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Y'all, I didn't get a very big fan base, but I think this one is rather good.
DISCLAIMER: Of this were a real episode, N@N wouldn't air it. It would be considered "controversial" but since N@N isn't here, I'm posting it anyway. I want the honest truth. The Story of Beauty Rachel Warner-Stevens waltzed through the Eastland Cafeteria with a cool, confidant stride. "Hello, all!" She called. Alexz Bonner tied an apron around her waist and tossed one to Rachel. "You're late, again." "Well, I'm sorry!" Rachel answered and carefully pulled the apron over her curled, blonde locks. "I was talking to Brad. He's so... so... grown-up." "Just how old is he?" Alexz asked. She tightened the pony tail holding her brunette hair back and guessed, "13?" Rachel laughed. "You know me better than that! He's 17." Sorry so short, but my lil sis is whining about going swimming so I gotta take her. More later... ------------------ "Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7 |
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A and J
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It's a really good story!! But i don't really like the fan fics that are about their kids, i like the ones that about the originail Jo Blair Nat and Tootie. But still, this sounsd like it'll be pretty good to people who like that thing, I think you should def. keep going!!
------------------ Teddy Is Hott!! --pretty plain and simple. Blair: Hold it, you ruined my watch. Jo: No I didn't, it's a stop watch...it stopped Blair: Jo, you've got some power, but you're not wearing it right. You don't want to throw it onlike a motorcycle jacket, you want to slip it on, like a negligee. Jo: I'm not doin' anything weird!!! Natalie: She's always saying what a great kid you are Andy: Kid? Natalie: Guy. Did i saw kid? Why would i say kid? Man, she said man! |
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo be nice
.Its a good story so far post more soon ![]() ![]() ------------------ Its my life!This is who I am!And you tell me it does'nt matter! -Jinny ~~~~~~~ If you want something bad enough you go after it no matter what the outcome may be -My Quote ~~~~~~ "Love beliver So take the love He's giving to you A love receiver Cause everything He's Promised is true Love beliver Listen to the song that I sing You are the child of the King" -Love Beliver. ~~~~~~~ Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl (why be a good girl?)she is a see-saw seeing if it matters she is a game of Chutes and Laders. be a good girl (why be a good girl?) she needs the one who wrote the definition of a love without condition be a good girl. -Good Girl. |
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A and J
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what part was I mean? I said it was a good story, i was not rude. show me where i was rude ------------------ Teddy Is Hott!! --pretty plain and simple. Blair: Hold it, you ruined my watch. Jo: No I didn't, it's a stop watch...it stopped Blair: Jo, you've got some power, but you're not wearing it right. You don't want to throw it onlike a motorcycle jacket, you want to slip it on, like a negligee. Jo: I'm not doin' anything weird!!! Natalie: She's always saying what a great kid you are Andy: Kid? Natalie: Guy. Did i saw kid? Why would i say kid? Man, she said man! |
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*Mindanao Machiku*
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Join Date: Dec 21, 2000
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Okay, no one was rude there, just two people stating their opinions, no reason to flame K's story for that. Great story, K, and listen... Do you mind if I write the one after The Story of Beauty, Part 2? Ya know, where Rachel... I can't say it here. Well, it's after the # you call.
Y'all, don't even ask me what I'm talking about. Last night we stayed up brainstorming on fanfics until the sun came up, then we slept for about 1 hour, 30 minutes, got up, went to the Tulsa Zoo that's about 2 hours away, walked around everywhere, ate, and came home... Now, why I'm still up, I don't know... HELP!!!! Sue Z Q was right, gotta take that 12-step program... Buh-byezies!------------------ We are the Muldrow Bulldog quiz bowl team We're gonna beat old Sallisaw with the lead We're gonna squish 'em And squash 'em And roll 'em around! All with the sound of the BEEP, BEEP, BEEP! Bulldogs! "1st in county may be great, but next year we are taking state!" Kenzie R. WIN-LOSE RATIO 9 - 1 ~*Danielle, Captain of the Muldrow quiz bowl team*~ <3 ya! |
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You can if you wanna. I don't care. Super 8!
Don't even ask!------------------ "Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7 |
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Would it be easier for y'all to realte to if I rewrote this for FOL? Although, we did go deeper into Jo's married life... (don't even ask!) *whispers* Super 8! Oh, and, D? You were very convincing as a cop. But you hold it like this! *demonstrates* Back to topic, would it be easier?
------------------ "Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7 ††††††††††††††††††††††††† "El amor es paciente, el amor es amable. No envidia, no se jacta, no es orgulloso. No es grosero, no es de buscar auto, no es enojado fácilmente, mantiene no registro de la injusticia hace. El amor no se deleita en la mal, pero en rejoices con la verdad. Siempre protege, siempre confianza, siempre esperanzas, siempre perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7 †ß† Kenzie †ß† |
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*Mindanao Machiku*
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Well, K, since you've already written it as FOL (and it's much better, too, sorry to say it) you'd better do it like that. Problem, though... It's gonna be a clash with Ags2000's story, they're sorta alike. (Her name is my name!!!) Well, y'all just write away, hope they won't make y'all life enemies!
I doubt it! Buh-byezies!------------------ Listen to this... Okay, one of my friends is quoted saying this about Brookshire Rowe... Hey Brookshire is doing 100% better they called this morning and said he was going to make it they thought and my mom went up there and they did surgery and now he is 100% better Isn't that great!!! :::sigh::: Now all that's wrong with him is that he doesn't have a leg... Well, I gotta be thankful that he lived. It's thanks to everyone's prayers, so thank you, everyone! ~*Danielle, Quiz Bowl Captain*~ |
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No, it's fine if two peeps have the same idea. That way, you can compare notes and see how they're alike and different. I'll post it again...
------------------ "Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7 ††††††††††††††††††††††††† "El amor es paciente, el amor es amable. No envidia, no se jacta, no es orgulloso. No es grosero, no es de buscar auto, no es enojado fácilmente, mantiene no registro de la injusticia hace. El amor no se deleita en la mal, pero en rejoices con la verdad. Siempre protege, siempre confianza, siempre esperanzas, siempre perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7 †ß† Kenzie †ß† |
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