoJinny · 05-12-2001, 12:28 PM

And i thought i was haveing a bad day.

But do write more!!!!! Its nice to know that somebody can have a worse day then you! (just trust me it was bad)

NancyJoJinny · 05-12-2001, 12:28 PM

And i thought i was haveing a bad day.

But do write more!!!!! Its nice to know that somebody can have a worse day then you! (just trust me it was bad)

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

BlairW_1 · 05-14-2001, 05:46 PM

To my understanding, Cassandra has left the board. Evidence of that is in her being removed as moderator, plus the fact that she has badmouthed the entire board and all people who watch "Stupid 80's sitcoms" in an IM she sent me.

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In loving memory of Mrs. Delia Gray...

"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

"For the Lord is good, His mercy is everlasting, and His truth endures to all generations." Psalms 100:5

"For the Lord Himself will descend from heaven with a shout, with the voice of an archangel, and with the trumpet of God. And the dead in Christ will rise first.
Then we who are alive and remain shall be caught up together with them in the clouds to meet the Lord in the air. And thus we shall always be with the Lord." 1 Thessalonians 4:16,17

~*Danielle*~

KerriBerri687 · 05-14-2001, 06:00 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by BlairW_1:
To my understanding, Cassandra has left the board. Evidence of that is in her being removed as moderator, plus the fact that she has badmouthed the entire board and all people who watch "Stupid 80's sitcoms" in an IM she sent me.

she said the same to me!

01-31-2001, 09:56 PM	#1
BlairW_4 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 27, 2001 Posts: 252	"Tragedys in Peeksill" (A Facts of Life Thriller!) Hey everyone! Here is my new fan fiction. It is called "Tragedys in Peekskill". It is sort of like a Facts of Life Thriller..I hope you like it! TRAGEDYS IN PEEKSKILLL (The camera focuses on a small brick house. Then the camera zooms into the house. It is Mrs. Garett's house. The camera shows Blair admiring herself in the mirror.) B: Blair..Blair, Blair, Blair..I still don't understand why you are so gorgeous! (Sighs passionatly and fluffs her hair) J: (Comes down the stairs) Blair, you better make sure that mirror don't crack! B: (Turns around) Well that won't happen if you just keep away from it! J: (Rolls her eyes and yells) Mrs. G, I am going out for a while on my bike! MG: (Yells back from upstairs) Ok, be careful! J: (Replys in a yell) I will! (Leaves) B: (To herself) Finally..she's gone..peace at last! MG: (Comes downstairs) Blair could you do me a favor? B: Yeah, sure what is it?? MG: Well I need to run a quick errand so could you possibly dust the shelves in the kitchen? I did all the other things. B: Sure Mrs. Garrett. I will get to work right now. MG: Thank you Blair! I will be back in about 15 minutes. B: Alright Mrs. Garett, bye! (Mrs. Garett leaves) B: (Goes in the other room to dust) (The camera focuses on Blair dusting in the kitchen) T: (Walks in) Hey Blair what are you doing? B: Oh..just dusting for Mrs. Garett. She needed me to because she had to run to the store for a second. T: Oh..well when your done do you wanna play cards? Natalie thinks the games boring. B: Tootie..it sorta is boring when you think of it. T: Aww man! I thought I had a defendant!! (Leaves) B: (Laughs) (The camera focuses on Jo riding down the street on her bike) (All of the sudden a truck in another lane slides into Jo's land and slams into the side of her bike. The bike tumbles down a hill into the woods and slams against a tree causing the bike to catch fire. The bike is totally wrecked. There are peices everywhere, but there is no sign of Jo anywhere) I gotta go and do my homework..I still didn't do it..lol! How do you like it so far?

05-11-2001, 09:19 PM	#11
NinnyJo Guest Posts: n/a	Could anything else bad happen? Its real good though keep writing, dont leave us hanging!!
NinnyJo Guest Posts: n/a

01-31-2001, 10:44 PM	#2
JoBlairLuva Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jan 26, 2001 Location: LA , CA Posts: 43	Ooo!!! it sounds good. not 2 rush u or nothin' but when r u goung 2 finish it. i can't wait 2 read the rest.

02-01-2001, 02:10 AM	#3
Ian Member Senior Member Join Date: Nov 03, 2000 Posts: 1,235	Looks great!! But why dont you finish "Cheater in Disguise" first. ------------------ loooking goood!!!

02-01-2001, 08:12 AM	#4
80skid smile :) Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 18, 2000 Posts: 971	Can't wait to hear the rest!

02-01-2001, 03:57 PM	#5
Fol_divison_rox_505 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 09, 2001 Location: MA(same town joey mcIntyre from NKOTB was born in)also it is the wettest dry town(said so on Jay Leno) Posts: 154	cant wait to read the next part of it!!!! ------------------ Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too! Jinny: i think i am going to give up men Magda: you, give up sex? Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee! Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap? Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances Jinny: umm.. probley not Captin: thats what I thought

02-01-2001, 06:11 PM	#6
BlairW_4 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 27, 2001 Posts: 252	Hey..just to let you know that I AM finishing "The Cheater in Disguise". I am just writing this as a second one. Thanks for all the compliments! More is coming soon!

02-01-2001, 08:55 PM	#7
BlairW_4 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 27, 2001 Posts: 252	Here is a little more.. (The camera focuses on the house. It zooms inside to the girl's room to find Natalie studying) B: (Walks in) Nat have you seen Jo? N: No. I thought she went for a ride on her bike? B: Yeah, she did. I am beginning to get worried. N: Blair?!?! Worried about Jo?!?!?!?!? B: Natalie she has been gone for 2 hours! N: Maybe she ran out of gas or something..that could always happen. B: Well I sure hope your right. (Sighs) (The camera focuses on Mrs. Garett who is driving home from the store. All of the sudden she notices a bunch of police cars and firetrucks on the side of the road) MG: Oh my!!! (Keeps looking at the site not knowing what is coming right for her) I wonder who was in that..oh my gosh!!! That's Jo's bike!!! (Mrs. Garett was so concentrated on what was going on with Jo's crash that she didn't know a pick up truck was coming right for her....) (CRASH!!!!!!!!!) That is all I cam write for now! How do you like it?

02-01-2001, 09:41 PM	#8
BlairW_4 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 27, 2001 Posts: 252	Here is some more for you guys... (The car spins and flips over a road seperator until it finally smashes into a telephone pole causing it to fall onto the street and sparks fly everywhere.) (People start sreaming and gasping at the site of Mrs. Garett's accident as one woman calls 9-1-1.) (The camera focuses on Blair sitting on the couch in the living room beginning to get scared. All of the sudden the phone rings.) B: (Answers it) Hello?? (There is a police man on the other line) P: Hello. Is this the residence of Edna Garett?? B: Yes, she lives here. Why? P: We were informed that she was in a tretorous automobile accident. We are taking her to the local hospital right now. We need someone to come to the hospital to claim her. B: Uh..ok I will be right there. (Hangs up) B: (Runs upstairs) Tootie! Natalie! T and N: What??? B: I gotta run to the hospital Mrs. Garett was in a car accident. I will be back later. (Leaves) T: (Gasps) N: What?!?! (Looks at Tootie) (They both run downstairs) T: Wait! We gonna go too! B: You can't..you guys stay here ok? (Leaves the house) T: (Turns to Natalie) I sure hope she is okay! N: Me too, Tootie. (The camera focuses on Blair waiting in the waiting room in the hospital for the docters to tell her how Mrs. Garett is.) (A docter comes out) DR: Garett?? B: Right here! (Runs to him) What's the news??? DR: Well the accident was extremely bad. There is extreme trauma to her head and she has a broken rib and thigh. We will inform you with more news when we recieve it. B: Ok...(Eyes tear up) (About two miles away) (The camera focuses on Jo. She is laying with a cut leg in the woods alone. She is deep in the woods very far away.) J: Where the heck am I suppose to go..... (Hears someone in the bushes) J: (Gets up limping) Whose there?? (Someone is walking in the bushes) J: (Checks the bushes) Whoever it is better I gotta go do my report..I still didn't! Lol! Well what do you think of it??

02-01-2001, 10:10 PM	#9
lesliem14 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 01, 2000 Location: Frankfort, KY Posts: 650	Finish your report and write some more!! This is good.

02-01-2001, 10:36 PM	#10
BlairW_4 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 27, 2001 Posts: 252	Here is some more... J: Whoever it is you better come out... (She hears a voice and suddenly a man comes out) MAN: You think your tough?? J: Yeah I think I'm tough. And I don't need to think it. I am. MAN: Listen kid, you don't wanna mess with me. J: And why not?? MAN: (Pulls out a gun) See for yourself. (The camera focuses on Blair sleeping in the waiting room. Suddenly a docter comes out) DR: Ms?? B: (Wakes up) Huh? Oh! Sorry..how is she?? DR: (Sits down) Well its a long story. We had her in consiousness but she slipped out of it a number of times until she fell into a deep acoma. B: (Stares) And.. DR: The odds of her making it are 30 within 100. B: (Gets teary eyed again) Why???? DR: We don't know why. She just isn't handing in there. B: (Gets up and yells) WELL TRY HARDER!!!!!! DR: (Stands) Miss we are doing the best we can! B: WELL DO BETTER!!! DR: We will try. (Leaves) B: (Sits down and starts sobbing) (The camera focuses on Natalie and Tootie on the couch) N: Do you think Mrs. G will be alright?? T: I sure hope so!! (Smells something) Nat what's that smell??? N: What smell??? T: I smell fire..(Walks into the kitchen and screens) Ah!!! N: (Runs) What is it? OH MY GOSH!!! (The kitchen is on fire) Tootie leave the house I will call 9-1-1!!! T: (Leaves) (The kitchen is on fire) I really gotta go! How is it???

05-12-2001, 12:28 PM	#12
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	And i thought i was haveing a bad day. But do write more!!!!! Its nice to know that somebody can have a worse day then you! (just trust me it was bad)

05-14-2001, 05:46 PM	#14
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	To my understanding, Cassandra has left the board. Evidence of that is in her being removed as moderator, plus the fact that she has badmouthed the entire board and all people who watch "Stupid 80's sitcoms" in an IM she sent me. ------------------ In loving memory of Mrs. Delia Gray... "I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13 "For the Lord is good, His mercy is everlasting, and His truth endures to all generations." Psalms 100:5 "For the Lord Himself will descend from heaven with a shout, with the voice of an archangel, and with the trumpet of God. And the dead in Christ will rise first. Then we who are alive and remain shall be caught up together with them in the clouds to meet the Lord in the air. And thus we shall always be with the Lord." 1 Thessalonians 4:16,17 ~Danielle~