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"HOLDING FOR HOPE"
hope you like it!!! (jo is on her motorcycle on her way home) J:i can't believe it! why me? what am i going to tell the others? -at home- N:where can she be? jo promised to help me with my math homework. typical! real typical! T: don't worry nat! She probably got preoccupied. when has jo actually let you down? N: well there was the time...(jo walks in) N:finally, there you are. now, i'm having trouble with this one problem. J: not now, nat, please? just tell mrs.g i'm gonna skip dinner tonight and i will be up stairs (jo goes up stairs) T: something is wrong. she seems kinda upset (with a worried look on her face) (blair walks in) B: hi all! is jo back yet? N:uh yeah... she is upstairs. T: she's not acting like herself, though. B: you mean she is actually being nice? N&T: Blair!!!! B: sorry! do you know what's wrong? T: no she came in and it looked like she had been crying. i hope she is ok. N: yeah me too. she said she didn't want dinner, then she went upstairs. B: i better go check on her. (goes upstairs) -bedroom- (jo is lying on her bed starring at the ceiling)(doesn't notice blair & continues to mumble to herself) B: jo, are you alright? (jo startled by blair, sits up suddenly and wipes tears away from her eyes) J: yeah i'm fine. could i just be alone for a while? B: what's wrong, jo? you can tell me. J: can't i just be alone for a while? i really don't feel like talking about it right now B: ok but you know i'm here for ya! J: thanks blair. (blair leaves and jo starts pacing back and forth, talking to herself) J: maybe i should tell them, what will they say? or maybe i shouldn't. they don't need to know. i don't know what to do. (starts crying again, leans up against the wall and slowly slides down it and pulls her knees toward her chest) -edna's edibles- (mrs. garret is closing the store and blair walks in) MG: oh hi blair! how was your day? B: mine was fine, but i don't think jo's was. MG: what do you mean? B: well she came home today and went straight upstairs and i was just up there and she was crying. mrs. garret, i'm worried about her! (starting to tear up also) MG: oh i know you are. do you know what happened? B: no she didn't want to talk about it and she doesn't want dinner either. MG: oh dear, i wonder what's wrong!!! B: she said she wants to be left alone right now. i'm going to talk to her after dinner...if she will let me. MG: okay. can you ask natalie and tootie to set the table and will you help me get dinner ready. we'll let jo be. B: ok mrs. garret. -bedroom-after dinner- (jo still sitting against the wall, but not crying anymore)(blair enters) B: jo, i brought you some dinner. i figure you must be a little hungry. J: thanks! where is everyone? B: oh they went to see that new tom cruise movie. J: why didn't you go? B: i was too worried about you J: oh B: do you want to talk now? J: not really but will you just stay up here with me for a while? B: sure (blair is looking at a bloomingdale's catalogue and jo is sitting on her bed, she begins to cry)(blair approaches her) B: are you ok? J: no, blair, remember i had that doctor's appointment today? B:yes J: well it was supposed to be aa regular check-up... B: jo what is it? J: blair, i...i... sorry end of part one some more later do you guys like it it is my first one ------------------ JO rocks!!!!!!!! *************** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! *************** AIM ssgoalie8 [This message has been edited by ssgoalie8 (edited 03-10-2001).] |
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WHy must you torture me with the suspense... PLease write more!
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This is good. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read the rest.
![]() ------------------ blair- another brilliant idea just popped into my head jo- oh, don't scare it. it's a lonely place in there. |
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This is really great so far...can't wait to read more.Please post more soon!!
------------------ "Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo Nancy McKeon is #1!! |
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omg this is great but i gotta no what happens next
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You have to finish this it is GREAT I can't imagine this is your first fan fiction!!!I can't wait to see what happens to Jo.
------------------ Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points. Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law. Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out. Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are. |
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omg this is soooooooooooooooooooooooo awsome! you HAVE to write more A.S.A.P! i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv it!
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great so far!!! can not wait to read the rest!!!
------------------ T: Natalie that is not how the game is played! N: Canadian Rules! *~Katie~* |
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sorry guys my computer is being stupid i will try to post more as soon as i can
-colleen- ------------------ JO rocks!!!!!!!! *************** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! *************** AIM ssgoalie8 |
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here is some more the end get's kinda cheesy
******************** partII J:...oh how am i going to get through this? (sobbing uncontrolably) B: jo, will you please tell me!!! maybe i can help you. J: i don't think you can. well you see i've been getting a lot of headaches lately so i went to the doctor. i had a catscan and...the....well...found... B: what!?! J: the found a..a growth at the bottom of my...my brain. you know, a tumor. blair, what am i going to do? (begins to cry again) (blair hugs jo and also begins to cry) B: jo, we will get through this TOGETHER! i mean, what are best friends for? (jo tries to smile) J: thanks blair! another thing, i go in for surgery next thursday morning to get it removed. B: wow, that's fast? how succesful is it usually? J: well it depends on how big and where the tumor is. blair, i'm scared. i mean really scared. Just say you will be there when i wake up. B: of course and don't worry, you will be fine. J: i sure hope so (feeling as a burden had been lifted, jo ate the dinner that blair brought up to her) -a couple minutes later- (nat and tootie walk in) N: hi guys! T: howya doin',jo? J: better. look i'm sorry for being so mean earlier. i have a lot on my mind. N: what's up jo? T: yeah what happened J: i wanna tell mrs. g at the same time. (blair goes and gets mrs. garret) B: hi mrs. garret MG: hi blair! how's jo? B: well that's why i came here. she wants to talk to all of us together. MG: alright! -back in the bedroom- J: hey mrs. g! MG: hi jo T: c'mon jo out with it J: ok fine, guys this is hard for me to say... (blair walks over and puts her arm around jo's shoulder) B: don't worry, i'm right here1 J: ok here it goes. well...um...ya see... N: i've never seen you haves such a hard time telling us something. something is definatel wrong. J: yeah it is. well i have a tumor on the base of my brain (says it really fast) (nat, tootie, and mrs. garret's eyes widen in disbelief)(mrs. garret walks over and hugs jo) MG: oh i'm so sorry, jo. J: well another thing. the surgery is thurs. next week. N: wow you work quick! J: what am i going to do? (crying again) MG: well jo, your going to have that surgery and then you will be fine. i'm sure of it. J: i hope so. ************* how do you like it so far? ------------------ JO rocks!!!!!!!! *************** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! *************** AIM ssgoalie8 |
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oh my gosh this is so good! Write more soon!!!
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-next thursday morning-
(everyone is in the waiting room when the docor comes out) D: ms. polniaczek, we are ready to get you prepped for surgery. J: ok, bye guys! B: good luck! see ya when you wake up. (hug) MG: bye--you'll be fine. (hug) N&T: bye jo (hug) (the nurse takes jo to the er) MG: excuse me, doctor. how long will she be in surgery for? D: it should be about 5 hours, if all goes well. T: if...if...what do you mean by if. you the doctor. i think you should know how to do this and there should be no if. (overreacting) N: tootie, calm down! T: sorry, nat. MG: thank you doctor and please take care of her D: i will do my best. -3hours later- (natalie and tootie are asleep in the waiting room)(blair is pacing back and forth) MG: she'll be ok, blair! B: but what if she isn't? MG: she will be B: i hope you are right. i don't know what i would do without her MG: i understand. now why don't you sit down and try to relax. i'll go get you some coffee. B: thanks mrs. garret! -2 1/2 hours later- T: what is taking them so long? they should have been out of there half an hour ago. MG: tootie calm down! the 5 hrs. was an approximation. N: what if tootie's right? what if something did go wrong? B: look, nothing went wrong. jo is... D: polniaczek? B,MG,N,&T: yes!!!! D: the surgery went well and right now jo is in recovery room 428. she might have a little bit of temporary memory loss, but you may see her now. she should be awake in a few minutes. i'll talk to you all later. MG: thank you very much. B: mrs. garret could i go in first? i promised jo i would be there when she woke up. MG: of course, blair! ------------------ JO rocks!!!!!!!! *************** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! *************** AIM ssgoalie8 |
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alright thanks for the comments, here is more
**************** -room 428- (jo is lying on the hospital bed with an I.V. in her arm and a bandage around her head. even though she is asleep, there is a look of pain on her face) (blair walks in and stopped, afraid to look at jo, but realizes she has to be strong for her) B: hi jo. i'm here. just like i said i would be. the doctor said you are doing fine. (jo begins to open her eyes, but closes them quickly due to the light. she then opens them again.) J: blair, where am i? B: your in the hospital, remember you had surgery? J: oh yeah, i remember now B: how are you feeling? J: like a whole herd of elephants just walked all over my head. (blair chuckles a bit) B: well then just rest. i'll stay here with you. J: thanks blair! (nat, tootie, and mrs. garret walk in) MG: how's she doing, blair? B: as good as can be expected. (jo wakes back up) J: hi guys (in a weak voice) MG: oh hi jo! i'm so glad you are ok. N: me too! T: i was so worried MG: well jo, tootie, natalie, and i are going home. we will be back a little later to check on you. J: ok thanks bye N: buh-bye jo (they all leave) J: so blair did the doctor say anything else? B: no, he just said he would talk to us later. J: okay do you mind if i just rest for a while? B: no, go right ahead. (jo falls back to sleep quickly)(blair says a quick prayer) B: dear God, be with my friend, jo. you know how much she means to me and i don't know whay i would do w/out her. thank you-amen! (blair then falls asleep in the chair next to jo's bed) ***************** ------------------ JO rocks!!!!!!!! *************** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! *************** AIM ssgoalie8 |
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OMG this is so good.post more soon
![]() ------------------ Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points. Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law. Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out. Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are. |
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ok here is the rest it is kinda cheesy sorry!
****************** -a week later-at home- T: i'm so glad jo is coming home today N: me too! i wish mrs. g and blair would hurry up and get back with her. (they all walk in) N: jo! i'm so glad you are back!!! J: i'm glad to be back (with a look of relief on her face) MG: i'm going to go make lunch. B: alright mrs. garret. J: do you guys mind if i go upsairs and lay down for a while? this pain medicine makes me kinda drowsy. T: no, that's fine. N: yeah we'll bring lunch up to you when it's done. J: thanks1 hey blair, would you mind helping me up the stairs? my judgement is off a little. B: no problem! -bedroom- (jo is sitting on her bed and blair is sitting across from her own her own) B: you know, jo. when you told me about the tumor. i thought i was going to lose you. J: yeah i thought i was going to die, too. B: i'm glad you didn't. you are my best friend, ya know! J: and your mine, too! (both hug) J: well i'm gonna take my nap now. B: ok (phone rings and blair answers it) B: yes...uh huh...ok...than youvery much...bye. B: hey jo, listen. that was the doctor. they got the results back and your tumor was benign. you have nothing to worry about. except maybe putting up with me. J: i guess i'll just have to deal with you then. thanks again, blair. THE END *********** hope you guys liked it! blairw_2 gave me the idea for the title. ------------------ JO rocks!!!!!!!! *************** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! *************** AIM ssgoalie8 [This message has been edited by ssgoalie8 (edited 03-10-2001).] |
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