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jofan4life · 03-12-2001, 08:17 PM

Okay here it is…
Out of Breath
Takes place in the Eastland years

(Mrs. Garret is in the Cafeteria setting up for dinner when Jo startles her)
J- Hey Mrs. G!!!
MG- Hey Jo! How was practice?
J- Great! I hit 3 home runs. We are definitely gonna win that game.
MG- That’s great Jo! I am so glad you decided to sign up for softball
J- Me either.
(Blair comes walking in)
B- Hello all!
MG- Hey Blair!
J- Hey Blair!
B- (Surprised Jo actually said Hi to her w/o saying some mean remark about her good looks) What are you so happy about? Did you win the Miss Goodwrench contest?
J- (Laughs) Oh Blair…Blair, Blair, Blair, Blair, Blair how do you come up with such funny remarks.
B- Well…(begins to giggle) You know how witty I am.
J- (Laughs with Blair then frowns and holds up a fist) You ever say that again you are going to loose your wittyness!
B- (Backs off Jo and walks into the lounge to work on her homework)
J- Well I got to go. The team wants to take me out to eat for a victory party.
MG- Victory party?! You haven’t even had the game yet. Aren’t you getting your hopes a little too high?
J- Mrs. G, We aren’t hoping to win we know we are going to win and I am going to win the game for them. Well see ya later Mrs. G (Walks out of the room)
MG- (Worried look on her face) I think I’ve created a monster.
(The next day at the big game Blair Mrs. Garret Tootie and Natalie are sitting on the bleachers)
B- I hope this game ends soon these flies are bugging the heck out of me.
T&N- (Look at Blair and roll their eyes)
MG- Oh goodie the game is starting!
T&N&B- (Look as Mrs. G and start laughing)
T- Oh look Jo is hitting first.
N- Oh its going over the fence!!!!!!!!
(((Crowd cheers))))
MG- Wow look at her run! She is going to be tired.
B- Ugh! Look at all that dirt flying.
T- Blair would you hush! (Interupted by cheers) She made it home!!!!!!! Woohoo!!!! GO JO!!!!!!!!
N- Uh oh she just fell over she doesn’t look good. Mrs. Garret is she okay? Mrs. Garret?! (Turns to see Mrs. G isn’t in her seat)
MG- (Pushes through the crowd to see Jo gasping for air) Jo! Jo what’s wrong?!
J- (Face is pale and she is crying and gasping for air) Mrs.….G…can’t…b…breath
MG- Someone call 911!!!!!
N- I will!
(((((Later in the emergency room)))))
D- Mrs. G?
MG- That’s me. My real name is Edna Garret. Is she okay?
D- Yes she will be fine she just had a minor asthma attack.
B- (Stands up quickly) Asthma?!
D- Yes um… she doesn’t know yet but I figured one of you might want to tell her.
MG- Okay thank you doctor.
D- Just doing my job.
MG- I guess I’ll go tell Jo.
(Mrs. G walks into Jo’s room)
MG- Hi Jo! How ya feeling?
J- Fine now. What happened to me at the game?
MG- Well…Jo you had an asthma attack.
J- Asthma?! I don’t have asthma how could I have an asthma attack.
MG- Well that’s the thing Jo you do have asthma. But it isn’t that big a deal.
J- Are you kidding?! I am going to have to take inhalers and my team is going to think I’m a nerd!
MG- Just because you have asthma doesn’t mean you’re a nerd. Jo I am sure your friends won’t care. Blair, Tootie, and Natalie don’t think you’re a nerd. But I guess they aren’t important.
J- Of course they are! But what about baseball? I can’t play anymore can I?
MG- Of course you can. All you have to do is take an inhaler. Nothing is going to change.
J- If you say so.
(A week later)
MG- Jo did you take your inhaler?
J- Yeah.(Walks upstairs)
B- Hey Jo you forgot to take your inhaler.
J- I know and I don’t intend to take it anyways.
B- You better. Jo you have practice today and what if you have another asthma attack.
J- Blair don’t worry I’ll be fine. I hate taking that stupid inhaler. I don’t people to think any different of me so I just won’t use it. I haven’t taken it for three days and I haven’t hadan asthma attack yet.
B- Jo just because you have asthma doesn’t mean you are a nerd. Lots of people have asthma. I know it isn’t great but if you don’t use that inhaler you can die!
J- Blair I know what I am doing! I gotta go to practice bye! (Walks out of the room and leaves for practice)
B- I better talk to Mrs. G.
MG- (Hears Blair) Talk to me about what?
B- (Jumps after hearing Mrs. G) Oh nothing.
MG- Blair spit it out!
B- Oh alright. Mrs Garret, Jo isn’t taking her inhaler. She hasn’t been for the past three days.
MG- What?! We have got to talk to her and fast. Come on! (Grabs Blair heads toward the baseball field)
J- (Sees Blair and Mrs. G) Uh oh! Coach! Um…I gotta go bye!
C- Alright! Great job today Jo!
MG- (Runs up to the coach) Where is Jo?
C- She said she had to go.
MG- (Very angry) When I get my hands on that girl…(Sees everyone is looking at her) I am going to give her a big hug. (Starts to laugh)
B-I bet I know where she is. Come on!
J- (Is at the mall. She sees a lot of people smoking but doesn’t remember that smoke can trigger an asthma attack and continues to walk right through the smoke. She begins to cough and can’t stop a man walks up to her)
Man- Are you okay?
J- (Shakes her head no)
Man- Someone get help!
(Later a doctor arrives and helps Jo)
J- Thanks doc.
D- No problem. It is a good thing that man saw you. You might have died.
J- (Thinks of what Blair said)
B- (Runs up to Jo and sees a doctor by her) Jo?! Are you okay?
J- Yeah. I’m fine now. Where’s Mrs. G?
B- She couldn’t run she should be coming any minute now.
(Sure enough Blair was right)
MG- JO! (Out of breath from running up to her) If you ever ever do that again.
J- Look Mrs. Garret I learned my lesson. It will never happen again.
D- Mrs. Garret Jo could have died if a man at the mall didn’t notice her. The smoke from the cigarettes triggered the attack.
MG- (Pale at the thought) Alright thank you doctor. As for you Jo…you better use this right now!!!!! (Pulls out the inhaler)
J- (Smiles) I would be glad to.
******The End******
There. I don’t know much about asthma but I don’t think there were any mistakes. Well please post your replys.

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Marsh~Mallow
Quotes said by Jo (my fav character)
Your born You move on You die
Thats life
There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shovin
I thought you liked me in that way that you like somebody when you like them in that way
You're so stupid you couldnt spell IQ
I hate teaching people how to drive;they're nervous, they make mistakes, and they cry when you slap them
Here's to all who wish me well and all the rest can go to...
Jersey

jofan4life · 03-12-2001, 08:19 PM

Well I just noticed my first mistake.lol! I put baseball instead of softball . Sorry about that.

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Marsh~Mallow
Quotes said by Jo (my fav character)
Your born You move on You die
Thats life
There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shovin
I thought you liked me in that way that you like somebody when you like them in that way
You're so stupid you couldnt spell IQ
I hate teaching people how to drive;they're nervous, they make mistakes, and they cry when you slap them
Here's to all who wish me well and all the rest can go to...
Jersey

ssgoalie8 · 03-12-2001, 08:23 PM

i loved it jo is my fav. too
-colleen-

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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
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J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
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AIM ssgoalie8

Lisa,Blair,GoodGirl · 03-12-2001, 08:23 PM

I love it,Thats ok in my new fan fic I put you instead of your.GREAT FAN FICTION I loved it.

lesliem14 · 03-12-2001, 10:17 PM

It was good and speaking from the point of having several teammates who have asthma you were basically accurate.

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-13-2001, 04:46 PM

that was erally good and also i know what the team mates and people must have felt when she fainted because a girl on my hockey team a couple years ago had an asema attack and it was scary

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T: Natalie that is not how the game is played!
N: Canadian Rules!
*~Katie~*

Love The Facts Of Life · 03-13-2001, 08:36 PM

That was great.I have asthma one time it got me out of gym for a week

and it just happened to be the week I got put on the kickball team w/ no one I knew

Sorry for rambling on so.

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Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points.
Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law.

Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out.
Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

james_baby87 · 08-22-2002, 02:35 PM

That was a great fan fic. and you were pretty acutate on the asthma stuff. I have astma myself and I always scare the crap outta my friends and family with it.

Swimfan85 · 08-23-2002, 11:39 AM

for a few weeks I thought I had ashema because when I played sports my chest would hurt and when ever I breathed but then I realiezed I was sick

lol but your fan fic is awesome!!!!!

james_baby87 · 08-23-2002, 12:49 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by hockeybabe528
for a few weeks I thought I had ashema because when I played sports my chest would hurt and when ever I breathed but then I realiezed I was sick lol but your fan fic is awesome!!!!!

I figured out I had asthma that way

03-12-2001, 08:17 PM	#1
jofan4life Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 03, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 102	Out of Breath (New Fan Fiction) Okay here it is… Out of Breath Takes place in the Eastland years (Mrs. Garret is in the Cafeteria setting up for dinner when Jo startles her) J- Hey Mrs. G!!! MG- Hey Jo! How was practice? J- Great! I hit 3 home runs. We are definitely gonna win that game. MG- That’s great Jo! I am so glad you decided to sign up for softball J- Me either. (Blair comes walking in) B- Hello all! MG- Hey Blair! J- Hey Blair! B- (Surprised Jo actually said Hi to her w/o saying some mean remark about her good looks) What are you so happy about? Did you win the Miss Goodwrench contest? J- (Laughs) Oh Blair…Blair, Blair, Blair, Blair, Blair how do you come up with such funny remarks. B- Well…(begins to giggle) You know how witty I am. J- (Laughs with Blair then frowns and holds up a fist) You ever say that again you are going to loose your wittyness! B- (Backs off Jo and walks into the lounge to work on her homework) J- Well I got to go. The team wants to take me out to eat for a victory party. MG- Victory party?! You haven’t even had the game yet. Aren’t you getting your hopes a little too high? J- Mrs. G, We aren’t hoping to win we know we are going to win and I am going to win the game for them. Well see ya later Mrs. G (Walks out of the room) MG- (Worried look on her face) I think I’ve created a monster. (The next day at the big game Blair Mrs. Garret Tootie and Natalie are sitting on the bleachers) B- I hope this game ends soon these flies are bugging the heck out of me. T&N- (Look at Blair and roll their eyes) MG- Oh goodie the game is starting! T&N&B- (Look as Mrs. G and start laughing) T- Oh look Jo is hitting first. N- Oh its going over the fence!!!!!!!! (((Crowd cheers)))) MG- Wow look at her run! She is going to be tired. B- Ugh! Look at all that dirt flying. T- Blair would you hush! (Interupted by cheers) She made it home!!!!!!! Woohoo!!!! GO JO!!!!!!!! N- Uh oh she just fell over she doesn’t look good. Mrs. Garret is she okay? Mrs. Garret?! (Turns to see Mrs. G isn’t in her seat) MG- (Pushes through the crowd to see Jo gasping for air) Jo! Jo what’s wrong?! J- (Face is pale and she is crying and gasping for air) Mrs.….G…can’t…b…breath MG- Someone call 911!!!!! N- I will! (((((Later in the emergency room))))) D- Mrs. G? MG- That’s me. My real name is Edna Garret. Is she okay? D- Yes she will be fine she just had a minor asthma attack. B- (Stands up quickly) Asthma?! D- Yes um… she doesn’t know yet but I figured one of you might want to tell her. MG- Okay thank you doctor. D- Just doing my job. MG- I guess I’ll go tell Jo. (Mrs. G walks into Jo’s room) MG- Hi Jo! How ya feeling? J- Fine now. What happened to me at the game? MG- Well…Jo you had an asthma attack. J- Asthma?! I don’t have asthma how could I have an asthma attack. MG- Well that’s the thing Jo you do have asthma. But it isn’t that big a deal. J- Are you kidding?! I am going to have to take inhalers and my team is going to think I’m a nerd! MG- Just because you have asthma doesn’t mean you’re a nerd. Jo I am sure your friends won’t care. Blair, Tootie, and Natalie don’t think you’re a nerd. But I guess they aren’t important. J- Of course they are! But what about baseball? I can’t play anymore can I? MG- Of course you can. All you have to do is take an inhaler. Nothing is going to change. J- If you say so. (A week later) MG- Jo did you take your inhaler? J- Yeah.(Walks upstairs) B- Hey Jo you forgot to take your inhaler. J- I know and I don’t intend to take it anyways. B- You better. Jo you have practice today and what if you have another asthma attack. J- Blair don’t worry I’ll be fine. I hate taking that stupid inhaler. I don’t people to think any different of me so I just won’t use it. I haven’t taken it for three days and I haven’t hadan asthma attack yet. B- Jo just because you have asthma doesn’t mean you are a nerd. Lots of people have asthma. I know it isn’t great but if you don’t use that inhaler you can die! J- Blair I know what I am doing! I gotta go to practice bye! (Walks out of the room and leaves for practice) B- I better talk to Mrs. G. MG- (Hears Blair) Talk to me about what? B- (Jumps after hearing Mrs. G) Oh nothing. MG- Blair spit it out! B- Oh alright. Mrs Garret, Jo isn’t taking her inhaler. She hasn’t been for the past three days. MG- What?! We have got to talk to her and fast. Come on! (Grabs Blair heads toward the baseball field) J- (Sees Blair and Mrs. G) Uh oh! Coach! Um…I gotta go bye! C- Alright! Great job today Jo! MG- (Runs up to the coach) Where is Jo? C- She said she had to go. MG- (Very angry) When I get my hands on that girl…(Sees everyone is looking at her) I am going to give her a big hug. (Starts to laugh) B-I bet I know where she is. Come on! J- (Is at the mall. She sees a lot of people smoking but doesn’t remember that smoke can trigger an asthma attack and continues to walk right through the smoke. She begins to cough and can’t stop a man walks up to her) Man- Are you okay? J- (Shakes her head no) Man- Someone get help! (Later a doctor arrives and helps Jo) J- Thanks doc. D- No problem. It is a good thing that man saw you. You might have died. J- (Thinks of what Blair said) B- (Runs up to Jo and sees a doctor by her) Jo?! Are you okay? J- Yeah. I’m fine now. Where’s Mrs. G? B- She couldn’t run she should be coming any minute now. (Sure enough Blair was right) MG- JO! (Out of breath from running up to her) If you ever ever do that again. J- Look Mrs. Garret I learned my lesson. It will never happen again. D- Mrs. Garret Jo could have died if a man at the mall didn’t notice her. The smoke from the cigarettes triggered the attack. MG- (Pale at the thought) Alright thank you doctor. As for you Jo…you better use this right now!!!!! (Pulls out the inhaler) J- (Smiles) I would be glad to. ****The End**** There. I don’t know much about asthma but I don’t think there were any mistakes. Well please post your replys. ------------------ Marsh~Mallow Quotes said by Jo (my fav character) Your born You move on You die Thats life There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shovin I thought you liked me in that way that you like somebody when you like them in that way You're so stupid you couldnt spell IQ I hate teaching people how to drive;they're nervous, they make mistakes, and they cry when you slap them Here's to all who wish me well and all the rest can go to... Jersey

08-22-2002, 02:35 PM	#8
james_baby87 ~PussNBoots~ Senior Member Join Date: Jul 21, 2002 Location: JBoro Chica! Posts: 1,108	That was a great fan fic. and you were pretty acutate on the asthma stuff. I have astma myself and I always scare the crap outta my friends and family with it.
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03-12-2001, 08:19 PM	#2
jofan4life Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 03, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 102	Well I just noticed my first mistake.lol! I put baseball instead of softball . Sorry about that. ------------------ Marsh~Mallow Quotes said by Jo (my fav character) Your born You move on You die Thats life There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shovin I thought you liked me in that way that you like somebody when you like them in that way You're so stupid you couldnt spell IQ I hate teaching people how to drive;they're nervous, they make mistakes, and they cry when you slap them Here's to all who wish me well and all the rest can go to... Jersey

03-12-2001, 08:23 PM	#3
ssgoalie8 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 24, 2001 Location: maryland Posts: 282	i loved it jo is my fav. too -colleen- ------------------ JO rocks!!!!!!!! ************* J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! ************* AIM ssgoalie8

03-12-2001, 08:23 PM	#4
Lisa,Blair,GoodGirl Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 09, 2001 Posts: 60	I love it,Thats ok in my new fan fic I put you instead of your.GREAT FAN FICTION I loved it.

03-12-2001, 10:17 PM	#5
lesliem14 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 01, 2000 Location: Frankfort, KY Posts: 650	It was good and speaking from the point of having several teammates who have asthma you were basically accurate.

03-13-2001, 04:46 PM	#6
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	that was erally good and also i know what the team mates and people must have felt when she fainted because a girl on my hockey team a couple years ago had an asema attack and it was scary ------------------ T: Natalie that is not how the game is played! N: Canadian Rules! ~Katie~

03-13-2001, 08:36 PM	#7
Love The Facts Of Life FlUtTeRfLy Senior Member Join Date: Jan 18, 2001 Location: Tennessee Posts: 1,515	That was great.I have asthma one time it got me out of gym for a week and it just happened to be the week I got put on the kickball team w/ no one I knew Sorry for rambling on so. ------------------ Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points. Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law. Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out. Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

08-23-2002, 11:39 AM	#9
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	for a few weeks I thought I had ashema because when I played sports my chest would hurt and when ever I breathed but then I realiezed I was sick lol but your fan fic is awesome!!!!!