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nancysbiggestfan · 11-21-2001, 06:14 PM

Let me know what you think of these two "poems" they don't rhyme or anything though. And lemme know which one you think is best.

"I Hold In My Hand"

I hold in my hand Hope.
Hope for peace in America, Land of the Free.

I hold in my hand Sympathy.
Sympathy for all that has suffered a loss in this tragedy.

In my hand I hold Fear.
Fear for what may happen next to my homeland.

In my hand I hold Pride.
Pride for my country and its great leaders.

I hold in my hand Faith.
Faith in God and the peace He will soon bring to America, Land of the Free.

"Pride, Faith, & Respect"

I hold in my hand Pride.
Pride in my country and its leaders.

I hold in my hand Faith.
Faith in my country and its leaders.

I hold in my hand Respect.
Respect for my country and its leaders.

In my hand I hold all of these things in Hope my country's leaders will do what is right and noble so all that live in America, Land of the Free, may honestly say they have Pride, Faith, & Respect for this country and its leaders.

So what did y'all think 'bout these things? I have a couple of questions. Please answer. It's very important to me.

What did you think of these things I wrote?

Which one is best?

Would you change the name of either of them? If so, what would it be and which one(s)?

Thanx, I appreciat it a great deal!

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²Tiffany²

LYLAS or LYLAB
Peace Out!

Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse.

Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why do you even wanna be with me at all?
Teddy: Because, I love you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Jamie,Karli,Lauren, Lisa, and Tiffany Da Slang Sistas

Mijada · 11-21-2001, 06:19 PM

they are both really good. I like the 1st one best though.

Max Whittaker · 11-21-2001, 06:22 PM

I liked "Pride Faith & Respect".

I don't believe either need a name change.

nancysbiggestfan · 11-21-2001, 06:29 PM

Thanx both of you guys for replying! I'm gonna see what the rest of y'all think.

keep replyin'...

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²Tiffany²

LYLAS or LYLAB
Peace Out!

Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse.

Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why do you even wanna be with me at all?
Teddy: Because, I love you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Jamie,Karli,Lauren, Lisa, and Tiffany Da Slang Sistas

Warm & Fuzzy · 11-21-2001, 06:57 PM

I liked "Pride Faith & Respect" better. Both of them were great though.And the title's fine.

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I don't care whose fault it is! I'm the one who has to tell a man the size of a skyscraper that his living room looks like seaworld!!!~Jo
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Three eggs, scrambled, soft, not runny. Hashbrowns, crispy, not hard. Rye bread, lightly toasted, not burnt, with butter on the side, and don’t forget the Jalapeno, extra hot if you have any.~Jinny
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I hate my social studies teacher!~ Moi

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Jenny aka Jinny!

ks · 11-21-2001, 07:37 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Jo's the bomb:
I liked "Pride Faith & Respect" better. Both of them were great though.And the title's fine.

DITTO! Those were really good, Tiffany!

ks

~*hosebabe87*~ · 11-21-2001, 07:42 PM

I liked the first one better

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Dashing and daring,
courageous and caring,
faithful and friendly with stories to share.
All through the forest the sing out in chorus, marching along as their song fills the air;

Gummi bears, bouncing here and there and everywhere. high adventure that's beyond compare.
They are gummi bears.

Magic and mystery, a part of their history,
along with the secret of gummi bear juice.
Legend is growing,
they feel by the knowing,
they fight for what's right in whatever they do:

Gummi Bears!
bouncing here and there and everywhere;
high adventure that's beyond compare, they are the gummi bears.
They are the gummi bears!

~Thank you Jim! lol

nancysbiggestfan · 11-21-2001, 08:17 PM

Thanx for all the replies! You don't know how much I appreciate it.

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²Tiffany²

LYLAS or LYLAB
Peace Out!

Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse.

Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why do you even wanna be with me at all?
Teddy: Because, I love you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Jamie,Karli,Lauren, Lisa, and Tiffany Da Slang Sistas

Kay Scarpetta · 11-21-2001, 10:06 PM

both are cool, but I think I like the 1st one a bit better

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°·.*¤*-Blair Warner-*¤*.·°

Check out my site about the bestest most awesomeness person in the world:
The Beautiful, Wonderful, Talented, Exquisite... Lisa Whelchel

Blanche: I just want you to know- Tootie will always be my favorite on the Facts of Life!

sambino5 · 11-21-2001, 10:45 PM

I like the first one. It it so good.

Max Whittaker · 11-21-2001, 11:37 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by nancysbiggestfan:
Thanx for all the replies! You don't know how much I appreciate it.

Could you possibly tell us?

nancysbiggestfan · 11-22-2001, 09:30 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Max Whittaker:
Could you possibly tell us?

Very, Very much Max.

I gotta turn one of them in at school for this contest that we HAVE to enter. It has to be in by sometime in December. I'm still not quite sure which one though. But I do appreciate it Very, Very much!

Thanx again!

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²Tiffany²

LYLAS or LYLAB
Peace Out!

Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse.

Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why do you even wanna be with me at all?
Teddy: Because, I love you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Jamie,Karli,Lauren, Lisa, and Tiffany Da Slang Sistas

disturbed child · 11-22-2001, 09:48 PM

They were both very nice and touching.

Honestly? I like them both the same!

Nope, their names are great!

I give 'em 2 thumbs up!

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~*Morganne, a.k.a. glitterbabie, a.k.a the gurl formerly known as Sourbabie*~

It's not like you to say sorry, I was waiting on a different story. This time I'm mistaken for handing you a heart worth breaking. And I've been wrong, I've been down into the bottom of every bottle. These five words in my head scream, "Are we having fun yet?" ~ Nickelback

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Luka: Why do you have to make such a big deal out of everything, like you have an insect up your anus!

Abby: It's bug up my ass, Luka. Bug up my ass. If you're going to insult me, you can at least get the words right.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

I'm a Jinanybody and a Carby (that's ER). Britt is a Jineddy!

*Me, Britt, and Dana are self appointed message board bad gurls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are!*

nancysbiggestfan · 11-22-2001, 11:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by glitterbabie:
They were both very nice and touching.

Honestly? I like them both the same!

Nope, their names are great!

I give 'em 2 thumbs up!

Thanx!

------------------
²Tiffany²

LYLAS or LYLAB
Peace Out!

Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse.

Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why do you even wanna be with me at all?
Teddy: Because, I love you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Jamie,Karli,Lauren, Lisa, and Tiffany Da Slang Sistas

IMakeBurgers · 11-23-2001, 01:03 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by nancysbiggestfan:
What did you think of these things I wrote?

Which one is best?

Would you change the name of either of them? If so, what would it be and which one(s)?

they brought tears to my eyes, they were so great!

both!

they're great the way they are!

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§*¤~¤Jamie Chica Bungalo¤~¤*§

People say I'm a bad influence. I just say, "The world's already ****ed, I'm just adding to it"~Eminem (and me)

My new name is Jo Polniaczek and Karli is, Blair Warner..we have claimed those names! Got it? Good!

Karli, IT BURNS!! LMFAO! NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!!

**LEMONADE SODA MAKES ME HYPERnessnessnessness**(lol Lauren)

Lisa, Lauren,Karli, Tiffany, and Jamie, da sLaNgSIsTaS!!!!

My newNancy McKeon site..Check it out!

*singing* Take me there, I wanna go there, take me there, let's go there, take me to that great place...(I'm talkin' 'bout Nancy's house, if you haven't figured out)

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
please e-mail or IM me at:
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11-21-2001, 06:14 PM	#1
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	I need to know your all's opinion on something. . . Please Reply..very Important. Let me know what you think of these two "poems" they don't rhyme or anything though. And lemme know which one you think is best. "I Hold In My Hand" I hold in my hand Hope. Hope for peace in America, Land of the Free. I hold in my hand Sympathy. Sympathy for all that has suffered a loss in this tragedy. In my hand I hold Fear. Fear for what may happen next to my homeland. In my hand I hold Pride. Pride for my country and its great leaders. I hold in my hand Faith. Faith in God and the peace He will soon bring to America, Land of the Free. "Pride, Faith, & Respect" I hold in my hand Pride. Pride in my country and its leaders. I hold in my hand Faith. Faith in my country and its leaders. I hold in my hand Respect. Respect for my country and its leaders. In my hand I hold all of these things in Hope my country's leaders will do what is right and noble so all that live in America, Land of the Free, may honestly say they have Pride, Faith, & Respect for this country and its leaders. So what did y'all think 'bout these things? I have a couple of questions. Please answer. It's very important to me. What did you think of these things I wrote? Which one is best? Would you change the name of either of them? If so, what would it be and which one(s)? Thanx, I appreciat it a great deal! ------------------ ²Tiffany² LYLAS or LYLAB Peace Out! Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse. Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why do you even wanna be with me at all? Teddy: Because, I love you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jamie,Karli,Lauren, Lisa, and Tiffany Da Slang Sistas

11-21-2001, 06:19 PM	#2
Mijada Spencers mom Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Dec 02, 2001 Location: eastern US Posts: 4,093	they are both really good. I like the 1st one best though.

11-21-2001, 06:22 PM	#3
Max Whittaker I want Serenity back Forum Veteran Join Date: Apr 30, 2001 Posts: 6,180	I liked "Pride Faith & Respect". I don't believe either need a name change.

11-21-2001, 06:29 PM	#4
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	Thanx both of you guys for replying! I'm gonna see what the rest of y'all think. keep replyin'... ------------------ ²Tiffany² LYLAS or LYLAB Peace Out! Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse. Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why do you even wanna be with me at all? Teddy: Because, I love you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jamie,Karli,Lauren, Lisa, and Tiffany Da Slang Sistas

11-21-2001, 06:57 PM	#5
Warm & Fuzzy Member Forum Fanatic Join Date: Feb 02, 2001 Posts: 10,254	I liked "Pride Faith & Respect" better. Both of them were great though.And the title's fine. ------------------ I don't care whose fault it is! I'm the one who has to tell a man the size of a skyscraper that his living room looks like seaworld!!!~Jo ---------- Three eggs, scrambled, soft, not runny. Hashbrowns, crispy, not hard. Rye bread, lightly toasted, not burnt, with butter on the side, and don’t forget the Jalapeno, extra hot if you have any.~Jinny -------- I hate my social studies teacher!~ Moi ---------- Jenny aka Jinny!

11-21-2001, 07:42 PM	#7
~hosebabe87~ Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 16, 2001 Posts: 304	I liked the first one better ------------------ Dashing and daring, courageous and caring, faithful and friendly with stories to share. All through the forest the sing out in chorus, marching along as their song fills the air; Gummi bears, bouncing here and there and everywhere. high adventure that's beyond compare. They are gummi bears. Magic and mystery, a part of their history, along with the secret of gummi bear juice. Legend is growing, they feel by the knowing, they fight for what's right in whatever they do: Gummi Bears! bouncing here and there and everywhere; high adventure that's beyond compare, they are the gummi bears. They are the gummi bears! ~Thank you Jim! lol

11-21-2001, 08:17 PM	#8
nancysbiggestfan Member Senior Member Join Date: Apr 18, 2001 Location: Felony Division of SFPD Posts: 2,231	Thanx for all the replies! You don't know how much I appreciate it. ------------------ ²Tiffany² LYLAS or LYLAB Peace Out! Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse. Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why do you even wanna be with me at all? Teddy: Because, I love you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jamie,Karli,Lauren, Lisa, and Tiffany Da Slang Sistas

11-21-2001, 10:06 PM	#9
Kay Scarpetta Defy Gravity 8.26.05 Forum Superstar Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Location: La Vie Boheme Posts: 28,013	both are cool, but I think I like the 1st one a bit better ------------------ °·.¤-Blair Warner-¤.·° Check out my site about the bestest most awesomeness person in the world: The Beautiful, Wonderful, Talented, Exquisite... Lisa Whelchel Blanche: I just want you to know- Tootie will always be my favorite on the Facts of Life!

11-21-2001, 10:45 PM	#10
sambino5 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 02, 2001 Location: KY Posts: 382	I like the first one. It it so good.

11-22-2001, 09:48 PM	#13
disturbed child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: In denial. Posts: 823	They were both very nice and touching. Honestly? I like them both the same! Nope, their names are great! I give 'em 2 thumbs up! ------------------ ~Morganne, a.k.a. glitterbabie, a.k.a the gurl formerly known as Sourbabie~ It's not like you to say sorry, I was waiting on a different story. This time I'm mistaken for handing you a heart worth breaking. And I've been wrong, I've been down into the bottom of every bottle. These five words in my head scream, "Are we having fun yet?" ~ Nickelback ~~~~~~~~~~ Luka: Why do you have to make such a big deal out of everything, like you have an insect up your anus! Abby: It's bug up my ass, Luka. Bug up my ass. If you're going to insult me, you can at least get the words right. ~~~~~~~~~~ I'm a Jinanybody and a Carby (that's ER). Britt is a Jineddy! Me, Britt, and Dana are self appointed message board bad gurls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are!