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NancyJoJinny · 03-06-2001, 12:32 PM

He peered around the corner. He saw her coming, Perfect Target, he thought, Id like to see her try to defend herself...

Jo was walking down the street, as she reached an alley between two tall buildings, she thought she had heard something, probably a cat she thought to herself. Like a kid in the dark she sped up while she went by, see nothing, you were worried over nothing. she thought too herself.

Suddenly she felt herself get jerked back.

X: Ha! I got you now.

J: Oh G-d get off, tears began to stream down her face as she fought.

At that moment the masked man pulled a gun out and pressed it againt her stomach.

J: No! Please! She began to cry. Dont hurt the baby!

X: Awwwww... And how far along are you Honey? He said this in a sweet voice, Jo knew he was crazy. He pushed the gun agians her, hard.

J: 9 months sicko, if i werent then youd be sorry!

X: He grabbed her by the hair, Isnt that cute you sound just like your little girl.

J: You, you shot her! Im going to kill you!

Jo began to fight violently with him, she elbowed him hard, obviosly he didnt know how to fight well. His gun went flying.

X: You were luckey, but dont count on it. He hit her, very hard, Jo leaned over and put her face agianst the wall. Then he kicked her then got up and ran quickly away, into the back of the alley.

Jo let out a loud sob, but she couldnt get up, she was afraid that he had broken something.

B: Jo! Oh My G-d! What the hell happened.

J: Blair, she moaned, help me, get me up.

B: Jo, no, i have to call an ambulance!

Jo tryed to stand up, Blair! Help Me!!!

B: ALright fine. But, you need a doctor!

J: Blair please just take me home!

B: Fine! Come on.

Blair helped her up, but forgot about the surprise baby shower that was waiting back at Jo's house, every body was there.

Jo didint say nuch on the way home she just sat there in the car thinking

J: Blair let me have your cell phone

Blair handed it to her

J: Hello, id like to report a crime. Jo talked on the phone for a good 10 minutes, trying to desribe what she had seen of the guy, Blairs eyes widened with every word, when Jo got done she covered her mouth with her hand in shock.

B: Are you ready too tell me waht happened, well i heard most of it but anything else. she was a little nervose asking

J: No, and i really dont want to talk about it at all, the police said they'd do their best to protect me, you know, i am still on the force, that gives them all the more reason to spend all of thier waking hours looking.

B: Uh... yeah alright

J: I dont want rick to know, he'll get all worried and ALexis will hear and... Ugh, I just want this between the police, me and you. She started to cry again.

B: Jo dont you think that will be a little hard.

J: What are you talkin about?

Blair motioned to the visor mirror. Jo pulled it down and stared at her reflection for a good 30 seconds, she had an awful swolen black eye. HSe went to touch her face and sqezed her eyes togeter, tears streamed down her face, suddenly she started sobbing hysterically.

B: Jo stop, thats not good for the baby!

J: No i didnt Know it was this bad! It hurt but then it stopped, i thought i was better, i dont belive it! I cant stop crying!

B: She was a little teary too, Jo, it will all be aright, Just please stop crying!

Jo sniffled and tryed to stop, Ok Blair im ok now, but i guesse i have to tell rick and alexis, they'll be so worried!

B: No, well all be worried, i mean nobody thought he would go after you too.

I ahve to go now, its a little wierd but what do you think?

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-06-2001, 12:49 PM

very good so far keep it up

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Jo: blair do you know what this means?i never have to hear you breath again!!!
Blair: and i never have to see your ugly face again!!!

Anti-reality shows!!trying to take over sitcoms!!
the tribe has spoken,
*~Katie~*

Wild Child · 03-06-2001, 02:37 PM

It's really great so far....Post more soon!I can't wait to read more.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

BlairandJo · 03-07-2001, 03:16 AM

Love it!!!!!!!! post more soon.;o)

Love The Facts Of Life · 03-07-2001, 06:09 PM

This is really good,sad,but good I can't wait to hear more

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Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points.
Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law.

Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out.
Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

AlexzBonner · 03-08-2001, 12:03 AM

It's really good so far. I just have one question, I've been writing 'Threat To Life' where Jo and Rick's daughter Alexz, get's shot by a gang member. Can I go ahead and post that one, since I've been working on it for awhile?
Thank you,
~_~ Kenzie ~_~

NancyJoJinny · 03-08-2001, 04:33 PM

Yeah go ahead post it, i want to read it!

Lisa,Blair,GoodGirl · 03-10-2001, 01:20 AM

I love it!!!!!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Crus'n is the best facts of life episode ever!!!
~~~~~
I found a love a love you don't find every day.

NancyJoJinny · 03-10-2001, 05:17 PM

Ok, sorry i havnt posted...Ive been quite busy.

Back at Jo's house.

Jo walked into a dark living room, Blair still didnt remember the baby shower.

J: Blair? Could ya turn on the lights, Jeez...Where is e... She was interupted by the loud SURPRISE, that startled both her and Blair. Everyone stared at Jo.

B: Ooooops...Hehe. Guess i forgot. Blair tryed to sneak out of the room.

J: Oh Blairsy.... It seems we have a little problem... You see, the one thing i wanted nobody to know about, well, lets just say, im going to shoot you!

B:Look Im sorry.

Jo sighed and sat down. A very short person pushed out of the crowd.

T: Jo, what, uh... what? What happened?

J: Tootie your here? I didt see you behind...evrybody.

T: Jo! Stop beating around the bush! What HAPPENED?

J: Oh alright... I dont know how to put this.

T: SPILL IT!!!!!!!!!

J: The guy who shot Alexis attacked me... Well, that was easy.

R: WHat?!?! Call the cops! Call a doctor. Contact the Marines!

J: Rick i did.

R: You called the marines?

J; No i dont want to TALK ABOUT IT! Period! CAN I GO UPSTAIRS AND REST NOW?

R: Fine ill help you.

B: No ill do it.

Blair went upstairs with her. When they got to Jos room she looked at herself in the mirror.

J: Ugh! It looks worse! AT least alexis didnt see me... Wait where is she.

B: Shes sleeping over Danas house with Racheal.

J: Good. but tommorow she will. At least i have more time to think of ways to tell her.

Sorry gotta go to the carwash Write later today

Love The Facts Of Life · 03-10-2001, 06:02 PM

I can't wait to hear more.I hope you wash alot of cars.

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Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points.
Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law.

Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out.
Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

NancyJoJinny · 03-11-2001, 07:17 PM

OK heres more.

B: Jo why dont you lyedown and go to sleep.

J: (sigh) ALright...yeah, i need to rest.

Jo climed into bed, inher clothes and pulled on the sheets.

B: You want me to leave?

J: Nah, stay, i want company, if Rick comes up hell faint or something.

Blair was exausted but decided to stay anyway, she sat in a chair on the other side of the room and fell asleep. Jo fell asleep too.

(Downstairs)

R: Look everyone i think it would be best if evryone leaves.

MG: Of course.

Everyone filed out the back door exept Mrs Garret.

MG: Rick could you give me a ride? You know, cabs take forever and Bruce is sick so...

R: Sure. Uh but i dont know where you live.

Mg: Well its about 1 hour away, there are a lot of detours from the storm we had last week

Rick took his coat off the hook, Yeah it knocked down our phone lines, The companys still havnt come to fix it. He turned and yelled, Jo im driven Mrs G home. Ok? He got no answer. Hehe shes probably asleep. They left.

(upstairs)

Jo wakes up out of a sound sleep.

J: Blair? Blair! BBLLAAIIRR!!!!!!!!!

B: No dont take the credit card! Huh? Oh jo i just had the worst dream. You see....

J: I dont care Blair! Get me too the hospital!

B: Jo!?! Your not due for another week.

J: I know that, and you know that, she looked at her stomach, But she dont know that, oh i feel another contraction.

B: Ill call 9-1-1.

J: No can do Blair our phone lines are down. Go get rick and tell him too get the car.

Blair ran downstairs and frantically looked for him. She ran back upstairs.

B: Jo hes not here, niether is the car.

J: (opening her eyes and breathing heavy) Somebodys gonna die!!!!!!!

B: Calm down.

J: Calm down! CALM DOWN!!!! Yuo want me too calm down. Im out here in labor, nobody knows, no phone no car, now is a great time to panick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Post more later!!!!!!

Jo_Polniaczek · 03-17-2001, 02:04 PM

This is soooo great! I love it! Can't wait for more!

Wild Child · 03-17-2001, 06:27 PM

Ditto!!!!!

Please post more soon.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Me,Myself and I · 03-17-2001, 09:20 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Jo_Polniaczek:
This is soooo great! I love it! Can't wait for more!

FOL-FAN · 03-17-2001, 09:41 PM

Great!! Post more soon!

03-06-2001, 12:32 PM	#1
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	You Too. A new Fan Fic, read and respond. He peered around the corner. He saw her coming, Perfect Target, he thought, Id like to see her try to defend herself... Jo was walking down the street, as she reached an alley between two tall buildings, she thought she had heard something, probably a cat she thought to herself. Like a kid in the dark she sped up while she went by, see nothing, you were worried over nothing. she thought too herself. Suddenly she felt herself get jerked back. X: Ha! I got you now. J: Oh G-d get off, tears began to stream down her face as she fought. At that moment the masked man pulled a gun out and pressed it againt her stomach. J: No! Please! She began to cry. Dont hurt the baby! X: Awwwww... And how far along are you Honey? He said this in a sweet voice, Jo knew he was crazy. He pushed the gun agians her, hard. J: 9 months sicko, if i werent then youd be sorry! X: He grabbed her by the hair, Isnt that cute you sound just like your little girl. J: You, you shot her! Im going to kill you! Jo began to fight violently with him, she elbowed him hard, obviosly he didnt know how to fight well. His gun went flying. X: You were luckey, but dont count on it. He hit her, very hard, Jo leaned over and put her face agianst the wall. Then he kicked her then got up and ran quickly away, into the back of the alley. Jo let out a loud sob, but she couldnt get up, she was afraid that he had broken something. B: Jo! Oh My G-d! What the hell happened. J: Blair, she moaned, help me, get me up. B: Jo, no, i have to call an ambulance! Jo tryed to stand up, Blair! Help Me!!! B: ALright fine. But, you need a doctor! J: Blair please just take me home! B: Fine! Come on. Blair helped her up, but forgot about the surprise baby shower that was waiting back at Jo's house, every body was there. Jo didint say nuch on the way home she just sat there in the car thinking J: Blair let me have your cell phone Blair handed it to her J: Hello, id like to report a crime. Jo talked on the phone for a good 10 minutes, trying to desribe what she had seen of the guy, Blairs eyes widened with every word, when Jo got done she covered her mouth with her hand in shock. B: Are you ready too tell me waht happened, well i heard most of it but anything else. she was a little nervose asking J: No, and i really dont want to talk about it at all, the police said they'd do their best to protect me, you know, i am still on the force, that gives them all the more reason to spend all of thier waking hours looking. B: Uh... yeah alright J: I dont want rick to know, he'll get all worried and ALexis will hear and... Ugh, I just want this between the police, me and you. She started to cry again. B: Jo dont you think that will be a little hard. J: What are you talkin about? Blair motioned to the visor mirror. Jo pulled it down and stared at her reflection for a good 30 seconds, she had an awful swolen black eye. HSe went to touch her face and sqezed her eyes togeter, tears streamed down her face, suddenly she started sobbing hysterically. B: Jo stop, thats not good for the baby! J: No i didnt Know it was this bad! It hurt but then it stopped, i thought i was better, i dont belive it! I cant stop crying! B: She was a little teary too, Jo, it will all be aright, Just please stop crying! Jo sniffled and tryed to stop, Ok Blair im ok now, but i guesse i have to tell rick and alexis, they'll be so worried! B: No, well all be worried, i mean nobody thought he would go after you too. I ahve to go now, its a little wierd but what do you think?

03-06-2001, 12:49 PM	#2
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	very good so far keep it up ------------------ Jo: blair do you know what this means?i never have to hear you breath again!!! Blair: and i never have to see your ugly face again!!! Anti-reality shows!!trying to take over sitcoms!! the tribe has spoken, ~Katie~

03-06-2001, 02:37 PM	#3
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	It's really great so far....Post more soon!I can't wait to read more. ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!

03-07-2001, 03:16 AM	#4
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	Love it!!!!!!!! post more soon.;o)

03-07-2001, 06:09 PM	#5
Love The Facts Of Life FlUtTeRfLy Senior Member Join Date: Jan 18, 2001 Location: Tennessee Posts: 1,515	This is really good,sad,but good I can't wait to hear more ------------------ Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points. Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law. Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out. Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

03-08-2001, 12:03 AM	#6
AlexzBonner Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 11, 2001 Location: Muldrow, OK (Miss America '96's home town!) Posts: 284	It's really good so far. I just have one question, I've been writing 'Threat To Life' where Jo and Rick's daughter Alexz, get's shot by a gang member. Can I go ahead and post that one, since I've been working on it for awhile? Thank you, ~_~ Kenzie ~_~

03-08-2001, 04:33 PM	#7
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Yeah go ahead post it, i want to read it!

03-10-2001, 01:20 AM	#8
Lisa,Blair,GoodGirl Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 09, 2001 Posts: 60	I love it!!!!!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Crus'n is the best facts of life episode ever!!! ~~~~~ I found a love a love you don't find every day.

03-10-2001, 05:17 PM	#9
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Ok, sorry i havnt posted...Ive been quite busy. Back at Jo's house. Jo walked into a dark living room, Blair still didnt remember the baby shower. J: Blair? Could ya turn on the lights, Jeez...Where is e... She was interupted by the loud SURPRISE, that startled both her and Blair. Everyone stared at Jo. B: Ooooops...Hehe. Guess i forgot. Blair tryed to sneak out of the room. J: Oh Blairsy.... It seems we have a little problem... You see, the one thing i wanted nobody to know about, well, lets just say, im going to shoot you! B:Look Im sorry. Jo sighed and sat down. A very short person pushed out of the crowd. T: Jo, what, uh... what? What happened? J: Tootie your here? I didt see you behind...evrybody. T: Jo! Stop beating around the bush! What HAPPENED? J: Oh alright... I dont know how to put this. T: SPILL IT!!!!!!!!! J: The guy who shot Alexis attacked me... Well, that was easy. R: WHat?!?! Call the cops! Call a doctor. Contact the Marines! J: Rick i did. R: You called the marines? J; No i dont want to TALK ABOUT IT! Period! CAN I GO UPSTAIRS AND REST NOW? R: Fine ill help you. B: No ill do it. Blair went upstairs with her. When they got to Jos room she looked at herself in the mirror. J: Ugh! It looks worse! AT least alexis didnt see me... Wait where is she. B: Shes sleeping over Danas house with Racheal. J: Good. but tommorow she will. At least i have more time to think of ways to tell her. Sorry gotta go to the carwash Write later today

03-10-2001, 06:02 PM	#10
Love The Facts Of Life FlUtTeRfLy Senior Member Join Date: Jan 18, 2001 Location: Tennessee Posts: 1,515	I can't wait to hear more.I hope you wash alot of cars. ------------------ Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points. Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law. Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out. Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

03-11-2001, 07:17 PM	#11
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	OK heres more. B: Jo why dont you lyedown and go to sleep. J: (sigh) ALright...yeah, i need to rest. Jo climed into bed, inher clothes and pulled on the sheets. B: You want me to leave? J: Nah, stay, i want company, if Rick comes up hell faint or something. Blair was exausted but decided to stay anyway, she sat in a chair on the other side of the room and fell asleep. Jo fell asleep too. (Downstairs) R: Look everyone i think it would be best if evryone leaves. MG: Of course. Everyone filed out the back door exept Mrs Garret. MG: Rick could you give me a ride? You know, cabs take forever and Bruce is sick so... R: Sure. Uh but i dont know where you live. Mg: Well its about 1 hour away, there are a lot of detours from the storm we had last week Rick took his coat off the hook, Yeah it knocked down our phone lines, The companys still havnt come to fix it. He turned and yelled, Jo im driven Mrs G home. Ok? He got no answer. Hehe shes probably asleep. They left. (upstairs) Jo wakes up out of a sound sleep. J: Blair? Blair! BBLLAAIIRR!!!!!!!!! B: No dont take the credit card! Huh? Oh jo i just had the worst dream. You see.... J: I dont care Blair! Get me too the hospital! B: Jo!?! Your not due for another week. J: I know that, and you know that, she looked at her stomach, But she dont know that, oh i feel another contraction. B: Ill call 9-1-1. J: No can do Blair our phone lines are down. Go get rick and tell him too get the car. Blair ran downstairs and frantically looked for him. She ran back upstairs. B: Jo hes not here, niether is the car. J: (opening her eyes and breathing heavy) Somebodys gonna die!!!!!!! B: Calm down. J: Calm down! CALM DOWN!!!! Yuo want me too calm down. Im out here in labor, nobody knows, no phone no car, now is a great time to panick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Post more later!!!!!!

03-17-2001, 02:04 PM	#12
Jo_Polniaczek Professional Lurker Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 07, 2000 Location: The middle of Nowhere Posts: 783	This is soooo great! I love it! Can't wait for more!

03-17-2001, 06:27 PM	#13
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	Ditto!!!!! Please post more soon. ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!

03-17-2001, 09:41 PM	#15
FOL-FAN Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 05, 2001 Posts: 434	Great!! Post more soon!