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Devon King · 01-27-2001, 09:19 PM

Finally! The story that was previewed here weeks ago is finished and hitting the net! The pages are being uploaded this evening and tomorrow.

Because of the length of the story -- you might want to download the sections (there are 10) to read offline.

Thank you one and all for your patience and kind words of encouragement. Your comments are always appreciated!

Hope you enjoy the adventure!
http://printworksunltd.com/thefacts/outofsight.htm

80skid · 01-27-2001, 09:48 PM

Wow! I read a lot of it, but I didn't get Section 6, 7, or 8 up on my computer, some kind of error. I'll try to fix it, but I read the last section and it is GREAT!

Devon King · 01-27-2001, 10:03 PM

80skid --

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Just wanted to let you know that those sections might not be on the server yet. Some of the files have been getting kicked back in the transfer so the problem is probably with my server not your computer. Hopefully, I can get around the trouble and get them all up tonight or tomorrow.

Have a great evening!

lesliem14 · 01-27-2001, 11:04 PM

I really want to read it, but I went to the link and it said that the page couldn't be found.

Devon King · 01-28-2001, 01:06 AM

lesliem14 -- I just checked the files and they all seem to up and available now. (Whew!)

Sorry about any inconvenience! If you feel like trying again, here's the link:
http://printworksunltd.com/thefacts/outofsight.htm

lesliem14 · 01-28-2001, 02:19 AM

I just finished it and you really have raised the bar for these fanfics. It was awesome. Really, really, really good work!!!!

01-28-2001, 09:45 AM

I just finished reading your fanfic and I have a couple of things I want to say.

1. If anyone hasn't read this story, do so NOW. This isn't just an "it's good" story, this is an "if you only read one...read this one" story. This goes on the recomended reading list.lol

2. If we didn't have the problem with copyright laws, I'd be suggesting you get this published. I would pay the $6.00 for a paperback copy of this. In a heartbeat.

3. To the author... Write another one!

This is the first piece of fanfic I've read That was written by you, and now I want more!! (Same length, one completed story a day will suffice.

)

4. Just absoloute Kudos, Props, and Accolades on this story. Keep up the great work!

- Mystery Jo Fan

Abbey22 · 01-28-2001, 01:44 PM

I have to just say "Ditto" to all of the comments that Mystery Jo Fan made. I finished reading your story last night and I absolutely loved it. I hope you write some more fan fictions in the future! Keep up the good work!

Abbey

80skid · 01-28-2001, 01:49 PM

Just read it again!

Love it!

Jo_Polniaczek · 01-28-2001, 02:05 PM

It's not workin for me!!!
*Waaaahhhhh*

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Jo:You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl.

Fol_divison_rox_505 · 01-28-2001, 06:59 PM

i read the whole thing last night and all i can say is wow! it took me a while to read it but it was worth it! that is wicked awesome~!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up wrtiting the great fan ficS!

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Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too!

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap?
Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances
Jinny: umm.. probley not
Captin: thats what I thought

Abbey22 · 01-28-2001, 08:09 PM

If you want I could copy and paste it for you into email... (might be a couple emails) Well I will do it if Devon doesn't mind. Let me know if you are still having trouble reading it.

Abbey

Devon King · 01-28-2001, 08:46 PM

I'm thrilled to hear all the kind comments -- thanks! I just hoped that all the best parts of the characters would come through and that I'd turned them loose in an interesting plot.

Abbey22 --
As for e-mailing the text to folk who can't access the pages... that sounds fine. Thanks for asking!

BlairW_1 · 01-28-2001, 09:15 PM

This story was great! OHMYGOSH, I couldn't wait for the computer to load the next section!

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T: Oh no! She's right! Sweet little me IS a mass murderer! But I don't remember any of it. Multiple personalities! That's gotta be it! Six faces of me! Each face responsible for a different death! Andy, George, Natalie, Blair, Beverly Ann, Jo.
B: And then there was Tootie!
T: AAAAHHHHH! Blair! But... I thought you were...
B: Dippity-dooed? That's what I wanted everyone to think! That made it easier to get rid of the rest of you!
T: You? You're the murderer? Blair, that's so inconsiderate!
B: Don't you see? That's part of my plan to eliminate everyone who falls under the fifty percent tax bracket!
T: But we were your friends!
B: My friends don't wear polyester! They don't drive motorcycles or ramblers! They don't buy their shoes from the supermarket!
T: I get mine from Paris, honest!
B: Face it, Tootie! You're hopelessly middle-class!
T: Blair! Blair! Please, wait! Please! Blair! Oh no! AAHH!
BA: No, please, please! No! Don't kill Tootie! No!
N: Beverly Ann, wake up!
BA: Don't drink the cocoa!
----------
~Danielle~

Devon King · 01-29-2001, 09:49 PM

Just a quick note -- if those pages still won't load for some of you guys, then you can get the text at the http://www.fanfiction.net
site.

I'm really losing faith in my ISP! Grrrr...
<grin>

01-27-2001, 09:19 PM	#1
Devon King Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 24, 2000 Posts: 204	"Out of Sight" posted now Finally! The story that was previewed here weeks ago is finished and hitting the net! The pages are being uploaded this evening and tomorrow. Because of the length of the story -- you might want to download the sections (there are 10) to read offline. Thank you one and all for your patience and kind words of encouragement. Your comments are always appreciated! Hope you enjoy the adventure! http://printworksunltd.com/thefacts/outofsight.htm

01-28-2001, 09:45 AM	#7
Mystery Jo Fan Guest Posts: n/a	I just finished reading your fanfic and I have a couple of things I want to say. 1. If anyone hasn't read this story, do so NOW. This isn't just an "it's good" story, this is an "if you only read one...read this one" story. This goes on the recomended reading list.lol 2. If we didn't have the problem with copyright laws, I'd be suggesting you get this published. I would pay the $6.00 for a paperback copy of this. In a heartbeat. 3. To the author... Write another one! This is the first piece of fanfic I've read That was written by you, and now I want more!! (Same length, one completed story a day will suffice. ) 4. Just absoloute Kudos, Props, and Accolades on this story. Keep up the great work! - Mystery Jo Fan
Mystery Jo Fan Guest Posts: n/a

01-27-2001, 09:48 PM	#2
80skid smile :) Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 18, 2000 Posts: 971	Wow! I read a lot of it, but I didn't get Section 6, 7, or 8 up on my computer, some kind of error. I'll try to fix it, but I read the last section and it is GREAT!

01-27-2001, 10:03 PM	#3
Devon King Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 24, 2000 Posts: 204	80skid -- Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Just wanted to let you know that those sections might not be on the server yet. Some of the files have been getting kicked back in the transfer so the problem is probably with my server not your computer. Hopefully, I can get around the trouble and get them all up tonight or tomorrow. Have a great evening!

01-27-2001, 11:04 PM	#4
lesliem14 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 01, 2000 Location: Frankfort, KY Posts: 650	I really want to read it, but I went to the link and it said that the page couldn't be found.

01-28-2001, 01:06 AM	#5
Devon King Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 24, 2000 Posts: 204	lesliem14 -- I just checked the files and they all seem to up and available now. (Whew!) Sorry about any inconvenience! If you feel like trying again, here's the link: http://printworksunltd.com/thefacts/outofsight.htm

01-28-2001, 02:19 AM	#6
lesliem14 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 01, 2000 Location: Frankfort, KY Posts: 650	I just finished it and you really have raised the bar for these fanfics. It was awesome. Really, really, really good work!!!!

01-28-2001, 01:44 PM	#8
Abbey22 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 24, 2000 Posts: 108	I have to just say "Ditto" to all of the comments that Mystery Jo Fan made. I finished reading your story last night and I absolutely loved it. I hope you write some more fan fictions in the future! Keep up the good work! Abbey

01-28-2001, 01:49 PM	#9
80skid smile :) Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 18, 2000 Posts: 971	Just read it again! Love it!

01-28-2001, 02:05 PM	#10
Jo_Polniaczek Professional Lurker Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 07, 2000 Location: The middle of Nowhere Posts: 783	It's not workin for me!!! Waaaahhhhh ------------------ Jo:You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl.

01-28-2001, 06:59 PM	#11
Fol_divison_rox_505 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 09, 2001 Location: MA(same town joey mcIntyre from NKOTB was born in)also it is the wettest dry town(said so on Jay Leno) Posts: 154	i read the whole thing last night and all i can say is wow! it took me a while to read it but it was worth it! that is wicked awesome~!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up wrtiting the great fan ficS! ------------------ Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too! Jinny: i think i am going to give up men Magda: you, give up sex? Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee! Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap? Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances Jinny: umm.. probley not Captin: thats what I thought

01-28-2001, 08:09 PM	#12
Abbey22 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 24, 2000 Posts: 108	If you want I could copy and paste it for you into email... (might be a couple emails) Well I will do it if Devon doesn't mind. Let me know if you are still having trouble reading it. Abbey

01-28-2001, 08:46 PM	#13
Devon King Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 24, 2000 Posts: 204	I'm thrilled to hear all the kind comments -- thanks! I just hoped that all the best parts of the characters would come through and that I'd turned them loose in an interesting plot. Abbey22 -- As for e-mailing the text to folk who can't access the pages... that sounds fine. Thanks for asking!

01-28-2001, 09:15 PM	#14
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	This story was great! OHMYGOSH, I couldn't wait for the computer to load the next section! ------------------ T: Oh no! She's right! Sweet little me IS a mass murderer! But I don't remember any of it. Multiple personalities! That's gotta be it! Six faces of me! Each face responsible for a different death! Andy, George, Natalie, Blair, Beverly Ann, Jo. B: And then there was Tootie! T: AAAAHHHHH! Blair! But... I thought you were... B: Dippity-dooed? That's what I wanted everyone to think! That made it easier to get rid of the rest of you! T: You? You're the murderer? Blair, that's so inconsiderate! B: Don't you see? That's part of my plan to eliminate everyone who falls under the fifty percent tax bracket! T: But we were your friends! B: My friends don't wear polyester! They don't drive motorcycles or ramblers! They don't buy their shoes from the supermarket! T: I get mine from Paris, honest! B: Face it, Tootie! You're hopelessly middle-class! T: Blair! Blair! Please, wait! Please! Blair! Oh no! AAHH! BA: No, please, please! No! Don't kill Tootie! No! N: Beverly Ann, wake up! BA: Don't drink the cocoa! ---------- ~Danielle~

01-29-2001, 09:49 PM	#15
Devon King Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 24, 2000 Posts: 204	Just a quick note -- if those pages still won't load for some of you guys, then you can get the text at the http://www.fanfiction.net site. I'm really losing faith in my ISP! Grrrr... <grin>