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Justfuhgetaboutit · 10-21-2005, 04:54 PM

Ok, I'm not pushing anyone to reply to my thread I made about Leah in the movies, I just want some people to reply to it so I can hear your thoughts on it. The link for it is below. I don't care it's good or bad feedback I just want someone to reply to it.

http://www.sitcomsonline.com/boards/...d.php?t=154046

Justfuhgetaboutit · 11-06-2005, 06:33 PM

Oh hey guys, I just added some more exciting stuff to the thread, check it out!!

Oh by the way, that thread I made isn't the whole movie, its just like the opening scene, so that might clarify some of your concerns or questions regarding that.

Justfuhgetaboutit · 11-14-2005, 06:40 PM

You know what guys, I was thinking and I'm thinking of maybe changing the plot of the movie. I was thinking of changing it so Leah was an FBI agent the whole time (getting rid of the coffee shop scene) and everything seems to be going fine in her 5 year journey with the CIA but the CIA gets a new boss (a corrupt one) and he turns against Leah... leaving her with no choice but to get revenge and she does whatever is necessary to do that. So does that sound better? (I haven't done it yet, but I probably will sometime) Like does that seem to flow better? This movie idea might be a good one too cause this sort of movie is being produced now, that new movie with Charlize Theron.

Justfuhgetaboutit · 12-18-2005, 01:47 PM

You know what, I think the reason why nobody's replied to the thread is because it's too cluttered, Im going to try to omitt things to try to make it more clear. Ok, I tried to get rid of some of the stuff, I got rid of the picture/how her hair looks,the stuff about the boxshot, the story is pretty much the same, now however not only is she a martial arts extremist, she's now a cop for the NYPD- that's how she becomes noticed by the CIA recruiter because she was already with the law. That change to the story might help make things more clear. Oh and I also came up with a title "The Charlatans". Charlatans are usually frauds, hence her eventually corrupt colleages. Oh, and also note that the drug factory mission in Mexico is after her being with the CIA for about a year. Because once that happens, and she goes back to her apartment for the night, there's a flashback of how she became enrolled in the CIA. This is where the coffee shop scene in New Jersey takes action. Because she was an undercover NYPD officer but the guy robbing the cashier didn't know that. So do you guys kind of see how the whole thing takes root? Oh and I when I say flashback it's not like one of those ones where people's voices are echoing because it's a dream, it's just a scene that starts off with the front entrance of the coffe shop, location and year: So it would look like this

Newark, New Jersey
Spring, 1999

Also note, that she was in Jersey, because she was on break, because she's actually a cop for the NYPD but because the states are relatively close, she just went across the Turnpike.

Justfuhgetaboutit · 12-27-2005, 09:37 PM

Ok guys, I updated the story, I know it's a lot to read at once but it's good though.

Justfuhgetaboutit · 12-28-2005, 11:53 PM

Here's my poll: http://www.sitcomsonline.com/boards/...d.php?t=159948

Justfuhgetaboutit · 01-01-2006, 10:49 PM

Hey guys, feel free to vote again, the polls up and running now. It was accidentally closed down but it's fixed with the same title and same options. Here's the new link: http://www.sitcomsonline.com/boards/...d.php?t=154046

10-21-2005, 04:54 PM	#1
Justfuhgetaboutit Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 18, 2004 Location: Northville,Michigan Posts: 367	The Thread I made about Leah. Ok, I'm not pushing anyone to reply to my thread I made about Leah in the movies, I just want some people to reply to it so I can hear your thoughts on it. The link for it is below. I don't care it's good or bad feedback I just want someone to reply to it. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/boards/...d.php?t=154046
	__________________ Fuhgedaboutit! Last edited by Justfuhgetaboutit; 10-21-2005 at 06:22 PM.

11-06-2005, 06:33 PM	#2
Justfuhgetaboutit Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 18, 2004 Location: Northville,Michigan Posts: 367	Oh hey guys, I just added some more exciting stuff to the thread, check it out!! Oh by the way, that thread I made isn't the whole movie, its just like the opening scene, so that might clarify some of your concerns or questions regarding that.
	Last edited by Justfuhgetaboutit; 11-08-2005 at 02:01 PM.

11-14-2005, 06:40 PM	#3
Justfuhgetaboutit Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 18, 2004 Location: Northville,Michigan Posts: 367	You know what guys, I was thinking and I'm thinking of maybe changing the plot of the movie. I was thinking of changing it so Leah was an FBI agent the whole time (getting rid of the coffee shop scene) and everything seems to be going fine in her 5 year journey with the CIA but the CIA gets a new boss (a corrupt one) and he turns against Leah... leaving her with no choice but to get revenge and she does whatever is necessary to do that. So does that sound better? (I haven't done it yet, but I probably will sometime) Like does that seem to flow better? This movie idea might be a good one too cause this sort of movie is being produced now, that new movie with Charlize Theron.
	Last edited by Justfuhgetaboutit; 11-25-2005 at 09:51 PM.

12-18-2005, 01:47 PM	#4
Justfuhgetaboutit Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 18, 2004 Location: Northville,Michigan Posts: 367	You know what, I think the reason why nobody's replied to the thread is because it's too cluttered, Im going to try to omitt things to try to make it more clear. Ok, I tried to get rid of some of the stuff, I got rid of the picture/how her hair looks,the stuff about the boxshot, the story is pretty much the same, now however not only is she a martial arts extremist, she's now a cop for the NYPD- that's how she becomes noticed by the CIA recruiter because she was already with the law. That change to the story might help make things more clear. Oh and I also came up with a title "The Charlatans". Charlatans are usually frauds, hence her eventually corrupt colleages. Oh, and also note that the drug factory mission in Mexico is after her being with the CIA for about a year. Because once that happens, and she goes back to her apartment for the night, there's a flashback of how she became enrolled in the CIA. This is where the coffee shop scene in New Jersey takes action. Because she was an undercover NYPD officer but the guy robbing the cashier didn't know that. So do you guys kind of see how the whole thing takes root? Oh and I when I say flashback it's not like one of those ones where people's voices are echoing because it's a dream, it's just a scene that starts off with the front entrance of the coffe shop, location and year: So it would look like this Newark, New Jersey Spring, 1999 Also note, that she was in Jersey, because she was on break, because she's actually a cop for the NYPD but because the states are relatively close, she just went across the Turnpike.
	Last edited by Justfuhgetaboutit; 12-18-2005 at 02:18 PM.

12-27-2005, 09:37 PM	#5
Justfuhgetaboutit Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 18, 2004 Location: Northville,Michigan Posts: 367	Ok guys, I updated the story, I know it's a lot to read at once but it's good though.

12-28-2005, 11:53 PM	#6
Justfuhgetaboutit Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 18, 2004 Location: Northville,Michigan Posts: 367	Here's my poll: http://www.sitcomsonline.com/boards/...d.php?t=159948

01-01-2006, 10:49 PM	#7
Justfuhgetaboutit Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 18, 2004 Location: Northville,Michigan Posts: 367	Hey guys, feel free to vote again, the polls up and running now. It was accidentally closed down but it's fixed with the same title and same options. Here's the new link: http://www.sitcomsonline.com/boards/...d.php?t=154046