The Man With The Gun - Sitcoms Online Message Boards

BlairW_4 · 02-13-2001, 09:04 PM

((Peekskill))
(The thunderstorm that was taking place was extremely dangerous. One telephone pole had falled down and a number of car accidents took place within the area. The heavy rain drops that were coming down on Mrs. Garett's house caused clatter when they hit the roof)
((The girl's bedroom))
J: (Talking to herself in her sleep) Hey..gimme back my bike you creep!! (Rolls over on the bed)
B: (Yawns and talks with her eyes closed) Jo..keep your bike buisness..(Yawns again)..to yourself...(Falls back asleep)
(About five minutes pass and Blair gets up and out of bed and decides to come down to the kitchen for a midnight snack)
((The kitchen))
B: (Opens the refrigerator and squints her eyes from the light. All of the sudden she hears a noise outside) Huh? (Shuts the refrigerator slowly and walks to the window, trying to see what the noise was)
((Outside))
(The rain is still coming down hard. All of the sudden a shadow of a man overtakes the bushes)
((The kitchen))
B: (Examines the backyard from the window and suddenly sees the shaddow of the man. She gasps as she sees the man rise from the bushes and look at her directly)
Man: (From outside) (Glares at her and lifts his hand up revealing a gun)
B: (Screams and runs upstairs)
((The next morning))
(Police officers are in the kitchen with Blair and Mrs. Garett)
P1: Now what excactly did the man look like?
B: Well...it was dark out and it was hard to tell...but he was wearing a hat and what looked like a mask.
P2: Did he have any weapons?
B: Well I though I saw a gun..
P1: About what time was it approximately when you witnessed this incodent?
B: About midnight.
P2: Well thats all the information we are going to need. We'll call if theres any more information we found out about this case.
MG: Thank you, officers.
(The two police men leave)
B: Mrs. Garett...I'm scared..
MG: (Sits down next to her) I know Blair..but don't worry! The police will make sure the man doesn't come back tonight alright?
B: (Sighs) But how could they make sure??
MG: (Smiles) They will. (Leaves)
((The living room))
N: I can't belive this!! A man with a gun outside our house!!
J: If I were to see him I'd deck him!
T: Blair he could of killed you! The bullet could have gone right through the window!!
B: I know! That's why I am NOT going to sleep tonight.
MG: Oh Blair, you will. Trust me.
B: No Mrs. Garett I won't. I am not going to sleep when a man, who KNOWS I live here could be right outside the door with a gun!
MG: Blair I know how you feel about the man and gun. But listen to me! We and the police are doing the best we can to stop that man from coming here! Now c'mon girls..let's go have lunch.
(Everyone leaves but Blair)
B: Yeah..but I KNOW your not doing the best you can. (Puts head down and is afraid)

Guys sorry..I gotta go!

80skid · 02-14-2001, 12:37 PM

keep it goin'!!

Lil_miss_goodwrench_518 · 02-14-2001, 04:49 PM

great!

BlairW_4 · 02-14-2001, 05:20 PM

((The girl's bedroom the following night))
B: (The only one not sleeping. She is laying in her bed on her side with her eyes open)
J: (Yawns and wakes up) ..Blair?? Your STILL up?!
B: (Whispering) Shhhh...you might wake up the others! I told you so many times Jo, I can't sleep!
J: Blair if you keep this up you'll never get any sleep...(Hears a noise)
B: (Goes pale) Jo...
J: Blair..that was probably the wind.
B: ...It's the same excact noise I heard last night...(There is a loud BANG)
J: (Looks at Blair)..C'mon...(Gets up and starts to go downstairs)
B: (Follows)
((The living room))
J: C'mon in the kitchen.
B: (Follows)
((The Kitchen))
B: (Walks to the window and ducks, so nobody outside could see her)
J: (Sees the shaddow) Holy...
B: (Pulls her down) Yes..I saw it too!!!
J: (Gets up) That guys done with the games. I'm getting to him now. (Runs out of the kitchen)
B: No!! Jo!! (Runs after her)
J: (Leaves the house)
B: Jo!!!!!!! (Groans and follows outside)
((Outside))
J and B: (Walking slowly and quietly)
(All of the sudden the man grabs Jo by the back of her shirt and Blair by the hand. They both try to scream but the man covers their mouths and carries them into the street_
J: (Yelling) LET GO OF US YOU CREEP!!
B: (Screams) MRS. GARETT!!
Man: Shut up, kid!! I got a gun!!
(The man runs to a van and opens the back trunk, throws Jo and Blair into it and slams the door shut. He goes into the driver's seat and drives away)
B: (Yelling in the back) LET US GO!!
(There is a sheet of plastic seperating the back of the van with the driver's section)
B: (Looks at Jo) I KNEW THIS WAS GONNA HAPPEN JO I KNEW IT!! BUT NOOO MRS. GARETT WOULDN'T DO ANYTHING!! NOW WHAT IF HE KILLS US??!
J: (Calmly) Blair, calm down!!! I know we are..well..in trouble..but the more he knows we're afraid the more he'll keep us!!!
B: (Goes quiet) Jo...I'm afraid...
J: Don't worry...(Hugs her)
B: (Starts crying lightly) Jo...this is serious!! What if he's a killer or crook?? And.....what if he's planning to kill..US?
(The car jerks fast and Blair and Jo go flying into the wall screaming)
B: (Screams)
J: (Hits the back of the van)
(The van swirves and curves in a back alley and the man opens the door while the car is moving and gets out)
B: WHAT'S HE DOING??!!
J: He got outta the car!!
B: JO NOBODY'S DRIVING THE CAR!
(THe man put a heavy peice of brick on the gas pedal, so the car would still go)
J: Oh my god...
B: (Quietly) And we're going straight for the back of a alley!!
J: Oh dang!!!!!!!!!
B: JO WE'RE GONNA CRASH!!!!!!!!
J: (Looks outside the window at the brick buildings they are passing. She knows something horrible will happen, but doesn't wanna admit it.) Hold up...I got a idea..(Kicks the window open)
B: JO NO!!!!!!!!
J: (Falls out and hits her head on the ground and rolls over)
(The van slams into a brick buileing and bricks fly everything with a huge crash)

Guys I gotta go..Sorry!!

BlairW_4 · 02-14-2001, 06:52 PM

((The house))
N: (Wakes up with a yawn at 5 o'clock in the morning) Guys..I can't sleep...(Notices Blair and Jo are gone) Guys?!! (Sees Tootie) TOOTIE..WAKE UP!!
T: (Wakes up) Huh? What is it??
N: BLAIR AND JO ARE GONE!
((The alley))
J: (Gets up. She has a cut over her eye and has a bruised arm. She suddenly gets grabbed by someone. That someone is the man with the gun)
Man: Looks like you survived eh?!
J: Let me go you freak!!!
Man: Heck no!!! I finally got someone for keeps. Wheres the blondie??
J: (Doesnt want him to know where she is) Uh...shes dead. She didnt survive.
Man: Hehe...well you did. (Glares and runs off with her)
((The van))
B: (Laying on the ground. She suddenly wakes up and stares around the van) Wha...(Gets up) Jo?? (Notices she is gone) Oh no...(Gets up and jumps out the window into the alley and sees the man a while away with Jo. She runs behind a building so the man won't see her and climbs up a ladder to the roof of a building)
Man: (Grabs the gun from his pocket and puts it against Jo's neck and is about to pull the trigger) Now what ya gonna do?
B: (From building, talking to herself) I hope a nail dont break for this.
Man: (The man shoots the gun, but Blair comes down onto him and kncoks him over so the bullet misses)
B: JO JO GET THE GUN!!!!!!!!!!!!
Man: Argh!!!!!!!!!
J: (Grabs the gun)
B: RUN!!!!!!!
Man: (Pulls Blair down on the ground)
J: (Aims the gun at the man)
B: NO JO DON'T IT MIGHT MISS!! RUN TO THE POLICE STA...
(The man smacks her down on the ground and punches her)
J: (Knows she was gonna say police station, so she goes there)
Man: (Starts beating up Blair)
B: Get off!!!! (Gets out a pocket mirror and smashes it on the ground, picks up a sharp peice and pokes him in the stomach with it and goes "Haha.")
Man: Dangit!!!
B: (Gets loose and starts running up the alley)
Man: (Chases after her)
B: (Picks up a rock and throws it at the man but it misses)
Man: (Picks up a stone and chucks it at her but it misses also)
B: (Runs until she gets into the town area. She sees the police station and stops)
Man: (Grabs her)
B: (Screams)
((The police stattion))
J: Theres a girl getting attacked in the alley down the street! (Looks out the window) There she is!!!!
PM: (Runs out the door)
PM: (Yells and pulls out his gun) DROP THE GIRL!!! PUT YOUR HANDS UP!!
Man: (Follows the directions)
PM: (Handcuffs the man)
PM: Are you ok mam??
B: Yes..I'm fine.
J: (Comes out) Blair!! Thanks for....(Smiles) Jumping on him.
B: No problem. I BROKE A NAIL TO DO THAT! AND A MIRROR!
(They laugh)
((The house))
MG: Girls, you should never leave the house again!!!
B: We won't Mrs. Garett..
MG: Now are you SURE your alright?!
J: We're fine. oh...and Blair saved me!!
MG: (Smiles) Oh and girls...where your sleeping tonight...YOU ARE NOT SLEEPING UNTIL THE POLICE MAKE SURE THAT MANS LOCKED UP!! (Leaves)
B: (Turns to jo) What did I tell ya??
(They laugh and hug)

....The End....

Well there's the end! A new story should be coming in a while...

jofan4life · 02-15-2001, 04:12 PM

Great job!

Lil_miss_goodwrench_518 · 02-15-2001, 04:26 PM

this was awesome

02-13-2001, 09:04 PM	#1
BlairW_4 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 27, 2001 Posts: 252	The Man With The Gun ((Peekskill)) (The thunderstorm that was taking place was extremely dangerous. One telephone pole had falled down and a number of car accidents took place within the area. The heavy rain drops that were coming down on Mrs. Garett's house caused clatter when they hit the roof) ((The girl's bedroom)) J: (Talking to herself in her sleep) Hey..gimme back my bike you creep!! (Rolls over on the bed) B: (Yawns and talks with her eyes closed) Jo..keep your bike buisness..(Yawns again)..to yourself...(Falls back asleep) (About five minutes pass and Blair gets up and out of bed and decides to come down to the kitchen for a midnight snack) ((The kitchen)) B: (Opens the refrigerator and squints her eyes from the light. All of the sudden she hears a noise outside) Huh? (Shuts the refrigerator slowly and walks to the window, trying to see what the noise was) ((Outside)) (The rain is still coming down hard. All of the sudden a shadow of a man overtakes the bushes) ((The kitchen)) B: (Examines the backyard from the window and suddenly sees the shaddow of the man. She gasps as she sees the man rise from the bushes and look at her directly) Man: (From outside) (Glares at her and lifts his hand up revealing a gun) B: (Screams and runs upstairs) ((The next morning)) (Police officers are in the kitchen with Blair and Mrs. Garett) P1: Now what excactly did the man look like? B: Well...it was dark out and it was hard to tell...but he was wearing a hat and what looked like a mask. P2: Did he have any weapons? B: Well I though I saw a gun.. P1: About what time was it approximately when you witnessed this incodent? B: About midnight. P2: Well thats all the information we are going to need. We'll call if theres any more information we found out about this case. MG: Thank you, officers. (The two police men leave) B: Mrs. Garett...I'm scared.. MG: (Sits down next to her) I know Blair..but don't worry! The police will make sure the man doesn't come back tonight alright? B: (Sighs) But how could they make sure?? MG: (Smiles) They will. (Leaves) ((The living room)) N: I can't belive this!! A man with a gun outside our house!! J: If I were to see him I'd deck him! T: Blair he could of killed you! The bullet could have gone right through the window!! B: I know! That's why I am NOT going to sleep tonight. MG: Oh Blair, you will. Trust me. B: No Mrs. Garett I won't. I am not going to sleep when a man, who KNOWS I live here could be right outside the door with a gun! MG: Blair I know how you feel about the man and gun. But listen to me! We and the police are doing the best we can to stop that man from coming here! Now c'mon girls..let's go have lunch. (Everyone leaves but Blair) B: Yeah..but I KNOW your not doing the best you can. (Puts head down and is afraid) Guys sorry..I gotta go!

02-14-2001, 12:37 PM	#2
80skid smile :) Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 18, 2000 Posts: 971	keep it goin'!!

02-14-2001, 04:49 PM	#3
Lil_miss_goodwrench_518 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 02, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 174	great!

02-14-2001, 05:20 PM	#4
BlairW_4 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 27, 2001 Posts: 252	((The girl's bedroom the following night)) B: (The only one not sleeping. She is laying in her bed on her side with her eyes open) J: (Yawns and wakes up) ..Blair?? Your STILL up?! B: (Whispering) Shhhh...you might wake up the others! I told you so many times Jo, I can't sleep! J: Blair if you keep this up you'll never get any sleep...(Hears a noise) B: (Goes pale) Jo... J: Blair..that was probably the wind. B: ...It's the same excact noise I heard last night...(There is a loud BANG) J: (Looks at Blair)..C'mon...(Gets up and starts to go downstairs) B: (Follows) ((The living room)) J: C'mon in the kitchen. B: (Follows) ((The Kitchen)) B: (Walks to the window and ducks, so nobody outside could see her) J: (Sees the shaddow) Holy... B: (Pulls her down) Yes..I saw it too!!! J: (Gets up) That guys done with the games. I'm getting to him now. (Runs out of the kitchen) B: No!! Jo!! (Runs after her) J: (Leaves the house) B: Jo!!!!!!! (Groans and follows outside) ((Outside)) J and B: (Walking slowly and quietly) (All of the sudden the man grabs Jo by the back of her shirt and Blair by the hand. They both try to scream but the man covers their mouths and carries them into the street_ J: (Yelling) LET GO OF US YOU CREEP!! B: (Screams) MRS. GARETT!! Man: Shut up, kid!! I got a gun!! (The man runs to a van and opens the back trunk, throws Jo and Blair into it and slams the door shut. He goes into the driver's seat and drives away) B: (Yelling in the back) LET US GO!! (There is a sheet of plastic seperating the back of the van with the driver's section) B: (Looks at Jo) I KNEW THIS WAS GONNA HAPPEN JO I KNEW IT!! BUT NOOO MRS. GARETT WOULDN'T DO ANYTHING!! NOW WHAT IF HE KILLS US??! J: (Calmly) Blair, calm down!!! I know we are..well..in trouble..but the more he knows we're afraid the more he'll keep us!!! B: (Goes quiet) Jo...I'm afraid... J: Don't worry...(Hugs her) B: (Starts crying lightly) Jo...this is serious!! What if he's a killer or crook?? And.....what if he's planning to kill..US? (The car jerks fast and Blair and Jo go flying into the wall screaming) B: (Screams) J: (Hits the back of the van) (The van swirves and curves in a back alley and the man opens the door while the car is moving and gets out) B: WHAT'S HE DOING??!! J: He got outta the car!! B: JO NOBODY'S DRIVING THE CAR! (THe man put a heavy peice of brick on the gas pedal, so the car would still go) J: Oh my god... B: (Quietly) And we're going straight for the back of a alley!! J: Oh dang!!!!!!!!! B: JO WE'RE GONNA CRASH!!!!!!!! J: (Looks outside the window at the brick buildings they are passing. She knows something horrible will happen, but doesn't wanna admit it.) Hold up...I got a idea..(Kicks the window open) B: JO NO!!!!!!!! J: (Falls out and hits her head on the ground and rolls over) (The van slams into a brick buileing and bricks fly everything with a huge crash) Guys I gotta go..Sorry!!

02-14-2001, 06:52 PM	#5
BlairW_4 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 27, 2001 Posts: 252	((The house)) N: (Wakes up with a yawn at 5 o'clock in the morning) Guys..I can't sleep...(Notices Blair and Jo are gone) Guys?!! (Sees Tootie) TOOTIE..WAKE UP!! T: (Wakes up) Huh? What is it?? N: BLAIR AND JO ARE GONE! ((The alley)) J: (Gets up. She has a cut over her eye and has a bruised arm. She suddenly gets grabbed by someone. That someone is the man with the gun) Man: Looks like you survived eh?! J: Let me go you freak!!! Man: Heck no!!! I finally got someone for keeps. Wheres the blondie?? J: (Doesnt want him to know where she is) Uh...shes dead. She didnt survive. Man: Hehe...well you did. (Glares and runs off with her) ((The van)) B: (Laying on the ground. She suddenly wakes up and stares around the van) Wha...(Gets up) Jo?? (Notices she is gone) Oh no...(Gets up and jumps out the window into the alley and sees the man a while away with Jo. She runs behind a building so the man won't see her and climbs up a ladder to the roof of a building) Man: (Grabs the gun from his pocket and puts it against Jo's neck and is about to pull the trigger) Now what ya gonna do? B: (From building, talking to herself) I hope a nail dont break for this. Man: (The man shoots the gun, but Blair comes down onto him and kncoks him over so the bullet misses) B: JO JO GET THE GUN!!!!!!!!!!!! Man: Argh!!!!!!!!! J: (Grabs the gun) B: RUN!!!!!!! Man: (Pulls Blair down on the ground) J: (Aims the gun at the man) B: NO JO DON'T IT MIGHT MISS!! RUN TO THE POLICE STA... (The man smacks her down on the ground and punches her) J: (Knows she was gonna say police station, so she goes there) Man: (Starts beating up Blair) B: Get off!!!! (Gets out a pocket mirror and smashes it on the ground, picks up a sharp peice and pokes him in the stomach with it and goes "Haha.") Man: Dangit!!! B: (Gets loose and starts running up the alley) Man: (Chases after her) B: (Picks up a rock and throws it at the man but it misses) Man: (Picks up a stone and chucks it at her but it misses also) B: (Runs until she gets into the town area. She sees the police station and stops) Man: (Grabs her) B: (Screams) ((The police stattion)) J: Theres a girl getting attacked in the alley down the street! (Looks out the window) There she is!!!! PM: (Runs out the door) PM: (Yells and pulls out his gun) DROP THE GIRL!!! PUT YOUR HANDS UP!! Man: (Follows the directions) PM: (Handcuffs the man) PM: Are you ok mam?? B: Yes..I'm fine. J: (Comes out) Blair!! Thanks for....(Smiles) Jumping on him. B: No problem. I BROKE A NAIL TO DO THAT! AND A MIRROR! (They laugh) ((The house)) MG: Girls, you should never leave the house again!!! B: We won't Mrs. Garett.. MG: Now are you SURE your alright?! J: We're fine. oh...and Blair saved me!! MG: (Smiles) Oh and girls...where your sleeping tonight...YOU ARE NOT SLEEPING UNTIL THE POLICE MAKE SURE THAT MANS LOCKED UP!! (Leaves) B: (Turns to jo) What did I tell ya?? (They laugh and hug) ....The End.... Well there's the end! A new story should be coming in a while...

02-15-2001, 04:12 PM	#6
jofan4life Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 03, 2001 Location: USA Posts: 102	Great job!

02-15-2001, 04:26 PM	#7
Lil_miss_goodwrench_518 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 02, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 174	this was awesome