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FOL85NatandMrsGRock · 11-09-2000, 08:09 PM

Ok, I am sarah lynn from the other message board if anybody used to be at that one... I posted my scripts at that one and i got kinda wacked hwen people made fun of them, but ive matured in a matter of days and i will not get wacked if people make fun of my scripts, but if you want to see my scripts reply by sayign yes, if you dont tehn reply by sayign no, scripts are episodes that i have made up MYSELF and created beucase i wanted to see episodes on this situation or becuase i didint liek how they did an episode on it for real. my scripts you ahve to remember are written by me and i am only 15 years old so my perspective is put into it becuase i am the age they are in soem episodes i have like 16 or so scripts hand written but i only have about 10 typed, i can put them on this message board if you want and i can take the critisms but if i do post them i want positive feed back too!! my episodes include...

Tootie enters puberty or womanhood and doesnt know how to pull through it (hey the cosby show had an episode were rudie had the same thing happen and that was in the 80s so why not this... its a FACT OF LIFE heheh..)(odd tiems get better)

jo plans to shift the relationship of her and her new boyfriend to the final level (get ready, get set)

natalie is involved with a new boyfriend who does drugs which might hit her hard in more thn one way (nats life lesson)

jos involvment with new friend Jenny brings more than jo bargained for, I.E. Jo smokes cigarettes (tough times to get through)

a graduation campus party at bates may bring nat and totie to an end at eastland and may ruin jos future at langely college, antoher lesson on alcohol (the graduation party)

tootie gets a modeling job that lands her a lot of money or a bad reputation (everythign has a price)

tootie goes over board on trying to gain attention from a guy hse admires (too much stuff)

Nat becomes too involved with dieting after 2 boys from bates make fun of her and blair goes over board on studying and is ruining her health as well (people can be mean)

nat befriends newcomer kimberly who is involved with a street gang (toughing it out)

blair meets a guy who has HIV and is unaware of waht it is exactly and avoids him until she is sure of why he has it (waths bothering you?)

*these ideas arent typed yet*

Tootie dates a guy with a serious past and has trouble dealing with people physically (dont hurt me)

an argument between tootie and natalie about totoies new friend sends nat off on a mission to write an article about tootie and her new friend in the eastlander but just as soon and mrs. garrett and the rest of the girls think natalie was lying they find evidnece that may lead to a new conclusion about nats article (printing right and wrong)

Jo gets caught in a bank robbery that ends her up in the hospital in critical condition and the person least expected helps jo get through it (who my true friends are)

Tootie and natalie find cigarettes in the kitchen drawer and assume they are mrs. garretts but the shock is much more off than that (knowing right from wrong)

Blair befriends a deaf girl and takes up sign language but when she gets frustrated and mad at blair her friends arent there too help either (a small difference)

Natalie meets a runaway form new york who has been off selling more that the truth and is being hunted down by her employer who puts natalie and her friend in a bad situation, but can mrs. garrett bail them out this time? (the bad life)

Tootie and natalie throw a party while mrs. garret is out for the evening that only has invitations for two other bates boys (The Party)

these are my episodes and i dont know if you are interested in seeing them, but let me warn you that they can cause chaos as they did in the other message board (people were swearing at me when i got defensive over them but i realize that people arent always gonna love my work and i can take the critisms) so please reply with yes you want to see them or no and i'll put them on here!! thanks!!

Mustang Mimi 04 · 11-10-2000, 12:35 AM

Cool! I am always for creative people! I'd love to see some episodes that you've created. They all sound rather interesting so any you choose is fine by me. Hope you post em!

Jo Bonner · 11-10-2000, 03:07 AM

yeah that would be totally great!! i love your sacripts!
Jo

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"There are two things in life we do not laugh about; the Yankees and what Roy did to me." -Jo Polniaczek

*Melissa* · 11-10-2000, 09:51 AM

Yeah, sure, I'd like to see your scripts! I like to write stories too, so I'm always interested in reading other people's ideas!

FOL85NatandMrsGRock · 11-10-2000, 05:18 PM

ok!!

i will post them here later tonight so be watching tonight or tomorrow for the scripts, i will put what season they come from next to the title of the episode so you know what season we're talkign about, but please do respond with what you truely think cuz i know a lot of eps deal with things or have people saying things that they might not normally say, but they're in there to add differences with characters than we are used to from then than to now... so i added soem 2000's as you could say, pep to it!! hope you enjoy!!

~FOL FAN FOREVER~
:P

daisygirlee · 11-10-2000, 05:30 PM

post away!! I love that stuff...

The T · 11-10-2000, 06:39 PM

I would love to read them! Please do post them! I had actually thought of doin something like this too actually with the same idea as Jo startin to smoke. Funny! Weird. I'd love to read so please do post!

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See ya~The T
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Richie: Rally! Everybody Rally!

Fonz: The Fonz don't Rally.

Richie: Your chipping away at my leadership Fonz.

Fonz: everybody rally!
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80skid · 12-20-2000, 05:35 PM

hey i just read this one and i think you should type up and add the ones youve said you havent typed up yet... like the one about jo in critical condition, etc... i would luv to see them!

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FOL rocks!!
~Natalie: I'm so brilliant it scares me!

FOL85NatandMrsGRock · 12-20-2000, 06:18 PM

Ok, sorry to say, but that episode is still under construction... actually i still need to get the whole skeleton done!!

hehe... I have this huge plan for it and everything! and i know i said i'd have my episode where jo looses her virginity up by tomorrow... but it might be longer... that episode is kinda dumb jsut about how mrs. g is mad and then nat might ahve sex and all this humble jumble so i dont know if i want to share it... i'm working on a series fanalie instead of the one they had... one where mrs. g comes back from africa and this is one where natalie is pregnant cuz you kow her and snake had sex or whatever and then edna gets mad at bev for letting her have sex in the first palce and then nat and snake elope and then they come back and nat and mrs. g talk it over and then there is a big surprise at the end... so i will probably type that one... instead of the one where jo looses her virginity... it just didnt work the way i wanted it to... but hopefully i'll get to the bank robbery one very soon!

TAH!!

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jo: mrs. g gone on ahead I KNOW i can fix the problem
MRs. G: jo only twice in my life have i spoke in an arbitrary manner, once when my ex husband morgaged our home to pay the bookee, and now, GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE OR I'LL BEAT YOU WITH MY FRYING PAN!!!

Tootie: (laughing at nat for her hat)waht should i have said?
jo: (gets up and laughs)
blair: nice hat!! (laughs)
Nat: waths wrong with it? (takes it off and looks at it) Oh good good!!! I'm loosing a bolt im working half wattage!!

Jo: Woaw Nat!! (grabs blairs palm tree from nat) Nice Girls Don't Throw Trees!!!

Nat: Titilating and Delectable Cookies...
Jo: I knew i should have never asked for help i got mangled mobiles and x-rated cookies!!!

Jo: Hankey Meet Pankey!!

blair: now jo i know we usually dont agree but that was a scuzy thing for your mother to do!
tootie: wahts so scuzy about it!?!? dont you read the national enquirer, some of the best peopel are Shacking up!!
mrs. g: TOOTIE!!! im surrounded by x-rated kids!!!

Jo: I didnt know all you had to do to get your way around here was throw a tantrum
Nat: yea! I've got to work on my kicking and screaming!!

~FOL85NatandMrsGRock~
*Sarah Lynn*

TVaddict · 12-20-2000, 08:58 PM

Take your time kid. We love to read them but you don't need to feel pressure to get them done as fast as you can. The ideas sound great, just get them up when you can.

Devon King · 12-20-2000, 09:48 PM

Keep writing 'cos you're doing a great job! You've got a good ear for dialog and lots of good ideas. I'm glad to see you aren't afraid of tackling tough issues -- just as they did on the show.

02-17-2001, 01:16 PM

what's the one called that mrs. g comes back from africa? i have never seen that one? can anyone or FOL85NatandMrsGRock help me please?

FOL85NatandMrsGRock · 02-17-2001, 05:18 PM

that would be Mrs. Garrett/Gaines is Back In Town Parts 1 and 2... hope that helps.. it should be somewhere on the message board or i can email you... you know mindy's_sis if you like my scripts you can see all i have at my website and then i can email some to you.. unless you read all of them on the message board anyways.. hehe

incase you need it my website is... www.geocities.com/chipps2298/FOLHome.html
then just go to the fanfiction section.. well tah tah...

02-17-2001, 11:02 PM

thank you very much! I have been to your website and I have read all of the scripts there are to read.. and thanks for the title of that one.. i found it now.. and that one is also a very good one!! I could defantely see that one as a real last ever episode.. you are very talented and i hope that you put it to use when you get older.. i can see it now.. sarah lynn the writer for the New Facts of Life.. you really should! keep writing and amazing me!

11-09-2000, 08:09 PM	#1
FOL85NatandMrsGRock The Lovable Sarah Senior Member Join Date: Nov 07, 2000 Location: Wisconsin (Same Place Charlotte's From and where That 70's Show takes place!) .... Wish I was in Mayfield USA! Posts: 1,770	Scripts Ok, I am sarah lynn from the other message board if anybody used to be at that one... I posted my scripts at that one and i got kinda wacked hwen people made fun of them, but ive matured in a matter of days and i will not get wacked if people make fun of my scripts, but if you want to see my scripts reply by sayign yes, if you dont tehn reply by sayign no, scripts are episodes that i have made up MYSELF and created beucase i wanted to see episodes on this situation or becuase i didint liek how they did an episode on it for real. my scripts you ahve to remember are written by me and i am only 15 years old so my perspective is put into it becuase i am the age they are in soem episodes i have like 16 or so scripts hand written but i only have about 10 typed, i can put them on this message board if you want and i can take the critisms but if i do post them i want positive feed back too!! my episodes include... Tootie enters puberty or womanhood and doesnt know how to pull through it (hey the cosby show had an episode were rudie had the same thing happen and that was in the 80s so why not this... its a FACT OF LIFE heheh..)(odd tiems get better) jo plans to shift the relationship of her and her new boyfriend to the final level (get ready, get set) natalie is involved with a new boyfriend who does drugs which might hit her hard in more thn one way (nats life lesson) jos involvment with new friend Jenny brings more than jo bargained for, I.E. Jo smokes cigarettes (tough times to get through) a graduation campus party at bates may bring nat and totie to an end at eastland and may ruin jos future at langely college, antoher lesson on alcohol (the graduation party) tootie gets a modeling job that lands her a lot of money or a bad reputation (everythign has a price) tootie goes over board on trying to gain attention from a guy hse admires (too much stuff) Nat becomes too involved with dieting after 2 boys from bates make fun of her and blair goes over board on studying and is ruining her health as well (people can be mean) nat befriends newcomer kimberly who is involved with a street gang (toughing it out) blair meets a guy who has HIV and is unaware of waht it is exactly and avoids him until she is sure of why he has it (waths bothering you?) these ideas arent typed yet Tootie dates a guy with a serious past and has trouble dealing with people physically (dont hurt me) an argument between tootie and natalie about totoies new friend sends nat off on a mission to write an article about tootie and her new friend in the eastlander but just as soon and mrs. garrett and the rest of the girls think natalie was lying they find evidnece that may lead to a new conclusion about nats article (printing right and wrong) Jo gets caught in a bank robbery that ends her up in the hospital in critical condition and the person least expected helps jo get through it (who my true friends are) Tootie and natalie find cigarettes in the kitchen drawer and assume they are mrs. garretts but the shock is much more off than that (knowing right from wrong) Blair befriends a deaf girl and takes up sign language but when she gets frustrated and mad at blair her friends arent there too help either (a small difference) Natalie meets a runaway form new york who has been off selling more that the truth and is being hunted down by her employer who puts natalie and her friend in a bad situation, but can mrs. garrett bail them out this time? (the bad life) Tootie and natalie throw a party while mrs. garret is out for the evening that only has invitations for two other bates boys (The Party) these are my episodes and i dont know if you are interested in seeing them, but let me warn you that they can cause chaos as they did in the other message board (people were swearing at me when i got defensive over them but i realize that people arent always gonna love my work and i can take the critisms) so please reply with yes you want to see them or no and i'll put them on here!! thanks!!

02-17-2001, 01:16 PM	#12
Mindy's_Sister_i_wish Guest Posts: n/a	what's the one called that mrs. g comes back from africa? i have never seen that one? can anyone or FOL85NatandMrsGRock help me please?
Mindy's_Sister_i_wish Guest Posts: n/a

02-17-2001, 11:02 PM	#14
Mindy's_Sister_i_wish Guest Posts: n/a	thank you very much! I have been to your website and I have read all of the scripts there are to read.. and thanks for the title of that one.. i found it now.. and that one is also a very good one!! I could defantely see that one as a real last ever episode.. you are very talented and i hope that you put it to use when you get older.. i can see it now.. sarah lynn the writer for the New Facts of Life.. you really should! keep writing and amazing me!
Mindy's_Sister_i_wish Guest Posts: n/a

11-10-2000, 12:35 AM	#2
Mustang Mimi 04 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 09, 2000 Posts: 122	Cool! I am always for creative people! I'd love to see some episodes that you've created. They all sound rather interesting so any you choose is fine by me. Hope you post em!

11-10-2000, 03:07 AM	#3
Jo Bonner Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Nov 08, 2000 Location: Peekskill, NY, USA Posts: 34	yeah that would be totally great!! i love your sacripts! Jo ------------------ "There are two things in life we do not laugh about; the Yankees and what Roy did to me." -Jo Polniaczek

11-10-2000, 09:51 AM	#4
Melissa Slayer Faith Senior Member Join Date: Oct 24, 2000 Location: I'll let you know when I find out... Posts: 1,820	Yeah, sure, I'd like to see your scripts! I like to write stories too, so I'm always interested in reading other people's ideas!

11-10-2000, 05:18 PM	#5
FOL85NatandMrsGRock The Lovable Sarah Senior Member Join Date: Nov 07, 2000 Location: Wisconsin (Same Place Charlotte's From and where That 70's Show takes place!) .... Wish I was in Mayfield USA! Posts: 1,770	ok!! i will post them here later tonight so be watching tonight or tomorrow for the scripts, i will put what season they come from next to the title of the episode so you know what season we're talkign about, but please do respond with what you truely think cuz i know a lot of eps deal with things or have people saying things that they might not normally say, but they're in there to add differences with characters than we are used to from then than to now... so i added soem 2000's as you could say, pep to it!! hope you enjoy!! ~FOL FAN FOREVER~ :P

11-10-2000, 05:30 PM	#6
daisygirlee Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Nov 01, 2000 Location: coral springs,florida usa Posts: 54	post away!! I love that stuff...

11-10-2000, 06:39 PM	#7
The T Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 22, 2000 Location: Baraboo, WI US Posts: 1,108	I would love to read them! Please do post them! I had actually thought of doin something like this too actually with the same idea as Jo startin to smoke. Funny! Weird. I'd love to read so please do post! ------------------ See ya~The T ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Richie: Rally! Everybody Rally! Fonz: The Fonz don't Rally. Richie: Your chipping away at my leadership Fonz. Fonz: everybody rally! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~

12-20-2000, 05:35 PM	#8
80skid smile :) Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 18, 2000 Posts: 971	hey i just read this one and i think you should type up and add the ones youve said you havent typed up yet... like the one about jo in critical condition, etc... i would luv to see them! ------------------ ----- FOL rocks!! ~Natalie: I'm so brilliant it scares me!

12-20-2000, 06:18 PM	#9
FOL85NatandMrsGRock The Lovable Sarah Senior Member Join Date: Nov 07, 2000 Location: Wisconsin (Same Place Charlotte's From and where That 70's Show takes place!) .... Wish I was in Mayfield USA! Posts: 1,770	Ok, sorry to say, but that episode is still under construction... actually i still need to get the whole skeleton done!! hehe... I have this huge plan for it and everything! and i know i said i'd have my episode where jo looses her virginity up by tomorrow... but it might be longer... that episode is kinda dumb jsut about how mrs. g is mad and then nat might ahve sex and all this humble jumble so i dont know if i want to share it... i'm working on a series fanalie instead of the one they had... one where mrs. g comes back from africa and this is one where natalie is pregnant cuz you kow her and snake had sex or whatever and then edna gets mad at bev for letting her have sex in the first palce and then nat and snake elope and then they come back and nat and mrs. g talk it over and then there is a big surprise at the end... so i will probably type that one... instead of the one where jo looses her virginity... it just didnt work the way i wanted it to... but hopefully i'll get to the bank robbery one very soon! TAH!! ------------------ jo: mrs. g gone on ahead I KNOW i can fix the problem MRs. G: jo only twice in my life have i spoke in an arbitrary manner, once when my ex husband morgaged our home to pay the bookee, and now, GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE OR I'LL BEAT YOU WITH MY FRYING PAN!!! Tootie: (laughing at nat for her hat)waht should i have said? jo: (gets up and laughs) blair: nice hat!! (laughs) Nat: waths wrong with it? (takes it off and looks at it) Oh good good!!! I'm loosing a bolt im working half wattage!! Jo: Woaw Nat!! (grabs blairs palm tree from nat) Nice Girls Don't Throw Trees!!! Nat: Titilating and Delectable Cookies... Jo: I knew i should have never asked for help i got mangled mobiles and x-rated cookies!!! Jo: Hankey Meet Pankey!! blair: now jo i know we usually dont agree but that was a scuzy thing for your mother to do! tootie: wahts so scuzy about it!?!? dont you read the national enquirer, some of the best peopel are Shacking up!! mrs. g: TOOTIE!!! im surrounded by x-rated kids!!! Jo: I didnt know all you had to do to get your way around here was throw a tantrum Nat: yea! I've got to work on my kicking and screaming!! ~FOL85NatandMrsGRock~ Sarah Lynn

12-20-2000, 08:58 PM	#10
TVaddict Member Forum Regular Join Date: Oct 30, 2000 Location: NH Posts: 562	Take your time kid. We love to read them but you don't need to feel pressure to get them done as fast as you can. The ideas sound great, just get them up when you can.

12-20-2000, 09:48 PM	#11
Devon King Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 24, 2000 Posts: 204	Keep writing 'cos you're doing a great job! You've got a good ear for dialog and lots of good ideas. I'm glad to see you aren't afraid of tackling tough issues -- just as they did on the show.

02-17-2001, 05:18 PM	#13
FOL85NatandMrsGRock The Lovable Sarah Senior Member Join Date: Nov 07, 2000 Location: Wisconsin (Same Place Charlotte's From and where That 70's Show takes place!) .... Wish I was in Mayfield USA! Posts: 1,770	that would be Mrs. Garrett/Gaines is Back In Town Parts 1 and 2... hope that helps.. it should be somewhere on the message board or i can email you... you know mindy's_sis if you like my scripts you can see all i have at my website and then i can email some to you.. unless you read all of them on the message board anyways.. hehe incase you need it my website is... www.geocities.com/chipps2298/FOLHome.html then just go to the fanfiction section.. well tah tah...