new fanfic "far from home" please read and respond!

[KerriBerri687]

Hey guys, here’s a new fanfic called “far away from home” o and just so you all know, it takes place before Blair and Blaine get divorced. K and also, this is the whole thing not little pieces. Here goes!

(In Blair and Blaine’s house)

(Rachel is asleep. (Well they think she’s asleep.)

Bl- Blair, what did you do with my blue shirt?!?!

B- I didn’t take your blue shirt Blaine.

Bl- well, I can’t seem to find it. So obviously someone must have took it and I don’t think it was Rachel!

B- why don’t you just look for it yourself?

Bl- why?!!??! (starts to yell) I’ll tell you why. Hmmmm…lets think…who works long hours to support this family? Who brings home the paycheck every week, who, (goes on and on)

B- (yells back) who is raising Rachel? Who is the one who cooks the food? Who cleans up the mess everyone makes? You?!?! I don’t think so Blaine. I do just as much as you around here so don’t you dare badmouth me Blaine.

Bl – why did I ever marry you Blair? Out of all the women in the world, I chose you. Why?!?!

B- you don’t really mean that. Do you? You really don’t love me?

Bl- that’s right I don’t. I liked you when we first were married, but I never loved you.

B- Never?

Bl- never have and never will.

B- (runs out of the room ad sits down on the couch and looks at her and Blaine’s wedding picture and starts to cry.)

B- (crying) we used to be so happy together. What happened? (cries some more)

(in Rachel’s room)

R-(sitting up in bed) I can’t take this anymore. I mean my parents yelling all the time, my mom hysterical practically every night. I’m only 11 and I shouldn’t have to deal with this. I’m leaving. (Gets up and puts on regular clothes. Then packs a backpack and climbs out her window. (It’s on the first floor.)

Bl- would ya stop crying! I’m trying to get some sleep over here!

B- (tries to be quieter) I’m sorry.

(About 10 minutes later)

B- (done crying and decides to go check on Rachel before she goes to bed)

B-(opens the door and whispers) Rachel? Are you still awake? (Hears no reply and walks over to her bed.) Rachel? (Puts her hand on her shoulder but then realizes that its not her shoulder) Rachel?!?!? (Pulls up blanket to see a large stuffed pig instead of her daughter and runs out of the room into her and Blaine’s room)

B- (yells) Blaine!

Bl- would ya shut up Blair! I’m trying to sleep! You should be too.

B- Rachel’s gone.

Bl- (sits up) What?!

B- you heard me! I just went into her room to check on her and…. And…. she was gone!

Bl- where could she have gone?

B- how should I know? (Starts to get kind of frantic and hysterical)

Bl- Blair, calm down. (moves over) here sit down.

B- (sits) I just don’t know where she could have gone! I mean she was in her bed an hour ago! (puts her hand on her head.)

Bl- Blair, don’t worry we’ll find her. Let me just change into some regular clothes and we’ll go look for her okay? Now just calm down .

B- (looks at him) Alright.

(Blaine puts on a pair of jeans and they head out to find Rachel.)

(Meanwhile a few blocks away Rachel decides to sit down on a bench and eat the sandwich she brought with her,)

R- I wonder if they even know I’m gone. I doubt it; they’re probably yelling and arguing about a stupid shirt, or pair of jeans or something. Even if they did notice that I was gone they probably would just argue over whose fault it is that I ran away anyway. (Sighs) when will they learn?

(Back a few blocks…Blair and Blaine are driving around looking for Rachel.)

B- Maybe I should get out and look for her. I mean for all we know she could be right in front of our faces, just hiding in a bush or something.

Bl- good idea, do you want me to get out and look and you drive or do you want to go out.

B- I’ll go. When I was younger I would try to runaway myself, so I know a few places where Rachel might be hiding.

Bl- Okay. Meet me about 6 blocks down whenever your ready okay? I’ll keep looking though. (starts to drive away slowly because he is trying to find Rachel.)

B- (trips over something on the sidewalk)

Bl- (sees her trip and gets out of the car to help her up) Are you okay?

B- yeah, fine. I just stumbled over a little rock.

Bl- oh, okay. (Starts to walk away) oh, Blair?

B- (dusting herself off) yeah?

Bl- what I said earlier…well I didn’t really mean it like it sounded. I do (hesitates a little bit)…. love you and you are a great mother to Rachel, and a great…(hesitates for about 1minute) wife. (Smiles at her)

B- (smiles and walks over to him) you really mean that?

Bl- yeah. (Looks her in the eye)

B- (looks him in the eye)

B+Bl- (kiss, but then stop when they hear Rachel’s voice.) Rachel?

R- (comes out from behind the bushes) I can’t believe this! Was that really you two before? Because I could’ve sworn that that wasn’t you!

B- Rachel! (gives her a hug) why did you runaway? Your dad and I were so concerned about you! We didn’t know where you were!

R- I left because well…I didn’t like having to hear you two fighting all the time. I mean, it was really getting me upset to always see you so upset all the time. I wasn’t planning to runaway forever, maybe just a day or two. I needed a, well a vacation from all the yelling and crying at home. You understand don’t you?

Bl- I know I do.

B- yeah, so do I. (Kneels down beside Rachel) look, honey I’m so sorry that you had to see your dad and I fighting so much. We had no idea it was hurting you so much. We didn’t even know you were awake half the time.

R- well, I was. It’s kind of hard to fall asleep with all that yelling and screaming going on in the next room.

Bl- why didn’t you tell us how you felt?
R- I don’t know. I just didn’t want to get you mad or anything. Sorry.

B- no, I’m the one who should be saying sorry to you. (looks her in the eye) I’m so sorry Rachel.

Bl – you mean we’re the ones who should be saying sorry.

B- that’s what I meant to say. And to make this up to you, your dad and I are going to stop fighting so much.

R- you promise? Both of you?

B+Bl- we promise.

B- I think that this whole….adventure has brought us all closer together. (smiles at Blaine) Lets go home.

(all go in the car and go home)

THE END

so what'd u guys think?

that was good. i think it was the first fanfic where blaine was actually nice! lol

[Lil_miss_goodwrench_518]

great!!!

[BlairW_4]

This is really good...I like the fact that Blanine was nice.

[BlairW_1]

Awwwww, how sweet! I had tears in my eyes when Blaine said he still loved her! (I like romantic stuff!)

~*Danielle*~

[DramaQueenTootie]

that was soo cute.....baline was...sweet...freakky ~*Alicia*~

hey, i don't come on this board very much and i havn't read many fanfics but i gotta say that i love this fanfic! great job!