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Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 07-10-2001, 04:17 PM

Okay, this is much better than the other one if I do say so myself because it has a lot of Blair/Jo scenes. It was easier to get into and easier to go into more detail. I hope y'all enjoy it!

The Story of Beauty

Season 6

DISCLAIMER -- I don't own any of this, so don't even bother trying to sue. This fanfic has been rated FF-14 for violence and sexual content. Reader discretion is advised.

CAST: (In order of appearance.)
Lisa Whelchel (Blair Warner)
Judd Nelson (Tim Brooke)
Nancy McKeon (Jo Polniaczek)
Mindy Cohn (Natalie Green)
Kim Fields (Tootie Ramsey)
Charlotte Rae (Mrs. Edna Garrett)
and
Frank Converse as Inspector Ray Martin

Prologue

She moved quickly, but it wasn't fast enough. Her blonde hair shimmered in the moon light. She didn't want it to be like this. She rolled over again, but there he was. There was no way out.

Chapter One

Jo Polniaczek had noticed that something was wrong with her roommate. The usual perky blonde wasn't so perky this morning. Her hair wasn't as bouncy and blonde as it usually was. She must've forgotten to use her peroxide last night, the brunette thought and started wiping the counter off.
"Okay, Jo," Natalie Green burst through the door with a pencil in one hand and a notebook in the other.
Jo looked up at Natalie. "Yes, Nat?"
Natalie smiled and proclaimed, "I've decided what my story's gonna be about. It's about--"
Blair moped through the gourmet shop and muttered a "Hi, all," before leaving through the door that Natalie had come through just moments earlier.
Natalie wrinkled her nose in confusion. "What's wrong with Blair?" Jo tucked a strand of hair back into the ponytail on the back of her head. "Want me to make you a list?"
"I'm serious, Jo!" the reporter exclaimed.
Just then, Tootie Ramsey came through the door. "What's with Blair?" she asked.
Jo cocked her brunette head to one side and answered, "Well, first off, she snores. Second, she primps too much. Third she's--" Natalie held up a hand. "We get the point, Jo. What time did she get in from her date with Tim last night?"
Jo shrugged and all eyes turned to Tootie. The Eastland sophomore paused with a croissant up to her mouth. "Don't look at me, I fell asleep at 1:30!"
"She wasn't in at 1:30? She wasn't in at 1:30! Jo, did you hear that--" Nat started.
"She wasn't in at 1:30, yeah, yeah. I heard." Blair walked back into Edna's Edibles and stared at a bagel. "Blair, do you want somethin'?" Jo asked and looked at Blair quizzically.
The debutante snapped out of her trance. "Huh? No, I'm just window shopping."
Tootie and Natalie joined Jo in looking at the blonde. "Blair, you're inside." Tootie informed her.
"I am? Oh, right, I am. I'm sorry, guys. I don't know where my mind is!" She shrugged and went back into the kitchen. Jo glanced at the two younger girls and followed Blair. "Hey," she said, when she found Blair upstairs in the girls' room. "What's wrong? You've been acting strange. Stranger than usual."
Blair's back heaved as though she was sighing, but the Bronx native recognized it as a sob.
Her voice softened, Jo placed her hand on Blair's back. "Hey... Tell me
what's wrong!"
The usually egotistical Blair turned around to face Jo. "What would you do..." she asked. "if you were sexually assaulted?"

What do you think? Keep goin'?

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"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres."
1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

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"El amor es paciente, el amor es amable. No envidia, no se jacta, no es orgulloso. No es grosero, no es de buscar auto, no es enojado fácilmente, mantiene no registro de la injusticia hace. El amor no se deleita en la mal, pero en rejoices con la verdad. Siempre protege, siempre confianza, siempre esperanzas, siempre perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

†ß† Kenzie †ß†

Warner,Blair · 07-10-2001, 04:24 PM

I love it.I like this version better.Post
more soon.

FOL_lover · 07-10-2001, 04:28 PM

This is great! Please post more asap.

80skid · 07-10-2001, 04:43 PM

MORE...
please!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 07-10-2001, 05:17 PM

OMG you gotta finish this!! it's great! i do like this version better

Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 07-10-2001, 10:59 PM

I'm glad that y'all like it. Here's the next two chapters! I'm happy cuz I just heard the Lifetime promo on the radio. So, I'll be nice and post 2 and 3.

Jo's eye's widened as her roommate started to sob again. "Blair... Who? When? Tim? Last night? I'll kill him, I swear it, Blair!"
Blair's chin dropped. "No! Jo, don't! I... I don't want him to get hurt. Besides, he said he'd never do it again... and... I believe him. I-I love him." She sat down on her bed.
"You believe him? Blair. It's just gonna happen again you have to--"
"It won't happen again!" Blair seldom raised her voice and Jo was shocked when she did so. "He promised me!" She could see what was coming next, so she answered Jo's unasked question. "I'm not telling Mrs. Garrett, Jo. I can't. She'd want to call the police a-and I don't want that to happen! Tim's a good guy, it's just that, well, he doesn't like to... He doesn't like people making him mad. I made him mad..." Her voice trailed off.
Jo changed her position to what Natalie had named "The Jo Stance" when she rested one hand on a table top and the other on her hip. "So, instead of bruising you where physically it would show, he bruised you emotionally to where it wouldn't show? Blair, that's sick!"
The Manhattan born rich kid stood up defensively. "That's not fair, Jo! He told me that he loved me!"
"Oh, I get it now! To show that he loves you, he has to go and rape you. It makes perfect sense."
"Jo... Promise me that you won't tell anyone!" Blair clasped her hands under her chin and almost begged.
Jo bit her bottom lip. "I don't know, Blair... I don't know if I can control myself."
"Please, Jo! Please! You're my best friend... Please?"
"Okay. Now, you have to promise me something." The brunette crossed her arms over her chest.
Blair wiped away a tear that started rolling down her cheek. "What?"
"Promise me that you won't go out with him again."
"No! Jo, that's not fair! That's like blackmail!" Blair said defensively.
"It's not blackmail if you're getting hurt! Promise me, Blair."
"Fine. Whatever." She sat down on her bed with Vouge magazine, signaling Jo that the conversation was over.
"Yeah..." Jo left the room, and went downstairs.
Chapter 3

Natalie and Tootie heard Blair say, "Fine. Whatever." Knowing Blair, they knew that that was her closing statement in the conversation. So, they bounded down the stairs and flopped onto the couch just as Jo slammed the door and jogged back downstairs.
Jo guessed that Natalie and Tootie had been listening through the door so she non-chalantly asked, "So, how much did you hear?"
Tootie answered, "Oh... not mu--"
"Tim raped Blair?!?" Natalie exclaimed. "Tim raped Blair?"
"Somebody's in troublllle!" Tootie flipped through her text book.
Jo took a deep breath and looked at her two roommates. "Okay. First of all, we're gonna set some ground ruled. Number one: Don't tell Blair that you know! She's very upset. She almost didn't tell me. Second: Mrs. Garrett does not find out about this!"
"Find out about what?" As if on cue, Mrs. Edna Garrett came through the door. "Girls, you're supposed to be watching the store! And what am I not supposed to find out about?"
"Nothing...," all three girls said in unison.
Mrs. Garrett raised an eyebrow. "Okay... Nat, will you and Tootie close the store?"
"Of course!" Nat said and she and Tootie left into Edna's Edibles.
Mrs. Garrett looked deeply into Jo's green eyes. "Jo, I've always known you to be the completely honest one. What am I not supposed to find out about?"
Jo ran a hand through her hair and pushed up the sleeve of her light blue sweater. "Well... I kinda promised Blair that I wouldn't tell..."
"I'm going to find out anyway. You might as well tell me now. I'm sure Blair will understand if you do decide to tell." Mrs. Garrett knew that she could break down the girls if she tried hard enough. With Jo, it might take three hours, but if she could find out what was wrong with Blair, it would be worth the effort.
"Understand, not necessarily forgive!" Jo pleaded.
"Jo..."

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"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres."
1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

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"El amor es paciente, el amor es amable. No envidia, no se jacta, no es orgulloso. No es grosero, no es de buscar auto, no es enojado fácilmente, mantiene no registro de la injusticia hace. El amor no se deleita en la mal, pero en rejoices con la verdad. Siempre protege, siempre confianza, siempre esperanzas, siempre perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

†ß† Kenzie †ß†

Swimfan85 · 07-10-2001, 11:10 PM

hey kenzie, i no you have been very busy but why did you stop there!!!! omg this is awesome, i hope you add more...and same with modest seductions(preety sure thats the name i cant think right now sry if i got the name wrong~)BUT NEWAYS ADD MORE!!!!!!!!

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.

***~~!!kATie!!~~***

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 07-10-2001, 11:12 PM

this is great!! pleaes finish it!! keep it goign!!!

Warner,Blair · 07-11-2001, 01:23 AM

MORE,Please.

BlairW_1 · 07-11-2001, 12:46 PM

lol, Katie! It's Modest Intentions, but I can't even remember the name of my own fanfics, so don't worry... :P Kenzie, great story!!! Aak! I need more! Ya gotta promise you'll post more b4 storytime tomorrow, I might be able 2 help 2morrow, so b lookin 4 me! And Friday afternoon, if I'm online, tell me to get off, k? My lil Stumpified Chile is gonna call me, we're planning 2 go to the library. You can go too! Maybe we do the 3-way thing! 'nuff talkin, y'all. buh-byezies!

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I'm the self appointed moderator around here, so y'all had better not argue while I'm around! Anytime y'all argue, I report it to Coily2 or TJ (I have his email address... MUAHAHAHAHA!!!), and y'all are gonna be in trouble!!! :P Seriously, I don't like fighting, so plz don't, or I will report ya. Thanx for your co-operation!

~*Danielle, Muldrow Quiz Bowl Captain*~

Swimfan85 · 07-11-2001, 04:20 PM

ya still continue kenzie!! but danielle modest suductions=modest intentions where did i get the suduction part? ok everyone i am alright dont worry

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

BlairW_1 · 07-12-2001, 11:47 PM

It was labeled Modest Intentions (Pleasant Seduction) on the original post. We were trying to make up names and I jokingly offered Pleasant Seductions as a title, and she took me seriously!!! :P well, buh-byezies!

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I'm the self appointed moderator around here, so y'all had better not argue while I'm around! Anytime y'all argue, I report it to Coily2 or TJ (I have his email address... MUAHAHAHAHA!!!), and y'all are gonna be in trouble!!! :P Seriously, I don't like fighting, so plz don't, or I will report ya. Thanx for your co-operation!

~*Danielle, Muldrow Quiz Bowl Captain*~

triple19 · 07-13-2001, 03:19 PM

Teddy's Angel Jinny, this is a great story! The writing is excellent amd the dialauge between Jo/Blair is very realistic. I honestly can see this story as a possible FOL episode, if it were still on NBC. I can see that you and AGS2000 have been studying Devon King's method of writing stories. Good work, and keep writing. Looking forward to reading future chapters.

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Natalie: A flashback within a flashback..I'm so brillant it scares me

Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 07-13-2001, 03:56 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by triple19:
Teddy's Angel Jinny, this is a great story! The writing is excellent amd the dialauge between Jo/Blair is very realistic. I honestly can see this story as a possible FOL episode, if it were still on NBC. I can see that you and AGS2000 have been studying Devon King's method of writing stories. Good work, and keep writing. Looking forward to reading future chapters.

I don't think that I quite rank with Devon King just yet. I'm just a beginner. Actually, I not that good at story form writing, but I'm doing my best with help from BlairW_1 and my mom. But, thank you for the compliment. I must say, I was a bit surprised when I read it. What else can I say but Thank you a million times over. I should be able to post more tonight.

That's the best compliment I've received in my entire life!

Teddys_Angel_Jinny · 07-16-2001, 10:52 PM

Okay, y'all I'm sooo sorry I haven't posted more, but my username wouldn't work until today (long story) so, here I am! Ready, willing, and able to post more...

Chapter 4

"Blair?" Mrs. Garrett knocked on her bedroom door. "Blair, please open the door!"
Blair sniffed and opened the door for Mrs. Garrett. "I look a mess!" She glanced in the mirror and saw her mascara running. "I should go and--"
"You're not going anywhere." She rarely put her foot down and actually told the girls what to do, but seeing as how serious the situation was, the red head felt she had to. "Tell me what happened last night."
Blair's face tensed up again and she balled her hands into fists. "Jo, told you! I can't believe her! She promised--"
"It doesn't matter what she promised, Blair, she was worried about you! Do you know what could have happened if Jo hadn't told me when she did? You could have gotten HIV, AIDS, another STD, those are bad enough, then there's always the possibility of pregnancy. Blair--"
Blair started sobbing into her hands. "Just stop Mrs. Garrett! Just stop! Go away! Please, I just want to be alone right now, please!" She raised her face and immediately regretted saying what she had just said, no yelled, when she saw the hurt look on Mrs. Garrett's face. "I-I'm sorry... But I want to be alone right now, please."
Mrs. Garrett patted the debutante's back and nodded, knowing that it was best for Blair to be alone when she wanted to be. "Sure." She smiled once more at Blair and shut the door on her way out.
Blair flopped onto her bed. "If you only knew how right you were, Mrs. Garrett... As Tootie would say, I am in troubllllle!"

Chapter 5

Jo sat her stack of books down on the library table and pulled the chair out. She sat down and opened the first book. After A Sexual Assault... She skimmed through police and court procedures and read about the consequences of rape. ...40% probability of contracting an STD after a sexual assault. Pregnancy... Though pregnancy is the most feared factor after a sexual assault, fear often outweighs the actual risk of getting pregnant. "Oh, dang..." Jo whispered silently and copied the information down in her notebook.

"Tootie, what do you think Blair's gonna do about Tim?" Natalie asked on the way to the movie theater. They had decided to catch a quick movie while Jo went to the library and Mrs. Garrett refiled her recipes.
Tootie shivered and pulled her jacket tighter. "Well... I think that it's Blair's decision and that we should stay out of it."
Natalie threw up her hands dramatically in frustration. "What is this? I can't believe what I'm hearing! Tootie keeping her nose in her own business? Are you sick?" The writer pressed her hand to Tootie's forehead. "Well, you're not running a fever! What do you think she's gonna do? Tootie, please tell me!" Natalie stuck her bottom lip out in a pout. "Please?"
Tootie sighed. "Oh, all right! She'll probably just say, "Oh, that's all right." and keep on dating him."
"Really? Oh... well, what are we gonna see?"

Y'all, okay, can I rest now? It's about to get a whole lot more interesting... I promise!

[This message has been edited by Teddys_Angel_Jinny (edited 07-16-2001).]

07-10-2001, 04:17 PM	#1
Teddys_Angel_Jinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 421	The Story of Beauty (FOL version) Okay, this is much better than the other one if I do say so myself because it has a lot of Blair/Jo scenes. It was easier to get into and easier to go into more detail. I hope y'all enjoy it! The Story of Beauty Season 6 DISCLAIMER -- I don't own any of this, so don't even bother trying to sue. This fanfic has been rated FF-14 for violence and sexual content. Reader discretion is advised. CAST: (In order of appearance.) Lisa Whelchel (Blair Warner) Judd Nelson (Tim Brooke) Nancy McKeon (Jo Polniaczek) Mindy Cohn (Natalie Green) Kim Fields (Tootie Ramsey) Charlotte Rae (Mrs. Edna Garrett) and Frank Converse as Inspector Ray Martin Prologue She moved quickly, but it wasn't fast enough. Her blonde hair shimmered in the moon light. She didn't want it to be like this. She rolled over again, but there he was. There was no way out. Chapter One Jo Polniaczek had noticed that something was wrong with her roommate. The usual perky blonde wasn't so perky this morning. Her hair wasn't as bouncy and blonde as it usually was. She must've forgotten to use her peroxide last night, the brunette thought and started wiping the counter off. "Okay, Jo," Natalie Green burst through the door with a pencil in one hand and a notebook in the other. Jo looked up at Natalie. "Yes, Nat?" Natalie smiled and proclaimed, "I've decided what my story's gonna be about. It's about--" Blair moped through the gourmet shop and muttered a "Hi, all," before leaving through the door that Natalie had come through just moments earlier. Natalie wrinkled her nose in confusion. "What's wrong with Blair?" Jo tucked a strand of hair back into the ponytail on the back of her head. "Want me to make you a list?" "I'm serious, Jo!" the reporter exclaimed. Just then, Tootie Ramsey came through the door. "What's with Blair?" she asked. Jo cocked her brunette head to one side and answered, "Well, first off, she snores. Second, she primps too much. Third she's--" Natalie held up a hand. "We get the point, Jo. What time did she get in from her date with Tim last night?" Jo shrugged and all eyes turned to Tootie. The Eastland sophomore paused with a croissant up to her mouth. "Don't look at me, I fell asleep at 1:30!" "She wasn't in at 1:30? She wasn't in at 1:30! Jo, did you hear that--" Nat started. "She wasn't in at 1:30, yeah, yeah. I heard." Blair walked back into Edna's Edibles and stared at a bagel. "Blair, do you want somethin'?" Jo asked and looked at Blair quizzically. The debutante snapped out of her trance. "Huh? No, I'm just window shopping." Tootie and Natalie joined Jo in looking at the blonde. "Blair, you're inside." Tootie informed her. "I am? Oh, right, I am. I'm sorry, guys. I don't know where my mind is!" She shrugged and went back into the kitchen. Jo glanced at the two younger girls and followed Blair. "Hey," she said, when she found Blair upstairs in the girls' room. "What's wrong? You've been acting strange. Stranger than usual." Blair's back heaved as though she was sighing, but the Bronx native recognized it as a sob. Her voice softened, Jo placed her hand on Blair's back. "Hey... Tell me what's wrong!" The usually egotistical Blair turned around to face Jo. "What would you do..." she asked. "if you were sexually assaulted?" What do you think? Keep goin'? ------------------ "Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7 ††††††††††††††††††††††††† "El amor es paciente, el amor es amable. No envidia, no se jacta, no es orgulloso. No es grosero, no es de buscar auto, no es enojado fácilmente, mantiene no registro de la injusticia hace. El amor no se deleita en la mal, pero en rejoices con la verdad. Siempre protege, siempre confianza, siempre esperanzas, siempre perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7 †ß† Kenzie †ß†

07-10-2001, 04:24 PM	#2
Warner,Blair Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Posts: 11	I love it.I like this version better.Post more soon.

07-10-2001, 04:28 PM	#3
FOL_lover Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 04, 2001 Location: OH Posts: 392	This is great! Please post more asap.

07-10-2001, 04:43 PM	#4
80skid smile :) Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 18, 2000 Posts: 971	MORE... please!

07-10-2001, 05:17 PM	#5
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	OMG you gotta finish this!! it's great! i do like this version better

07-10-2001, 10:59 PM	#6
Teddys_Angel_Jinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 421	I'm glad that y'all like it. Here's the next two chapters! I'm happy cuz I just heard the Lifetime promo on the radio. So, I'll be nice and post 2 and 3. Jo's eye's widened as her roommate started to sob again. "Blair... Who? When? Tim? Last night? I'll kill him, I swear it, Blair!" Blair's chin dropped. "No! Jo, don't! I... I don't want him to get hurt. Besides, he said he'd never do it again... and... I believe him. I-I love him." She sat down on her bed. "You believe him? Blair. It's just gonna happen again you have to--" "It won't happen again!" Blair seldom raised her voice and Jo was shocked when she did so. "He promised me!" She could see what was coming next, so she answered Jo's unasked question. "I'm not telling Mrs. Garrett, Jo. I can't. She'd want to call the police a-and I don't want that to happen! Tim's a good guy, it's just that, well, he doesn't like to... He doesn't like people making him mad. I made him mad..." Her voice trailed off. Jo changed her position to what Natalie had named "The Jo Stance" when she rested one hand on a table top and the other on her hip. "So, instead of bruising you where physically it would show, he bruised you emotionally to where it wouldn't show? Blair, that's sick!" The Manhattan born rich kid stood up defensively. "That's not fair, Jo! He told me that he loved me!" "Oh, I get it now! To show that he loves you, he has to go and rape you. It makes perfect sense." "Jo... Promise me that you won't tell anyone!" Blair clasped her hands under her chin and almost begged. Jo bit her bottom lip. "I don't know, Blair... I don't know if I can control myself." "Please, Jo! Please! You're my best friend... Please?" "Okay. Now, you have to promise me something." The brunette crossed her arms over her chest. Blair wiped away a tear that started rolling down her cheek. "What?" "Promise me that you won't go out with him again." "No! Jo, that's not fair! That's like blackmail!" Blair said defensively. "It's not blackmail if you're getting hurt! Promise me, Blair." "Fine. Whatever." She sat down on her bed with Vouge magazine, signaling Jo that the conversation was over. "Yeah..." Jo left the room, and went downstairs. Chapter 3 Natalie and Tootie heard Blair say, "Fine. Whatever." Knowing Blair, they knew that that was her closing statement in the conversation. So, they bounded down the stairs and flopped onto the couch just as Jo slammed the door and jogged back downstairs. Jo guessed that Natalie and Tootie had been listening through the door so she non-chalantly asked, "So, how much did you hear?" Tootie answered, "Oh... not mu--" "Tim raped Blair?!?" Natalie exclaimed. "Tim raped Blair?" "Somebody's in troublllle!" Tootie flipped through her text book. Jo took a deep breath and looked at her two roommates. "Okay. First of all, we're gonna set some ground ruled. Number one: Don't tell Blair that you know! She's very upset. She almost didn't tell me. Second: Mrs. Garrett does not find out about this!" "Find out about what?" As if on cue, Mrs. Edna Garrett came through the door. "Girls, you're supposed to be watching the store! And what am I not supposed to find out about?" "Nothing...," all three girls said in unison. Mrs. Garrett raised an eyebrow. "Okay... Nat, will you and Tootie close the store?" "Of course!" Nat said and she and Tootie left into Edna's Edibles. Mrs. Garrett looked deeply into Jo's green eyes. "Jo, I've always known you to be the completely honest one. What am I not supposed to find out about?" Jo ran a hand through her hair and pushed up the sleeve of her light blue sweater. "Well... I kinda promised Blair that I wouldn't tell..." "I'm going to find out anyway. You might as well tell me now. I'm sure Blair will understand if you do decide to tell." Mrs. Garrett knew that she could break down the girls if she tried hard enough. With Jo, it might take three hours, but if she could find out what was wrong with Blair, it would be worth the effort. "Understand, not necessarily forgive!" Jo pleaded. "Jo..." ------------------ "Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7 ††††††††††††††††††††††††† "El amor es paciente, el amor es amable. No envidia, no se jacta, no es orgulloso. No es grosero, no es de buscar auto, no es enojado fácilmente, mantiene no registro de la injusticia hace. El amor no se deleita en la mal, pero en rejoices con la verdad. Siempre protege, siempre confianza, siempre esperanzas, siempre perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7 †ß† Kenzie †ß†

07-10-2001, 11:10 PM	#7
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	hey kenzie, i no you have been very busy but why did you stop there!!!! omg this is awesome, i hope you add more...and same with modest seductions(preety sure thats the name i cant think right now sry if i got the name wrong~)BUT NEWAYS ADD MORE!!!!!!!! ------------------ Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it? Max: The Bangles broke up. Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point. Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more. *~~!!kATie!!~~*

07-10-2001, 11:12 PM	#8
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	this is great!! pleaes finish it!! keep it goign!!!

07-11-2001, 01:23 AM	#9
Warner,Blair Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Posts: 11	MORE,Please.

07-11-2001, 12:46 PM	#10
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	lol, Katie! It's Modest Intentions, but I can't even remember the name of my own fanfics, so don't worry... :P Kenzie, great story!!! Aak! I need more! Ya gotta promise you'll post more b4 storytime tomorrow, I might be able 2 help 2morrow, so b lookin 4 me! And Friday afternoon, if I'm online, tell me to get off, k? My lil Stumpified Chile is gonna call me, we're planning 2 go to the library. You can go too! Maybe we do the 3-way thing! 'nuff talkin, y'all. buh-byezies! ------------------ I'm the self appointed moderator around here, so y'all had better not argue while I'm around! Anytime y'all argue, I report it to Coily2 or TJ (I have his email address... MUAHAHAHAHA!!!), and y'all are gonna be in trouble!!! :P Seriously, I don't like fighting, so plz don't, or I will report ya. Thanx for your co-operation! ~Danielle, Muldrow Quiz Bowl Captain~

07-11-2001, 04:20 PM	#11
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	ya still continue kenzie!! but danielle modest suductions=modest intentions where did i get the suduction part? ok everyone i am alright dont worry ------------------ Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it? Max: The Bangles broke up. Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point. Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more. *~~!!kATie!!~~*

07-12-2001, 11:47 PM	#12
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	It was labeled Modest Intentions (Pleasant Seduction) on the original post. We were trying to make up names and I jokingly offered Pleasant Seductions as a title, and she took me seriously!!! :P well, buh-byezies! ------------------ I'm the self appointed moderator around here, so y'all had better not argue while I'm around! Anytime y'all argue, I report it to Coily2 or TJ (I have his email address... MUAHAHAHAHA!!!), and y'all are gonna be in trouble!!! :P Seriously, I don't like fighting, so plz don't, or I will report ya. Thanx for your co-operation! ~Danielle, Muldrow Quiz Bowl Captain~

07-13-2001, 03:19 PM	#13
triple19 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 28, 2001 Location: Miami Posts: 178	Teddy's Angel Jinny, this is a great story! The writing is excellent amd the dialauge between Jo/Blair is very realistic. I honestly can see this story as a possible FOL episode, if it were still on NBC. I can see that you and AGS2000 have been studying Devon King's method of writing stories. Good work, and keep writing. Looking forward to reading future chapters. ------------------ Natalie: A flashback within a flashback..I'm so brillant it scares me

07-16-2001, 10:52 PM	#15
Teddys_Angel_Jinny Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 421	Okay, y'all I'm sooo sorry I haven't posted more, but my username wouldn't work until today (long story) so, here I am! Ready, willing, and able to post more... Chapter 4 "Blair?" Mrs. Garrett knocked on her bedroom door. "Blair, please open the door!" Blair sniffed and opened the door for Mrs. Garrett. "I look a mess!" She glanced in the mirror and saw her mascara running. "I should go and--" "You're not going anywhere." She rarely put her foot down and actually told the girls what to do, but seeing as how serious the situation was, the red head felt she had to. "Tell me what happened last night." Blair's face tensed up again and she balled her hands into fists. "Jo, told you! I can't believe her! She promised--" "It doesn't matter what she promised, Blair, she was worried about you! Do you know what could have happened if Jo hadn't told me when she did? You could have gotten HIV, AIDS, another STD, those are bad enough, then there's always the possibility of pregnancy. Blair--" Blair started sobbing into her hands. "Just stop Mrs. Garrett! Just stop! Go away! Please, I just want to be alone right now, please!" She raised her face and immediately regretted saying what she had just said, no yelled, when she saw the hurt look on Mrs. Garrett's face. "I-I'm sorry... But I want to be alone right now, please." Mrs. Garrett patted the debutante's back and nodded, knowing that it was best for Blair to be alone when she wanted to be. "Sure." She smiled once more at Blair and shut the door on her way out. Blair flopped onto her bed. "If you only knew how right you were, Mrs. Garrett... As Tootie would say, I am in troubllllle!" Chapter 5 Jo sat her stack of books down on the library table and pulled the chair out. She sat down and opened the first book. After A Sexual Assault... She skimmed through police and court procedures and read about the consequences of rape. ...40% probability of contracting an STD after a sexual assault. Pregnancy... Though pregnancy is the most feared factor after a sexual assault, fear often outweighs the actual risk of getting pregnant. "Oh, dang..." Jo whispered silently and copied the information down in her notebook. "Tootie, what do you think Blair's gonna do about Tim?" Natalie asked on the way to the movie theater. They had decided to catch a quick movie while Jo went to the library and Mrs. Garrett refiled her recipes. Tootie shivered and pulled her jacket tighter. "Well... I think that it's Blair's decision and that we should stay out of it." Natalie threw up her hands dramatically in frustration. "What is this? I can't believe what I'm hearing! Tootie keeping her nose in her own business? Are you sick?" The writer pressed her hand to Tootie's forehead. "Well, you're not running a fever! What do you think she's gonna do? Tootie, please tell me!" Natalie stuck her bottom lip out in a pout. "Please?" Tootie sighed. "Oh, all right! She'll probably just say, "Oh, that's all right." and keep on dating him." "Really? Oh... well, what are we gonna see?" Y'all, okay, can I rest now? It's about to get a whole lot more interesting... I promise! [This message has been edited by Teddys_Angel_Jinny (edited 07-16-2001).]