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02-02-2001, 03:53 PM
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"Unperfect Peekskill" (A Facts of Life Thriller!) Please Read!!
Hey guys! My latest fan fiction is called "Unperfect Peekskill". It is like a big thriller! I hope you like it! Here it is..enjoy!
 UNPERFECT PEEKSKILL (The camera focuses on the town of Peekskill where everything is perfect. People are taking walks, sitting on benches in the park, and having fun. Then the camera focuses on a brick house. It is Mrs. Garett's house. Then the camera zooms inside and we find Mrs. Garett reading her recipe book on the kitchen table.) J: (Walks in) Hey Mrs. G, what's up? MG: Oh..I'm just looking at my recipe book. How does this sound for dinner today? "Chicken and Brocolli". J: Oh..I can't make it for dinner tonight. MG: Why not? J: Because I met a guy and he is taking me out to dinner. B: (Walks in overhearing what she said) Jo?? Met a GUY??? I thought this day would never come! MG: Who is he?? J: Someone I met at the bike shop. His name is Harlie. B: (Sighs) Couldn't he at least be decent?? J: Hey! (Gets mad) He is decent enough for me. B: My point excactly... MG: Well what time do you have to go, Jo?? J: 6:00 pm. We will probably be back around 10:00 pm/ MG: Four hours at a restauraunt? J: Mrs. Garett we are gonna do more that just eat. B: Ohh...polish your bikes? J: NO. We are going star gazing. (Sighs passionatly) B: Yeah, maybe you'll find a constellation of a motorbike! J: Watch it!! B: Jo...Jo, Jo, Jo, Jo, Jo....you know how I am. I just want the best for you. THAT IS WHY I DON'T WANT YOU TO GO OUT WITH THIS CHEAP LOW CLASS STREET BOY. J: YOU WANNA SAY THAT AGAIN TO ME??? B: (Says calmer) No. (Leaves) Guys..I know this didn't get to the suspenseful part but I gotta go..but do you like this so far? |
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02-02-2001, 04:31 PM
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well i cant wait to the suspense part but its a great start!!
------------------ Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too! Jinny: i think i am going to give up men Magda: you, give up sex? Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee! Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap? Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances Jinny: umm.. probley not Captin: thats what I thought |
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02-02-2001, 05:45 PM
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Here is some more...
J: Mrs. Garett sometimes I just HATE her!!! MG: Now, Jo, hate is a strong word!! What you feel for Blair is more like.."dislikeness". J: No, Mrs. Garett! Sometimes I just wish she would just..just..have something horrible happen to her! MG: Jo..you don't mean that. J: Yes, I do Mrs. Garett! (Leaves) (The camera focuses on Blair who is in the living room) MG: (Walks in) Blair would you mind running to the grocery store for me?? I need these items. (Hands her a list) B: No, I wouldn't mind. I will leave in a coupld minutes. MG: Thank you, Blair. (The camera focuses on Blair in the grocery store. All of the sudden she sees a man who looks very suspicious) MAN: (Turns to Blair) What are you lookin at? B: Uh..nothing.. MAN: It better be nothing. B: I hope you don't think you are a threat to me because if you do you are extremely foolish. You are probably a normal old dirtbag. MAN: I'd take that back if I were you. B: And why? MAN: (Pulls out a gun) This might explain it. (The camera focuses on Jo who is getting ready for her date with Harlie) J: Mrs. Garett how do I look?? MG: Beautiful. (Smiles) J: Thanks..Harlie should pick me up in a couple of minutes. MG: Good! I would like to meet him, if you don't mind that is. J: Oh its ok. I don't mind. MG: (Looks at the clock) I wonder where Blair is! She has been gone forever! I just sent her out to get a few groceries! J: Maybe she went to Bloomingdales. Hopefully she will stay there. MG: Jo!!! What is with you lately? J: What do you mean? MG: First your wishing something horrible happens to Blair now you don't want her to come home! J: Because I HATE her!! She can't except anyone I date!! Just cuz they like motorcycles! MG: Jo, i wish you and Blair could just get along!! J: I don't. (Someone knocks on the door) J: (Answers it) Harlie!! H: Hey!! J: Harlie, I'd like you to meet Mrs. Garett. MG: It's a pleasure. (Shakes his hand) J: Well Harlie ready to go? H: More than ever! J: Oky Doky then let's go! (Leaves) That is all I am writing for now..my fingers hurt..lol..do you like it?? |
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02-02-2001, 05:57 PM
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i hope blair is ok!! yea i already posted but i still like it
------------------ Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too! Jinny: i think i am going to give up men Magda: you, give up sex? Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee! Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap? Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances Jinny: umm.. probley not Captin: thats what I thought |
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02-02-2001, 06:05 PM
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Hey i love it so far! i wanna know what is going to happen to blair!? ahhh hurry up and keep it going i wanna know what happends!
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02-02-2001, 06:20 PM
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Here is some more everyone....
(The camera focuses on Jo and Harlie driving to the restaurant they will eat at) J: Uh..Harlie..ya think you could slow down?? H: What do you mean? J: Your going 3 miles over the speed limit. H: So? I can go 4 if you want. J: No..can't you just PLEASE slow down?! H: Hm...no. I always drive fast. J: Well not with me. If you don't slow down then I wanna get outta this car. H: When its moving?? J: No your gonna pull over. H: Oh no I ain't. It's my car and I will drive as fast as I.. J: Harlie look out!!! (A truck smashes into their car and it flips down a hill and into a ditch where the car lies in horrible shape) (The camera focuses on Mrs. Garett sitting on the couch begining to get worried about Blair.) T: (Comes downstairs) Hey Mrs. Garett. MG: Hi Tootie..I am begining to get worried about Blair. I sent her out to get some groceries from the food store and she still isn't back!!! (The phone rings) MG: I'll get it. (Picks up) Hello??? (There is a police man on the phone) PM: Yes, is this the residence of Blair Warner? MG: Yes..why??? PM: Well she was involved in a shooting at the Peekskill Grocery Market. We need someone to come to the hospital right now. MG: Ok..thank you....(Hangs up) T: What happened? MG: I knew something wasn't right... Guys I gotta go..do you like it?? |
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02-02-2001, 09:10 PM
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Guys im finishing the rest on word..it might be up tomarrow.
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02-02-2001, 10:07 PM
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Guys..im putting this on hold while i do my new one
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02-02-2001, 10:33 PM
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ok great just leave it off where blair has ben in a shoot out at the store...thanks now i wanna know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!11 hehe well great !!
------------------ n: girls girls girls what do people usually fight over? the little things, ignor the little things and lifes a breeze..for instence if i got irritated over all the little things that tootie did we would have split up a long time ago T: right N: who cares if she always leaves her books on my bed T: yea u see its like when...i always leave my books on your bed? N: yea, you walk in and instead of dropping them on your bed you drop them on my bed T: i dont do that N: you do, but dont worry, your a kid you dont know any better T: uhuh well if irritated you so much then why didnt you say anything? N: it doesnt irritate me much T: well is there anything else I do that doesnt irritate you MUCH? B: my my my trouble in paridise? T: you butt out of this blair J: you tell her tootie T: the same goes for you too Mr. Goodwrench |
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02-17-2001, 04:28 PM
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it's good!!!!
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02-18-2001, 04:05 PM
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Take your time on finishing the others, but be sure you don't forget this one!
~*Danielle*~ #33 Go Bulldogs! |
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02-18-2001, 04:09 PM
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I'm with BlairW_1 don't forget unperfection!
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03-01-2001, 08:05 PM
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just getting good c'mon
-colleen ------------------ JO rocks!!!!!!!! *************** J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth! *************** AIM ssgoalie8 |
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