"The Funeral" (the follow up to What May come) Intro - Sitcoms Online Message Boards

Polniaczek-Bonner · 03-27-2001, 05:13 PM

I'm glad that you all liked my first fanfic. And if anyone wants to do a joint one, you can e-mail me at ray1324@mediaone.net, or talk to me online at BikerGirl182. Anyway, here's the introduction to my next fanfic. It just tells whats been happinging. I wrote this during history, while listening to a speach about Martian Van Buren, so it might be a little off....but i hope it's good.

It had been three days since Jo died. They were the longest three days that everyone had ever experinced. Especially Blair, Nat, Tootie, and Mrs.G. They would cry on and off for hours at a time. Ashley, Julia, and Emily went back to their normal lives, or at least tried. The had never seen their parents so sad. Andy and Pipa were doing better,too. They were busy packing and moving their stuff to their new appartment across town. Of corse everytime they found something of their past, they started to cry. Bev was busy taking care of everything around the house, because Mrs.G wasn't up to it. Bev was being pretty strong, except when she saw Ricki. Then she would lose it too. Rick wasn't around much. He would pop in every few hours to check on everything, and to make plans for the funeral. Ricki spent a lot of time with Eddie and Jr, and learned a lot about her mother she didn't know. Secret stuff. She looked at her ring every once and a while, and thats when she would cry. Then when she cried, Eddie did, and Jr calmed them down. Everone was also trying to figure out what was going to happen to Ricki. Rick couldn't take care of her because he was getting married in a few days. Blair wanted to adopt her, but Ricki said no. So they are still thinking, but have decided that the funeral will be the day before Rick's wedding, which is in 4 days. Now Ricki, Ashley, Julia, Emily, and Jr are in the living room watching a movie. Blair, Nat, Tootie, Bev, Mrs.G, Eddie, and Rick went to look at funeral homes. Andy and Pipa are upstairs packing.

Ok, so what do you think so far? Now i'm going to start it. This was only the intro.

BlairandJo · 03-27-2001, 05:19 PM

great so far,I'd love to do a joint fan fiction,But I can't start till I finish Brooke's Friend,Its almost done,If You let me do one with you we could start right after
I finish Brooke's Friend.Let me Know.

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The rest of Brooke's friend is coming soon,keep looking.
The Facts Of Life Rules!!
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N:I can't belive it!
J:Well you did'nt have to yell!
N:Well I was mad!!!
J:A library Is like a church you are suppose to be nice and Quiet!!!!
B:SSSSHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
J:Take a hike.

FOL-FAN · 03-27-2001, 05:26 PM

So far so good

Wild Child · 03-27-2001, 05:40 PM

It sounds great!I can't wait to read it....Only one question.Will I need more tissues for the funeral?

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

KerriBerri687 · 03-27-2001, 06:34 PM

awsome! can't wait for more!

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Luv yaz!
~Kerri~
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LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-27-2001, 07:41 PM

great cant wait for more!!!

lil_Miss_actress · 03-27-2001, 09:46 PM

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Originally posted by Wild Child:
It sounds great!I can't wait to read it....Only one question.Will I need more tissues for the funeral?

I know! I've cried sooo much today while reading these fan fics! We need a warning *Caution May Produce Tears*
j/k~
Jessica

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So things change your born, you move on, you die-thats life!- Jo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Jinny: And little red blew the big bad wolf's big hairy butt to smitheriens!
Magna: Thanks alot Jinny..
Jinny:And they all lived happliy ever after..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ C.D: Why don't you let me talk to her? Jinny: What's that about!? C.D: Jinny, She just needs a little coddling right now.. (leaves) Jinny: I can "Coddle"
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"Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead

Exstead · 03-29-2001, 08:28 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Wild Child:
It sounds great!I can't wait to read it....Only one question.Will I need more tissues for the funeral?

That Speaks for me!!!!

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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.

~Exstead~

james_baby87 · 07-30-2002, 04:24 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Wild Child
It sounds great!I can't wait to read it....Only one question.Will I need more tissues for the funeral?

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

I got the same question

Impressions · 07-30-2002, 04:32 PM

That is very sad, I'd hate that to be in the show it would be to depressing, maybe in a spin-off, that was very good, I really like to hear the rest of it!

They don't call me the leaky faucet for nothing, lol.

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-31-2002, 10:51 AM

It sounds awesome so far! I can't wait to read it! You truly have a TON of talent!

07-31-2002, 10:51 AM	#11
BonniesLilCutiePie Ivy Winthrop Crane Senior Member Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,742	It sounds awesome so far! I can't wait to read it! You truly have a TON of talent!
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03-27-2001, 05:13 PM	#1
Polniaczek-Bonner Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 07, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 265	"The Funeral" (the follow up to What May come) Intro I'm glad that you all liked my first fanfic. And if anyone wants to do a joint one, you can e-mail me at ray1324@mediaone.net, or talk to me online at BikerGirl182. Anyway, here's the introduction to my next fanfic. It just tells whats been happinging. I wrote this during history, while listening to a speach about Martian Van Buren, so it might be a little off....but i hope it's good. It had been three days since Jo died. They were the longest three days that everyone had ever experinced. Especially Blair, Nat, Tootie, and Mrs.G. They would cry on and off for hours at a time. Ashley, Julia, and Emily went back to their normal lives, or at least tried. The had never seen their parents so sad. Andy and Pipa were doing better,too. They were busy packing and moving their stuff to their new appartment across town. Of corse everytime they found something of their past, they started to cry. Bev was busy taking care of everything around the house, because Mrs.G wasn't up to it. Bev was being pretty strong, except when she saw Ricki. Then she would lose it too. Rick wasn't around much. He would pop in every few hours to check on everything, and to make plans for the funeral. Ricki spent a lot of time with Eddie and Jr, and learned a lot about her mother she didn't know. Secret stuff. She looked at her ring every once and a while, and thats when she would cry. Then when she cried, Eddie did, and Jr calmed them down. Everone was also trying to figure out what was going to happen to Ricki. Rick couldn't take care of her because he was getting married in a few days. Blair wanted to adopt her, but Ricki said no. So they are still thinking, but have decided that the funeral will be the day before Rick's wedding, which is in 4 days. Now Ricki, Ashley, Julia, Emily, and Jr are in the living room watching a movie. Blair, Nat, Tootie, Bev, Mrs.G, Eddie, and Rick went to look at funeral homes. Andy and Pipa are upstairs packing. Ok, so what do you think so far? Now i'm going to start it. This was only the intro.

03-27-2001, 05:19 PM	#2
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	great so far,I'd love to do a joint fan fiction,But I can't start till I finish Brooke's Friend,Its almost done,If You let me do one with you we could start right after I finish Brooke's Friend.Let me Know. ------------------ The rest of Brooke's friend is coming soon,keep looking. The Facts Of Life Rules!! ************************* N:I can't belive it! J:Well you did'nt have to yell! N:Well I was mad!!! J:A library Is like a church you are suppose to be nice and Quiet!!!! B:SSSSHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! J:Take a hike.

03-27-2001, 05:26 PM	#3
FOL-FAN Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 05, 2001 Posts: 434	So far so good

03-27-2001, 05:40 PM	#4
Wild Child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Feb 15, 2001 Location: Elmira,NY,USA Posts: 724	It sounds great!I can't wait to read it....Only one question.Will I need more tissues for the funeral? ------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!!

03-27-2001, 06:34 PM	#5
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	awsome! can't wait for more! ------------------ <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Luv yaz! ~Kerri~ Pal2125@aol.com

03-27-2001, 07:41 PM	#6
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	great cant wait for more!!!

07-30-2002, 04:32 PM	#10
Impressions She died the way she lived Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: May 08, 2002 Posts: 4,640	That is very sad, I'd hate that to be in the show it would be to depressing, maybe in a spin-off, that was very good, I really like to hear the rest of it! They don't call me the leaky faucet for nothing, lol.