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Sitcomwriter · 08-30-2001, 04:30 PM

"The Pregnancy Tests"
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(Andy and Pippa's apartment)
Tootie:So?
Blair:Mines negative
Jo:Well now its mt turn
Pippa:Its negative
Blair:Sorry Pippa so that means no ones pregnant
Tootie:Yeah thats sad
Bailey:Well I've got a date
Tootie:Who?
Bailey:Ed
Tootie:I've got one with Ted
Bailey:Cool
(Bailey and Tootie walk out together)
Jo:Guess what?
Blair and Pippa:Negative?
Jo:I'm pregnant
(Blair and Pippa stare at each other and then they all hug)
THE END

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 08-30-2001, 10:51 PM

ok....cool

Jo_Polniaczek · 08-30-2001, 11:59 PM

umm, ok. Well, I think it has potential, just needs more. Why don't you write more to it?

Kari Ingrid · 08-31-2001, 02:27 PM

I like the idea that Blair, Jo, and Pippa all took pregnancy tests and that Jo pregnant. I also find it a funny sly joke that you had Blair suposidly engaging in premarital sex when Lisa Whelchel is so against that in real life. I do however have one suggestion on how you can make all the different parts of the story fit together more cohesively. I get the impression that Another Moffit Part 1, and 2, and Pregnancy Tests are all one story. It might confuse people to have two different tittles to the same story. You should use one tittle through out all the of parts your story. I'm looking foreword to seeing more of your writing in the future.

08-30-2001, 04:30 PM	#1
Sitcomwriter Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Feb 27, 2001 Posts: 7,356	"The Pregnancy Tests" "The Pregnancy Tests" ______________________ (Andy and Pippa's apartment) Tootie:So? Blair:Mines negative Jo:Well now its mt turn Pippa:Its negative Blair:Sorry Pippa so that means no ones pregnant Tootie:Yeah thats sad Bailey:Well I've got a date Tootie:Who? Bailey:Ed Tootie:I've got one with Ted Bailey:Cool (Bailey and Tootie walk out together) Jo:Guess what? Blair and Pippa:Negative? Jo:I'm pregnant (Blair and Pippa stare at each other and then they all hug) THE END

08-30-2001, 10:51 PM	#2
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	ok....cool

08-30-2001, 11:59 PM	#3
Jo_Polniaczek Professional Lurker Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 07, 2000 Location: The middle of Nowhere Posts: 783	umm, ok. Well, I think it has potential, just needs more. Why don't you write more to it?

08-31-2001, 02:27 PM	#4
Kari Ingrid Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2001 Posts: 31	I like the idea that Blair, Jo, and Pippa all took pregnancy tests and that Jo pregnant. I also find it a funny sly joke that you had Blair suposidly engaging in premarital sex when Lisa Whelchel is so against that in real life. I do however have one suggestion on how you can make all the different parts of the story fit together more cohesively. I get the impression that Another Moffit Part 1, and 2, and Pregnancy Tests are all one story. It might confuse people to have two different tittles to the same story. You should use one tittle through out all the of parts your story. I'm looking foreword to seeing more of your writing in the future.