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02-02-2001, 12:21 AM

I am creating a new FanFic and i want to run a sample by you to get your opinion. Lemme know what ya thing.

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(This excerpt is subtitled: The True Origin of Whassssssup!)

Michelle: What's up Ms. Warner, I need to see you about something.

Blair: What's up? I see the ceiling, the ceiling fan, an ugly ceiling pattern.

Jo: That's slang for hello Blair.

Blair: I knew there.

Rob: What's up, huh. Listen to this...Whasssssssup! Well, whadd'ya think.

Jo: Definitely commercial quality

Blair: what would you be selling Rob, beer?

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Well, what do you think. The FanFic is called "Michelle's Story" The excerpt is from the beginning. If you like it I'll finish it.

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Andy: C'Mon Ms. Garrett, throw us a song.

Ms. G.: Born in the U.S.S.R.

Fol_divison_rox_505 · 02-02-2001, 04:45 PM

great cant wait to see how it turns out!

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Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too!

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap?
Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances
Jinny: umm.. probley not
Captin: thats what I thought

02-02-2001, 12:21 AM	#1
Devastation26 Guest Posts: n/a	I want your opinion I am creating a new FanFic and i want to run a sample by you to get your opinion. Lemme know what ya thing. ---------------- (This excerpt is subtitled: The True Origin of Whassssssup!) Michelle: What's up Ms. Warner, I need to see you about something. Blair: What's up? I see the ceiling, the ceiling fan, an ugly ceiling pattern. Jo: That's slang for hello Blair. Blair: I knew there. Rob: What's up, huh. Listen to this...Whasssssssup! Well, whadd'ya think. Jo: Definitely commercial quality Blair: what would you be selling Rob, beer? --------------- Well, what do you think. The FanFic is called "Michelle's Story" The excerpt is from the beginning. If you like it I'll finish it. ------------------ Andy: C'Mon Ms. Garrett, throw us a song. Ms. G.: Born in the U.S.S.R.
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02-02-2001, 04:45 PM	#2
Fol_divison_rox_505 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 09, 2001 Location: MA(same town joey mcIntyre from NKOTB was born in)also it is the wettest dry town(said so on Jay Leno) Posts: 154	great cant wait to see how it turns out! ------------------ Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too! Jinny: i think i am going to give up men Magda: you, give up sex? Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee! Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap? Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances Jinny: umm.. probley not Captin: thats what I thought