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DinahTheDiningCar · 02-01-2001, 09:04 PM

This FanFic takes place during early Season 2 during Tootie's "Akward Phase". NOTE-PLEASE feel free to post your comments, good or bad. I love to get constructive criticism. Also, please note that this is my first FOL fanfic attempt and any future stories will NOT star Tootie. She drives me crazy!

B: …And who would have thought, our little Cindy coming back from summer vacation…in proportion!
((ENTER Tootie, overhearing))
T: In proportion? What do you mean, Blair?
N: Nevermind, Tootie, you’re too young to understand such a LARGE matter!
((Laughter from all girls except Tootie))
J: Yeah, I’d say about as large as a DOUBLE D!
((More Laughter))
T: Oh, your talking about her…you know…
B: Yes, sweet little Tootie. (To Natalie and Jo) And, so, you KNOW how all the guys look at her now.
T: (Joining in) Just because she has, you know whats!
B: Of course, Tootie, they’re MEN, that’s what they go for.
((Jo, Blair, and Natalie EXIT, giggling))
B: (Off) Pooooor KID, maybe someday she’ll be in proportion too…(Giggles)
J: (Off, as well) NOT LIKELY (More laughter from girls)
T: (To herself) I will too! They’ll see! I’ll sure show them what I’m made out of!
((She crosses to table, grabs a box of tissues and EXITS))

((ENTER Tootie in cafeteria where Jo, Blair, and Natalie are already stationed))
((Tootie’s bra is MAJORLY stuffed and slightly lop-sided))
T: (Dramatically) Hey, guys!
N: Tootie! What happened?
T: (Innocently) Whatever do you mean?
J: Looks like Tootie hat a little bit TOO much fun with the tissue box.
B: Oh, Tootie…. It’s just so…. TACKY! What did you do to your self?
T: (Gritting her teeth) I assure you, Blair, I have no clue what you’re talking about!
N: Tootie, you…. I mean you couldn’t have…. (Laughs)
((Tootie turns away in anger))
T: (Mumbling) Look’s like I’m in proportion now, TOO!
B: So THAT’S what this is all about!
T: And now I’m going to go out and show everyone the NEW TOOTIE RAMSEY!
((Garret ENTERS))
G: Not looking like that, you won’t!
T: But…. Mrs.G….
G: (Interrupting) Tootie! Explain yourself!
T: I just thought I’d look better if I…I…
G: (Interrupting again) TOOTIE, I want you to go up stairs and remove those tissues, NOW! ((Tootie EXITS in a huff)) (Jo, Blair and Natalie giggle) And you three! I sure hope you aren’t responsible for this!

((Camera focuses on Tootie sitting on bed and crying into tissues from shirt, Garret ENTERS))
T: Leave me alone!
G: (Tenderly) Oh, Tootie, what were you thinking, what happened?
T: (Sniffles) Well, I heard the girls talking about how great it was to be… you know…
G: Yes, I know.
T: And they said it was all guys ever thought about… and they said I was too young to… and then they laughed… (With sudden fierceness) I sure showed them what I was made of! I’m not so little after all!
G: Tootie, don’t be in such a hurry to grow up! Someday it will be your turn to... blossom, but for now you just need to take things as they come.
((Blair ENTERS))
B: We’re really sorry, Tootie. We didn’t mean to laugh at you. It’s just that, sometimes we forget that you are so much younger then all of us.
J: (ENTERING) Yeah, we like you fine just how you are, kid.
N: (Coming in behind Jo) Yeah Tootie, I guess I haven’t been such a great best friend lately, I’m sorry.
B: But the thing is, we really didn’t really mean to hurt your feelings. We’re all really sorry Tootie, we’ll try to realize your age more often. It’s just your so mature…
T: Thanks, Blair! Thanks to all you guys.
N: (Suddenly cheesy) Awwwwww, I just love a happy ending!
((Four girls hug and EXIT together, throwing Tootie’s tissues over their heads. Scene freezes for credits))

ENJOY! Please remember to post your comments!
~Em

[This message has been edited by DinahTheDiningCar (edited 02-03-2001).]

BlairW_4 · 02-01-2001, 09:19 PM

I like it, but there have been tons of fan fictions with tootie doing this......

DinahTheDiningCar · 02-01-2001, 10:30 PM

Really!?!?! I haven't been on this board for more than a week. That stinks!!!!! I thought I had a great idea.
~Em

TVaddict · 02-01-2001, 11:14 PM

I've been on the board for months and I never remember a fanfic where Tootie stuffs. But I could be wrong.

lesliem14 · 02-01-2001, 11:33 PM

There was one, a while ago, that FOLNATAND...... wrote. Nice job though.

JoPol_wannabe · 02-02-2001, 12:27 AM

Even though there were a couple other fanfic's on this subject I did enjoy your story.

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Nat: Alright I can't take criticism I never could even when I was a baby if people didn't laugh when I was being cute I would spit up

02-02-2001, 12:51 AM

I like. I like. It has been done before, good. I like rewrites of poular topics....and of all the girls to write about bra stuffing, lololololololololololololololololololololo

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Andy: C'Mon Ms. Garrett, throw us a song.

Ms. G.: Born in the U.S.S.R.

[This message has been edited by Devastation26 (edited 02-01-2001).]

DinahTheDiningCar · 02-02-2001, 07:41 PM

Thanks a lot! I'm really glad that you all like it! I really didn't know that anyone wrote on this topic, but I will try to find the other fanfics and read them.
~Em

02-02-2001, 09:09 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by DinahTheDiningCar:
Thanks a lot! I'm really glad that you all like it! I really didn't know that anyone wrote on this topic, but I will try to find the other fanfics and read them.
~Em

Lemme know when you do

DinahTheDiningCar · 02-03-2001, 12:13 PM

The only one I found whas the one FOLNAT... wrote, it's on the 4th page back.
~Em

iluvfacts14 · 02-04-2001, 11:50 AM

Hey! EVen if it wasn't excatly "original" it was still good!

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Mrs. G.: ...the whole subject of retardation was strictly off-limits..

Natalie: ....so was sex, religion, and politics, what was left?

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Natalie: I'm not jealous.....I'm wounded.

02-01-2001, 09:04 PM	#1
DinahTheDiningCar Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 21, 2001 Posts: 155	FanFic- Tissues PLEASE READ! This FanFic takes place during early Season 2 during Tootie's "Akward Phase". NOTE-PLEASE feel free to post your comments, good or bad. I love to get constructive criticism. Also, please note that this is my first FOL fanfic attempt and any future stories will NOT star Tootie. She drives me crazy! B: …And who would have thought, our little Cindy coming back from summer vacation…in proportion! ((ENTER Tootie, overhearing)) T: In proportion? What do you mean, Blair? N: Nevermind, Tootie, you’re too young to understand such a LARGE matter! ((Laughter from all girls except Tootie)) J: Yeah, I’d say about as large as a DOUBLE D! ((More Laughter)) T: Oh, your talking about her…you know… B: Yes, sweet little Tootie. (To Natalie and Jo) And, so, you KNOW how all the guys look at her now. T: (Joining in) Just because she has, you know whats! B: Of course, Tootie, they’re MEN, that’s what they go for. ((Jo, Blair, and Natalie EXIT, giggling)) B: (Off) Pooooor KID, maybe someday she’ll be in proportion too…(Giggles) J: (Off, as well) NOT LIKELY (More laughter from girls) T: (To herself) I will too! They’ll see! I’ll sure show them what I’m made out of! ((She crosses to table, grabs a box of tissues and EXITS)) ((ENTER Tootie in cafeteria where Jo, Blair, and Natalie are already stationed)) ((Tootie’s bra is MAJORLY stuffed and slightly lop-sided)) T: (Dramatically) Hey, guys! N: Tootie! What happened? T: (Innocently) Whatever do you mean? J: Looks like Tootie hat a little bit TOO much fun with the tissue box. B: Oh, Tootie…. It’s just so…. TACKY! What did you do to your self? T: (Gritting her teeth) I assure you, Blair, I have no clue what you’re talking about! N: Tootie, you…. I mean you couldn’t have…. (Laughs) ((Tootie turns away in anger)) T: (Mumbling) Look’s like I’m in proportion now, TOO! B: So THAT’S what this is all about! T: And now I’m going to go out and show everyone the NEW TOOTIE RAMSEY! ((Garret ENTERS)) G: Not looking like that, you won’t! T: But…. Mrs.G…. G: (Interrupting) Tootie! Explain yourself! T: I just thought I’d look better if I…I… G: (Interrupting again) TOOTIE, I want you to go up stairs and remove those tissues, NOW! ((Tootie EXITS in a huff)) (Jo, Blair and Natalie giggle) And you three! I sure hope you aren’t responsible for this! ((Camera focuses on Tootie sitting on bed and crying into tissues from shirt, Garret ENTERS)) T: Leave me alone! G: (Tenderly) Oh, Tootie, what were you thinking, what happened? T: (Sniffles) Well, I heard the girls talking about how great it was to be… you know… G: Yes, I know. T: And they said it was all guys ever thought about… and they said I was too young to… and then they laughed… (With sudden fierceness) I sure showed them what I was made of! I’m not so little after all! G: Tootie, don’t be in such a hurry to grow up! Someday it will be your turn to... blossom, but for now you just need to take things as they come. ((Blair ENTERS)) B: We’re really sorry, Tootie. We didn’t mean to laugh at you. It’s just that, sometimes we forget that you are so much younger then all of us. J: (ENTERING) Yeah, we like you fine just how you are, kid. N: (Coming in behind Jo) Yeah Tootie, I guess I haven’t been such a great best friend lately, I’m sorry. B: But the thing is, we really didn’t really mean to hurt your feelings. We’re all really sorry Tootie, we’ll try to realize your age more often. It’s just your so mature… T: Thanks, Blair! Thanks to all you guys. N: (Suddenly cheesy) Awwwwww, I just love a happy ending! ((Four girls hug and EXIT together, throwing Tootie’s tissues over their heads. Scene freezes for credits)) ENJOY! Please remember to post your comments! ~Em [This message has been edited by DinahTheDiningCar (edited 02-03-2001).]

02-02-2001, 12:51 AM	#7
Devastation26 Guest Posts: n/a	I like. I like. It has been done before, good. I like rewrites of poular topics....and of all the girls to write about bra stuffing, lololololololololololololololololololololo ------------------ Andy: C'Mon Ms. Garrett, throw us a song. Ms. G.: Born in the U.S.S.R. [This message has been edited by Devastation26 (edited 02-01-2001).]
Devastation26 Guest Posts: n/a

02-01-2001, 09:19 PM	#2
BlairW_4 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 27, 2001 Posts: 252	I like it, but there have been tons of fan fictions with tootie doing this......

02-01-2001, 10:30 PM	#3
DinahTheDiningCar Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 21, 2001 Posts: 155	Really!?!?! I haven't been on this board for more than a week. That stinks!!!!! I thought I had a great idea. ~Em

02-01-2001, 11:14 PM	#4
TVaddict Member Forum Regular Join Date: Oct 30, 2000 Location: NH Posts: 562	I've been on the board for months and I never remember a fanfic where Tootie stuffs. But I could be wrong.

02-01-2001, 11:33 PM	#5
lesliem14 Member Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 01, 2000 Location: Frankfort, KY Posts: 650	There was one, a while ago, that FOLNATAND...... wrote. Nice job though.

02-02-2001, 12:27 AM	#6
JoPol_wannabe Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jan 11, 2001 Location: Nebraska Posts: 3,036	Even though there were a couple other fanfic's on this subject I did enjoy your story. ------------------ Nat: Alright I can't take criticism I never could even when I was a baby if people didn't laugh when I was being cute I would spit up

02-02-2001, 07:41 PM	#8
DinahTheDiningCar Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 21, 2001 Posts: 155	Thanks a lot! I'm really glad that you all like it! I really didn't know that anyone wrote on this topic, but I will try to find the other fanfics and read them. ~Em

02-03-2001, 12:13 PM	#10
DinahTheDiningCar Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 21, 2001 Posts: 155	The only one I found whas the one FOLNAT... wrote, it's on the 4th page back. ~Em

02-04-2001, 11:50 AM	#11
iluvfacts14 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 23, 2000 Location: Eastland School for Girls, Peekskill, NY, U.S.A. Posts: 256	Hey! EVen if it wasn't excatly "original" it was still good! ------------------ Mrs. G.: ...the whole subject of retardation was strictly off-limits.. Natalie: ....so was sex, religion, and politics, what was left? ------------* Natalie: I'm not jealous.....I'm wounded.