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This will take place around the 8th season. Im my fanfiction MrsG. is still here. I think Beverly Ann is ok but I like MrsG. better.
All the girls are downstairs excpet for Jo. Mrs.G:is something wrong with Jo? B:I don't know N:All we know is she hasn't came our room all day long. T:She might be sick N:She may be dead MrsG:Natalie don't say that. N:Sorry B:I'm going to go check on her. UPSTAIRS NOW KNOCK KNOCK B:Jo it's Blair J:come in. B:What's up with you jo. J:What in the hell are you taking about Blair? B:you haven't came out of our room all day long. J:I just have a few things on my mind is all. B:do you want to tell me all about it? J:sure sit down first. B k go ahead.J:way back before I came to Eastland I was a wildchild and I did all kinds of things I now regret but on this one night and the man I was seeing at the time decided to do the dew and I got pregnant. So I decided to go ahead with the pregnancy. Then I gave birth to a beautiful, healthy babay girl. I knew down deep in my heart that I couldn't raise this child. So I gave her up for adoption(now crying) I have a daughter Blair. B h my god Jo. Who is the father?J:Eddie. B:does he know? J:no he got shipped off to Chicago before I could tell him. B:how old is you little girl? J:7. Can I be alone now Blair? B:sure. BACKDOWNSTAIRSb:MrsG. you need to go talk to Jo. MrsG.:Well what for? B:Ladies Jo has a 7 year old daughter. Mrs.G h dear lets all go talk to her.NOW TALKING TO JO. T:Jo we know J:know about what? N:your kid. J h great Blair squealed. Would you all leave excpet for Mrsg.ALL LEAVE. MrsG:Jo are you ok? J:no I'm not MrsG: do you want to find your little girl? J:Yes very much so. Giving her up was the hardest thing I have ever done in my entire life. I think about her everyday of my life. She is the first thing on my mind when I get up and she is the last thing on my mind when I go to slepp at night. Mrsg:Jo if you need anyone to talk to we will always be here for you. J:Thanks. Mrsg:for what? J:for being a good friend MrsG:Oh you welcome. THATS ALL FOR NOW WHAT DO YOU THINK? |
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I think that the idea was pretty good, but your story was pretty messy. Some if the things that you mentioned were kind of funny, but other then that there was much enjoyment that I found in it. If you do decide to continue with it, you should maybe change a few things about it. I think that once people read this, they may not think of Jo as the easy riding Eastland girl that they thought she was. Don't go too far with Jo's personal life.
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you don't like my story.
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I do! Write more soon!
------------------ A few things that can be found on bumper stickers that reminded me of Jinny... 1. Finally 21, and legally able to do things I've been doing since 15. 2. A hangover is the wrath of grapes. 3. They call it PMS because Mad Cow Disease was already taken. 4. POLICE STATION TOILET STOLEN -- Cops have nothing to go on. 5. I have PMS and a gun. Are there any questions? (Number 5 was altered a little.) E Pluribus Unum... Have a nice day! º†º Kenzie º†º |
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I loved it,dont listen to callmetootie Its going great.Post more soon;o)
------------------ How do you say you'er going to be sweeping up your teeth in french? -Jo <><><><><><><><><><><><> Jinny:Are there any cops or Jinny haters here. [This message has been edited by BlairandJo (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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All I can say is...
MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! I WANT MORE!! |
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You have to continue!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep going!
![]() ------------------ *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas. Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine? Jo: Oh my Lord, no. |
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Guys I'm sorry I left all my books at school in my locker and my story was in it so I will post more on Monday ok.
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OK HERE IS MORE.
BACK DOWNSTAIRS KNOCK KNOCK b:i'll get it. e:hi blair. b:eddie hi what are you doing here? e:jo called and said she needed to talk to me and she sounded urgent. t/n:hi eddie. e:hi girls how are you? t/n:fine. mrsg:hi eddie. e:hi mrsg it is so good to see you. mrsg:it's so good to see you too. e:where is jo's room? mrsg:all the way upstairs first door on your left. e k thanks. (now goes upstairs)KNOCK KNOCK e:jo it's eddie. j:come in. e:hi jo. j:hi (hugs and kisses him) e how have you been?j h i've been better. Eddie we need to talk.e:i know that is why I came. jo:i know. Well you remember when we first started dating? e:yes that was the best time of my life. j:well remember the first time we had sex. e:yes I do. j:well it had some consenquences. e:what kind of consenquences? j:well eddie we have a kid? e:we have a child. j:yes we a 7 year old aughter to be exact. e h my god jo why didn't you tell me?j:you got shipped off before I could tell you. e k. Where is she?j:When I gave birth to her I knew I couldn't keep her so I gave her up for adoption. e:well first thing in the morning we go and find our daughter, j k.WRITE MORE LATER HOW IS IT? |
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OK HERE IS MORE
e:jo I gotta go find a motel to stay. j:no eddie you will stay here with us you can pack out on the couch. e k sounds good if it is no trouble.j:no trouble at all. e:hey jo I have an idea let's go and take a walk to catch up on old times. j k.NOW DOWNSTAIRS. j:mrsg me and eddie are going for a walk. mrsg k be careful.j:we will bye. mrsg:bye. NOW LEAVE JO AND EDDIE b:i bet eddie will ask jo to marry him. t:blair what makes you say that? b:well they have a kid together don't they. n:yeah. b:well anything is possible now. n:yeah your right. b:i love to hear those three words you a right. NOW GOES TO EDDIE AND JO. e:jo there has been somthing I have wanted to ask you for a while but I just didn't know how to ask you. j:well I'm sure any way you ask me will be fine eddie. e k here goes. (gets down on bending knees with the engagment ring)Joanna Maire Polniaczek will you marry me?j h my god I will have to think about this.e:take all the time you need sweetie. j k I thought it over I will marry you.e h great honey.(HUGS AND KISSES JO)j:let's go tell the others. e:i'm right behind you dear. THATS ALL FOR NOW WRITE MORE LATER |
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HERES MORE
GOES BACK TO THE HOUSE. j:hey mrsg where is the girls at? mrsg h they went to bed.j:me and eddie have some good news. e:i asked jo to marry me. mrsg:and what did she say? j:yes I said yes. mrsg:jo that is wonderful(hugs jo and eddie) j:thanks. e:thanks. mrsg:i'm going to bed I'm tired. j k goodnight.e:goodnight mrsg. mrsg:goodnight you guys. NOWS GOES TO THE GIRLS ROOM. KNOCK KNOCK. mrsg:girls we need to talk. b:can't it wait. mrsg:it's about jo. b k go ahead.mrsg:well eddie asked jo to marry him. n:really. t:what did she say. mrsg:yes. b:really I told you girls I was right. t:yeah blair you were right. n:i'm going back to bed now. t:me too. b:me three. b/t/n:goodnight mrsg. mrsg:goodnight girls. NOW GOES BACK DOWNSTAIRS. j:this has been one hell of a day. e:yes it has been. I find out I have a kid and I ask my best girl to marry me. It has defintly been one hell of a day. j:well I'm going to bed we have a long day ahead of us tomorrow. e k goodnight jo.j:goodnight eddie. e:I love you. j:I love you too.(hugs and kisses him) THATS ALL FOR NOW I WILL POST MORE TOMORROW. HOW IS IT? |
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I love it so far please post more soon.
------------------ There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shoving -Jo **** Cap id'nt you ever have a dog when you were growing up. Jinny:I had a plant once, Did'nt make it. ~~~~ Never know till you try -My Quote |
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------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!! |
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OK HERE IS MORE
NOW IT IS THE NEXT DAY AND JO AND EDDIE ARE AT THE ADOPTION AGENCY. d:hi i'm david how may I help you folks today? j:i'm jo and this is my soon to be husband eddie. d:hi. e:hi nice to meet you. d:likewise. j:well we are here to find my daughter that I gave up for adoption 7 years ago. d:well I will need to ask you a few a questions. j k.d:date of birth? j:may 17th 1980. d:what hospital was she born at? j:cook county general hospital. d:her full name? j:alexzandra marie polniaczek. d k let me get this information typed into the computer and I will get back with you in a few sceconds.j k.NOW ABOUT 10 MINUTES LATER. d k I found a Alexzandra Marie Polniaczek she lives in Manhattan with Brad and Becky Walker. I will contact the walker's and I will arrange for you guys to meet.j k thanks alot.e:yeah thanks. d:your welcome and good luck you guys. j:thanks. e:we will sure need good luck. d:see you guys later. j/e:bye. I WILL WRITE MORE IN 5 MINUTES OK |
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