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DallasFan2006
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Gist: This show is about Justin Alexander and Lauren Jackson anyways Lauren and Justin were the town's young lovebirds at 16 and one day police come by and arrest him and Lauren is left crying hysterically and is miserable
-She finds out while Justin is in prison for a crime that he never did that she was pregnant and then 5 years later Justin is released and she comes to get him and decides to tell him about her being pregnant when he was taken off to prison and now they have a beautiful little 4 year old girl. -Also Justin decides its time to pop the question sooner then later Official Theme Song: It's Not Over by Chris Daughtry -Their hometown is the fictional town of Rudy North Carolina -There's only gonna be 10 episodes the first season Cast: 1.Justin: Channing Tatum 2.Lauren: Autumn Reeser 3.Hannah: Harley Graham Episode Previews: 1.Prison for Justin -This eppy is a prequel and justs shows ya how he got carted off to prison for a crime he never committed and we see her tell her mom she's pregnant and basically to set up the show. 2.Coming Home -This is the big one where we see a tanned slim Justin getting his things together and and he comes out of his cell and into a special outside waiting area he sees Lauren and he seems different and abit changed and she tells him about their little girl Hannah and he seems genuinely happy and they stop off at a gas station and he picks up a stuffed animal for her. -Hannah knows about her daddy thru her mom but doesn't really know him so she is reluctant at first to hug him and take gift. Episode 3: The Proposal -Justin decides its time to get a ring and propose to Lauren so he goes and buys a nice little ring and books reservations at a fancy restuarant and tells them he plans to propose so make it a little nicer with some candles and wine and some beautiful tropical flowers -Lauren of course says yes and this makes them a happy little family Episode 4: Trouble finding a job -Justin decides to go look for a job and has trouble because of his prison record and Lauren tells him he could stay home and watch there little girl that way they don't have to pay a sitter. Episode 5: Prejudice -Justin decides to go buy some weight lifting equipment as he started working out in prison and wants to keep doing so and he goes to a nice used downtown exercise equipment store and he picks out a Bowflex machine and he asks the lady how much is it and she says you probably couldn't afford it and Justin says look I wanna buy the damn machine now I have the money, Then the manager comes up and asks what is wrong and Justin tells him and the manager says I'm sorry about that and sells him the bowflex and ends up firing the snooty lady who wouldnt sell it to him. Episode 6: Wedding Plans -In this eppy Lauren is busy making plans for there wedding as they want a small private ceremony with just a few friends and family as Justin decides to take Hannah to see his parents whom moved out to another local town called Buckley and they had heard he was released and so they were thrilled to see him and there grand daughter Hannah, Justin tells them he and lauren are gonna get married and he wants them to come. -They say of course and say that they will watch Hannah when they go on there honeymoon and Justin thanks mom that'd be cool I think she should get to know ya guys. Episode 7: Mr Mom -We see Justin trying to take care of his daughter while Lauren is busy with work as a secretary for her dad. -We see some funny moments as he has to play tea party and then they watch a movie and she falls asleep by her daddy. Episode 8: Bachelor Party -Lauren kisses Justin good night and tells him to behave as he and his buddies are off for his bachelor party as they go to a local bar and they spend the night playing pool and drinking beer while Justin only has a few and he misses lauren so he tells his friends good night and goes back to lauren and she's surprised to see him back so early and he says he missed her and was kinda tired so he wanted to come home so they could be alone. They ended up cuddling and watching a movie and they fell to sleep. Episode 9: The Big Day -There family are all there and preparing for lauren and Justin's wedding and making last minute arrangements and such -We see a stunningly beautiful Lauren walk out to the alter as the crowd gasps and takes a bunch of pics as she is smiling and we see Justin looking dapper in his tuxedo -They are then married and we see them ride off in there car to end the show. Episode 10: Honeymoon bliss -They spend three lovely weeks in Hawaii as they are truly in love and Justin says he is so so glad that lauren kept in touch with him thru prison and is glad she held out til he got released and she says I could never love anyone else like I loved you justin and I have our beautiful daughter as proof and she loves her daddy. Justin says I love her too and how about we give her a baby brother -They then try to get pregnant and then we see at the end Lauren is throwing up in the morning's and decides to take a pregnancy test and it comes back positive so she tells justin that night at dinner that she is pregnant. -Will post Season 2 episodes next. |
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Last edited by DallasFan2006; 05-12-2007 at 12:11 AM. |
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DallasFan2006
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Daughtry's It's Not Over plays as we see pictures of Justin and Lauren as teens and now
-This episode focuses on them as teenagers -We see Lauren come home from school Karen Jackson: Hey sweetheart how was school today Lauren: Oh it was ok I guess Lauren: Yeah mom you know I went to the the clinic Karen: Yes I knew why what was the matter Lauren: wow um mom ya may wanna sit down for this it's something I myself wasn't prepared for but now I cannot wait Lauren: They said that I am 2 months pregnant mom Karen: Well honey me and your dad will support you no matter what ok Lauren: Thanks so much mom I know it's gonna be tough on you with all the rumours that people are gonna start Karen: Well people like you and honey let em talk because I know that you and justin love each other and you always will so you better go talk with him about this it's a big thing to handle ok. Lauren: ok mom I love you Karen: I love you too sweety -Lauren gets in her car and drives off to justin's house -We see Justin in his room looking over his homework while listening to 2Pac in the background -Lauren walks in Justin: Hey you look great babe Lauren: Thanks so do you Justin: Ha I just threw these on I gotta mow the lawn tonight Lauren: Listen Justin I gotta talk to ya about something important ok -We then see his mom answer the door as there is a police officer there Jeanie Alexander: Hello Officer what's the problem Officer: Mam your son Justin Gregory Alexander we got word that he put out a hit on two local asian teens whom were shot cold blooded last night at about 11:24 PM Jeanie: That's impossible my son would never have anyone killed or kill anyone he is a good kid and gets straight a's Jeanie: Well come in then Officer: Were taking him to jail and then in 2 days he will be transported to the state correctional facility in Charlotte Jeanie: ok -The officer goes upstairs and and tackles justin down and cuffs him Officer: Mr Alexander your under arrest for the hit and kill of Yoshihiro Yatusama and Antonio Ichiban Justin: I didn't do it damnit Officer: Sure buddy -We see him being led off in cuffs as Lauren and his mom are crying hysterically -End of episode Feedback/Thoughts appreciated! -This is short basically to set it up for the series later on. |
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DallasFan2006
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-We hear Daightry's It's Not Over play as we see the different characters of the show.
-We see North Carolina State Prison's Warden Earl Hackman walk down the hallway into the main prison area -He is flanked by two guards to protect him as they stop at Justin's cell and they unlock it -Justin stands up and has his arms at his side Warden: Easy Mr Alexander I am here to release you your time is up son I am so so sorry that you mistakenly got sent here Justin: Yeah I guess I can buy that cause you know I never had them asian kids killed Warden: I know son I am very sorry Warden: Guard he's allowed to go he can go home Guard: Come with me -The guard then takes him to a special area where he can get changed into regular clothes and make a phone call -We see Justin dressed in a basic wifebeater and some leather shorts, a Yankees Cap and some black boots -We see him sit down and make a phone call Lauren: Hello this is Lauren Jackson Justin: Hey baby it's me Justin I getta come home so come get me Lauren: Oh My God babe I love you soooo much Justin: Ha Ha yeah the dick heads finally realized I never did it. Lauren: I will be right there plus I gotta tell ya something when I do get there it's important Justin: Allright baby just get here ok Narrator: It had been nearly 2 months since Lauren was allowed to come see him at the prison yet she never told him about there little girl as she didn't know how and now would have to tell him -Lauren arrived at the prison and we see the guard greeting her and walking her down the hall where justin was Justin: Damn girl you look sexy today Lauren: Thanks god I love you justin -Lauren and Justin share an intimate embrace and they then share a passionate kiss as it had been nearly five years since they last kissed and justin never forgot it Lauren: Listen I got something to tell you Justin: ok shoot girl Lauren: um you know when you got arrested five years ago well um I wanted to tell you and I started to but then it was too late Justin: What is it lauren Lauren: Heh well I was 2 months pregnant at the time Justin: So I have a child Lauren: Yep her name is Hannah she is 4 years old are you mad? Justin: Mad no babe I could never be mad I love you and I eventually wanted to have kids with you and now we got a little girl Lauren: Yeah I told her about her daddy and I have showed her pictures of you Justin: So why didn't you ever tell me when you came to see me I would of understood Lauren: It was just too hard I hated seeing you locked up and I knew you had lots of other things on your mind Justin: Yeah well let's just get the hell outta this hole -The guard uncuffs him and walks him out to the front area -They then get in their car and drive off -Before they go home they stop at a gas station and fuel up and Justin buys a teddy bear for hannah -They then leave and head the rest of the way home -They stop at Lauren's parents house and get out Karen: Hello Justin it's good to see you again Justin: Thanks mrs jackson Karen: Please call me karen Justin: ok listen lauren baby I gotta go freshen up uh where's the bathroom Lauren: Just down the hall -Justin exits and this gives lauren time to talk with her mom Karen: Baby girl have ya told him about hannah? Lauren: Yep Karen: How'd he take it Lauren: He loves the idea of having a daughter and he said he eventually wanted to have one and wanted to know why I never told him and I said I didn't tell him because I didn't know how and I hated to see him locked up and he probably had other things on his mind Karen: Yeah well thats good um do you guys wanna be alone tonight or go out and celebrate Lauren: No mom you watch hannah enough as it is I think we may just stay home and be together I don't wanna go out plus I gotta give hannah a bath and stuff Karen: ok well whatever girl -We see Justin come back out after getting cleaned up Justin: So lauren where's hannah at Lauren: That's just what I was wondering myself Karen: Lauren your dad took her to play at the park Lauren: ok well how long ago was that Karen: Oh about an hour ago they should be coming back lemme call your dad's cell phone Lauren: k mom -We see Karen dial up lauren's father Joseph: Hello Karen: Hey Steve honey um Lauren and Justin are here to pick up hannah so could ya get home Steve: Sure um gimme about 10 minutes Karen: k -We see Steve and Hannah getting out of the car and coming inside Justin: Hello Mr Jackson how are ya Steve: I'm doing good it's good to see you justin I know that you and lauren have alot of catching up to do Justin: Yeah steve I need to ask you something privately Steve: Sure um let's go downstairs -They walk down to the basement and sit down in two chairs Steve: So what is it Justin: Well I wanna marry your daughter I love her and I wouldn't wanna be with anyone else so I am asking for your blessing Steve: Justin of course I would be proud to have you as my son in law and I give you my blessing Justin: Thanks mr j Steve: No Problem um have ya got a ring yet Justin: Naw I gotta go get one but um I am a little strapped for cash so I was wondering if I could borrow about 300 or so Steve: No Problem -Steve gets out his wallet and hands justin three one hundred dollar bills Justin: Thanks Mr J I will ya back as soon as I can Steve: No Rush I got plenty of money Justin: K Thanks alot man Steve: Listen I know I can trust you but just in case if I find out you ever you ever hit her I will kick your ass ya hear me Justin: Yessir Steve: Good -Both men walk back upstairs Lauren: Justin this is our daughter hannah -Justin walks up to her Justin: Hey hannah do you know who I am Hannah: momma said your my daddy I think right momma Lauren: Yes honey that's daddy Justin: Hey baby girl come here gimme a hug -Hannah is reluctant at first but then comes up and hugs him -Justin gives her the teddy bear he bought at the gas station Hannah: Thanks daddy Karen: Listen guys would you all stay for lunch I prepared a casserole it's almost done and some sweet potatoes I gotta warm up and we got some delicious german chocolate cake daddy made -Lauren looks at justin and he nods Lauren: Sure guys I mean if it's no problem I mean if ya got enough food Karen: You bet we do and um let's break out the good dishes lauren hon help me with that -The show fades out as we see Hannah and Justin goofing around -We hear Ryan Cabrera's True play as the show ends Feedback/Thoughts Appreciated! |
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Last edited by DallasFan2006; 05-18-2007 at 02:44 PM. |
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