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EastlandsCutie · 03-05-2001, 03:00 PM

Hey - I'm new on this board, when it comes to posting, anyway, but I've been reading the fanfics on here for awhile. I finally got up the courage to write a fanfic and post it, please tell me what you think - it's a first attempt, so it's probably not great. Anyway, here it is.

"Words Do Hurt"
Script
Season 3

Summary: After deciding to eat right and diet, Blair makes a rude remark about Natalie's weight that shocks everyone.

(Jo, Blair, and Tootie are eating in the cafeteria)
T: Is that all you're gonna eat, Blair?
B: I'm trying to start eating healthy. Salads are healthy - so they'll keep me slim and in perfect condition.
J: ::Rolls her eyes:: As soon as Mrs. G makes brownies you'll be down here and all over them, just like the rest of us.
B: Really, Jo... If you eat right and exercise, treats are fine sometimes.
N: (Walks in, but freezes at the doorway where no one notices her)
T: What are you going on this diet for anyway, Blair?
B: Well, around your teen years you gain the most weight. Natalie's certainly living proof of that.
J: That's low, Blair.
T: Where is Natalie, anyway?
N: Right here! ::Walks over, looking hurt and angry::
B: Natalie... I... I didn't know...
N: Didn't know I was there? I noticed, but you still said it! ::Storms out::
J: See what you did now, Blair?!
B: (Embarrassed) Hey! The truth hurts! Maybe if we told her told her the truth a long time ago she wouldn't have to deal with it now! (Storms out the other way)
T: (Glances at Jo)
J: (Sighs and looks down)

(In the bedroom, later)
B: Natalie... I'm sorry about earlier.
N: It's okay, Blair. I know you didn't mean what you said.
B: I meant it, I'm just sorry you had to hear it...
J: Blair!
N: No, Jo, let her talk. What else do you think isn't good enough about me, Blair?
B: Natalie, I'm your friend--
N: You sure have a funny way of showing it!
B: L-Look, it's what everybody says about you anyway, don't expect me to believe you heard it for the first time at lunch!
T: Blair! Stop it!
N: You're just an egotistical, superfisical, spoiled, brat!
B: I've never been so insulted in my life!
J: Sure you have, I've insulted you 10 times better than that...
T: Jo, I don't think now is the best time.
B: At least I have friends and I'm attractive to boys! No boy in their right mind would go out with you. (Walks out of the bedroom)
N: (Calls after her) Maybe the real reason guys like you is because they know your EASY!
J: (Glances from the door to Natalie and back again)
T: (Looks stunned)

(Downstairs)
J: (Walks down the steps, carrying a scale) Hey, anybody wanna get weighed?
Mrs. G: What?!
J: I just thought it'd be... interesting.
B: Why not? I'll see if my dieting payed off.
Mrs.G: Dieting? What?
B: (Hops on the scale and her face goes pale) There must be a mistake..
J: Gee, Blair, looks like you GAINED 20 pounds instead of loosing any weight...
B: I don't understand... How could this happen?
J: I guess you're not so much different from Natalie after all, are you, Blair?
Mrs. G: Different than Natalie? What are you girls talking about?
B: Wait a second, Jo, this scale is stuck on the same number.
J: I guess you broke it...
B: Jo! You sneaky, snake in the grass...
J: Well, how does it feel thinking your overweight and having other people point it out?
B: (Looks down) I guess I wasn't very sensitive about Natalie's weight, was I?
J: Sensitive? Let's just say you make a lion look gentle.
Mrs. G: (Looks confused)
B: (Sighs) I guess I was wrong to make fun of her...
J: Don't tell me, tell Natalie.

(Back up in the bedroom)
N: (Reading a book on her bed)
B: (Walks in) Natalie?
N: Natalie is not here right now. At the sound of the tone, please leave a message. BUZZ OFF!
B: Natalie, can we please talk?
N: Tootie...
T: Natalie doesn't want to talk right now, Blair.
B: Tootie - Turn blue.
T: I don't have to take this, ya know...
J: (Leaning against the doorframe) Tootie!
T: Alright! Alright! (Walks out) Sheesh.
J: (Closes the door behind them)
N: What is it, Blair? Here to make fun of me some more?
B: Natalie, I can't take back what I said, as much as I wish I could, I can't. But I'm truely sorry from the bottom of my heart. I never meant to hurt your feelings, honest. Being wrong is just new to me...
N: It just hurt. You were right about me hearing it before, but hearing it from a friend...
B: That was really cold of me, Natalie. It was wrong. Can you forgive me?
N: (Looks down)
B: I understand. (Gets up and walks to the door)
N: (Looks up) Blair?
B: (Turns around)
N: I forgive you.
B: (Smiles and walks back over to her)
N: (Smiles and hugs Blair)

BlairandJo · 03-05-2001, 03:09 PM

Welcome,Great fanfiction

DinahTheDiningCar · 03-05-2001, 04:42 PM

Wonderful!

EastlandsCutie · 03-05-2001, 05:14 PM

Thanks! Glad you like it, I'm working on another right now called "Accusations."

KerriBerri687 · 03-05-2001, 05:16 PM

great job! i'm glad you decided to post!

welcome to the board! o, by the way, if you wanna chat...my sn's pal2125 u can e-mail me at pal2125@aol.com. i'm on 24/7! anyway...welcome! nice to meetcha!

factsfanatic · 03-05-2001, 08:50 PM

Great story! Welcome to the message board.

GoodGirl103 · 03-06-2001, 08:48 PM

Great job, but I already told you that! It's Lizzie!! Welcome to the board, finally!

------------------
~*~*~*~ Lizzie ~*~*~*~

Jo: It was just like Saturday night fever...but it was a Friday.

Blair: If I'm not perfect, and that's a BIG if....it certainly wasn't his place to say so.
Jo: Right...it's mine!

Blair's new saying of the new Millenium!
"I'm a princess
I was born on a cloud
If you wanna get with me
You better bow down
So get on your knees
And call me "Your Highness"
Because, baby, believe me
I'm New York's finest!"

03-05-2001, 03:00 PM	#1
EastlandsCutie Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 05, 2001 Location: Eastland Girl's School in Peekskill, NY Posts: 40	I'm new here... Hey - I'm new on this board, when it comes to posting, anyway, but I've been reading the fanfics on here for awhile. I finally got up the courage to write a fanfic and post it, please tell me what you think - it's a first attempt, so it's probably not great. Anyway, here it is. "Words Do Hurt" Script Season 3 Summary: After deciding to eat right and diet, Blair makes a rude remark about Natalie's weight that shocks everyone. (Jo, Blair, and Tootie are eating in the cafeteria) T: Is that all you're gonna eat, Blair? B: I'm trying to start eating healthy. Salads are healthy - so they'll keep me slim and in perfect condition. J: ::Rolls her eyes:: As soon as Mrs. G makes brownies you'll be down here and all over them, just like the rest of us. B: Really, Jo... If you eat right and exercise, treats are fine sometimes. N: (Walks in, but freezes at the doorway where no one notices her) T: What are you going on this diet for anyway, Blair? B: Well, around your teen years you gain the most weight. Natalie's certainly living proof of that. J: That's low, Blair. T: Where is Natalie, anyway? N: Right here! ::Walks over, looking hurt and angry:: B: Natalie... I... I didn't know... N: Didn't know I was there? I noticed, but you still said it! ::Storms out:: J: See what you did now, Blair?! B: (Embarrassed) Hey! The truth hurts! Maybe if we told her told her the truth a long time ago she wouldn't have to deal with it now! (Storms out the other way) T: (Glances at Jo) J: (Sighs and looks down) (In the bedroom, later) B: Natalie... I'm sorry about earlier. N: It's okay, Blair. I know you didn't mean what you said. B: I meant it, I'm just sorry you had to hear it... J: Blair! N: No, Jo, let her talk. What else do you think isn't good enough about me, Blair? B: Natalie, I'm your friend-- N: You sure have a funny way of showing it! B: L-Look, it's what everybody says about you anyway, don't expect me to believe you heard it for the first time at lunch! T: Blair! Stop it! N: You're just an egotistical, superfisical, spoiled, brat! B: I've never been so insulted in my life! J: Sure you have, I've insulted you 10 times better than that... T: Jo, I don't think now is the best time. B: At least I have friends and I'm attractive to boys! No boy in their right mind would go out with you. (Walks out of the bedroom) N: (Calls after her) Maybe the real reason guys like you is because they know your EASY! J: (Glances from the door to Natalie and back again) T: (Looks stunned) (Downstairs) J: (Walks down the steps, carrying a scale) Hey, anybody wanna get weighed? Mrs. G: What?! J: I just thought it'd be... interesting. B: Why not? I'll see if my dieting payed off. Mrs.G: Dieting? What? B: (Hops on the scale and her face goes pale) There must be a mistake.. J: Gee, Blair, looks like you GAINED 20 pounds instead of loosing any weight... B: I don't understand... How could this happen? J: I guess you're not so much different from Natalie after all, are you, Blair? Mrs. G: Different than Natalie? What are you girls talking about? B: Wait a second, Jo, this scale is stuck on the same number. J: I guess you broke it... B: Jo! You sneaky, snake in the grass... J: Well, how does it feel thinking your overweight and having other people point it out? B: (Looks down) I guess I wasn't very sensitive about Natalie's weight, was I? J: Sensitive? Let's just say you make a lion look gentle. Mrs. G: (Looks confused) B: (Sighs) I guess I was wrong to make fun of her... J: Don't tell me, tell Natalie. (Back up in the bedroom) N: (Reading a book on her bed) B: (Walks in) Natalie? N: Natalie is not here right now. At the sound of the tone, please leave a message. BUZZ OFF! B: Natalie, can we please talk? N: Tootie... T: Natalie doesn't want to talk right now, Blair. B: Tootie - Turn blue. T: I don't have to take this, ya know... J: (Leaning against the doorframe) Tootie! T: Alright! Alright! (Walks out) Sheesh. J: (Closes the door behind them) N: What is it, Blair? Here to make fun of me some more? B: Natalie, I can't take back what I said, as much as I wish I could, I can't. But I'm truely sorry from the bottom of my heart. I never meant to hurt your feelings, honest. Being wrong is just new to me... N: It just hurt. You were right about me hearing it before, but hearing it from a friend... B: That was really cold of me, Natalie. It was wrong. Can you forgive me? N: (Looks down) B: I understand. (Gets up and walks to the door) N: (Looks up) Blair? B: (Turns around) N: I forgive you. B: (Smiles and walks back over to her) N: (Smiles and hugs Blair)

03-05-2001, 03:09 PM	#2
BlairandJo PuRpLe~PrInCeSsEs Senior Member Join Date: Feb 14, 2001 Location: TX I love this state Posts: 1,453	Welcome,Great fanfiction

03-05-2001, 04:42 PM	#3
DinahTheDiningCar Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 21, 2001 Posts: 155	Wonderful!

03-05-2001, 05:14 PM	#4
EastlandsCutie Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 05, 2001 Location: Eastland Girl's School in Peekskill, NY Posts: 40	Thanks! Glad you like it, I'm working on another right now called "Accusations."

03-05-2001, 05:16 PM	#5
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	great job! i'm glad you decided to post! welcome to the board! o, by the way, if you wanna chat...my sn's pal2125 u can e-mail me at pal2125@aol.com. i'm on 24/7! anyway...welcome! nice to meetcha!

03-05-2001, 08:50 PM	#6
factsfanatic Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 13, 2000 Location: SC Posts: 125	Great story! Welcome to the message board.

03-06-2001, 08:48 PM	#7
GoodGirl103 Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Feb 18, 2001 Location: AL Posts: 30	Great job, but I already told you that! It's Lizzie!! Welcome to the board, finally! ------------------ ~~~~ Lizzie ~~~~ Jo: It was just like Saturday night fever...but it was a Friday. Blair: If I'm not perfect, and that's a BIG if....it certainly wasn't his place to say so. Jo: Right...it's mine! Blair's new saying of the new Millenium! "I'm a princess I was born on a cloud If you wanna get with me You better bow down So get on your knees And call me "Your Highness" Because, baby, believe me I'm New York's finest!"