"Goodbye Everything" (Not a fan fiction - but a really sad poem..) - Sitcoms Online Message Boards

BlairW_2 · 04-07-2001, 09:29 PM

Okay, this is supposed to be a letter Jo wrote to Blair in Blair's dream after Jo died in her motorcycle accident that she was supposed to (they said she was gonna). This isn't a fan fiction but its a poem I wrote that is extremely emotional. Well, I hope you like it!
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Dear Blair,
Hi. It's Jo. I'm sure you heard about the crash.
I don't know how it happened - I wish my life could have last.
I was driving one night, all was fine. Until I heard a car.
I turned my head and lost control, hands off the steering bar.
I heard a loud crash, and then saw a light.
The light made it as though it wasn't even night.
I knew what had happened, but not where I was.
Was I in heaven? What was the buzz?
I then felt something. Something stange.
It was serious - nothing like a game.
I saw many flashbacks, of you and I.
I tried to avoid them, yes, I did try!
Because I knew I'd break in tears.
I am gone, I thought, after all those years.
I couldn't resist, so looked at them straight.
There were the times of cheerfullness, and even of hate.
I saw the day you and I met. And the 'best friend forever' promise we both kept.
I saw our Eastland School Graduation.
When we got our diplomas, I felt like we were in front of the nation!
I then saw all the aruguments and fights.
Remember when we stayed up late at night?
Remember when you were in your car crash?
Well, when you think of it, at least you did last.
I wanted many things, in my life.
Not only to be a normal house wife.
I wanted some children, one or two of them.
I wanted to smile at them, tuck them in bed.
I wanted to be able to tell stories of my life.
Not the painful ones, of pain and the strife.
I wanted to say "I remember those days!". When I would tell my grandkids the games I would play.
I wanted more time to enjoy my life.
I didn't know how quick, how fast it would fly.
I wanted to talk, about our past issues.
Maybe shed one or two tears on a tissue?
I wanted more time to be with Rick.
Remember he came dressed up as a chick?
I wanted to see you. See you all.
Tootie, Natalie, Mrs. G..you guys would pick me up when I'd fall.
Right now I am in heaven, I will be til then.
The day when we all will meet once again.
I really miss you, I do miss you all.
I wanted to see you, sometime this fall.
Right now I am crying - you probably are too.
You all probably did when you heard the bad news.
Out of them all, all the ones.
Your my best friend, though my life is done.
I will never forget you, not once at all.
You were a big part in my life, though it was small.
I have to go now. My time has come.
To say my goodbyes, to you and other ones I loved.
It is hard to do it, especially to you.
You helped me til my problems were through.
Now we must both start again. Something thats new.
A spiritual friendship, forever until.
I want to say sorry that I was killed.
I hope you heard me, my message is done.
Why was I God's chosen one?
Well, I am going. My time has come.
None of what happened can become undone.
Goodbye my best friend,
Goodbye everything.

~ The End ~

Well, how was it?

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NancyJoJinny · 04-07-2001, 09:52 PM

Yup you were right it was sad...But i liked it alot...loved it.

Jo_Polniaczek · 04-07-2001, 10:25 PM

OMG, I loved it!! I had tears in my eyes!

[This message has been edited by Jo_Polniaczek (edited 04-07-2001).]

FOL-FAN · 04-07-2001, 11:09 PM

WOW! That WAS sad! I was crying like a baby when I was done

Jo's Girl · 04-07-2001, 11:32 PM

Sad...but wonderful!!! I loved it!!!

FolFanatic151 · 04-08-2001, 03:11 PM

Wow...that was good.

ZeldaGilroy · 04-13-2001, 09:38 PM

You have a real talent for poetry! Wonderful jub!

Jo_Po · 04-14-2001, 12:16 AM

Wow, that was so sad, but it was so good! Great job!

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Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "I hate it when you do that!"
Blair: "What?"
Jo: "Sigh!"
Blair: "I don't sigh!"
Jo: "Well if it isn't a sigh you've got a slow leak!"
Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "You did it again!"
Blair: "That's called breathing."
Jo: "You do it just to annoy me!"
Blair: "No,I do it to keep from dieing."
Jo: "Now there's an idea!!"
~Steph

04-07-2001, 09:29 PM	#1
BlairW_2 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: New Jersey Posts: 860	"Goodbye Everything" (Not a fan fiction - but a really sad poem..) Okay, this is supposed to be a letter Jo wrote to Blair in Blair's dream after Jo died in her motorcycle accident that she was supposed to (they said she was gonna). This isn't a fan fiction but its a poem I wrote that is extremely emotional. Well, I hope you like it! ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Dear Blair, Hi. It's Jo. I'm sure you heard about the crash. I don't know how it happened - I wish my life could have last. I was driving one night, all was fine. Until I heard a car. I turned my head and lost control, hands off the steering bar. I heard a loud crash, and then saw a light. The light made it as though it wasn't even night. I knew what had happened, but not where I was. Was I in heaven? What was the buzz? I then felt something. Something stange. It was serious - nothing like a game. I saw many flashbacks, of you and I. I tried to avoid them, yes, I did try! Because I knew I'd break in tears. I am gone, I thought, after all those years. I couldn't resist, so looked at them straight. There were the times of cheerfullness, and even of hate. I saw the day you and I met. And the 'best friend forever' promise we both kept. I saw our Eastland School Graduation. When we got our diplomas, I felt like we were in front of the nation! I then saw all the aruguments and fights. Remember when we stayed up late at night? Remember when you were in your car crash? Well, when you think of it, at least you did last. I wanted many things, in my life. Not only to be a normal house wife. I wanted some children, one or two of them. I wanted to smile at them, tuck them in bed. I wanted to be able to tell stories of my life. Not the painful ones, of pain and the strife. I wanted to say "I remember those days!". When I would tell my grandkids the games I would play. I wanted more time to enjoy my life. I didn't know how quick, how fast it would fly. I wanted to talk, about our past issues. Maybe shed one or two tears on a tissue? I wanted more time to be with Rick. Remember he came dressed up as a chick? I wanted to see you. See you all. Tootie, Natalie, Mrs. G..you guys would pick me up when I'd fall. Right now I am in heaven, I will be til then. The day when we all will meet once again. I really miss you, I do miss you all. I wanted to see you, sometime this fall. Right now I am crying - you probably are too. You all probably did when you heard the bad news. Out of them all, all the ones. Your my best friend, though my life is done. I will never forget you, not once at all. You were a big part in my life, though it was small. I have to go now. My time has come. To say my goodbyes, to you and other ones I loved. It is hard to do it, especially to you. You helped me til my problems were through. Now we must both start again. Something thats new. A spiritual friendship, forever until. I want to say sorry that I was killed. I hope you heard me, my message is done. Why was I God's chosen one? Well, I am going. My time has come. None of what happened can become undone. Goodbye my best friend, Goodbye everything. ~ The End ~ Well, how was it? ------------------ -Contact Me- Instant Message me at: Yankees7124 Email me at: BlairRules2@hotmail.com

04-07-2001, 09:52 PM	#2
NancyJoJinny Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 04, 2001 Location: Nancy Land, NJ. Posts: 989	Yup you were right it was sad...But i liked it alot...loved it.

04-07-2001, 10:25 PM	#3
Jo_Polniaczek Professional Lurker Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 07, 2000 Location: The middle of Nowhere Posts: 783	OMG, I loved it!! I had tears in my eyes! [This message has been edited by Jo_Polniaczek (edited 04-07-2001).]

04-07-2001, 11:09 PM	#4
FOL-FAN Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 05, 2001 Posts: 434	WOW! That WAS sad! I was crying like a baby when I was done

04-07-2001, 11:32 PM	#5
Jo's Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 30, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 296	Sad...but wonderful!!! I loved it!!!

04-08-2001, 03:11 PM	#6
FolFanatic151 Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 01, 2001 Posts: 1,019	Wow...that was good.

04-13-2001, 09:38 PM	#7
ZeldaGilroy Dobie and Zelda Forever!!! Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Nov 14, 2000 Location: I don't know...I'm probably lost! Posts: 4,144	You have a real talent for poetry! Wonderful jub!

04-14-2001, 12:16 AM	#8
Jo_Po Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Oct 29, 2000 Location: Michigan, USA Posts: 96	Wow, that was so sad, but it was so good! Great job! ------------------ Blair: (sighs) Jo: "I hate it when you do that!" Blair: "What?" Jo: "Sigh!" Blair: "I don't sigh!" Jo: "Well if it isn't a sigh you've got a slow leak!" Blair: (sighs) Jo: "You did it again!" Blair: "That's called breathing." Jo: "You do it just to annoy me!" Blair: "No,I do it to keep from dieing." Jo: "Now there's an idea!!" ~Steph