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01-10-2001, 03:40 PM

Hey everybody..here is my very first fan fiction..I hope you like it!

Title: To Go With The Crowd (Part 1 of 3)

(The Camera zooms in on Jo who is studying for an important exam in the kitchen. Nobody is in the kitchen but Jo.)

J: (Says to herself) Gosh..why do we even need to know this stuff?! We probably ain't ever gonna use it in life anyways. (All of the sudden Mrs. Garett comes in the room)

MG: Wrong.

J: Mrs. Garett! I didn't know you were there!

MG: I wasn't..I just so happened to walk in on you talking to yourself..and your wrong.

J: How? I mean..if I am gonna have a career as a cop then I am certainly not gonna need to know what year Abraham Lincoln freed the slaves!

MG: Jo, that isn't the point.

J: Then what is the point? To walk around on the streets saying HEY GUESS WHAT!? I KNOW WHEN ABE LINCOLN FREED THE SLAVES!

MG: (Smiles) Jo..(Blair comes into the room with 4 shopping bags)

B: Hello everybody.

J: Oh gosh..why is it that every time I see you your holding shopping bags?!

B: Well shopping is what Warners do! Especially when there are sales at Blooomingdales. Look at this dress Mrs. Garett. (Takes out velvet black dress)

MG: Oh my Blair..it's stunning! How much was it?

B: Oh not that much..just $78.00. According to me that's cheap!

J: Blair can you please just let me study?! I am not about to fail another exam like I did last week.

B: (Sighs) Oh fine..your loss. (Walks out)

MG: Well I will leave you to study..Bye Jo. (Leaves)

J: (Continues to study)

(The camera zooms in on the girl's room where Natalie and Tootie are in)

B: (Walks in) Would you just look at this dress I got?!

T: (Says in a surprising way) Blair! Oh Hi Blair.

N: (Gulps) Yeah Hi.

B: What's wrong?

N: Wrong?! WRONG?

T: You gotta be kiddin! Nothings wrong with us!

B: (Frowns) Are you sure?

T: Yupp.

N: More than ever.

B: Well..ok. (Puts shopping bags down by her bed and leaves)

N: (Sighs) That was a close one.

T: I know..(Opens dresser drawer and reveals a packet of ciggerettes)

(The camera focuses on Blair, who is alone in the Living Room. She is admiring herself in a mirror, fluffing her hair)

B (To herself): Oh Blair..why art tho so beautiful?

J: (Walks in) Wow! I thought that by now that mirrow would have cracked-- (Stops)

B: What is it Jo?

J: (Sniffs) I smell something..

B: (Gets up) Yeah me too..Smoke...(hears Natalie and Tootie scream)

(Jo and Blair run upstairs but as they are in the middle of the stairs the camera freezes and the credits start coming up)

To Be Continued

01-10-2001, 06:02 PM

That's really good so far! Write more on it!

01-10-2001, 06:05 PM

Hey I am back..I just wanna say I made a mistake in the post. In the post it says part 1 of 3 but when I wrote it up the title for the post was part 1 of 4..the truth is that it was suppose to be part 1 of 4..ok..what you are about to read is part 2 of 4 ok? :-)

(The camera focuses on Blair and Jo. They just got into the girl's bedroom to find the bed on fire, and the wall covered in smoke)

B: Tootie! Natalie!

T: (Coughing)

J: Don't just stand there you two get out!!

T and N: (Coughing histerically, they run out of the room and Tootie slumps down on the ground outside the room, while Natalie goes and calls the fire department)

(The camera focuses on the phone)

N: (Coughs) Yes..there is a fire at Eastland School for girls. We need you right away! (Coughs) Hurry the smoke is coming downstairs and there are alot of people here!

(The camera focuses on a room full of smoke, the girl's bedroom)

B: Where's Mrs. Garett?!?!

J: I dunno check her room! (Notices Tootie) Oh no..

(The Camera focuses on a room practically covered in fire..Mrs. Garett's room)

B: (Sees Mrs. Garett laying on the ground) Oh No Mrs. Garett! (Trys to pick Mrs. Garett up, but all she can do is drag her out of the room)

(A couple minutes pass and the fire department come)

F 1: (Opens the door to the house and goes upstairs)

J: Take this girl..I think her lugns are full of oxygeon!

F 2: (Takes Tootie and does CPR, but it doesn't work so he and another fireman put her on a stretcher and take her out of the house. The ambulence with Tootie drives off)

N: What do i do?!?!? Where do I go?!

J: Natalie you just go outside.

N: (Goes outside)

(Camera focuses on a Fireman 2, Blair, and Mrs. Garett)

B: I think she needs to go to the hospital!

F 2: No kidding! (Picks her up and takes her downstairs, placing her on another stretcher. They take her in another ambulence and drive off. The rest of the firemen try to extinguish the fire, and Blair and Jo are in the ambulence with Mrs. Garett going to the hospital)

(The camera focuses on the ambulence with Mrs. Garett, Blair, and Jo)

J: is she gunna be ok?

F 2: She ain't breathing.

B: Oh no..that isn't good.

J: Blair, sometimes I wonder if you do have a brain.

(The ambulence parks into the parking lot. Tootie and Mrs. Garett go into the same emergency room. Natalie, Blair, and Jo are in the waiting room)

N: I hope Tootie and Mrs. Garett are alright!

B: How did this happen?!

J: I dunno and I don't wanna know.

N: Well..I know..

B: Nat..speak.

N: Well..Tootie had a pack of cigerettes.

J: (Drops mouth open)

B: I knew you were hiding something.

N: And we wanted to try them out. But Tootie dropped the lighter..(Gets teary eyed)

(The camera focuses on Tootie. The Nurse is trying to find a pulse)

Nu1: There isn't any pulse! She isn't breathing either. Her lungs are completely clogged up with smoke.

(The camera switches to Mrs. Garett)

Nu2: This one isn't breathing either! Guys..I don't think this ones gunna make it...

(The camera focuses on Natalie crying on Blair's sholder. Then suddenly a Docert comes out)

D: Well..we have news.

J: What is it?!?!

D: The black girl--(Blair cuts him off)

Blair: Tootie.

D: Well Tootie, we just don't know. Neither one of them are breathing..but we highly doubt the other one will make it.

(The screen freezes with No looking startled, Natalie still crying and Blair going completely pale)

To Be Continued..

AlexzBonner · 01-12-2001, 06:15 PM

Write more that is soooo good! BTW, thanks! You just gave me an idea!

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!

BlairW_1 · 01-12-2001, 08:48 PM

Hey, great work so far! Keep it up!

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

01-10-2001, 03:40 PM	#1
BWarner_02 Guest Posts: n/a	New Fan Fiction -To Go With The Crowd (Part 1 of 4)- Hey everybody..here is my very first fan fiction..I hope you like it! Title: To Go With The Crowd (Part 1 of 3) (The Camera zooms in on Jo who is studying for an important exam in the kitchen. Nobody is in the kitchen but Jo.) J: (Says to herself) Gosh..why do we even need to know this stuff?! We probably ain't ever gonna use it in life anyways. (All of the sudden Mrs. Garett comes in the room) MG: Wrong. J: Mrs. Garett! I didn't know you were there! MG: I wasn't..I just so happened to walk in on you talking to yourself..and your wrong. J: How? I mean..if I am gonna have a career as a cop then I am certainly not gonna need to know what year Abraham Lincoln freed the slaves! MG: Jo, that isn't the point. J: Then what is the point? To walk around on the streets saying HEY GUESS WHAT!? I KNOW WHEN ABE LINCOLN FREED THE SLAVES! MG: (Smiles) Jo..(Blair comes into the room with 4 shopping bags) B: Hello everybody. J: Oh gosh..why is it that every time I see you your holding shopping bags?! B: Well shopping is what Warners do! Especially when there are sales at Blooomingdales. Look at this dress Mrs. Garett. (Takes out velvet black dress) MG: Oh my Blair..it's stunning! How much was it? B: Oh not that much..just $78.00. According to me that's cheap! J: Blair can you please just let me study?! I am not about to fail another exam like I did last week. B: (Sighs) Oh fine..your loss. (Walks out) MG: Well I will leave you to study..Bye Jo. (Leaves) J: (Continues to study) (The camera zooms in on the girl's room where Natalie and Tootie are in) B: (Walks in) Would you just look at this dress I got?! T: (Says in a surprising way) Blair! Oh Hi Blair. N: (Gulps) Yeah Hi. B: What's wrong? N: Wrong?! WRONG? T: You gotta be kiddin! Nothings wrong with us! B: (Frowns) Are you sure? T: Yupp. N: More than ever. B: Well..ok. (Puts shopping bags down by her bed and leaves) N: (Sighs) That was a close one. T: I know..(Opens dresser drawer and reveals a packet of ciggerettes) (The camera focuses on Blair, who is alone in the Living Room. She is admiring herself in a mirror, fluffing her hair) B (To herself): Oh Blair..why art tho so beautiful? J: (Walks in) Wow! I thought that by now that mirrow would have cracked-- (Stops) B: What is it Jo? J: (Sniffs) I smell something.. B: (Gets up) Yeah me too..Smoke...(hears Natalie and Tootie scream) (Jo and Blair run upstairs but as they are in the middle of the stairs the camera freezes and the credits start coming up) To Be Continued
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01-10-2001, 06:02 PM	#2
JoBonner161 Guest Posts: n/a	That's really good so far! Write more on it!
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01-10-2001, 06:05 PM	#3
BWarner_02 Guest Posts: n/a	Hey I am back..I just wanna say I made a mistake in the post. In the post it says part 1 of 3 but when I wrote it up the title for the post was part 1 of 4..the truth is that it was suppose to be part 1 of 4..ok..what you are about to read is part 2 of 4 ok? :-) (The camera focuses on Blair and Jo. They just got into the girl's bedroom to find the bed on fire, and the wall covered in smoke) B: Tootie! Natalie! T: (Coughing) J: Don't just stand there you two get out!! T and N: (Coughing histerically, they run out of the room and Tootie slumps down on the ground outside the room, while Natalie goes and calls the fire department) (The camera focuses on the phone) N: (Coughs) Yes..there is a fire at Eastland School for girls. We need you right away! (Coughs) Hurry the smoke is coming downstairs and there are alot of people here! (The camera focuses on a room full of smoke, the girl's bedroom) B: Where's Mrs. Garett?!?! J: I dunno check her room! (Notices Tootie) Oh no.. (The Camera focuses on a room practically covered in fire..Mrs. Garett's room) B: (Sees Mrs. Garett laying on the ground) Oh No Mrs. Garett! (Trys to pick Mrs. Garett up, but all she can do is drag her out of the room) (A couple minutes pass and the fire department come) F 1: (Opens the door to the house and goes upstairs) J: Take this girl..I think her lugns are full of oxygeon! F 2: (Takes Tootie and does CPR, but it doesn't work so he and another fireman put her on a stretcher and take her out of the house. The ambulence with Tootie drives off) N: What do i do?!?!? Where do I go?! J: Natalie you just go outside. N: (Goes outside) (Camera focuses on a Fireman 2, Blair, and Mrs. Garett) B: I think she needs to go to the hospital! F 2: No kidding! (Picks her up and takes her downstairs, placing her on another stretcher. They take her in another ambulence and drive off. The rest of the firemen try to extinguish the fire, and Blair and Jo are in the ambulence with Mrs. Garett going to the hospital) (The camera focuses on the ambulence with Mrs. Garett, Blair, and Jo) J: is she gunna be ok? F 2: She ain't breathing. B: Oh no..that isn't good. J: Blair, sometimes I wonder if you do have a brain. (The ambulence parks into the parking lot. Tootie and Mrs. Garett go into the same emergency room. Natalie, Blair, and Jo are in the waiting room) N: I hope Tootie and Mrs. Garett are alright! B: How did this happen?! J: I dunno and I don't wanna know. N: Well..I know.. B: Nat..speak. N: Well..Tootie had a pack of cigerettes. J: (Drops mouth open) B: I knew you were hiding something. N: And we wanted to try them out. But Tootie dropped the lighter..(Gets teary eyed) (The camera focuses on Tootie. The Nurse is trying to find a pulse) Nu1: There isn't any pulse! She isn't breathing either. Her lungs are completely clogged up with smoke. (The camera switches to Mrs. Garett) Nu2: This one isn't breathing either! Guys..I don't think this ones gunna make it... (The camera focuses on Natalie crying on Blair's sholder. Then suddenly a Docert comes out) D: Well..we have news. J: What is it?!?! D: The black girl--(Blair cuts him off) Blair: Tootie. D: Well Tootie, we just don't know. Neither one of them are breathing..but we highly doubt the other one will make it. (The screen freezes with No looking startled, Natalie still crying and Blair going completely pale) To Be Continued..
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01-12-2001, 06:15 PM	#4
AlexzBonner Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 11, 2001 Location: Muldrow, OK (Miss America '96's home town!) Posts: 284	Write more that is soooo good! BTW, thanks! You just gave me an idea! ------------------ J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50? B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!

01-12-2001, 08:48 PM	#5
BlairW_1 Mindanao Machiku Senior Member Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: Temporarily in Ok, permanent location ^ there! Posts: 1,011	Hey, great work so far! Keep it up! ------------------ J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50? B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books? ---------- B: A fire! There's been a fire here! ---------- B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie? N: We are suicidal! ---------- Bailey: They losted me! ---------- T: You mean the agony of da feet! ---------- T: Did I lie? ---------- T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black! ---------- N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day! ---------- ~Danielle~