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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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Each part in this story has a different title.Part1 Please be alive,Part2 Missing Peice,Part3 Daddy.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Part1 Please Be Alive ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ B Blair Talking on the Phone,Blair's office,)Yes, ok see you then bye mom,Kim could you please get Bailey for me.K:Yes Mrs.Warner. Ba Bailey comes in)Hi Blair.B:Guess who's coming for a vist? Ba:Who? Who? B:Mother,She will be here Friday at 1:00pm. Ba:Realy,Alright,(her eyes get real big)It's been so long. B:Atleast a year. Ba:What flight will she be on? B:Flight MC298 from maine to New York. Ba:I can't wait,Lets see(she thinks)we'll go to the mall and three other stores on saturday,Then the rest on Sunday,and Monday we'll go into the city,and tuesday...(Blair cuts in) B:Hold it Bailey,She's my mother too,and she's leaving on tuesday. Ba:You can come to,If you want to. B:Thanks alot. Ba;your welcome,I have to go bye Blair. B:Bye Bailey. (Friday 9:00am,Living room) J:Hi Blair. B:Hi Jo,Guess Who's coming,My Mother. J:Thats great,I think. B:Bailey can't wait,I let her have off from classes till wednesday,She even bought a day planer,She's gone over borad,I think it's cute. J:When's she coming?What Flight will she be on? B:Today 1:00,flight MC298. J:Have fun,I'll be out of town. B:Where are you going? J:Anywhere is better then here,It's like a miss america contest when your mother comes, You go shopping,and talk about guys and gossip,It makes me sick. B:I Know Thats why we do it. (2:00 later that day Blairs office) B:I wounder where she is?It's 2:00 she's an hour late. J on't worry,She's always late, She's alot like you like you,Bailey is the only human one of you three.B:Just because she like some sports you think she's like you,I'm going to fix my make up. (Loung,Bailey is watching t.v.) TV:Flight MC298 From Maine left with 63 people on it at 7:00 this morning,At 10:00 it crashed at 2,000 feet from the sky down to the earth in 2 minutes,Five people are alive,twelve are missing,and 46 are dead. Ba:Oh my!,Mother,OH no Mother!!!(starts to cry and run upstairs to Blairs office) (Blairs office,Jo is standing by the window) Ba Crying almost choking her self)Blair!!Blair!!Where are you!!!(starts to panic,Jo looks up)Blair!!!J Jo walks over to Bailey)Bailey what is it?Ba:I want Blair!!!!! J:Bailey calm down,(Hugs her and rocks her,trying to calm her down)Tell me whats wrong!! Ba:No i want Blair!!!!!!Wheres my sister!!??Wheres my mother!!??(Jo and Bailey sit down) J:Your sister is fixing her make-up,And your mother is on her way,Tell me whats wrong Please!!!!!!I can't help you till you tell me whats wrong.Where is Blair when you need her.(she says to her self) Ba:What flight is my mother on?(crys) J:Flight MC298. Ba:No!!(crys)I want Blair!!!(Jo hugs her tring to calm her down)Blair!! where are you!!!(crys)(she cries while huging Jo,Blair comes in) B:What is all the yelling about? J:Thank God your here,What am I saying,Who cares,Maybe we can find out whats wrong. Ba:Blair!!!I want Blair!!!(she does not know Blair is in the room) B walks over to Bailey and puts a hand on her)Im here calm down,(her and Jo trade spots)Shhh!! calm down,Calm down,What is it tell me Please!!!Ba:Mother(cries) What flight is she on?(cries) B:MC298. Ba:Mother!(cries) No!!(Cries) Don't go I need you!!!(cries) (Blair's office one hour later) (Bailey stops crying) B:Now How about you tell me Whats worng. J:ya i've been feeling sick ever sence you came in two hours ago crying. Ba:Mother is she daed,alive or missing? B:Alive I talked to her this moring. Ba thinks about the news)What time?B:6:30 Half an hour before the plane left. Ba:Flight MC298 Crashed at 10:00am,five alive,twelve missing,forty-six dead,It's all over the news.(Jo walks over to Blair and Bailey and hugs them while they cry) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Part2 coming soon. how do you like it so far? |
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very good so far keep it up!!
------------------ B:yea shes almost ready,she wants you to wait in our toom top of the stairs turn right and 1st door on your lfet Tootie:top of the stars turn right and 1st door on the left?blair our oom isnt the-- Blair:3,2,1 ((Jo screams)) B:now i am ahead *~Katie~* |
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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I am making a few changes to my story,there will only be 2 parts instead of 3,and I am changing the name of part 2,instead of missing peice it will be called Brake Down,Daddy which was going to be part 3 will be a fan fiction I will use some time this year I dont know when,what i'm trying to do is have the frist four stories be about each
of the girls and tell about their different lives,The frist one which is about Bailey Warner, is the one that is posted now its almost done I still need to post part 2.The second one will be about Brook Bonnor,Emily James,or Jenny Lea,Please help me pick one,Im sorry for changing it like this,Part 2 Brake Down coming soon.Thanks |
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this is really good! keep goin!
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*FlUtTeRfLy*
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This is really good I can't wait to read part 2.
------------------ Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points. Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law. Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out. Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are. |
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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Part 2 Brake Down
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (One week later) (lounge,Phone rings) BA:Hello,Yes this is Bailey,ok we'll be there soon,bye. B:Who was that? BA:A police man,he said a lady who might be Monica Warner,and he wants us to meet him at ST.Marys hospital at 5:00 to see if its mother or not. B:ST.Marys at 5:00 today,Its 4:00 now we better get leave now. (ST.Marys) B:Whom do we ask for?Do you know? BA:Peter Clark. B:Nurse where can I find a Peter Clark? N points to a man in a police uniform)Over there.B:Thanks,(they head toward Peter)are you Peter Clark? P:Bailey Warner? B:Blair Warner,this is Bailey. P:Come with me,(leads them to I.C.U.)Here we are,take a look then let me know if she is Your mother or not. (Blair and Bailey walk toward the lady) B:Mother? BA:Is it her? Is she alive? B:Yes and no,Mr.Clark,Its her. P:Great,name,age...Oh here fill this out.(hands her a cip board of papers) BA:Is she alive? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ more in a sec. |
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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More of part2 Brake Down
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ B Blair looks up from filling out papers)Is she?P:Well,stay seated,(takes a breath)she is right now but we don't know for how much longer she can hold on,she was injured pretty bad,as you can tell she is in a coma,she has a broken rib,skull and brain damage,she may never wake up,i'm sorry. B:What are the chances of her waking up?(Hands him the clip board) P:Slim to none. BA:Can I see her for a few minutes alone,Please. P looks at Blair)Ok 10 minutes,go.(Bailey walks into Monica's room) BA:Mother its me Bailey,Please wake up I need you so much,I'm sorry for making you go to Maine to find father,Its my fault im sorry,Mother please wake up please.(cries) (hallway) J:Hi Blair,Brooke told me you were here,Hows Bailey holding up? B:Fine I guess,Im glad you came.(shows a little smile) J:Thats what friends are for,I'm glad to be here. B:Can you go get Bailey for me I have more paper work to do?oh room 332 take a right. J:Sure thing.(leaves) (Monica's room,Jo walks in and heres Bailey crying) J:Bailey,Blair said your time is up. BA k,Thanks.J:Hey are you ok? BA:I'll be fine,(they start to leave then the here a long beep)Mother!No!(cries) J:Nurse!!!Room 323 I think we'er loosing her. (Doctors flood the room,Bailey runs over to her mother) BA on't go I need you!!!(cries)Please don't go!J:Blair!! Get in here!! Blair!! a little help!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ More of Part2 Brak Down soon,So how do you like it so far,Please let me know. |
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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sorry its Brake Down,Not Brak Down.
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*Mindanao Machiku*
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This is great! I can't wait to find out what happens!
![]() ------------------ "God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference." ~*Danielle*~ Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz! Basketbaiichick@aol.com or BlairWarner33@yahoo.com or BlairWarner@gurlmail.com |
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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More of part2 Brake Down.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (One Week later) (Blairs office) B:I can't belive I did this I told them monday instead of friday,I guess I will have to call and hope they can change it,(Someone knocks on the door)Go away!Please!(fakes crying) J:Blair?!(Kind of mad like)Where were you?!we had lunch plans for 11:00 its 2:00 now! B:I'm sorry,I guess I forgot,Look I have to go I'm late. J:Blair!Wait! B:Look Jo!(calmer)I have 5 meetings,10 Phone calls to make,and 3 families to interview for next year,I have to go. J:Look,Your are over worked take a brake. B:Later!(calmer)When I go to bed. J:Blair!(Blair leaves) (Bonnor's home,Jo and Ricks bedroom) J:Rick I'm worried about Blair,She's put herself in over drive,All she's done is work,Today she "forgot" our lunch plans,She's Driving me crazy. more soon. |
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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Heres mor of part2 Brake Down.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ R:I know honey,Her mother died 3weeks ago it will take time. J:I know,(Hears a crash in the kitchen) R:What was that? J:Lets go see. (Kitchen) J:Brooke what are you doing up so late? BR:can't sleep.(Rick go's back to bed) J:Thanks alot for you help!(Rick from the bedroom) R:No problem! J:Lets go in the living room and talk. (Living room) Br:Whats up? J:You are,Why can't you sleep? BR:Its Bailey she's crazyer then she normaly is,All she does is study,I have not seen her eat anything for lunch in weeks,She looks like she has'nt had any sleep in a year,Today she was'nt even whering make-up,She look like she fell asleep in her uniform. J:I know,Blair is acting the same way,It will take some time but they will be fine soon enough. (2 weeks later)(Lounge) J:Blair? B:Yes. J:How are you doing? B:Better,things have calmed down alot,Last night while Bailey was at your house I had a good cry and I feel much better,(takes a breath)Jo I can't lie to you,I feel so worn down lately,I can't sleep I can't eat,I put myself in over drive and I can't get out of it,Jo im so scared for Bailey,How do you even raise a 14 year old girl?Will her father fight me for her? J:You've done a great job so far,Look Brooke and I are here if you and Bailey ever need to talk. B:thanks ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ More soon |
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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Heres more of part2 brake down.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (Brooke walks in) BR:Is Bailey ready yet? B:Bailey!!Brooke is here!!(Bailey comes down looking real pretty) BA:Brooke you'er not going to the game looking like that are you. BR:Watch me. J:Brooke don't kill anyone,and meet me here at 11:00 ok. BR:Fine. B:You too Bailey,OH when you come back we need to talk ok,Bailey,Earth tpo Bailey Warner. Br:Let me try,Bailey The mall is having a huge sale. BA:What? B:Be back by 11:00. BA:Ok.(they leave) B:Bailey seems different,Has Brooke noticed anything? J:She said she seem different. B:Ok Thanks,I'll talk to her later. (Game) BR:Come on you slow pokes move it,We need to win,Go..Jets!!!(takes some face paint out of her backpack)Want some,Bailey,Yo Bailey! Ba:What? BR:Want some? BA:Um..(thinks)No thanks,I going to get somethig to Drink,Want something.(Brooke puts her face paint on) BR:No thanks,Hey how do I look? BA:Like a freak.(Brooke starts a wave) BR:Go....Jets!!!!!(crowd cheers) BA:I don't know you.(leaves) (15minutes later)(some people start yelling) BR:Whats that yelling about(go's to find out) Man:Watch it! Br:Sorry!(Sees Bailey laying on the ground)Bailey!Wake up!(Fire man puts Bailey on a strecher) FM:You Know Her,Where are her parents? BR:Her sister and my mother are at Eastland. FM:Hop in you can call them from the hospital.(Brooke hops in) BR:Thanks,What Hospital are we going to? FM:St.Mary's. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ More soon how is it so far? |
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*PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs*
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More of part2 Brake Down.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (An Hour later)(Lounge) J:Where are they?Its 1:00 in the morning,(Blair is asleep on the sofa,Jo looks at her and smiles)At least she's geting some rest,Where are they,I'm so worried,(starts to pacing back and forth)The least they could do is call,(walks over to the phone)Ok you have till the count of three to ring,1,2,3,(rings)I'm good(smiles and answers the phone) Hello,Brooke!?Where are you its 1:00 am!You are Where!?ok calm down we'll be right there,How is she?Thank God,(hangs up phone)Blair come on wake up,Bliar,Blair!(calmer)Theres a shoe sale by 2 get one free. B:What?,I was having my nails done, J:Someone is feeling better. B:Much,100% better. J:Not for long,Change the 100 to a 0. B:Why?What happened? J:Brooke just called me,(takes a breath)I hate giving out bad news. B:Jo spill it,Now! J:Its Bailey,(Takes a breath)She pass out at the game,(Blair gets worried)She's asking for you,I don't know why,She's fine. B:What hospital? J:St.Marys. B:Lets go. (St.Marys)(Bailey's room) BA:Brooke Im sorry for the way I've been acting latel,Forgive me. BR:Yes,I always do,Bailey can I ask you something? BA:Sure anything. BR:How Come you did not come to me or anyone when you were feeling like this?If you did you might be here right now,I can't belive you did this to yourself,What Girl in there right mind would eat maybe an apple,and then get 1 to 2 hours sleep every night for 6 weeks,come on you have better sence then that. BA:I know,And I'm sorry,Blair was as ways doing smething and had no time for me she could'ent be bothered by me,Same with you and evrybody.(Jo walks in) J:What do you mean everybody? Ba:Mrs.Bonnor,I had no idea you were there. BR:I'm going to the bathroom.(leaves) J:Bailey,(kind of mad)explain. BA:You Heard,Im sorry,its just that nobody seamed to care. J:Blair,Brooke,and I care for you alot,We'er here are we not,Look im not your mother or sister but I do care for you alot,You can come to me Blair or Brooke anytime you need to talk. Ba:I know and thanks,I love you three very much,Im sorry I did not come to you guys sooner,I wish I did. J:I know.(Kisses her head)(Blair comes in) B:Bailey are you ok?What Happened? BA:Too much stress,Not eating well,And not enough sleep. J:Im going to find Brooke.(leaves) B:I know the doctors told me,I love you so much Bailey Warner,You can talk to me about anything I can't promise i won't get mad but I can promise I will help you in anyway I can,I love you. Ba:I'm sorry,Forgive me Blair. B:Yes,I forgive you,(they start to cry) BA:Blair,I love you and thanks for being there. B:your welcome,Baliey,(takes a breath and cries somemore)We'll get through this together,I know we will. BA Starts to cry)We will,Together.(The End) How did you like it? Please let me know. |
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*Mindanao Machiku*
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Oh, my goodness, how sweet!!! I loved it!
------------------ "God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference." ~*Danielle*~ Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz! Basketbaiichick@aol.com or BlairWarner33@yahoo.com or BlairWarner@gurlmail.com |
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