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Old 02-02-2001, 09:53 PM   #1
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((The airport))
S: Hunny do you have the luggages?
N: Yep.
S: Want me to take one?
N: Yeah take this one!
S: (Takes it)
A: Mommy can I hold something?
N: No, hunny, the luggages are too heavy for you. Snake, have you seen Mrs. Garett?
S: (Looking) Uh..there she is!!
MG: Natalie! Snake!!!
N: (Sees her) Mrs. Garett!!! I'd like to hug you but I got these luggages.
MG: (Laughs) It's so good to see you!!!
N: Oh, Mrs. Garett, this is my son Andrew.
MG: Well! A little one of your own!! It's nice to meet you!
A: I am five!!
MG: (Smiles) Well are we all ready to go back to Peekskill?
N: More than ever!!!
MG: Alright, let's go!
((The house))
MG: (Opens the door) Well heres the house!
N: (Puts down luggage) It looks excactly the same!!
MG: Is that good or bad??
N: Good!!!!!
S: I remember this house! Even thought not much..but I still remember it!
MG: (Laughs)
N: Where's Bruce??
MG: Um......
N: What?
MG: Andrew, how about we go see your mommy's old room??
A: Okay!!
(Mrs. Garett and Andrew go upstairs)
N: (Gives Snake a puzzled look)
S: (Shruggs)
((A car))
(There is a blonde haired couple. It is Blair and her husband Blaine.)
B: Blaine, I think you made a wrong turn.
Bl: I didn't make a wrong turn Blair.
B: Blaine I know this place. You did make a wrong turn!
Bl: Don't you dare raise your voice to me alright? I ain't putting up with it anymore.
B: (Keeps quiet) Blaine I do not want to be late!
Bl: Do you want me to slap you?!
B: No, but what is wrong with me correcting you?!
Bl: Shut up!!!
B: BLAINE!
Bl: (Slaps her)
B: (Screams)
Bl: Well that's what you get!
B: (Puts head down)
Bl: Now where am I suppose to go???
B: (Tells him where to go and they finally get there)
((The house))
(Someone knocks on the door)
N: I'll get it. (Opens it) Blair!!!
B: Hi Natalie! (Hugs her)
N: How is everything??
B: Oh...fine...
Bl: (Gives Blair a dirty look without anyone seeing)
(Mrs. Garett comes down with Andrew)
MG: Blair!!!
B: Mrs. Garett!! (Hugs her) How are you??
MG: Oh, fine. (Gasps)
B: What is it??
MG: Blair..what is that mark on your cheek??
N: (Looks) Yeah Blair..I was about to bring it up.
B: (Gulps)

I gotta go..sorry!!
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Old 02-02-2001, 09:59 PM   #2
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loved it but before you start new fan fics maybe you should finish the old ones


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Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
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Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
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Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
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Old 02-02-2001, 10:19 PM   #3
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DramaQueenTootie - I have decided to put my other fan fiction on hold for a while because I keep getting a bunch of ideas for this fan fiction and I don't wanna loose them..lol..I hope you understand! But do you guys really like this??
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Old 02-02-2001, 10:20 PM   #4
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Not to get on your case either, and your good at writing these, but please try to finish a fanfic before starting another one.
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Old 02-02-2001, 10:27 PM   #5
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Everyone - I AM going to finsih my fan fictions but I am putting some on hold! Ok? But for now how do you like this one?
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Old 02-02-2001, 10:36 PM   #6
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i like it!

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n: girls girls girls what do people usually fight over? the little things, ignor the little things and lifes a breeze..for instence if i got irritated over all the little things that tootie did we would have split up a long time ago
T: right
N: who cares if she always leaves her books on my bed
T: yea u see its like when...i always leave my books on your bed?
N: yea, you walk in and instead of dropping them on your bed you drop them on my bed
T: i dont do that
N: you do, but dont worry, your a kid you dont know any better
T: uhuh well if irritated you so much then why didnt you say anything?
N: it doesnt irritate me much
T: well is there anything else I do that doesnt irritate you MUCH?
B: my my my trouble in paridise?
T: you butt out of this blair
J: you tell her tootie
T: the same goes for you too Mr. Goodwrench
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Old 02-02-2001, 10:44 PM   #7
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MG: Blair?
B: Well..I don't know. I didn't notice it there. (Lies)
N: Oh...
A: Mommy is that Blair?
N: Yes hunny. Blair, this is my son.
B: Hello! (Smiles)
Bl: Blair? Can I see you in the kitchen??
B: Yes. Everyone I will be right back.
(They both go into the kitchen)
Bl: I don't want you saying ANYTHING about you know what do you hear me?!
B: Yes. I won't I promise.
((The living room))
N: Mrs. Garett something isn't right with Blair. She doesn't sound the same.
MG: I know. I better find out what is going on.
S: Mrs. Garett can I turn the TV on??
MG: Oh of course!
S: Ok..come on Andrew. Let's watch some football.
A: Kay!!
N: Wait Mrs. Garett! I don't want you to get involved. It really isn't our buisness anyways.
MG: Yes But I would like to know what is going on with one of my girls.
(Blair and Blaine come back out)
MG: Blair may I speak to you??
B: Uh..yeah.
MG: Upstairs please.
B: Ok.
(They both go upstairs)
MG: Blair is there something going on with you and Blaine?
B: No Mrs. Garett. What makes you think that??
MG: Well..first of all that mark on your cheek. Second you aren't the same..your...
B: Mrs. Garett...nothing is going on with me and Blaine. (Leaves the room)
MG: (Sighs, not beliveing her)
(Someone knocks on the door)
N: I'll get it. (Answers it) Jo!! Rick!!!
J: Hey!
MG: Jo!!!!!
B: Hi Jo!
J: Hey Blair! Mrs. Garett!
MG: Hello Rick!!
R: What's up??
MG: Oh nothing.
N: Jo I would like you to meet Andrew my five year old.
J: Hey Andrew!!
A: Hiiiii!!!
MG: Now all that we need to come is Tootie and Jeff!!
Bl: Blair? The Kitchen.
B: (Sighs and goes into the kitchen) Yes??
Bl: What did you say to her?!?
B: Nothing!!! I promise!!
Bl: I ain't taking your promises anymore!! I would really hurt you if we weren't here!!! In fact I will!!!
B: No...Blaine please!!
Bl: (Punches her in the sholder)
B: (Trys not to yell) Ow....(Tries to forget the pain so nobody notices she was punched)
Bl: Now you BETTER not tell anyone ANYTHING!!!!
B: Ok.
(They go back into the living room)
N: Mrs. Garett where is Bruce? The last time I asked you that you took Andrew upstairs.
MG: Well...(Goes pale and Puts head down) It is a long story...

Sorry guys but I gotta go! How do you like it??
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Old 02-03-2001, 12:07 AM   #8
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great so far! keep it up!

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You're so spoiled that if you were milk the date on the carton would read BC. -Jo
Turn Blue. -Blair

Sigh
I hate it when you do that.
Do what?
Sigh!
I don't sigh.
Well if it wasn't a sigh you got a slow leak.
Sigh
You did it again!
That's called breathing.
You do it just to annoy me!
No, I do it to keep from dying.
Now there's an idea!
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Old 02-03-2001, 02:23 PM   #9
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N: What do you mean Mrs. Garett?
MG: Well..I'd rathar not talk about it.
J: No..tell us Mrs. Garett.
N: Yeah..you keep trying to hide from this subject.
MG: Ok, ok, ok. (Sits down on the couch) Bruce was killed...
N: What?!
S: (Hears) Mrs. Garett that's awful!
B: How?!
MG: He was involved in a shooting at the bank a while ago.
J: Mrs. G. why didn't you tell us earlier?!
MG: I just couldn't! It is hard to talk about this...
B: Mrs. Garett I'm so sorry! (Hugs her)
MG: It's okay...
J: I can't belive he is gone for good!
N: I know...
(Someone knocks on the door)
MG: Oh..I'll get it. (Answers it) Tootie!!!
T: Mrs. Garett!! (Sees all the girls and their husbands) Hi everybody!!
All: Hi, hello, how are you, ect.
T: Jeff will be here in a little while. He is parking the car. We accidently parked in a handicap zone.
MG: Tootie!!
(They all laugh)
T: How is Bruce?
MG: (Sighs) Tootie I don't really want to talk about it. (Says quickly) Bruce was killed in a shooting at the bank...
T: Mrs. Garett...I'm so sorry!
MG: Well..(Begins to get emotional) Things happen...
T: (Hugs her)
((Outside))
(Jeff is walking to the house when suddenly a man jumps in front of him and begins attacking him)
J: Ahhh!!
MAN: (Punches him and kicks him in the stomach)
J: (His nose starts bleeding) St...op...
MAN: (Kicks him in the back a number of times)
((The house))
T: Jeff should be in by now..I better go out and see what the matter is. (Goes outside and sees Jeff) Jeff!!!! Get off of him!!!
MAN: (Runs away)
T: (Yells to Mrs. Garett) Mrs. Garett!! Call an ambulence!!!
MG: What is it?! (Sees Jeff) Oh heavens!! (Runs inside to call an ambulence)
(Everyone comes outside and is amazed at what they see)
T: (Bends down) Jeff can you hear me??
J: (No answer)
T: Guys he isn't breathing!!
B: Tootie don't panic!!
J: Yeah! The ambulence should be hear in a while!
N: (Is holding Andrew)
A: (Crying)
N: Don't worry hunny, Uncle Jeff will be alright..
(The ambulence arrives and takes Jeff away, with Tootie in the ambulence with them)
((The hospital))
(Everyone used Rick's van to go to the hospital)
T: (Crying in the waiting room)
B: (Sits next to her) Don't worry Tootie..it will be alright.
T: No it won't!! What if he dies?!
B: He won't!!!
(Blaine comes up to Blair)
Bl: Blair I wanna talk to you alone.
B: Um..ok..Tootie I will be right back.
(They go down the hall into another waiting room)
Bl: WHAT DID YOU TELL HER?!?!
B: Nothing!! I was trying to comfort her!!!
Bl: Don't gimme that Blair!! Your lying!!
B: No I'm not!!
Bl: (Slaps her) YES YOU ARE!! (Punches her)
B: BLAINE STOP IT!!!!!
Bl: Don't raise your voice at me!! (Kicks her in the stomach and she slumps to the ground)
B: Bl..ain...e...s...t...o..p...
Bl: (Kicks her again but not as hard) NO! I WANNA KNOW WHAT YOU SAID! AND IM GONNA FIND OUT!!!!! NOW WHAT DID YOU SAY??!??!?!
MG: (Comes in the room) Blair!!!!!!! Blaine!!!!!!! I knew something wasn't right!!!!!

Guys sorry I gotta go! What do you think of it??
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Old 02-03-2001, 02:41 PM   #10
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I really like your story so far. One suggestion though. Since the names Jeff and Jo both begin witha J, if you are going to give Jeff more lines, I suggest you use JE for Jeff... just so it doesn't get to confusing. Kepp up the good work!

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Old 02-03-2001, 02:42 PM   #11
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Hey there I love it so far! who tried to kill jeff?
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Old 02-03-2001, 03:41 PM   #12
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Abbey22 - I was going to make Jeff's name Je but Jo and Jeff were never in a scene together..so I didn't think of it. But thanks for telling me!!
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MG: Blaine you stop it right now!!
Bl: (Kicks Blair again)
MG: BLAINE!!!
(Jo comes in)
J: What's going on...Oh my gosh!! Blaine get off of her!! (Pushes Blaine away)
B: (Laying on ground)
J: Blair!! Can you hear me Blair?!?!
B: (No answer)
Bl: (Gets up and topples over Jo)
J: Blaine!!! (Knocks him off and punches him) Mrs. Garett get a docter for Blair and the security!!!
MG: Ok!!! (Leaves)
Bl: JO YOU SHOULDN'T OF GOTTEN INTO THIS!! (Slaps her)
J: BLAINE, BLAIR MIGHT LET YOU DO THIS BUT I AIN'T GONNA! (Punches him and grabs him by the shirt and throws him)
Bl: (Against a wall)
Bl: (Kicks Jo)
J: Ah! (Falls to the ground)
(Rick runs in)
R: Hunny!!
Bl: Get outta here Rick!
R: No! (Pushes him against the wall)
Bl: (Punches him but he doesn't fall over)
R: (Kicks Blaine and Rick falls on top of him causing both Blaine and Rick to go straight through the big window, with glass shattering everywhere)
(The paramedics take Blair and Jo into rooms)
((Outside))
(Natalie, Mrs. Garett, Snake and Tootie come running out)
MG: Oh dear...
(Rick is laying on the ground with blood surrounding him, not moving...while Blaine has dissapeared....)
((The Emergency Room))
(The docters are surrounding Blair)
DR1: Is there a pulse?
DR2: We are trying to find one..but so far no. What about the other?
DR1: We found a small pulse. but she has a broken arm.
DR2: This blonde one isn't in good shape...I dunno if shes gonna even make it...
((Outside))
T: What happened?!?
MG: Rick and Blaine must of gotten into a fight! Tootie go get someone to help Rick!
N: Mrs. Garett..where's Blaine??
MG: I don't know!!!
S: Well he has to be somewhere...we gotta call the cops!! He could be anywhere around town...
N: But where?!....

Guys sorry that I didn't write that much but I gotta go..do you like it?
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Old 02-03-2001, 04:49 PM   #14
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this is really really good! i like it alot so far keep going!

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Turn Blue. -Blair

Sigh
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Do what?
Sigh!
I don't sigh.
Well if it wasn't a sigh you got a slow leak.
Sigh
You did it again!
That's called breathing.
You do it just to annoy me!
No, I do it to keep from dying.
Now there's an idea!
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Old 02-03-2001, 07:35 PM   #15
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Hey great job so far you need to keep it going! I try and finish the other one for you asap. I love that fight, you could see it happen, but where did blaine go?
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