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Ok here is mine, iceprincessjo's, and iceprincessnat's fan fic. this is our first fan fic and we're only 13 so it may not be too good. tell us what you think.I also suggest that you read our summary/whats been going on under the subject of "future fan fic" it would help you alot.
Friends Again?????? Doctors Office Doctor: Edna, the tests have come back and we still don’t know what you have. I’ll be honest with you by the way that you have been weak I don’t think you have too much longer to live. I’m very sorry. Over Our Heads/Beverly Ann’s and Mrs. Garret’s home Mrs. Garret: Beverly Ann I just wish that I had made my life more meaningful. Ba: Edna you raised 2 sons, basically raised 4 girls ran 2 stores, and you’ve joined the Peace Corps. Now if that isn’t meaningful I don’t know what is. Mg: Then how come I got married and divorced to a jerk, let my 2nd husband die, my sons are barely around, the store is failing, and the girls haven’t spoken to me or each other in 15 years? Ba: you know that your sons and the girls are very successful and without you who knows where they’d be. You also know that Bruce died of a stroke and there was nothing you could do about it. Mg: I just wish my girls were here. I’m going to go take a nap. Ba: (to herself) Beverly Ann you’ve just had the best idea ever. (She goes to the phone and starts dialing a number) |
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this goes along with iceprincessbliar's part.
Phone Conversation Jo: Hello Ba: Hi Jo it's Beverly Ann J: Hey it's been awhile. How's ya doin'? Mrs. G all right? Ba: Yeah we're both fine. Well I just wanted to see if maybe you could come up for a visit next week. I was also thinking about inviting the others? J: Well with everything that has happened I don't think that that would be a good idea. Maybe when everyone else isn't there I can come up. Ba: Well I could just have you girls up at different times you know. Please we've really missed ya? J: Well sure. How about next week. Ya know I'm a teacher and next week is off. Maybe I could bring my husband and daughter up. Ba: Sure that would be great. Can't wait to see you. Bye J: Bye (Phone conversation is over) |
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Ba: (to herself) 1 down 3 to go
Beverly Ann picks up phone to make another phone call Phone Conversation Blair: Hello Eastland School for Girls. Ba: Hi Blair this is Beverly Ann. B: Hey how’s it going? Everything all right? Ba: Everyone and everything is fine. I was just wondering if maybe you would like to come for a visit next week. I was thinking about inviting the other girls too. B: Um well I don’t think that would be too great after everything that happened. Ba: Well do you think that maybe you could just come up next week and the other girls probably feel the same so everyone could just come up at a different time. B: Well I have missed Mrs. Garrett and you so yeah I guess I could. Ba: Great I’ll see you soon. B: Alright bye. Oh yeah can I bring my husband and daughter. Ba: Sure. Bye Phone Conversation is over Ba: (to herself) As Blair would say, “I have another brilliant idea.” |
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It's good so far...Post more soon!
![]() ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!! |
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Yet another Phone Conversation Natalie: Hello Ba: Hi Nat this is Beverly Ann. N: Hey. Is everything all right? I haven't heard from you in awhile? Ba: Yes everything is fine. I was just wondering if maybe you could come and visit Edna and I. we've really missed you. N: Are the others going to be there cause if so I don't think that I should come. I wouldn't want my children to witness the aftermath of what happened before. Ba: No the others won't be here. N: ok then I can come. When would you want me to come? Ba: How about next week? N: Sure. My children and husband will come too. Ba: Ok bye. N: Bye see ya soon. Phone conversation over Ba: Yay, yay, yay. One more to go. Movie star time. |
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Another conversation
Tootie: Hello? Ba: Hi Tootie it’s Beverly Ann. T: Hey. How are you and Mrs. Garrett? Ba: We’re fine. I was calling to ask if maybe you would want to come up next week? T: I don’t know. Are the other girls going to be there? I don’t want to get blood on my perfect clothes. You know things around here are really expensive. Ba: They’re all coming different weeks so don’t worry. T: Alright. I think I can take time off for you and Mrs. Garret. Ba: Alright see you next week. T: Ok bye Ba: Bye. Phone conversation over. Ba: I am so smart!!! |
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Ok here's somemore. Please reply to it and tell us what you think.
The next week Ba: Edna it’s time to go. You need to get to the restraunt so that you don’t keep your friends waiting ok. Mg: For some reason I got a feeling you’re trying to get rid of me. Well anyway I’m about to leave. I’ll be back in a couple of hours. Well bye Ba: Bye have fun. Mrs. G leaves Ba: Now lets just hope this works. Someone knocks on the door Ba: One of them is already here. T: Beverly Ann!!!!! Gosh I’ve missed you. Ba: Tootie it’s so nice to see you. My goodness you haven’t changed much at all. Where’s your family? T: Oh they’re coming soon. They stopped for some gas. I just couldn’t wait to see you. Ba: So what has been going on in your life, you know besides the fact that you’re a big star? T: Oh well I have two children, I’m still married to Jeff. We live in California. That is about it. Well I am about to star in my own sitcom, which will be wonderful. Ba: I still can’t believe that you, our little Tootie, has grown up with her own family. T: Well where is Mrs. G. I’ve really missed her. I haven’t seen her in almost 20 years. Gosh I didn’t know it had been that long. Ba: She had to go somewhere but should be back real soon. T: Well I think my family just pulled up. Two children walk in with Jeff. T: Beverly Ann I would like for you to meet my family. This is Karl my son-he is 11 and this is my daughter Kristina-she is 13. And of course you remember Jeff. Children I would like for you to meet Beverly Ann. Kristina and Karl: Hi. Ba: Hi kids-you know you look just like your mother. Hi Jeff it’s been awhile hasn’t it? Jeff: Sure has. Well I think I’ll go to the hotel room and get our stuff unpacked. Ba: No you’ll stay here. We’ve got plenty of room. T: Are you sure-we wouldn’t want to impose? Ba: Sure. Jeff why don’t you take your stuff upstairs. Je: Sure Jeff goes upstairs and the kids follow him. T: Well I think I’ll go take a look around. Boy this place brings back some memories. Ba: Ok Tootie. I’ll stay down here and wait for Mrs. Garret to come back. Just then there is a knock at the door. Ba: (to herself) Ok then now two are here. Natalie walks in with a man and 2 children Natalie: Hi. Miss me much Ba: Oh Natalie you haven’t changed. Of course I missed you. And who are these people with you. N: Oh this is my husband, Eric, and these are my two children. Do you remember Cory? He is now 15 but when I left here he was probably about 3. Ba: oh yes I remember him. And who is this? N: oh this is my 13-year-old daughter Cara. Cara: Hi Cory: Hey how’s it goin’? Ba: Well Hi. N: children this is Beverly Ann. Tootie then comes downstairs T: Hey is that Mrs. Garrett? (She then notices Natalie is standing at the door) Beverly Ann what is she doing here? N: No what are you doing here, I was invited her for this week. T: well so was I. They both look at Beverly Ann expecting an explanation. Ba: Oh well looks like I double booked. (She says very unconvincingly) N: I don’t believe it. I’m leaving Goodbye. Nice seeing you. Tell Mrs. Garrett I said hi. Maybe I’ll call her. (She starts walking towards the door) Ba: No Natalie don’t leave. I invited you here so that you and Tootie could work through your differences. I know it will be tough but please. T: I’m leaving. Jeff go get the children we’ll fly back home. Je: No I think that this fight between you and Natalie has been going on long enough. I’ll take the children to lunch then to a park or something. Eric: I’m with him. Even though I never knew Tootie I think you should talk things out with her. The children and I will be back in a while. N: what you can’t do this to me. T: I’ll just call a cab. Ba: Oh no you won’t you are both going to sit here like adults and talk this out. Eric, Jeff and their kids leave. N: Beverly Ann how could you do this to me? T: trust me Natalie I don’t like it either but we won’t be able to get out of here. Ba: Well I’ll just wait for the others to come. N: others, as in Blair and Jo? Ba: Well yeah. I invited them too. T: oh boy there is going to be trouble. N: Oh yeah. I hope my children don’t come back for a while. I don’t want them to see a murder take place. Just then there was a knock at the door. Ba: Well it looks like one of them is here. Girls go get in the kitchen so I can explain this to them ok. T: I’ll go upstairs. N: I’ll go in the kitchen. They both leave for their destinations. Beverly Ann answers the door. Jo comes in with a child and a man. Jo: Hey Beverly Ann. How ya doin’? Ba: Pretty good. Well this must be your family. J: Yeah. This is my husband Chris and this is my daughter Jackie. Ba: Hi. Gosh Jackie you look just like your mother. Jackie: Hey how’s it hangin’? Ba: Act like her too. It’s hangin’ just fine. Chris: Hi Beverly Ann. I’ve heard a lot about you. Ba: Hi. I haven’t heard much about you but I’m sure I will. J: So where’s Mrs. G? Ba: Oh she had to go somewhere but she should be back soon. we'll post more later. |
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I think it was a very good story, only that I (Krissy) was very spoiled with the expensive clothes and stuff. But it was a good story, can't wait to hear the end!
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I can't wait to read more and find out what happened! Post more soon please!
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I like it so far. I am excited to see what will come next!
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you asked for more and here it is:
J: Oh ok. Well I think I'll go upstairs and get settled in ya know. Ba: Um why don't you go and just look around in the store, show Jackie where you used to work. J: Um yeah sure. Come on Jackie Ja: KO I'm coming. Ba: Ok well I'll just stay in here and wait for Edna. You know your way around. J: I lived her for like forever so I think I would. Ba: Well ok. I would actually like to get acquainted with Chris so Chris why don't you stay in here and talk to me. C: Ok Jo and Jackie leave for the store. Ba: Chris I don't know if you know anything about what had gone on before but I need your help. C: Well if you're talking about Blair and the others fight I know about it. Ba: Well good. I've done something. I've invited the other girls here so that they could talk out their problems. It's really important. Could you take Jackie out for a while? C: Yeah sure. Ba: Oh thank you so much. C: Your welcome. Jo and Jackie come back in J: Well we've been around so I think we should go upstairs now. C: Well I just remembered that I forgot to get some shaving cream so I'll go to the store and get some. Jackie you wanna come with me. Ja: Yeah sure Chris. J: Ok but hurry back. C: OK bye Chris and Jackie leave Ba: Well Jo I've kinda got something to tell you. Why don't you sit down? J: ok sure what is it? Ba: Well I kinda invited Blair, Natalie, and Tootie here so that you could talk out your problem. Please don't kill me. (She says all of this really fast) J: You what?!?!? I can't believe this I'm leaving. Ba: Chris took your car and should be gone for a while cause I told him to stay gone for a while. Now why don't you go on upstairs? Tootie is there. J: OK but I ain't talking about nothing. I'm leaving as soon as Chris gets back here you understand that. Ba: OK just go upstairs. Jo goes upstairs. Ba: She took that better than I expected it. |
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here's some more. tell us what you think.
Just then Blair comes right through the door with out even knocking. She has a man and child with her. B: Hey Beverly Ann. Ba: Blair!!!!! How are you? And who might these people be? B: I’m fine. This is my husband Chris and my Daughter She gets interrupted Laura Beth: I’m her daughter Laura Beth Warner. It’s pleasure to meet you. Ba: well it’s nice to meet you too. B: Well where is Mrs. Garrett? Ba: Well she had to go somewhere but should be back soon. B: OH ok. Well we better get settled in. Matt I’ll show you where to put our luggage. Ba: Blair whats the rush? Do that later. Why don’t you show Laura Beth the store? There should be some cookies in there. B: OK. Matt we’ll be right back. Come on Laura Beth. LB: I’m coming. Blair and Laura Beth leave B: Matt why don’t you and I get more acquanted? M: Ok. Ba: Matt I need to ask you something M: What is it? Ba: Well I don’t know how much you know about an argument that happened between Blair and some friends. M: well I know that there was one and that is about it. Ba: Well it’s not important what is was about but I’ve invited the other girls here and I want them to talk out their problems. Do you think that maybe you could take Laura Beth out for a while. M: Sure. I’ve been wanting to get more acquainted with her. I’m only her step-dad. Ba: OH thank you. Blair and Laura Beth return M: Laura Beth why don’t you and I go to Bloomingdales? LB: That’s a stupid question. Let’s go come on hurry up. B: why are you taking her out? We just got here. M: well I think I need to spend more time with her. You and Beverly Ann need to catch up on some things anyways. B: Well ok. Just then Laura Beth tries to pull Matt out the door LB: Ok enough yappin’ more spendin’. Let’s go. Mother I’ve got your credit cards we’ll be gone for awhile. B: OK Bye. Have fun Matt was already pulled out the door by then Ba: HaHa just like her mother. Jo and tootie come down from upstairs J: Hey I’m coming down now. (she then notices Blair) Ok I’m going back up. B: What is she doing here. I’m leaving. Ba: Blair I kinda scheduled for Jo, Tootie, and Natalie to be here too. B: You what?!?!? That’s it goodbye. Ba: Blair you have no way home. Matt just left. B: well when he gets back I’m leaving Ba: Blair and everyone else I called you here because Mrs. Garret and I really miss you and this arguement has been going on long enough. Now I want you to sit down and talk it out. They all sit down but are silient. Ba: Well who wants to go first? they are still silent. We'll post more soon |
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hey i just wanted to tell everyone that my friend (iceprincessblair) messed up while she was typing she put the name chris when she was telling beverly ann who her husband (in the story)was when it should have been matt. alright i just wanted to post this so you all don't get to confused.
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great cant wait to read more!!!!!!
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