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01-16-2001, 06:25 PM
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Tragic Tears - Please Read!!
TRAGIC TEARS
(The Camera focuses on Jo, Blair, Natalie, and Tootie. They are all in Jo's car coming home from a party they went to) J: (Driving) B: Jo why did we have to leave?! That guy we saw was so gorgeous! N: Yeah!! B: He was giving me these looking..and I could tell exactly what they were saying! They were saying..Blair, you are sooo beautiful! J: Ya..and the guy was also probably half drunk! T: Well I have no say in this conversating. (Sighs) I already found the guy of my dreams..Jeff. J: And I got Rick. B: Ya know..I met this guy at Law School.. J: Here she goes with another guy! "He is sooo gorgeous!" B: Don't blame me that I have incredibly good taste in men! J: (Turns around, taking her mind of off driving) I wonder if half the men you date know what your like when your not around them-- T: Jo look out!! (Their car slams into another car causing the other car to flip and smash into a telephone pole. Their car suddenly tumbles down a hill and stops tumbling when it hits a tree trunk and lands upside down) (The camera focuses on Mrs. Garett pacing back and forth waiting for them to come home) MG: Where on earth can they be?! It can't take them THAT long to get home! (About one or two minutes pass and the phone rings) MG: (Runs to phone and answers) Hello? (There is a police officer on the other line) P: Yes, is this the home of Jo Polineck, Blair Warner, Natalie Green, and Tootie Ramsey? MG: Yes..why do you ask? P: Their car was found crashed on Highway 18. The car tumbld down a hill and hit a tree trunk causing it to flip over. MG: (Gasps) Oh Dear..... I gotta go guys sorry! Oh yeah..and "Never Ending Tradgedys" Is NOT finished ok? I am just doing another one for fun..How is it so far? |
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01-16-2001, 06:46 PM
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really sad so far...but good. just if u hafta make on of them die...don't make it nat or tootie becuz they're to spunky to die! lol i sound weird i know. it's just that they're never serious and i would be kinda weird if the 2 people on the FOL who are pretty much never serious die! i dunno maybe i'm just strange...just my opinion. OMG ya know what i just thought of that would be soooooo sad! if one of them died and since all of their friends were sick they couldn't be by their side when they died! how sad!
 alright i'll shut up now and you write your own fanfic! lol really great so far by the way!
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01-16-2001, 07:05 PM
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this is wicked good so far! but i hope you dont make any1 die but if you do have jo(even though shes my fave character) because everyone makes the things happen to blair and shows how jo reacts how bout u have something happen to jo and show how blair reacts..i dunno just a thought
------------------ Nat: Hello sailor! Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too! Jinny: if you pinch my a$$ one more time, i'll kick your's Jinny: i think i am going to give up men Magda: you, give up sex? Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee! Blair: thunder thighs is hanging up her spikes... Sue Ann: and you just gave me a great idea were to put them |
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01-16-2001, 07:18 PM
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i agree! i mean in every fanfic Blair's always gettin hurt and joz alwayz feelin bad, but maybe it would be cool to see if blair even cares (i'm sure she does though
 ) good idea!
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01-16-2001, 09:24 PM
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(The camera focuses on Mrs. Garett who is in the waiting room of the hospital)
MG: (Sighs and wants to cry, but she knows she has to hold the tears in. All of the sudden one of the docters come out) Docter! Is there any news?? D: About the four girls in the car accident? MG: Yes, yes. D: Well..the black one-- BG: (Interrupts) Tootie. D: Well, we were able to get Tootie awake. She just needs some resting. MG: Oh good! What about the other three? D: Well the one with the short brown hair-- MG: (Inturrupts) Natalie. D: Ok, well, Natalie is suffering from a broken arm. She is awake, but very weak. As for the other two..well..the blonde one.. MG: Blair. D: Please stop interrupting. BLAIR...is in a coma. She is also VERY beat up from the crash. MG: (Gasps) D: And the last one does not look very good at all. MG: W-w-ell what do you mean by that... D: (Sits down) What I mean..is her chances of survival are 10% out of 100% MG: (Gasps) D: We will try our best to do everything we can to make the girls better. (Walks out of the waiting room) MG: (Cannot hold out tears and begins to quietly cry) Ok..what do you think of it? |
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01-16-2001, 09:34 PM
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Great! Keep writing on it!
------------------ J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50? B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books? ---------- B: A fire! There's been a fire here! ---------- B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie? N: We are suicidal! ---------- Bailey: They losted me! ---------- T: You mean the agony of da feet! ---------- T: Did I lie? ---------- T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black! ---------- N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day! ---------- ~Danielle~ |
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01-16-2001, 09:39 PM
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Good.
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01-16-2001, 10:03 PM
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(The camera focuses on Blair's room. She is laying in her bed, still in a coma when she silently and suddenly opens her eyes)
B: (Stares around the room. To her the room is spinning and everything is blurry) (A nurse then walks in the room to check on her) NU: Oh! it looks like you woke up! (Smiles) How are you feeling? B: (Says weakly and quietly) Dizzy... NU: Well that is normal. B: (Weakly) Where are the others? NU: The other girls? B: (Nodds) NU: Well, I learned their names. (Smiles) Tootie is awake. She is resting right now. Natalie has a broken arm, but she is awake and resting. Well..I better be going. (Tries to avoid telling her about Jo's condition because Blair cannot take any sadness while awakening from a coma) B: Wait... NU: (Turns) Yes? B: What about...Jo...? NU: (Sighs) Well..she isn't doing too good. (Walks out) B: (Just stares and then yells) Nurse! NU: (Walks in) What is it?? B: Take me to see Jo. NU: I am afraid I can't... B: I want to see her now. I am afraid she is gonna die and I won't be able to see her before it!!!! NU: I can't!! B: She is my best friend! Let me see her or I will stand up and walk in her room by myself! NU: (Doesn't know what to do) Well..alright...(Helps her into a wheelchair and wheels her into Jo's room. Blair sees Jo and is stunned) B: Leave us two alone. NU: (Sighs and leaves) B: (Begins to talk to Jo) Jo..even though you probably can't hear me, I just want you to know that you are my best friend..and always will be. The reason I forced the nurse to let me visit you is because all the times I was in trouble you were there for me. Remember the watch in the jailsell the day you came? Remember my car accident? Well this visit is to pay back for all of that. (Long pause) Even though we sometimes don't agree like we should..inside we are the closest I was to anyone else. And I know inside that if you leave me..my heart will be as torn up as yours will. (Just begins to cry) Ok I am going..How is it??? |
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01-16-2001, 10:14 PM
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i'm about to cry! (sniff sniff) but it is really good! poor jo!
(sniff sniff)
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01-17-2001, 10:09 PM
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(The camera focuses on Blair who is in her room wide awake. It is the next morning)
B: (Wondering if Jo had woken up yet. She thinks she can walk, so she gets up. The room starts to spin again so she quickly sits down. The room starts getting clearer so she limps out of her room trying to make sure nobody sees he. She remembers what Jo s room was so she walks into it slowly, revealing Jo still sleeping) J: (Sleeping) NU: (Walks in) Excuse me!!! B: (Gasps) NU: You are suppose to be resting..oh my god... B: What is it? NU: Nothing..I think you better go back into your room. (Escorts her to her room and the camera focuses on the machine next to Jo...with a thin straight line) NU: (Puts Jo in her room and calls a docter) Docter!!! Come into room 432 quick!!! DR: What is it??? (Follows nurse into Jo's room quickly and sees the machine) NU: Look!! DR: Oh no...(Trys to find a pulse, but there is none period. There is a long pause and he finally talks, trembling) Shes.....dead... NU: (Gasps) (The camera focuses on Blair who was right outside the room against the wall so no one would see her.) B: (Starts to sob) No....(Bursts into Jo's room) Don't say shes gone!!! DR: (Runs to Blair) You should have some rest! B: NO!!! (Pushes him aside and runs to the bed and slumbs down by the bed) No....Jo... NU: Maybe you should.. B: NO!!!! (Picks up a flower vase and throws it against the wall and it shatters. The nurse and docter automaticcaly run out of the room) Why.....why did you have to go...(Sobs by Jo's side) I Gotta go now..sorry..I tried to write a little..what do you think of it? |
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01-17-2001, 10:26 PM
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You can't leave it hanging like that!!
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01-17-2001, 10:27 PM
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You killed Jo!!!!!!
*sniffles* If you must kill Jo make her come back to Blair as a Gaurdian Angel... |
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01-17-2001, 10:48 PM
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*tears flow from eyes* Great Fan Fic.
------------------ Stanley Roper: I'm sorry Jack Jack Tripper: Oh, thats ok, what did you do? Roper: Me? Nothing, I just thought I saw something that wasnt normal, because it was normal, but, now I can see it aint normal, so, everything's back to normal again. Jack: oh, well, I'm glad for you. |
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01-18-2001, 06:54 PM
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smile :)
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(tears too!!)
aww, so sad... you're a good writer! |
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01-19-2001, 07:02 PM
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*sniffle*
Awwww.... It's so sad! But I like it when Blair shows affection for another person, it brings out her good qualities you don't normally see. ------------------ J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50? B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books? ---------- B: A fire! There's been a fire here! ---------- B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie? N: We are suicidal! ---------- Bailey: They losted me! ---------- T: You mean the agony of da feet! ---------- T: Did I lie? ---------- T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black! ---------- N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day! ---------- ~Danielle~ |
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