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ssgoalie8 · 04-16-2001, 06:45 PM

ok guys i wrote this about a month ago. it's my 2nd one. hope you like it. respond and tell me what you think.

(jo is driving blair's car) (talking to herself)
j: i can't believe she made me take her car just to pick up her stupid dress. i shouldn't have offered. ya try to be nice to someone and they....(oncoming car swerves into jo's lane. the car flips twice, jo hits her head on the steering wheel before the car halts in someone's front yard.)
j: ow--oh my stomach! (grabs her stomach) (a couple of minutes go by) (a paramedic approaches her)
P: hey are you ok?
j: ya, i think so. i'm very sore though
p: we'll get you out of there as soon as we can
j: good! oh hey, how's the other driver?
p: well uh...he didn't...uh...make it.
j: oh no!
p: he was drunk you are lucky to be alive. most people wouldn't live through that
j: thanks look don't call my family ok?
p: ok but we are taking you to the hospital to make sure you are ok then you can go home
j: ok (winces in pain) thank you

-later-at home-
(jo walks in with a black eye)
mg: oh hi j....jo what happened to you?
j: oh it's nothing (says while trying to cover her eye) i was in a slight accident (emphasizing slight while trying to convince herself)
mg: are you sure you are ok?
j: yes my stomach hurts a little but worse, blair's car is totaled. she is going to kill me. it's her brand new porsche she got last month. (really starting to worry)
mg: as long as your alright
j: ya they took me to the hospital and said everything was ok except for a few bruises and this black eye (pointing to her right eye) i'm still a little tired.
mg: why don't you go and rest, do you want me to bring some lunch up to you?
j: no thanks mrs. g. i'm not that hungry (holds stomach and begins to walk upstairs, but stops) oh and mrs. g. don't tell blair about her car. i will.....later. all you know is i'm upstairs.
mg: alright jo. (says with a wink and a nod)

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jinny: who in the hell are you?
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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
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J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
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ssgoalie8 · 04-16-2001, 07:25 PM

k here's more

-10 min later-

(mrs. garret is dusting when blair, tootie, and natalie walk in talking about the class they went to)
t: i'm telling you mrs. garret, that class was so boring.
n: what are you talking about, i found it very insightful.
t: you would.(turns to mrs. garret) it was about proper journalism techniques (fake yawns)
b: i don't know about you all but i met....tom! (in a dreamy voice)
n: figures! (blair gives her the wait til later stare)
b: hey mrs. garret, where's jo? she was supposed to be in that class also.
mg: oh she's upstairs
b:do you know if she at least picked up my dress?
mg: i'm not sure
b: i'll go find out. (goes upstairs)
mg: tootie, natalie. can you come help me in the shop?
n: oh alright! (whisper to tootie) i thought we could sneak away.
t: oh well let's go.

how is it?

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jinny: who in the hell are you?
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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
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J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
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AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

KerriBerri687 · 04-16-2001, 07:29 PM

itz gr8 so far

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J- good we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

BlairandJo · 04-16-2001, 07:56 PM

you hve got to post more.

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What would make you shut-up in your sleep.
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How do you say you'er going to be sweeping up your teeth in french?
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Wild Child · 04-17-2001, 12:11 PM

yeah!I can't wait for more!

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
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ssgoalie8 · 04-17-2001, 08:20 PM

here's more.....

-bedroom-

(blair enter the room and looks around for her dress, she doesn't see it)
b: great! she doesn't get my dress, she doesn't show up for that class, and now she is asleep! (said like she was very annoyed) jo, what did you do today? (turns to jo who appears to be asleep facedown on her bed) jo! jo! wake up....answer me. c'mon! (notices jo's eye) you have a black eye...what happened? why won't you wake up?
(now getting very upset and yells downstairs)
MRS. GARRET, NATALIE, TOOTIE...HURRY UP! PLEASE! (all three run into the room)
mg: blair, what's wrong?
b: (starting to cry) it's jo, she won't wake up and she's very pale.
t: natalie...your dad's a doctor...what's wrong with her?
n: gee tootie let me get my medical bag and find out(sarcastically) my dad's the doctor not me.
mg: both of you just go get the car, we need to get jo to the hospital right away.
n&t: okay
b: do you know what happened, mrs. garret?
mg: well jo said she was in a slight accident, but that she was ok...except...
b: what!?!
mg: well she was complaining of pain in her stomach. i should have listened to her. (getting upset) it's all my fault.
b:no, mrs. garret. there was no way for you to know. she went to the hopital before, didn't she?
mg: well yes...
b: then it's not your fault.
(mrs. garret sits down next to jo on the bed and takes her hand)
mg: jo please don't leave us
b: does she have a pulse?
mg: yes but it's very faint.
b: let's get her into the car. i'll take her right arm and you take her left. we will try to carry her.

that's all for now i'm kinda sick from playing softball in the cold bye

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jinny: who in the hell are you?
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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
***************
J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
***************
AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

KerriBerri687 · 04-17-2001, 09:25 PM

wow! gr8- u know this is sorta like this story i heard once where this person got in a car accident and felt fine and went home and then the next morning became paralyzed!!! gr8 job!

Jo's Girl · 04-17-2001, 10:15 PM

OOOO!!!! THis is good hope u get bettr...hurry up this rox!

Wild Child · 04-18-2001, 11:03 AM

This is awsome!!I really hope you can get more posted soon!

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

04-18-2001, 03:33 PM

this is really good.

ssgoalie8 · 04-18-2001, 06:03 PM

here's more....

-car-

(mrs. garret is driving, tootie is sitting upfront, jo is in back between blair and nat and she is leaning on blair wihle nat is fanning her with a map she found in the car)
mg: how's she doing, blair?
b: pretty much the same
t: i still don't understand what happened.
n: i wish i knew how to help her.
b: hold on guys! she is kinda waking up. jo! jo! can you hear me?
j: what...what's happening? where am i? (weak voice)
b: i found you passed out on your bed. jo you wouldn't wake up.
j: i don't feel so good. i feel really weak
b: i know...just...(jo passes back out) mrs. garret hurry! she passed back out!
mg: the hospital is right after this light. (they arrive) i'll go get a nurse, and you three try to carry jo inside.
all: ok mrs. garret. (mrs. g sees a nurse)
mg: nurse! nurse!
nu: yes, what can i do for you?
mg: i've got a girl back there who was here earlier due to an accident she was in...well we found her just a little while ago passed out and we couldn't wake her up.
nu: i'll go get a wheelchair.
mg: hurry!!!

i'll write more in a few minutes

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jinny: who in the hell are you?
***************
JO rocks!!!!!!!!
***************
J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
***************
AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

ssgoalie8 · 04-18-2001, 07:02 PM

alright i'm back

-waiting room-

(blair is looking through a magazine trying to take her mind off of jo, nat and tootie are sitting against the wall staring out into space, and mrs. g is pacing back and forth) (doctor walks in)
d: polniaczek?
mg: yes
d: well we have her stabalized, but she is fading in and out of conciousness.
b: oh no! do you know what's wrong?
d: she was here earlier b/c of that accident...
mg: yes?
d: well did she tell you how bad the accident was?
mg: the way she was talking, it sounded as if it was like a fender bender.
d: no! it was very bad. her car flipped twice and the other driver was killed.

ssgoalie8 · 04-18-2001, 07:18 PM

alright i'm back

-waiting room-

(blair is looking through a magazine trying to take her mind off of jo, nat and tootie are sitting against the wall staring out into space, and mrs. g is pacing back and forth) (doctor walks in)
d: polniaczek?
mg: yes
d: well we have her stabalized, but she is fading in and out of conciousness.
b: oh no! do you know what's wrong?
d: she was here earlier b/c of that accident...
mg: yes?
d: well did she tell you how bad the accident was?
mg: the way she was talking, it sounded as if it was like a fender bender.
d: no! it was very bad. her car flipped twice and the other driver was killed.
mg: oh my
b: but if she was here earlier and released...what happened?
d: well, we've been talking x-rays and catscans. the problem seems to be internal bleeding. mainly from her stomach area. the reason she passed out was from the loss of blood
mg: i should have listened to her. she said her stomach was bothering her.
b: why did it take so long before she passed out?
d: this type of injury can go unnoticed so easily
n: what is the next step?
d: right now the only option is surgery.
t: well get to it!
mg: tootie!
t: sorry.
d: i'll update you when we are done.
b: please take care of jo!
d: i will!
mg: thank you doctor (doctor leaves) i wonder why jo didn't tell me how serious the accident was?
b: she didn't want you to worry.
n: well it didn't work.
t: i'm sure she will be fine.
mg: i hope so

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jinny: who in the hell are you?
***************
JO rocks!!!!!!!!
***************
J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
***************
AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

KerriBerri687 · 04-18-2001, 08:09 PM

wwwoooooh-thats good! hehe

Jo_Polniaczek · 04-18-2001, 08:26 PM

This is soo gr8! More soon!?

04-18-2001, 03:33 PM	#10
jofan4*life Guest Posts: n/a	this is really good.
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04-16-2001, 06:45 PM	#1
ssgoalie8 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 24, 2001 Location: maryland Posts: 282	the accident ok guys i wrote this about a month ago. it's my 2nd one. hope you like it. respond and tell me what you think. (jo is driving blair's car) (talking to herself) j: i can't believe she made me take her car just to pick up her stupid dress. i shouldn't have offered. ya try to be nice to someone and they....(oncoming car swerves into jo's lane. the car flips twice, jo hits her head on the steering wheel before the car halts in someone's front yard.) j: ow--oh my stomach! (grabs her stomach) (a couple of minutes go by) (a paramedic approaches her) P: hey are you ok? j: ya, i think so. i'm very sore though p: we'll get you out of there as soon as we can j: good! oh hey, how's the other driver? p: well uh...he didn't...uh...make it. j: oh no! p: he was drunk you are lucky to be alive. most people wouldn't live through that j: thanks look don't call my family ok? p: ok but we are taking you to the hospital to make sure you are ok then you can go home j: ok (winces in pain) thank you -later-at home- (jo walks in with a black eye) mg: oh hi j....jo what happened to you? j: oh it's nothing (says while trying to cover her eye) i was in a slight accident (emphasizing slight while trying to convince herself) mg: are you sure you are ok? j: yes my stomach hurts a little but worse, blair's car is totaled. she is going to kill me. it's her brand new porsche she got last month. (really starting to worry) mg: as long as your alright j: ya they took me to the hospital and said everything was ok except for a few bruises and this black eye (pointing to her right eye) i'm still a little tired. mg: why don't you go and rest, do you want me to bring some lunch up to you? j: no thanks mrs. g. i'm not that hungry (holds stomach and begins to walk upstairs, but stops) oh and mrs. g. don't tell blair about her car. i will.....later. all you know is i'm upstairs. mg: alright jo. (says with a wink and a nod) ------------------ jinny: who in the hell are you? ************* JO rocks!!!!!!!! *********** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! ************* AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

04-16-2001, 07:25 PM	#2
ssgoalie8 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 24, 2001 Location: maryland Posts: 282	k here's more -10 min later- (mrs. garret is dusting when blair, tootie, and natalie walk in talking about the class they went to) t: i'm telling you mrs. garret, that class was so boring. n: what are you talking about, i found it very insightful. t: you would.(turns to mrs. garret) it was about proper journalism techniques (fake yawns) b: i don't know about you all but i met....tom! (in a dreamy voice) n: figures! (blair gives her the wait til later stare) b: hey mrs. garret, where's jo? she was supposed to be in that class also. mg: oh she's upstairs b:do you know if she at least picked up my dress? mg: i'm not sure b: i'll go find out. (goes upstairs) mg: tootie, natalie. can you come help me in the shop? n: oh alright! (whisper to tootie) i thought we could sneak away. t: oh well let's go. how is it? ------------------ jinny: who in the hell are you? ************* JO rocks!!!!!!!! *********** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! ************* AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

04-16-2001, 07:29 PM	#3
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	itz gr8 so far ------------------ <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Luv yaz! ~Kerri~ Pal2125@aol.com Jinny- Intimate? No. I mean, i sleep with him. But i sleep with all the guys in the divison. It's sorta how i break em' in." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ B- If I don't spend money soon i'm gonna pull my hair out! J- good we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

04-16-2001, 07:56 PM	#4
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	you hve got to post more. ------------------ What would make you shut-up in your sleep. -Blair ~~~~~~~~~~~~* How do you say you'er going to be sweeping up your teeth in french? -Jo <><><><><><><><><><><><> Jinny:Are there any cops or Jinny haters here!

04-17-2001, 12:11 PM	#5
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	yeah!I can't wait for more! ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!

04-17-2001, 08:20 PM	#6
ssgoalie8 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 24, 2001 Location: maryland Posts: 282	here's more..... -bedroom- (blair enter the room and looks around for her dress, she doesn't see it) b: great! she doesn't get my dress, she doesn't show up for that class, and now she is asleep! (said like she was very annoyed) jo, what did you do today? (turns to jo who appears to be asleep facedown on her bed) jo! jo! wake up....answer me. c'mon! (notices jo's eye) you have a black eye...what happened? why won't you wake up? (now getting very upset and yells downstairs) MRS. GARRET, NATALIE, TOOTIE...HURRY UP! PLEASE! (all three run into the room) mg: blair, what's wrong? b: (starting to cry) it's jo, she won't wake up and she's very pale. t: natalie...your dad's a doctor...what's wrong with her? n: gee tootie let me get my medical bag and find out(sarcastically) my dad's the doctor not me. mg: both of you just go get the car, we need to get jo to the hospital right away. n&t: okay b: do you know what happened, mrs. garret? mg: well jo said she was in a slight accident, but that she was ok...except... b: what!?! mg: well she was complaining of pain in her stomach. i should have listened to her. (getting upset) it's all my fault. b:no, mrs. garret. there was no way for you to know. she went to the hopital before, didn't she? mg: well yes... b: then it's not your fault. (mrs. garret sits down next to jo on the bed and takes her hand) mg: jo please don't leave us b: does she have a pulse? mg: yes but it's very faint. b: let's get her into the car. i'll take her right arm and you take her left. we will try to carry her. that's all for now i'm kinda sick from playing softball in the cold bye ------------------ jinny: who in the hell are you? ************* JO rocks!!!!!!!! *********** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! ************* AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

04-17-2001, 09:25 PM	#7
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	wow! gr8- u know this is sorta like this story i heard once where this person got in a car accident and felt fine and went home and then the next morning became paralyzed!!! gr8 job!

04-17-2001, 10:15 PM	#8
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	OOOO!!!! THis is good hope u get bettr...hurry up this rox!

04-18-2001, 11:03 AM	#9
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	This is awsome!!I really hope you can get more posted soon! ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!

04-18-2001, 06:03 PM	#11
ssgoalie8 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 24, 2001 Location: maryland Posts: 282	here's more.... -car- (mrs. garret is driving, tootie is sitting upfront, jo is in back between blair and nat and she is leaning on blair wihle nat is fanning her with a map she found in the car) mg: how's she doing, blair? b: pretty much the same t: i still don't understand what happened. n: i wish i knew how to help her. b: hold on guys! she is kinda waking up. jo! jo! can you hear me? j: what...what's happening? where am i? (weak voice) b: i found you passed out on your bed. jo you wouldn't wake up. j: i don't feel so good. i feel really weak b: i know...just...(jo passes back out) mrs. garret hurry! she passed back out! mg: the hospital is right after this light. (they arrive) i'll go get a nurse, and you three try to carry jo inside. all: ok mrs. garret. (mrs. g sees a nurse) mg: nurse! nurse! nu: yes, what can i do for you? mg: i've got a girl back there who was here earlier due to an accident she was in...well we found her just a little while ago passed out and we couldn't wake her up. nu: i'll go get a wheelchair. mg: hurry!!! i'll write more in a few minutes ------------------ jinny: who in the hell are you? ************* JO rocks!!!!!!!! *********** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! ************* AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

04-18-2001, 07:02 PM	#12
ssgoalie8 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 24, 2001 Location: maryland Posts: 282	alright i'm back -waiting room- (blair is looking through a magazine trying to take her mind off of jo, nat and tootie are sitting against the wall staring out into space, and mrs. g is pacing back and forth) (doctor walks in) d: polniaczek? mg: yes d: well we have her stabalized, but she is fading in and out of conciousness. b: oh no! do you know what's wrong? d: she was here earlier b/c of that accident... mg: yes? d: well did she tell you how bad the accident was? mg: the way she was talking, it sounded as if it was like a fender bender. d: no! it was very bad. her car flipped twice and the other driver was killed.

04-18-2001, 07:18 PM	#13
ssgoalie8 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 24, 2001 Location: maryland Posts: 282	alright i'm back -waiting room- (blair is looking through a magazine trying to take her mind off of jo, nat and tootie are sitting against the wall staring out into space, and mrs. g is pacing back and forth) (doctor walks in) d: polniaczek? mg: yes d: well we have her stabalized, but she is fading in and out of conciousness. b: oh no! do you know what's wrong? d: she was here earlier b/c of that accident... mg: yes? d: well did she tell you how bad the accident was? mg: the way she was talking, it sounded as if it was like a fender bender. d: no! it was very bad. her car flipped twice and the other driver was killed. mg: oh my b: but if she was here earlier and released...what happened? d: well, we've been talking x-rays and catscans. the problem seems to be internal bleeding. mainly from her stomach area. the reason she passed out was from the loss of blood mg: i should have listened to her. she said her stomach was bothering her. b: why did it take so long before she passed out? d: this type of injury can go unnoticed so easily n: what is the next step? d: right now the only option is surgery. t: well get to it! mg: tootie! t: sorry. d: i'll update you when we are done. b: please take care of jo! d: i will! mg: thank you doctor (doctor leaves) i wonder why jo didn't tell me how serious the accident was? b: she didn't want you to worry. n: well it didn't work. t: i'm sure she will be fine. mg: i hope so ------------------ jinny: who in the hell are you? ************* JO rocks!!!!!!!! *********** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! ************* AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

04-18-2001, 08:09 PM	#14
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	wwwoooooh-thats good! hehe

04-18-2001, 08:26 PM	#15
Jo_Polniaczek Professional Lurker Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 07, 2000 Location: The middle of Nowhere Posts: 783	This is soo gr8! More soon!?