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KerriBerri687 · 02-28-2001, 01:25 PM

okay, here's my new fanfic. i have bronchitus so i can't go to school and pretty much have nothing better to do! LOL! here goes! oh, by the way at a part of this story, you all might think that spmeone is going to get hurt but don't worry! nothing happens!

enjoy!

Season: i guess 5 or 6

(Jo walks in)

J- (angrily) What am I gonna do?!?!

T- Why hello jo. nice to see you too!

J- Tootie, not now! what am i gonna do?!?!

MG-what's the matter jo?

J- it's my bike. it broke down and i tried to fix it and just ended up making the problem worse! so, i had to take it into the station and it won't be ready for 3 whole days!

N- That's the problem? (rolls eyes)

J- yes THAT! and the fact that i have a date with Keith tonight!

T- Ooooooohhhhh, you are in troooooouuuuuubbblle!

J- thanks a lot tootie! how am i gonna get there? i can't just cancel on him.

N- i wish i could help ya Jo, but I'm going out with Snake tonight and I...don't have a car.

T- don't look at me! i'm still taking drivers ed!

MG- sorry jo. no can do.

J- (sighs) oh, great! this is just great! what do you all expect me to do now?!?!

B- hello all!

(all look up at blair)

N- Blaiiirr. (says in that voice blair always uses.)

B- whaaaat...(u know the voice!)

T- Blair?

B- what?!?!

J- no way!

B- alright, i'm really starting to get annoyed here.

N- What are you doing tonight Blair?

B- believe or not...nothing...oh, but don't worry it's not because i don't have a date..it's just that cliff has bronchitus and had to cancel.

N- perfect!

B- what? that cliff has bronchitus?

N- blair, how would you like to drive jo to Keith's house tonight?

B- jo? you want me to do you a favor?

J- you're my last resort.

B- awwww...well i'm honored. you'll just have to tell me where he lives, and how to get there, and what roads, to take, and

J- why don't ya just let me drive!

B- sorry, no one drives my daddy's porsha but me!

J- fine. we'll leave at 8:30 alright?

B- not a problem!

post more in 10 minutes.

KerriBerri687 · 02-28-2001, 01:36 PM

okay here's some more.

(it's 8:30)

J- where is she?!?! i knew i couldn't trust her to be back here at 8:30!

MG- jo, calm down she'll be here. don't worry.

T- well, i wouldn't be too sure. i remember one time she was supposed to pick me up to..

N-(interupts her) tootie! we don't need to hear this right now!

T- oh, sorry.

(blair walks in)

B- ready jo?

J- YOU'RE LATE!

B- what are you talking about? i said i'd be back at 8:30 and..

J- (interupts her) IT'S 8:43!!!! you're 3 minutes late!

T- why don't you guys stop arguing and wasting time and go already!

J- right. come on blair let's go.

(both leave)

(in the car)

B- (driving) so which way do i go now?

J- right blair! right!

B- (turns left)oops. well, that's not a problem, i'll just turn around.

J- ya can't make a u-turn here blair.

more later!

KerriBerri687 · 02-28-2001, 02:35 PM

B- look it's no big deal. we'll just take the back roads and before you know it we'll be back.

J- would ya let me drive?!

B- i can handle this jo. i know how to drive you know!

J- no blair i don't know! we're already 5 minutes late!

B- oh, why don't you just....Turn Blue! consider yourself lucky that i'm even doing you this favor.

J- i could have walked to Keith's house faster than you can drive there!

B- ya know what jo? why don't you just

(Both keep arguing and Blair really isn't keeping her eyes on the road)

J- Blair watch out!

(car skids off to the side of the road)

(in the car)

J- A..are you...o..ok..okay?

B- I..I..think so it's just my...head..i think i hit in on the steering wheel or something. (looks at jo)

J- (sees that she has a bruise on her forehead which is bleeding) yeah...you have a little bruise there. (hesitates)now i know you're very protective of the car but..i really think i should drive us both back to mrs.g's place.

B- but... what about your date with Keith?

J- he'll understand. (smiles) come on..let's go home. (helps her up and switch places.)

(driving back)

J- look Blair, i just wanted to say that well..i'm sorry for ya know getting so..crazy.

B- (holding a tissue on her bruise)well i'm sorry for making you have to cancel your date. you really didn't have to. i could have driven myself back.

J- Blair, you're, you're well...i don't think i've ever said this but you're...

B- i'm what?

J- my...best friend and (says really fast) wouldn't want anything to happen to you because that really is a very nasty bruise ya got there...and...well...

B- you mean that?

J- (says a little bit unsurely) well...yeah.

B- well, i suppose even though you can be...rude, obnoxious, greasy, and

J- (interupts her) cool it blair.

B- what i'm trying to say is that you are...my..best friend too. (smiles)

i'll finish it a little later. oh, by the way i reeeeaaaaly don't like this fanfic so i don't expect any of you all to.

u don't hafta respond!

TVaddict · 02-28-2001, 04:06 PM

Don't be so hard on yourself. It's very sweet. A little rushed, but oh well. Was Cliff the one who gave you bronchitis?

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 · 02-28-2001, 04:18 PM

it is very good so far! i hope you feel better!

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Jo: there are two things we dont joke bout, the yankess and wht roy just did to me!

the only thing wrong with jo is shes a yankees fan! go red sox~!
*~Katie~*

KerriBerri687 · 02-28-2001, 05:25 PM

k herez the ending..sorry that this is so rushed

neway here's the rest.

(back at mrs.g's place)

J-(walks in...sort-of holding on to Blair to help her in)

MG-(surprised to see them) What are you both doing back so earl..(sees Blairs holdong a tissue on her head) Blair what happened?!?!

B- oh, it's nothing...really.

MG- i know what nothing looks like and this isn't nothing.

B- i don't really want to talk about it Mrs. Garett.

MG- Fine than jo will talk about it. jo?

J- The car sorta skidded and Blair hit her head.

MG- that's awful! why would the car skid? in this weather? there's no ice on the road.(sounds suspicious)

B- i took my eyes off the road. i'm sorry.

J- we were arguing because i thought we were lost.

MG- Well, i hope you both learned your lesson! you know better than that!

J+B- (both look sorry)

MG- Well, i'm just glad that you're both alright. Now Blair, let me take a look at this bruise...

(Mrs. Garett cleans off Blair's bruise and then everyone goes to bed.)

~The End~

BlairW_1 · 03-01-2001, 08:36 PM

Great story! Hope you get feeling better!

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"God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference."

~*Danielle*~
Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!

Love The Facts Of Life · 03-01-2001, 08:49 PM

That was really sweet.I hoope u get better really soon

02-28-2001, 01:25 PM	#1
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	my new fanfic. read and respond! :) okay, here's my new fanfic. i have bronchitus so i can't go to school and pretty much have nothing better to do! LOL! here goes! oh, by the way at a part of this story, you all might think that spmeone is going to get hurt but don't worry! nothing happens! enjoy! Season: i guess 5 or 6 (Jo walks in) J- (angrily) What am I gonna do?!?! T- Why hello jo. nice to see you too! J- Tootie, not now! what am i gonna do?!?! MG-what's the matter jo? J- it's my bike. it broke down and i tried to fix it and just ended up making the problem worse! so, i had to take it into the station and it won't be ready for 3 whole days! N- That's the problem? (rolls eyes) J- yes THAT! and the fact that i have a date with Keith tonight! T- Ooooooohhhhh, you are in troooooouuuuuubbblle! J- thanks a lot tootie! how am i gonna get there? i can't just cancel on him. N- i wish i could help ya Jo, but I'm going out with Snake tonight and I...don't have a car. T- don't look at me! i'm still taking drivers ed! MG- sorry jo. no can do. J- (sighs) oh, great! this is just great! what do you all expect me to do now?!?! B- hello all! (all look up at blair) N- Blaiiirr. (says in that voice blair always uses.) B- whaaaat...(u know the voice!) T- Blair? B- what?!?! J- no way! B- alright, i'm really starting to get annoyed here. N- What are you doing tonight Blair? B- believe or not...nothing...oh, but don't worry it's not because i don't have a date..it's just that cliff has bronchitus and had to cancel. N- perfect! B- what? that cliff has bronchitus? N- blair, how would you like to drive jo to Keith's house tonight? B- jo? you want me to do you a favor? J- you're my last resort. B- awwww...well i'm honored. you'll just have to tell me where he lives, and how to get there, and what roads, to take, and J- why don't ya just let me drive! B- sorry, no one drives my daddy's porsha but me! J- fine. we'll leave at 8:30 alright? B- not a problem! post more in 10 minutes.

02-28-2001, 01:36 PM	#2
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	okay here's some more. (it's 8:30) J- where is she?!?! i knew i couldn't trust her to be back here at 8:30! MG- jo, calm down she'll be here. don't worry. T- well, i wouldn't be too sure. i remember one time she was supposed to pick me up to.. N-(interupts her) tootie! we don't need to hear this right now! T- oh, sorry. (blair walks in) B- ready jo? J- YOU'RE LATE! B- what are you talking about? i said i'd be back at 8:30 and.. J- (interupts her) IT'S 8:43!!!! you're 3 minutes late! T- why don't you guys stop arguing and wasting time and go already! J- right. come on blair let's go. (both leave) (in the car) B- (driving) so which way do i go now? J- right blair! right! B- (turns left)oops. well, that's not a problem, i'll just turn around. J- ya can't make a u-turn here blair. more later!

02-28-2001, 02:35 PM	#3
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	B- look it's no big deal. we'll just take the back roads and before you know it we'll be back. J- would ya let me drive?! B- i can handle this jo. i know how to drive you know! J- no blair i don't know! we're already 5 minutes late! B- oh, why don't you just....Turn Blue! consider yourself lucky that i'm even doing you this favor. J- i could have walked to Keith's house faster than you can drive there! B- ya know what jo? why don't you just (Both keep arguing and Blair really isn't keeping her eyes on the road) J- Blair watch out! (car skids off to the side of the road) (in the car) J- A..are you...o..ok..okay? B- I..I..think so it's just my...head..i think i hit in on the steering wheel or something. (looks at jo) J- (sees that she has a bruise on her forehead which is bleeding) yeah...you have a little bruise there. (hesitates)now i know you're very protective of the car but..i really think i should drive us both back to mrs.g's place. B- but... what about your date with Keith? J- he'll understand. (smiles) come on..let's go home. (helps her up and switch places.) (driving back) J- look Blair, i just wanted to say that well..i'm sorry for ya know getting so..crazy. B- (holding a tissue on her bruise)well i'm sorry for making you have to cancel your date. you really didn't have to. i could have driven myself back. J- Blair, you're, you're well...i don't think i've ever said this but you're... B- i'm what? J- my...best friend and (says really fast) wouldn't want anything to happen to you because that really is a very nasty bruise ya got there...and...well... B- you mean that? J- (says a little bit unsurely) well...yeah. B- well, i suppose even though you can be...rude, obnoxious, greasy, and J- (interupts her) cool it blair. B- what i'm trying to say is that you are...my..best friend too. (smiles) i'll finish it a little later. oh, by the way i reeeeaaaaly don't like this fanfic so i don't expect any of you all to. u don't hafta respond!

02-28-2001, 04:06 PM	#4
TVaddict Member Forum Regular Join Date: Oct 30, 2000 Location: NH Posts: 562	Don't be so hard on yourself. It's very sweet. A little rushed, but oh well. Was Cliff the one who gave you bronchitis?

02-28-2001, 04:18 PM	#5
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 21, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 270	it is very good so far! i hope you feel better! ------------------ Jo: there are two things we dont joke bout, the yankess and wht roy just did to me! the only thing wrong with jo is shes a yankees fan! go red sox~! ~Katie~

02-28-2001, 05:25 PM	#6
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	k herez the ending..sorry that this is so rushed neway here's the rest. (back at mrs.g's place) J-(walks in...sort-of holding on to Blair to help her in) MG-(surprised to see them) What are you both doing back so earl..(sees Blairs holdong a tissue on her head) Blair what happened?!?! B- oh, it's nothing...really. MG- i know what nothing looks like and this isn't nothing. B- i don't really want to talk about it Mrs. Garett. MG- Fine than jo will talk about it. jo? J- The car sorta skidded and Blair hit her head. MG- that's awful! why would the car skid? in this weather? there's no ice on the road.(sounds suspicious) B- i took my eyes off the road. i'm sorry. J- we were arguing because i thought we were lost. MG- Well, i hope you both learned your lesson! you know better than that! J+B- (both look sorry) MG- Well, i'm just glad that you're both alright. Now Blair, let me take a look at this bruise... (Mrs. Garett cleans off Blair's bruise and then everyone goes to bed.) ~The End~

03-01-2001, 08:36 PM	#7
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	Great story! Hope you get feeling better! ------------------ "God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference." ~Danielle~ Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!

03-01-2001, 08:49 PM	#8
Love The Facts Of Life FlUtTeRfLy Senior Member Join Date: Jan 18, 2001 Location: Tennessee Posts: 1,515	That was really sweet.I hoope u get better really soon