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Jinny_Extead · 05-13-2001, 03:27 PM

Okay this might be totally stupid becuase I've never tried to write one before

Season 5-Edna's Edibles Natalie, Tootie and Blair are playing cards

Blair: Come on Jo, I need a bridge partner
Jo: No, I hate bridge
Tootie: Come on you can't play with 3 people
Jo: No
Natalie: Well what else are you going to do?
(Doorbell rings)
Jo: Answer the door
(Opens door)
Jo: Hello
Stone: Hello (Shows badge) I'm inspector Stone. Is a Joann Polnia...kek here?
Jo: Yeah, I'm Jo Polniaczech
Stone: May I come in?
Jo: Sure
Stone: I need to ask you a few questions regarding a friend of yours Jessy Olson. (I don't know her real last name but It's the Jessy from the episode New York New York.)
Jo: What do you want to know?
Stone: When was the last time you spoke to Jessy?
Jo: On the phone a week ago
Stone: Was she in a gang?
Jo: Yeah, but she said she wanted out.
Stone: Do you know the name of the leader of the gang?
Jo: Yeah, Razor.
Stone: Thank you that's all I need to know. Are you willing to testify in court that Jessy wanted out of the gang?
Jo: Yeah sure... why, what did Jessy do?
Stone: Well, I hate to tell you but she was murdered. We believe she was killed by this Razor. Goodbye, you'll be hearing from us soon.
Jo: Bye
(Shuts door)
Natalie: Oh Jo, I'm really sorry to hear about Jessy.
Jo: Yeah the scary thing is, before my mother dragged me out here to Peakskill I was about to join that very same gang. I'm going for a walk I'll be back.

(A few days later)
Mrs.G: So Jo, how did court go?
Jo: They convicted Razor of killing Jessy.
Mrs.G: You did a good thing testifiing today.
Jo: Yeah (phone rings) Hello
Male voice on the other end: Is this Jo?
Jo: Yeah, who wants to know?
Male: Lets just say I was a friend of Razor's and I know you testified against him... so I'd watch your back, because the rest of the gang is out for revenge.

~*~Should I keep going or not?~*~

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

callmetootie · 05-13-2001, 03:30 PM

You need to continue this story! It is so heart-pounding. And also, if anyone want to read another good fan-fic like this one, you should read mine: The Funeral and A Pot Story. Oh, and again, I love your story!

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Andrew Carden

ssgoalie8 · 05-13-2001, 03:54 PM

keep going this is good

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-colleen-
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jinny: who in the hell are you?
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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
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J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
***************
AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

Jo_Polniaczek · 05-13-2001, 04:39 PM

Keep going! This is so awsome!!!

Wild Child · 05-14-2001, 04:31 PM

This is really great! Although I do feel really bad for Jessy and Jo...poor Jo....But I'll live!

Keep going!

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

BlairW_1 · 05-14-2001, 06:00 PM

Great so far!!! I really can't wait 4 more! If you don't write more...
(Is that threat sinister enough? I'm not good at threats, because I'm not a violent person. Oh, you didn't just read that! I'm VERY unstable, so you'd better watch out!)
I'm hyper, I just got back from a piano lesson... Now, why did that make me hyper?

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In loving memory of Mrs. Delia Gray...

"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

"For the Lord is good, His mercy is everlasting, and His truth endures to all generations." Psalms 100:5

"For the Lord Himself will descend from heaven with a shout, with the voice of an archangel, and with the trumpet of God. And the dead in Christ will rise first.
Then we who are alive and remain shall be caught up together with them in the clouds to meet the Lord in the air. And thus we shall always be with the Lord." 1 Thessalonians 4:16,17

~*Danielle*~

Jinny_Extead · 05-14-2001, 06:53 PM

Thanks for your comments....

Mrs.G: Who was on the phone?
Jo: Oh nobody... just an old friend of mine
Mrs. G: Then why are you so pale?
Jo: Nerves, I have to go study. (runs upstairs)

-Two Hours Later-Door Bell Rings-
Blair: Hello
Chris: Is Jo there?
Blair: Yeah, just a second... JO!!!
Jo: Coming... Chris...hi
Blair: Well I'm off to the library, goodbye.
Jo:Bye
Chris: So Jo you remember me, right
Jo: Yeah you are, I mean were Razor's right hand man.
Chris: (Puts hand in pocket and pulls out a gun) I've got a proposition for you, die this very second, or join our gang... for life.

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*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

jofan4life · 05-14-2001, 09:29 PM

She is in trouble. lol Keep going this is getting really good.

Wild Child · 05-15-2001, 04:21 PM

This is sooooo good! You have to right more!Please...

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

05-13-2001, 03:27 PM	#1
Jinny_Extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 12, 2001 Location: Minnesota Posts: 156	New Fan Fic Okay this might be totally stupid becuase I've never tried to write one before Season 5-Edna's Edibles Natalie, Tootie and Blair are playing cards Blair: Come on Jo, I need a bridge partner Jo: No, I hate bridge Tootie: Come on you can't play with 3 people Jo: No Natalie: Well what else are you going to do? (Doorbell rings) Jo: Answer the door (Opens door) Jo: Hello Stone: Hello (Shows badge) I'm inspector Stone. Is a Joann Polnia...kek here? Jo: Yeah, I'm Jo Polniaczech Stone: May I come in? Jo: Sure Stone: I need to ask you a few questions regarding a friend of yours Jessy Olson. (I don't know her real last name but It's the Jessy from the episode New York New York.) Jo: What do you want to know? Stone: When was the last time you spoke to Jessy? Jo: On the phone a week ago Stone: Was she in a gang? Jo: Yeah, but she said she wanted out. Stone: Do you know the name of the leader of the gang? Jo: Yeah, Razor. Stone: Thank you that's all I need to know. Are you willing to testify in court that Jessy wanted out of the gang? Jo: Yeah sure... why, what did Jessy do? Stone: Well, I hate to tell you but she was murdered. We believe she was killed by this Razor. Goodbye, you'll be hearing from us soon. Jo: Bye (Shuts door) Natalie: Oh Jo, I'm really sorry to hear about Jessy. Jo: Yeah the scary thing is, before my mother dragged me out here to Peakskill I was about to join that very same gang. I'm going for a walk I'll be back. (A few days later) Mrs.G: So Jo, how did court go? Jo: They convicted Razor of killing Jessy. Mrs.G: You did a good thing testifiing today. Jo: Yeah (phone rings) Hello Male voice on the other end: Is this Jo? Jo: Yeah, who wants to know? Male: Lets just say I was a friend of Razor's and I know you testified against him... so I'd watch your back, because the rest of the gang is out for revenge. ~~Should I keep going or not?~~ ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~* Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas. Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there. ~~~~~~~~~~~~* Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine? Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

05-13-2001, 03:30 PM	#2
callmetootie Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Mar 06, 2001 Location: Clifton Park, NY Posts: 4,768	You need to continue this story! It is so heart-pounding. And also, if anyone want to read another good fan-fic like this one, you should read mine: The Funeral and A Pot Story. Oh, and again, I love your story! ------------------ Andrew Carden

05-13-2001, 03:54 PM	#3
ssgoalie8 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 24, 2001 Location: maryland Posts: 282	keep going this is good ------------------ -colleen- ************ jinny: who in the hell are you? *********** JO rocks!!!!!!!! *********** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! ************* AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

05-13-2001, 04:39 PM	#4
Jo_Polniaczek Professional Lurker Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 07, 2000 Location: The middle of Nowhere Posts: 783	Keep going! This is so awsome!!!

05-14-2001, 04:31 PM	#5
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	This is really great! Although I do feel really bad for Jessy and Jo...poor Jo....But I'll live! Keep going! ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!

05-14-2001, 06:00 PM	#6
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	Great so far!!! I really can't wait 4 more! If you don't write more... (Is that threat sinister enough? I'm not good at threats, because I'm not a violent person. Oh, you didn't just read that! I'm VERY unstable, so you'd better watch out!) I'm hyper, I just got back from a piano lesson... Now, why did that make me hyper? ------------------ In loving memory of Mrs. Delia Gray... "I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13 "For the Lord is good, His mercy is everlasting, and His truth endures to all generations." Psalms 100:5 "For the Lord Himself will descend from heaven with a shout, with the voice of an archangel, and with the trumpet of God. And the dead in Christ will rise first. Then we who are alive and remain shall be caught up together with them in the clouds to meet the Lord in the air. And thus we shall always be with the Lord." 1 Thessalonians 4:16,17 ~Danielle~

05-14-2001, 06:53 PM	#7
Jinny_Extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 12, 2001 Location: Minnesota Posts: 156	Thanks for your comments.... Mrs.G: Who was on the phone? Jo: Oh nobody... just an old friend of mine Mrs. G: Then why are you so pale? Jo: Nerves, I have to go study. (runs upstairs) -Two Hours Later-Door Bell Rings- Blair: Hello Chris: Is Jo there? Blair: Yeah, just a second... JO!!! Jo: Coming... Chris...hi Blair: Well I'm off to the library, goodbye. Jo:Bye Chris: So Jo you remember me, right Jo: Yeah you are, I mean were Razor's right hand man. Chris: (Puts hand in pocket and pulls out a gun) I've got a proposition for you, die this very second, or join our gang... for life. ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~* Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas. Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there. ~~~~~~~~~~~~* Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine? Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

05-14-2001, 09:29 PM	#8
jofan4life Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 03, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 102	She is in trouble. lol Keep going this is getting really good.

05-15-2001, 04:21 PM	#9
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	This is sooooo good! You have to right more!Please... ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!