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KerriBerri687 · 03-06-2001, 05:29 PM

kk...here's my ending to what would i do without you

(((About 4 days later-Blair's release day.-Rachel will be released the day after.)))

J- Come on Al! We're leaving!

A- coming mom! (runs down the stairs) sorry. i'm here. Uhhh...mom can i ask you something?

J- shoot.

A- while mrs.stevens is checking out...can i visit rachel?

J- (smiles) of-course you can. maybe i'll go wit hyou if that's okay.

A- well, sure. i just...kinda wanted to talk to her alone for a minute or two.

J- oh, well okay then. i've seen her enough. i'll jst show you where her room is okay al?

A- yeah, thanks.

N- (yelling from outside) Jo!!! Alexz! come on! let's get a move on!

(Alexz and Jo go outside and drive over to the hospital)

more in few minutes! (I just need a break...my fingers are starting to hurt! lol)

Sitcomwriter · 03-06-2001, 05:33 PM

Not bad but I spent FOREVER on my ending which wad great.I thaught you would do something like what I did so yes I am dissapointed.I did not read your fanfic

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I killed Blaitr off

KerriBerri687 · 03-06-2001, 05:44 PM

w/e sitcom writer. why do i have to do something like you? this was my (and ks of-course

) fanfic in the first place! so...why do i honestly have to do what you did? i'm redoing it because nobody liked your ending! it doesn't really seem to make much sense for me to re-do something no one liked...no does it? listen..i'm ending this fanfic how i want to...understand?

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-06-2001, 06:13 PM

great ending so far, im glad that u decied to add ur ending cuz frankly the other on sucked eggs

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Jo: could you please tell mrs. onaias to stay outta my way with her hair spray face creams, colonge bottles, sometimes i think i am in a drugstore i look around for the check out stand
B: she should talk its not easy sleeping next to Mr.Goodwrench

*~Katie~*

Sitcomwriter · 03-06-2001, 06:14 PM

Not true People loved my ending.I agree it was yours but you should at least put The Ghost in the end because the 3 of uss wrote it together.

EastlandsCutie · 03-06-2001, 07:19 PM

No offence or anything, but I haven't seen any posts of people saying they liked your ending. I thought it was horrible... Plus it was originally her fanfic, so you have no right to say you are disappointed or she should have done this or that. Blair N' Jo Rock is a wonderful writer and this story was great, before your ending.

BlairW_2 · 03-06-2001, 07:51 PM

This is MUCH better then Sitcom writers. His ending was horrible.

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Blair: You don't see me getting all upset when people tell me how gorgeous I am!!
* * * * * * * *
Blair: Blah, Blah, Blah. Emily Dickinson.
Jo: It's freezing. Jo Polniceck.
* * * * * * * *
Blair: Turn Blue!
* * * * * * * *
Blair: I have another one of my brilliant ideas!
* * * * * * * *
..*Cassandra*..

KerriBerri687 · 03-06-2001, 07:58 PM

alright here is a little more. (oh by the way....sorry sitcom writer but i'm not putting in any ghost)

(((At the Hospital)))

(R= receptionist)

R- May i help you?

J- yes, we're here to check out Blair Stevens.

R- (sees jo,rick,alexz,mrs.g, nat,snake, tootie and jeff all standing around jo) wow...she must be very popular.

(all giggle a little bit)

R- alright..she's almost ready. you may go up to room 305 now. (sees them all starting to go) not all of you! immediate family only.

J- uhhh...well that would be me. we're sorta...sisters in a way.

R- alright, well room 305. remember, be quiet in the halls!

J- alright. oh, wait a minute, can my daughter go visit rachel stevens? i mean i know it isn't visiting hours or anything but do you think she can maybe see her?

R- well, alright. However, she must be accompanied by an adult.

A- (rolls eyes) look lady, i can

J- Mrs. G! why don't you go along.

MG- suuure. (takes Alexz's hand)

more in a sec i just gotta read something...

BlairW_2 · 03-06-2001, 08:00 PM

Awesme! the goast was stupid anyway....

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Blair: You don't see me getting all upset when people tell me how gorgeous I am!!
* * * * * * * *
Blair: Blah, Blah, Blah. Emily Dickinson.
Jo: It's freezing. Jo Polniceck.
* * * * * * * *
Blair: Turn Blue!
* * * * * * * *
Blair: I have another one of my brilliant ideas!
* * * * * * * *
..*Cassandra*..

KerriBerri687 · 03-06-2001, 08:21 PM

hey, if u look under the original post...i think...JoPo did an ending and it was good, so i wanted to know if anybody still wanted me to finish this...or stick w/ JoPo's ending...please respond!

KerriBerri687 · 03-06-2001, 10:11 PM

i meant to say jofan4life's ending

sorry bout that!

KerriBerri687 · 03-07-2001, 07:57 PM

well w/e, i'm gonna write a little more...but will somebody please tell me what they think? (i mean if i should do an ending or keep the other one by jofan4life) k thanx!

MG- (looks at the room number) Well, this is the place!

A- yeah. well, thanks. would it be okay if i visited rachel alone? i mean, you can definatly go in after!

MG- sure. go ahead dear.

A- (smiles) thanks. (takes a deep breath and then opens the door to rachel's room)

(((In Rachel's room)))

A- (sees rachel sitting up in bed-she looks much better because she has had a lot of rest.) Hi!

R- (looks at alexz) Alexz? (happily) hi!!! what's up?

A- oh, nothing really. how about you? i mean, are you feeling better?

R- well yeah. i mean i guess so. i don't look my best but besides that...yeah.

A- (laughs a little) that's good. so...well...i wanted to tell you something.

R- talk away!

A- well...you see when you were first admitted here. Well i was really scared for you.

R- awwwww, how sweet. (giggles)

A- wait, just hear me out.

R- oh, sorry...keep going. (smiles)

A- and, i had wished i said this to you earlier in case you ya know...didn't make it.

R- (clears throught) yes....

A- and well...i just wanted to say that...i don't hate you as much as you think i do.

R- (giggles) that's what you had to tell me?

A- well, yeah. i mean i guess so. (giggles a little to herself)

R- i know you don't hate me! i mean, how could you hate this face! (makes a cute face)

(both laugh)

R- no but seriously al, you may think i was unconsious or something...but i saw what you were doing for me and my mom. (smiles) i never really thanked you for that did i?

A- well, you don't have to i mean it was nothing...

R- (interupts her) maybe it was nothing to you, but i meant a lot to me. (smiles) thanks. (gives her a hug)

A- look, i better go. i mean...i'm not even really supposed to be here.

R- alright. i'll see you tomorrow!

A- yeah. see ya. bye. (walks out of her room)Come on Mrs. Garett, let's go.

MG- but i wanted to see...(alexz starts to walk away) i'll just see her later.

more later! (maybe...please respond telling me yes or no to a previous post!

)

BlairW_2 · 03-07-2001, 08:14 PM

F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C!!!!!!!! Sitcomwriters was disgusting, stupid and horrible. This is great! Goodjob!

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Blair: You don't see me getting all upset when people tell me how gorgeous I am!!
* * * * * * * *
Blair: Blah, Blah, Blah. Emily Dickinson.
Jo: It's freezing. Jo Polniceck.
* * * * * * * *
Blair: Turn Blue!
* * * * * * * *
Blair: I have another one of my brilliant ideas!
* * * * * * * *
..*Cassandra*..
AIM- NjDevilz09
E-Mail- BlairW_2@yahoo.com

KerriBerri687 · 03-07-2001, 10:01 PM

(((Now...Blair gets checked out and everyone goes home)))

B- oh, it's good to be home! i know, i sound like you jo, but that hospital was really starting to give me the creeps! (laughs a little but then turns serious again) I wish rachel were here. i mean...i still don't believe that blaine could do such a thing.

T- look blair, no one can believe what he did, but he did. however, now that you're okay, and rachel's pretty much okay, all we have to do is win this case in court and forget you ever knew blaine.

B- tootie, it isn't that easy.

N- look let's try not to think about this now okay? lets just try to have a nice evening. i mean a nice few days...tomorrow everyone will be back and we'll start this whole reunion over okay?

B- well i suppose.

more later! (or tomorrow)

[This message has been edited by Blair n' Jo Rock (edited 03-09-2001).]

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 03-08-2001, 04:37 PM

great so far!

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T: Natalie that is not how the game is played!
N: Canadian Rules!
*~Katie~*

03-06-2001, 05:29 PM	#1
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	my ending to what would i do w/out you kk...here's my ending to what would i do without you (((About 4 days later-Blair's release day.-Rachel will be released the day after.))) J- Come on Al! We're leaving! A- coming mom! (runs down the stairs) sorry. i'm here. Uhhh...mom can i ask you something? J- shoot. A- while mrs.stevens is checking out...can i visit rachel? J- (smiles) of-course you can. maybe i'll go wit hyou if that's okay. A- well, sure. i just...kinda wanted to talk to her alone for a minute or two. J- oh, well okay then. i've seen her enough. i'll jst show you where her room is okay al? A- yeah, thanks. N- (yelling from outside) Jo!!! Alexz! come on! let's get a move on! (Alexz and Jo go outside and drive over to the hospital) more in few minutes! (I just need a break...my fingers are starting to hurt! lol)

03-06-2001, 05:33 PM	#2
Sitcomwriter Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Feb 27, 2001 Posts: 7,356	Not bad but I spent FOREVER on my ending which wad great.I thaught you would do something like what I did so yes I am dissapointed.I did not read your fanfic ***************************************** I killed Blaitr off

03-06-2001, 05:44 PM	#3
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	w/e sitcom writer. why do i have to do something like you? this was my (and ks of-course ) fanfic in the first place! so...why do i honestly have to do what you did? i'm redoing it because nobody liked your ending! it doesn't really seem to make much sense for me to re-do something no one liked...no does it? listen..i'm ending this fanfic how i want to...understand?

03-06-2001, 06:13 PM	#4
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	great ending so far, im glad that u decied to add ur ending cuz frankly the other on sucked eggs ------------------ Jo: could you please tell mrs. onaias to stay outta my way with her hair spray face creams, colonge bottles, sometimes i think i am in a drugstore i look around for the check out stand B: she should talk its not easy sleeping next to Mr.Goodwrench ~Katie~

03-06-2001, 06:14 PM	#5
Sitcomwriter Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Feb 27, 2001 Posts: 7,356	Not true People loved my ending.I agree it was yours but you should at least put The Ghost in the end because the 3 of uss wrote it together.

03-06-2001, 07:19 PM	#6
EastlandsCutie Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 05, 2001 Location: Eastland Girl's School in Peekskill, NY Posts: 40	No offence or anything, but I haven't seen any posts of people saying they liked your ending. I thought it was horrible... Plus it was originally her fanfic, so you have no right to say you are disappointed or she should have done this or that. Blair N' Jo Rock is a wonderful writer and this story was great, before your ending.

03-06-2001, 07:51 PM	#7
BlairW_2 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: New Jersey Posts: 860	This is MUCH better then Sitcom writers. His ending was horrible. ------------------ Blair: You don't see me getting all upset when people tell me how gorgeous I am!! * * * * * * * * Blair: Blah, Blah, Blah. Emily Dickinson. Jo: It's freezing. Jo Polniceck. * * * * * * * * Blair: Turn Blue! * * * * * * * * Blair: I have another one of my brilliant ideas! * * * * * * * * ..Cassandra..

03-06-2001, 07:58 PM	#8
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	alright here is a little more. (oh by the way....sorry sitcom writer but i'm not putting in any ghost) (((At the Hospital))) (R= receptionist) R- May i help you? J- yes, we're here to check out Blair Stevens. R- (sees jo,rick,alexz,mrs.g, nat,snake, tootie and jeff all standing around jo) wow...she must be very popular. (all giggle a little bit) R- alright..she's almost ready. you may go up to room 305 now. (sees them all starting to go) not all of you! immediate family only. J- uhhh...well that would be me. we're sorta...sisters in a way. R- alright, well room 305. remember, be quiet in the halls! J- alright. oh, wait a minute, can my daughter go visit rachel stevens? i mean i know it isn't visiting hours or anything but do you think she can maybe see her? R- well, alright. However, she must be accompanied by an adult. A- (rolls eyes) look lady, i can J- Mrs. G! why don't you go along. MG- suuure. (takes Alexz's hand) more in a sec i just gotta read something...

03-06-2001, 08:00 PM	#9
BlairW_2 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: New Jersey Posts: 860	Awesme! the goast was stupid anyway.... ------------------ Blair: You don't see me getting all upset when people tell me how gorgeous I am!! * * * * * * * * Blair: Blah, Blah, Blah. Emily Dickinson. Jo: It's freezing. Jo Polniceck. * * * * * * * * Blair: Turn Blue! * * * * * * * * Blair: I have another one of my brilliant ideas! * * * * * * * * ..Cassandra..

03-06-2001, 08:21 PM	#10
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	hey, if u look under the original post...i think...JoPo did an ending and it was good, so i wanted to know if anybody still wanted me to finish this...or stick w/ JoPo's ending...please respond!

03-06-2001, 10:11 PM	#11
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	i meant to say jofan4life's ending sorry bout that!

03-07-2001, 07:57 PM	#12
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	well w/e, i'm gonna write a little more...but will somebody please tell me what they think? (i mean if i should do an ending or keep the other one by jofan4life) k thanx! MG- (looks at the room number) Well, this is the place! A- yeah. well, thanks. would it be okay if i visited rachel alone? i mean, you can definatly go in after! MG- sure. go ahead dear. A- (smiles) thanks. (takes a deep breath and then opens the door to rachel's room) (((In Rachel's room))) A- (sees rachel sitting up in bed-she looks much better because she has had a lot of rest.) Hi! R- (looks at alexz) Alexz? (happily) hi!!! what's up? A- oh, nothing really. how about you? i mean, are you feeling better? R- well yeah. i mean i guess so. i don't look my best but besides that...yeah. A- (laughs a little) that's good. so...well...i wanted to tell you something. R- talk away! A- well...you see when you were first admitted here. Well i was really scared for you. R- awwwww, how sweet. (giggles) A- wait, just hear me out. R- oh, sorry...keep going. (smiles) A- and, i had wished i said this to you earlier in case you ya know...didn't make it. R- (clears throught) yes.... A- and well...i just wanted to say that...i don't hate you as much as you think i do. R- (giggles) that's what you had to tell me? A- well, yeah. i mean i guess so. (giggles a little to herself) R- i know you don't hate me! i mean, how could you hate this face! (makes a cute face) (both laugh) R- no but seriously al, you may think i was unconsious or something...but i saw what you were doing for me and my mom. (smiles) i never really thanked you for that did i? A- well, you don't have to i mean it was nothing... R- (interupts her) maybe it was nothing to you, but i meant a lot to me. (smiles) thanks. (gives her a hug) A- look, i better go. i mean...i'm not even really supposed to be here. R- alright. i'll see you tomorrow! A- yeah. see ya. bye. (walks out of her room)Come on Mrs. Garett, let's go. MG- but i wanted to see...(alexz starts to walk away) i'll just see her later. more later! (maybe...please respond telling me yes or no to a previous post! )

03-07-2001, 08:14 PM	#13
BlairW_2 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: New Jersey Posts: 860	F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C!!!!!!!! Sitcomwriters was disgusting, stupid and horrible. This is great! Goodjob! ------------------ Blair: You don't see me getting all upset when people tell me how gorgeous I am!! * * * * * * * * Blair: Blah, Blah, Blah. Emily Dickinson. Jo: It's freezing. Jo Polniceck. * * * * * * * * Blair: Turn Blue! * * * * * * * * Blair: I have another one of my brilliant ideas! * * * * * * * * ..Cassandra.. AIM- NjDevilz09 E-Mail- BlairW_2@yahoo.com

03-07-2001, 10:01 PM	#14
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	(((Now...Blair gets checked out and everyone goes home))) B- oh, it's good to be home! i know, i sound like you jo, but that hospital was really starting to give me the creeps! (laughs a little but then turns serious again) I wish rachel were here. i mean...i still don't believe that blaine could do such a thing. T- look blair, no one can believe what he did, but he did. however, now that you're okay, and rachel's pretty much okay, all we have to do is win this case in court and forget you ever knew blaine. B- tootie, it isn't that easy. N- look let's try not to think about this now okay? lets just try to have a nice evening. i mean a nice few days...tomorrow everyone will be back and we'll start this whole reunion over okay? B- well i suppose. more later! (or tomorrow) [This message has been edited by Blair n' Jo Rock (edited 03-09-2001).]

03-08-2001, 04:37 PM	#15
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	great so far! ------------------ T: Natalie that is not how the game is played! N: Canadian Rules! ~Katie~