"Bailey Comes to Town" Part 2 - Sitcoms Online Message Boards

Sitcomwriter · 03-03-2001, 05:58 PM

HERE IS THE 2nd PART OF MY NEW 2 PART FANFIC "Bailey Comes to Town"
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(The Next morning)
(Pippa and Andy in bed)
Pippa:Honey(Pats Andy) wake up
Andy:Sorry but after last night
Pippa:Oh well get up
Ren: (Just heard)Oh Dean
Pippa:Is that your ex Ren?
Andy:Is that your ex Dean?
(The Night Before)
(Jo and Rick are on the bed)
Rick:Are you sure not tonight(Laugh Track goes wild Laughing)
Jo:We have to go Cold Turkey
(The next Day)
(Blair is at Jo and Ricks to pick up her sister)
Blair

id you Cold Turkey
Jo and Rick:Yes we did
Blair:Good
(Jeff comes over)
Jeff

Kisses Blair)Hey(Leaves)
Jo:What the hell was that?
Blair:Its what we call a fling
Jo:Yes a fling to hurt your roomate(closes the door)
(Andy,Pippa,Ren and Dean)
Andy and Pippa

Not wearing rings)Why the hell are you together?
Dean and Ren:We are because we are
(Blair and Tootie are at their place)
Blair:Jeff is cheating on you with me
Tootie:Oh great(Leaves)
Blair:Why would she not care unlesss shes ....one of the women who like other women(Laugh Track goes wild Laughing)
THE END
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WHAT DO YOU THINK?

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BlairW_2 · 03-03-2001, 06:02 PM

Confusing. You said you wouldn't talk about the subject!

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..*Cassandra*..

Sitcomwriter · 03-03-2001, 06:05 PM

I SAID BLAIR WOULD THINK THAT BUT ITS NOT TRUE.

JoRocks87FOL · 03-04-2001, 03:46 AM

this script makes no sense what so ever! my 6 month old sister can make more sense than that! and you saying that you are a script writer for acctual sitcoms, "ha! brother that's that pot calling the kettle black!" maybe you ARE a script writer, doesn't mean they'll sell!
hate to brake it to you but, it's a cruel world out there!

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~*~*~*JoRocks87FOL~*~*~*
Jo: what do you see?
Blair: i see an assortment of various candies
Jo:look harder, it's a mine field. You've got your ROLLOS your JUNIOR MINTS, your GOOD AND PLENTIES, your RAISINETTES, and your RED licorice. Any combination, pleasent evening, mix the wrong stuff-i can't be held responsible. you know one guy mixed peanut butter cups and black licorice, the nex day he walked in front of a train.
mckeonfan@hotmail.com
AIM- punky80zchick

KerriBerri687 · 03-04-2001, 08:26 PM

listen, what i am about to say may sound rude, but trust me i am not trying to be mean or anything i am just trying to help you out. your scripts really don't make sense. they are extremely confusing. you have to learn to kind of organize your thoughts. you need to add detail to your scripts. listen i'm sorry but your scripts aren't coming along to well. i'm sorry. just trying to help.

03-05-2001, 12:39 AM

i'm not an expert or nothin'. but to me it kinda sounds like you left out some parts. but hay a least you tried. i still like it tho'.

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 06-15-2001, 08:50 PM

that was really lame

BlairW_1 · 06-15-2001, 11:43 PM

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo, Sitcomwriter's gone now, and I can't say what I was about to say, or TJ will get mad, so just trust me... he's gone.

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~*Danielle*~

callmetootie · 06-16-2001, 10:07 AM

This FanFic was the worst one that I ever read.

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Andrew Carden

BlairW_1 · 06-16-2001, 02:42 PM

We know, he wrote a lot more stories, most of them down near the end of the board. Just don't say anything else about it, or we'll start another fight. That's why we have more than one moderator, because of "The Sitcomwriter Incedent," as I like to call it. If you wanna hear more about it, email me or something, but please don't start another fight.

~*Danielle*~

03-03-2001, 05:58 PM	#1
Sitcomwriter Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Feb 27, 2001 Posts: 7,356	"Bailey Comes to Town" Part 2 HERE IS THE 2nd PART OF MY NEW 2 PART FANFIC "Bailey Comes to Town" ******************************************* (The Next morning) (Pippa and Andy in bed) Pippa:Honey(Pats Andy) wake up Andy:Sorry but after last night Pippa:Oh well get up Ren: (Just heard)Oh Dean Pippa:Is that your ex Ren? Andy:Is that your ex Dean? (The Night Before) (Jo and Rick are on the bed) Rick:Are you sure not tonight(Laugh Track goes wild Laughing) Jo:We have to go Cold Turkey (The next Day) (Blair is at Jo and Ricks to pick up her sister) Blair id you Cold Turkey Jo and Rick:Yes we did Blair:Good (Jeff comes over) Jeff Kisses Blair)Hey(Leaves) Jo:What the hell was that? Blair:Its what we call a fling Jo:Yes a fling to hurt your roomate(closes the door) (Andy,Pippa,Ren and Dean) Andy and Pippa Not wearing rings)Why the hell are you together? Dean and Ren:We are because we are (Blair and Tootie are at their place) Blair:Jeff is cheating on you with me Tootie:Oh great(Leaves) Blair:Why would she not care unlesss shes ....one of the women who like other women(Laugh Track goes wild Laughing) THE END ******************************************* WHAT DO YOU THINK? [This message has been edited by Sitcomwriter (edited 03-03-2001).] [This message has been edited by Sitcomwriter (edited 03-03-2001).] [This message has been edited by Sitcomwriter (edited 03-03-2001).]

03-05-2001, 12:39 AM	#6
ILuvJo&Blair Guest Posts: n/a	i'm not an expert or nothin'. but to me it kinda sounds like you left out some parts. but hay a least you tried. i still like it tho'.
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03-03-2001, 06:02 PM	#2
BlairW_2 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: New Jersey Posts: 860	Confusing. You said you wouldn't talk about the subject! ------------------ ..Cassandra..

03-03-2001, 06:05 PM	#3
Sitcomwriter Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Feb 27, 2001 Posts: 7,356	I SAID BLAIR WOULD THINK THAT BUT ITS NOT TRUE.

03-04-2001, 03:46 AM	#4
JoRocks87FOL Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 08, 2000 Location: CALI!!!! Posts: 134	this script makes no sense what so ever! my 6 month old sister can make more sense than that! and you saying that you are a script writer for acctual sitcoms, "ha! brother that's that pot calling the kettle black!" maybe you ARE a script writer, doesn't mean they'll sell! hate to brake it to you but, it's a cruel world out there! ------------------ ~~~JoRocks87FOL~~~ Jo: what do you see? Blair: i see an assortment of various candies Jo:look harder, it's a mine field. You've got your ROLLOS your JUNIOR MINTS, your GOOD AND PLENTIES, your RAISINETTES, and your RED licorice. Any combination, pleasent evening, mix the wrong stuff-i can't be held responsible. you know one guy mixed peanut butter cups and black licorice, the nex day he walked in front of a train. mckeonfan@hotmail.com AIM- punky80zchick

03-04-2001, 08:26 PM	#5
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	listen, what i am about to say may sound rude, but trust me i am not trying to be mean or anything i am just trying to help you out. your scripts really don't make sense. they are extremely confusing. you have to learn to kind of organize your thoughts. you need to add detail to your scripts. listen i'm sorry but your scripts aren't coming along to well. i'm sorry. just trying to help.

06-15-2001, 08:50 PM	#7
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	that was really lame

06-15-2001, 11:43 PM	#8
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo, Sitcomwriter's gone now, and I can't say what I was about to say, or TJ will get mad, so just trust me... he's gone. ------------------ ~Danielle~

06-16-2001, 10:07 AM	#9
callmetootie Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Mar 06, 2001 Location: Clifton Park, NY Posts: 4,768	This FanFic was the worst one that I ever read. ------------------ Andrew Carden

06-16-2001, 02:42 PM	#10
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	We know, he wrote a lot more stories, most of them down near the end of the board. Just don't say anything else about it, or we'll start another fight. That's why we have more than one moderator, because of "The Sitcomwriter Incedent," as I like to call it. If you wanna hear more about it, email me or something, but please don't start another fight. ~Danielle~