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[Miss Lisa]

I'm probaly one of the first people to submit a story on Soap and after I'm finish a part of it I'd like to hear you opinions on it and please be honest.

It starts up from right were it left off the two spanish officers had led Jessica to infront of the wall where she was going to face the firing squad. The first officer tells the men to get their guns ready. Jessica closes her eyes as she takes a deep breathe. The officer calls out, "Fire," They shoot at her. She feels a quit jolt of pain then collapses. As soon as everything was over El Puerco runs in only to find an unconsience Jessica lying on the ground with blood on her. El Puerco turns to the officers, " I can't beleive you actually shot her, she had nothing to with the revolutionary," he said in anger.
The officer looked at him with irritation, "She set you free on the plain, and you didn't show up." the officer said calmly.
"I was one minute late," he yelled, then he looked over at Jessica, "Is there any way to save her?"
"I could get her to a medic, on one condition, we take your life." the officer replied, "It's her life or yours, your choice."
"Okay you have me." he said nervously while looking over at her.
"Alright," the officer said, "take her to the medic," to the second officer. He picked her up and took her. The officer pointed at El Puerco "Against the wall."

To Be Continued...