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JessieOrJinny · 06-02-2006, 09:26 AM

Yeah, so I haven't written these in soo long lol. But I think it's about time I do...so here it is so far->

[Setting] The day after Jinny Exstead weds with artist Hank Riley, and had a ceremony in Jinny's father's backyard.

Starts: Jinny-(Walking close to Hank feeling very excited, cheerful about how they're going to spend their honeymoon.)
Hank-Jinny, how about we ask your father if he could do us a favor and watch John while were gone?
Jinny-Ah, I don't know I mean I feel like I'd be leaning on him too much in a way because he is getting older and__
Hank (Cuts her off) Ok, well whatever you feel comfortable with. We should of made plans sooner..hmm(Nods and turn his head left and right seeing who is listening in.)
Jinny-Sorry, (Suddenly growing frustrated) ok, now I just feel that you're agging at me for not planning this ahead of time.
Hank-No, no no honey, Jin I'm not mad. Look, well find someone to babysit for the baby.
Jinny-God, you're right, I'm sorry. (Rubbing her hand against her forehead)
Hank-(Wraps his arms around her waist) Jinny, I love you. I hope you're happy with me and I am going to try my best to fullfill all your precious needs.
Jinny-(Smiles a little) I love you too.
Jinny's Dad-Jinny, my Jinny-girl is finally married! (He says in an excited voice and goes to hug her)
Jinny-(Hugs back feeling a little anxious)
Hank-How about the beach? The one you were mentioning you loved when you were like 13?
Jinny-Ohh, my gosh Ocean City, NJ? (Grows less anxious and more forward)
Hank-Yep, that one.
Jinny-Are you sure that is where you want to go?
Hank-Babe, as long as it's relaxing and you're happy.
Jinny-(Reaches up and kisses him)
(All of a sudden Ronnie, Jinny's half sister steps in the doorway as the volume of the room turns silent.)
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Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 06-07-2006, 05:53 PM

Yay a new fic!!! Please keep writing on this! Sorry I didn't see it sooner! I can't wait to see where it's going!

JinKateFan · 06-10-2006, 01:25 AM

anxious to see more. nice start

Swimgirl587 · 06-10-2006, 07:28 PM

great fic...keep it up...can't wait to see more

06-02-2006, 09:26 AM	#1
JessieOrJinny +RIP TD+ Occasional Poster Join Date: Feb 13, 2006 Location: Levittown, PA Posts: 38	Tired, Bored in school started writing something..nothin much yet Yeah, so I haven't written these in soo long lol. But I think it's about time I do...so here it is so far-> [Setting] The day after Jinny Exstead weds with artist Hank Riley, and had a ceremony in Jinny's father's backyard. Starts: Jinny-(Walking close to Hank feeling very excited, cheerful about how they're going to spend their honeymoon.) Hank-Jinny, how about we ask your father if he could do us a favor and watch John while were gone? Jinny-Ah, I don't know I mean I feel like I'd be leaning on him too much in a way because he is getting older and__ Hank (Cuts her off) Ok, well whatever you feel comfortable with. We should of made plans sooner..hmm(Nods and turn his head left and right seeing who is listening in.) Jinny-Sorry, (Suddenly growing frustrated) ok, now I just feel that you're agging at me for not planning this ahead of time. Hank-No, no no honey, Jin I'm not mad. Look, well find someone to babysit for the baby. Jinny-God, you're right, I'm sorry. (Rubbing her hand against her forehead) Hank-(Wraps his arms around her waist) Jinny, I love you. I hope you're happy with me and I am going to try my best to fullfill all your precious needs. Jinny-(Smiles a little) I love you too. Jinny's Dad-Jinny, my Jinny-girl is finally married! (He says in an excited voice and goes to hug her) Jinny-(Hugs back feeling a little anxious) Hank-How about the beach? The one you were mentioning you loved when you were like 13? Jinny-Ohh, my gosh Ocean City, NJ? (Grows less anxious and more forward) Hank-Yep, that one. Jinny-Are you sure that is where you want to go? Hank-Babe, as long as it's relaxing and you're happy. Jinny-(Reaches up and kisses him) (All of a sudden Ronnie, Jinny's half sister steps in the doorway as the volume of the room turns silent.) --------------------------------------------------------------------------
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06-10-2006, 07:28 PM	#4
Swimgirl587 Tracey is the bomb! Occasional Poster Join Date: May 24, 2004 Location: Tracey Needham Posts: 66	great fic...keep it up...can't wait to see more
	__________________ Amor, no es amor (Si no es amor) es una ilusion (es una ilusion) tan llena de dolor Amor, no es amor (Si no es amor) es una obcesion (es una obcesion) dentro mi corazon Amor, no es amor (if this aint love) Then what am I feeling (what am I doing wrong) Amor, no es amor (if this aint love) Is this an illusion that I have in my heart?

06-07-2006, 05:53 PM	#2
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Yay a new fic!!! Please keep writing on this! Sorry I didn't see it sooner! I can't wait to see where it's going!

06-10-2006, 01:25 AM	#3
JinKateFan Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 12, 2002 Posts: 42	anxious to see more. nice start